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English weekly
Writing
书面表达
冬春交替之际,气温变化明显,也是疾病的多发季节,尤其是流感等。但是只要提前做好预防,就可以在很大程度上避免疾病的侵犯。正如一些医生所说,大家都应该重视自己的健康,不必去惧怕疾病,而应该积极去预防。请根据以下提示,写一篇如何预防疾病的作文。
提示:1.有积极的心态;
2.养成良好的生活习惯,如:健康饮食,适度运动等;
3.劳逸结合;
要求:1. 包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 行文流畅,条理清晰,用词准确;
3. 词数100左右
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
80-120
Step 1:审题
Step 2: 3 questions
Step 3:结构
话题
思
路
点
拨
开篇点题:冬春交替之际,预防疾病至关重要
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
紧扣主题:写出具体措施,如
何做好预防工作。注意文章层
次,循序渐进。
呼应主题:重视预防工作的意义
学生习作
开篇点题:冬春交替之际,预防疾病至关重要。
It’s easy to get sick during flu season so we need to do something to avoid getting sick. How do we stay away from the disease Here is my advice.
Para 1 开篇点题:
When spring comes, it’s easy for people to be sick. So it’s important to learn how to prevent illness. Here are some suggestions.
When spring comes, it not only brings warm weather, but also provides the opportunity for the flu to spread.
简单说明原因
紧扣主题:写出具体措施,如何做好预防工作。注意文章层次,循序渐进。
Para 2 紧扣主题:
学生习作
First, we should have a positive attitude. Second, we should develop good living habits such as doing sports and eating some vegetables and fruit. Third, we should have a rest after work or study. Last but not least, we need to go to bed early and get up early.
v
should/be supposed to do/be expected to do 同义词替换
It’s important to develop good living habits.
Having a rest after work is also necessary.
How about getting up early and not staying up late
句式变化
确保信息完整
紧扣主题:写出具体措施,如何做好预防工作。注意文章层次,循序渐进。
Para 2 紧扣主题:
We should not only work hard but also have a good rest.
积累同义句
First, we should have a positive attitude. second, developing good living habits is also necessary such as doing sports and eating some vegetables and fruit. Third, It’s important to have a rest after a long work. Last but not least, we need to go to bed early and get up early.
修改润色
确保信息完整
内容丰富
举例子
Happiness works better than any medicine.
Being happy is a secret to keeping healthy.
评价性语句
A thirty minutes’ sleep can help us get enough energy and feel better.
解释说明
修改润色
First, we should have a positive attitude. Happiness works better than any medicine. Second, developing good living habits is also necessary such as doing sports and eating some vegetables and fruit. Third, It’s important to have a rest after a long work. Because a thirty minutes’ sleep can help us get enough energy and feel better. Last but not least, we need to go to bed early and get up early.
字数 71
评价性语句
举例子
解释说明
呼应主题:重视预防工作的意义。
Para 3 呼应主题:
学生习作
That’s all my advice about preventing disease. I hope we will be healthy forever.
If we follow these suggestions, we won’t get sick and live a healthy life.
例文赏析
Spring is coming. However, the approach of spring not only brings warm weather, but also provides the opportunity for the flu to spread. So it’s important for us to prevent sickness. Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s of great importance to be optimistic. I bet happiness works better than any medicine. Keeping a positive attitude is good for our mental health. Second, we should form some good daily habits instead of lying in bed all day. For example, exercising is a wise choice that can help us fight against disease. What’s more, we can try to eat more fruit and vegetables to have a balanced diet.
Last but not least, don’t be afraid of illness! If we follow the tips above, we can prevent ourselves from getting sick.
2. English weekly
Clip 1
One day a little mouse living on a farm saw the farmer put a mousetrap(老鼠夹) in the house. He ran to the farmyard and ________ everyone. ”There is a mousetrap in the house!”
The ________ raised his head and said,”Mr. Mouse, I can tell you this trap is a danger to you, _______ it means nothing to me.”
The mouse turned to the pig. “I’m so _______Mr. Mouse, but the trap isn’t a worry to ______!” the pig said.
1 C. warned
turn to sb. 向某人求助 turn to sb. for help/advice
动名词作后置定语
2
6 B. thinking
3 B. but
4 C. sorry
5 D. me
worry n. 担心,担忧,令人发愁的事情
2. A. snake B. chick C. mouse D. sheep 需全文阅读后再做出答案B
The mouse then turned to the cow. ”It sounds like only you have a ________,Mr. Mouse.” the cow said.
The mouse became sad because no one __________ him.
That night the sound of the trap catching something was heard by everyone. The farmer’s wife rushed to _______ what was caught. In the darkness she _________ see that it was a snake whose tail was caught.
The snake bit(咬) the farmer’s wife. She caught a bad fever and the farmer knew the best way to treat a fever was with __________ soup. So he killed the chick.
6 A. problem
D. care about
7. A. pointed out 指出 B. agreed with 同意某人
C. looked at 看 D. cared about 关心,在意
It sounds like a good idea.
It sounds good.
8 B. see
9 A. couldn’t
10 D. chicken
bite-bit-bitten 咬
treat 治疗
7
However, the wife got ________ and friends and neighbors came by to take turns looking ________ her. The farmer killed the pig to make meals for them.
________, the farmer’s wife died and so many friends and family came to her funeral(葬礼) that the farmer had to kill the cow to _______ all of them.
So remember that when any one of us is __________, we may be all at risk.
11
12 A. after
13 C. Unluckily
14 B. treat
treat sb. 招待某人
15 A. in trouble
at risk/in danger 在危险中
There is no “I” in team but there is an “I” in win.
11. A. better B. sicker C. harder D. lower
hard adj. 坚硬的,困难的 adv. 努力地,猛烈地
sicker
One of my most interesting experiences while traveling was in India. My sister and I were just ________ a tour of northern India and had 5 hours before getting on a train back to New Delhi. We had been with our driver _______ the past 5 days so we had known him quite well. Since we had checked out of our hotel, had our last meal and seen all the sights we cared to see, we ______ the driver to just take us to the train station. He would not want to leave us _______ for 5 hours at the station. So, he took us to his ______ house. When we arrived, we saw that we were going into a Persian rug warehouse(波斯地毯货栈). We thought we were going to be forced to buy expensive rugs.
finishing
2 for
3 asked
4 alone
be+done 表示被动 be+doing 表进行、即将发生
one of + 名词复数+谓语动词单数
since 既然
5 uncle’s
leave sb. alone 让某人独自呆着
I feel left out. 我感觉被忽略了。
force sb. to do sth. 强迫某人做某事
check out of the hotel 结账退房
check it out 核实,查实
看了所有我们愿意看的景色
易错题:1 finished
finish
1
When we walked in, we were _______ to the back where the driver’s two young and handsome cousins were waiting with tea and dominoes(多米诺骨牌). They taught _____ to play dominoes. We played mixed doubles, and we had a wonderful time. Later, they wanted to learn an American card game, _____ we taught them Rummy 500. They loved it. We had a happy afternoon.
Later on the train, my sister and I discussed what we had taught our ________ to do — to stay away from strangers. But that afternoon ended well. We had a ________ time with strangers!
6
7 us
8 so
9 children
10 great
stay away from sb. 远离某人
易错题:6 leading
led
lead-led-led
lead sb. to + 地点 带某人去某地
lead sb. to do sth. 带某人做某事
All roads lead to Rome.
lead to + 名词
Hard work can lead to success.
The divine law may be spoken of, but it is not the common law.
Clip 2
Truth can be known, but it may not be the well-known truth.
道可道,非常道。
Lao Tzu was a philosopher(哲学家) in ancient China. He worked as an archivist(档案保管员) in the imperial(皇家的) library __________ gave him the chance to read more and learn a great deal of knowledge. ______ a result he got a large number of students and fans. And it is said that even _____ famous Chinese philosopher, Confucius, heard about Lao Tzu, and came to visit him.
11
work as 担任…工作
12 As
许多
a great deal of + 不可数名词
a number of + 可数名词复数
据说
13
易错题:11 where
易错题:13 most/more
the 特指 据说甚至是那位有名的中国哲学家孔子听说了老子后,也去拜访他。
It is a place which/that students can exchange their books with others in.
It is a place where students can exchange their books with others.
It is a place in which students can exchange their books with others.
which/that
the
He worked as an archivist in the imperial library, which gave him the chance to read more and learn a great deal of knowledge.
Lao Tzu believed that the human life, like everything else in the world, ______ influenced by outside forces. He believed “simplicity” to be the key to truth, encouraging people to watch and think carefully to understand the laws of nature. He also advised people ______ build up personal power, and use it for leading a good life with love.
易错题:14 was/were/are
14 is
老子相信世间万物都受外在力量的影响。我认为道法自然是真理的关键,鼓励人们去观察去思考自然规律。他也建议人们要建立个人力量,用个人的力量去过上充满爱的幸福生活。
14.当宾语从句表示的是一个客观真理或者事实真理时,即使主句是过去时,从句也用一般现在时态
15 to
believe … to be… 认为…是…
建议某人做某事advise sb. to do sth.
建议做某事 advise/suggest doing sth.
1. 人称代词和指示代词法
3. 逻辑关系词法
2. 过渡词推断法
4. 寻找同义词
5. 结合与前后文关系推断
6. 锁定上下文关键词
任务型阅读技巧
…The biggest difficulty for him is that Chinese and his native language belong to totally different language families. ________.
… ________. We were ready to move on with the rest of the study. But when it came to the four tones, some of us gave up. We wondered what kind of intelligent brain was needed to learn and use these difficult tones.
A. We felt greetings and numbers were not hard to learn.
B. According to PetitFancy, Chinese textbooks are also expensive.
C. However, he said Chinese people are always ready to help.
D. PetitFancy agreed that hard work is the price we must pay for success.
E. Also, the thinking habits of Chinese speakers differ from those of
Europeans.
1
2
寻找同义词
E
A
锁定上下文关键词
结合与前后文关系推断
_______ A book priced at 38 yuan(about 4.9) in China can be sold for 40 in Europe, which puts more pressure on him to learn the foreign language well. ________ Even though he speaks broken Chinese, they praise and encourage him. More importantly, he has found pleasure in learning Chinese. The grammar is really easy, though there are lots of idioms that are ill-formed sentences and take time to master.
B. According to PetitFancy, Chinese textbooks are also expensive.
C. However, he said Chinese people are always ready to help.
D. PetitFancy agreed that hard work is the price we must pay for
success.
人称代词法
3
B
4
C
寻找同义词
蹩脚汉语
病句
____________ For example, he once read Jing Ye Si (Thoughts on a Quiet Night) by famous poet Li Bai(701—762) several thousand times before he was finally able to remember the poem.
D. PetitFancy agreed that hard work is the price we must pay for success.
5
D
结合与前后文关系推断
作文佳句 Hard work is the price we must pay for success.
Clip 3
A: Good evening, sir. Welcome to our restaurant. Do you have
a reservation(预定)
B: Yes. I have a dinner reservation at seven tonight for two
people.
A: Oh, 1. __________________ I will check for you.
B: I’m Paul Steen.
A: Sorry to have kept you waiting. I’ve got it. Mr. Steen,
Table 106. 2.____________________.
B: Thank you.
may I have your name, please
may I know your name
1. What’s you name
what’s your name
I’ll lead/take you there
This way, please.
Follow me, please.
2. It’s near the window.
It’s over there.
(after Mr. Steen sits down.)
A: 3.___________________________
B: Yes, my friend and I would like to have your tasting
menu(试吃套餐). What courses are there, please
A: Appetizer(开胃品), soup, beef steak, dessert and coffee.
B: All right. We ’ll take it.
A: 4._______________________________
B: I’d like two pieces of chocolate cake.
A: OK. By the way, 5.__________________________
B: He is coming in a few minutes.
A: OK. We’ll bring your dishes as soon as possible.
May I take/have your order
Are you ready to order
3. May I take you order
What would you like to eat
Would you like to have our tasting menu
What kind of dessert would you like
how soon is your friend coming
how soon will your friend come
when will your friend come here
4. Anything else
What else do you want
What could you like
What dessert would you like
What would you like for dessert
5. when will your friends come here
how soon is he coming
Welcome to our restaurant.
Do you have a reservation
What’s your name May I have your name, please
This way, please. Follow me, please.
I’ll take/lead you there.
May I take your order
Would you like something to drink
Anything else Is that all
Sorry to have kept you waiting.
We will bring your dishes as soon as possible.
waiter
I hung up the phone and did nothing but watched the busy road.
I asked him why the blind man wouldn’t take any other persons help to cross the road.
Her experience won herself the online nickname.
I was expecting him to ask me for money, and I could give him some gladly.
He was one of the first scientist to teach crop rotation.
She found that she really enjoy eating some of them.
watch
易错题集锦
person’s
her
would
scientists
enjoyed
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