中考英语三轮冲刺复习课件-重点题型讲评 专项36

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Part 1
Writing
中学生有许多烦恼，如学习的压力、交往的困惑、生活的单调、老师、家长的不解…… 你曾经遇到的烦恼是什么？你是如何解决的？你的体会是什么？假如你是李华，请你根据自身情况就此写一篇短文，向某中学生杂志的Discussion栏目投稿。
要求：1. 内容要全面、紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通
顺、连贯；
2. 词数100字左右，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总数。
审题：
1.主题和内容：
1）烦恼是什么？--- What was your worry or trouble
2）如何解决的？--- How did you solve it
3) 体会是什么？--- What do you learn from it
2.人称和时态：
你曾经的烦恼是什么？---
第一人称(I, my, me…)&一般过去时
整
体
构
思
明确主题，我曾经的烦恼是什么:
e.g.
pressure caused by schoolwork;
relations with friends;
worries about exams…
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
如何应对，合情合理，言之有物:
e.g.
ask parents or teachers for help;
write letters to certain experts;
communicate with friends…
表达体会，摆脱烦恼后的体会如何:
e.g.
learn how to ask for help;
the importance of communication…
例文赏析
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I used to have a lot of trouble with my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or go out with my friends.
Of course, I couldn’t stand such strict rules! I wrote a letter to my parents and told them I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork and that I would make good use of my time and try to do a good job in my schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents, they agreed that in my spare time I could do things I like.
Now I have realized that communicating with our parents is a good way to solve problems.
明确主题：讲述我的烦恼：和父母的矛盾。
如何应对：写信给父母，保证先把学业搞好，并争取到合法权益：空余时间做自己喜欢的事情。
表达体会：和父母沟通是解决烦恼的不二法宝。
语言赏析
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I used to have a lot of trouble with my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or go out with my friends.
Of course, I couldn’t stand such strict rules! I wrote a letter to my parents and told them I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork and that I would make good use of my time and try to do a good job in my schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents, they agreed that in my spare time I could do things I like.
Now I have realized that communicating with our parents is a good way to solve problems.
时态：运用准确，现在、过去和完成三种时态转换自然。
句法：长句、短句、简单句、复合句（宾语从句、定语从句）杂糅使用，凸显造句功底。
用词：虽朴实无华，但简洁有力。
Tips：不提倡写过长的句子。41词的长句太过分！
Part 2
English Weekly
95-year-old Harvey Djerf likes walking. But ______ people enjoy taking walks quite like him. He has been seen taking walks in his neighborhood as long as anyone ______ remember.
“I’ve always liked to walk,” the World War II veteran (老兵) says. “I feel ________ if I walk.”
Then one day, __________ put out a chair for him.
“People saw me __________ and taking a break,” he says. “They _________ that maybe Harvey needed a place to ______.
And they were right. Harvey is getting _______ and needs to take a break from time to time.
A. few
2 D. can
3 B. better
4 B. somebody
5 D. stopping
D. thought
1
7 A. rest
6
6. A. discovered 发现 B. created 创造
C. admired尊敬/欣赏 D. thought 认为
8 C. weak
has been seen 现在完成时的被动语态；
see sb. doing/do sth.
不时/偶尔:sometimes, at times, occasionally, once in a while
One day, another person in the _____________ put out a chair. And then, another. Today, the neighborhood is full of _________.
“I’ll just _______ out the window, ‘Harvey’s in the chair!’” says Ann Kleiner, a proud lady whose family put out a chair near the end of the driveway.
The __________ doesn’t end there. In winter when there is _______, people will shovel a path (铲出一条路) to the chairs. And sometimes, when the weather’s a little warmer, people will ________ him a fresh-cooked meal.
Harvey is ________ thankful for the comfort of the chairs and the sense of community behind every one of them.
9 B. neighborhood
10 D. chairs
11 A. look
12 B. kindness
13 B. snow
14 C. bring
15 D. really
thankful adj. 感激
be thankful/grateful for (doing) sth. 感激某事/物
be thankful/grateful to sb. 感激某人
定语从句：whose 表示所属关系
修饰比较级：
表示远远多于:much, far, a lot, rather, fairly, a great deal
表示多/少一点儿:a bit, a little
表示语气:even, still
as long as, as soon as, as well as, as well
as long as （+句子）只要；和……一样长
1) As ____ as you work hard enough, you can achieve your dream.
2) Buy me a pencil as ____ as this one when you go shopping.
as soon as + 句子 一……就……
3) The students became quiet as ____ as the teacher came in.
as soon as possible (ASAP) = as soon as sb. can(某人)尽快
4) They visited some factories, hospitals as ___ as the school.
5) He speaks English as ___ as his father.
6) He as ____ as his two brothers __ playing basketball now.
as well as 和……一样好；和……一样
is
as well = also, too 也，又
7) I’m going to London, and my sister is going ______.
long
long
soon
well
well
well
as well
end
in the end = finally = at last (时间) 最后
1) __the end, these shocked elephants stopped and calmed down.
at the end of + 空间/时间， 在……尽头，在…..结束时
2) __ the end of the hallways stands our angry headmaster.
3) __ the end of this June, we will all graduate from Erwai.
by the end of 在……之前；到……为止:
by the end of + 过去时间 过去完成时
by the end of + 将来时间 将来完成时
4) We ___ learned 13 units of the book ___the end of last term.
5) __ the end of next year, we ___ have finished the building.
In
had
by
By
At
At
will
end
end up as… 作为……而结束，最终成为……
end up with… 以……而结束
end up doing… 以……而告终
6) He didn’t end up __ a professional basketball player.
7) The funeral ended up ____ a sad song written for Kobe.
8) His college life ended up _____ most of the exams. (fail)
ending n.故事、电影等的结尾
9) Not every love story has a happy _____.
as
with
failing
ending
from beginning to end 自始至终，从头到尾
10) He didn’t enjoy the party from beginning to ___.
end
make ends meet 勉强维持生计，糊口
11) His salary can only make ____ meet.
ends
Think sharks are dangerous Have you ever ________ if sharks are misunderstood (被误解的)？
_____ any wild animal, sharks can be dangerous. But they are not scary monsters (怪兽). Of the hundreds of kinds of sharks, only a few have ever attacked (攻击) _______.
When books and TV shows talk about sharks, they can choose to show lots of scary pictures of sharp (锋利的) ______, or sad pictures of sharks caught in fishing nets. They can interview scared swimmers, or scientists who study how sharks find ______ way across the oceans. Even if everything they say is true, what the writer chooses and how the writer talks about it can change the way we feel about sharks.
1. wondered
错填为：1. wonder
2. Like
humans
3.
错填为：3. humen
German Germans Roman Romans
4. teeth
5. their
Lots of people – maybe you too! – like _______ books or stories about dangerous animals. And what’s more scary than a huge shark that might be hiding in the ocean near your favorite beach Sharks’ power and danger make them _____ a great deal of fear.
TV producers know that making sharks look dangerous is a great _____ to get people to watch their shows. After all, humans pay a lot of attention to anything that scares us. And the more people watch, the ______ money the TV show will make.
But that doesn’t mean that’s the _______ story. So make sure you get all the facts, and make up you own mind about what’s scary or not.
6. reading
7. feel
make/let/have sb. do sth.
= get sb. to do sth.
使某人做某事
8. way
9. more
10. whole
make up one’s mind about sth.
make up one’s mind to do sth.
决定；下决心
1. scary pictures;
2. scared swimmers;
3. more scary, the most scary;
4. Sth. scares sb. …使…害怕
用法相同的其他动词：
surprise, interest, move, excite…
使役动词make, let, have和get
He makes his son ____ every night. (read)
(变被动) His son is made _____ every night.
2) The boy shouted to make himself ____. (hear)
3) He tried to make Jennifer happy/our monitor/at home.
1. make
make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事 be made to do sth.
make oneself done 使某人自己被…
make sb. + adj./n./介词短语 使某人……
read
to read
heard
4) Let me ___ you what I saw last night. (tell)
let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事 但很少用被动
2. let
tell
使役动词make, let, have和get
3. have
have sb. do sth. 让某人做某事……
have sth. done 让某事被（他人）做
clean
1) The manager has already had his men ____the office. (clean)
4. get
3) Can you get us ____ the experiment (do)
get sb. to do sth. 让某人做某事
repaired
to do
2) I was having my car _______ when Mother called me. (repair)
4) Mr. Smith got his house _____ into while he was away on holiday. (break)
broken
get sth. done = have sth. done 让某事被（他人）做
Molly stared at her reflection in the mirror. Her eyes were filled with worries and a sense of excitement. She would perform for ______ first time at the school festival. Was she able to face her fears with courage and overcome them She had no answer at the moment. But one thing was for sure -- it was time to show the whole world and most importantly to show herself what she ______ truly able to do.
We all have our own fears. Sometimes we feel we aren’t able to achieve certain things or do something well. _____ at this time that a few special people enter our lives. They are always there for us.
11. the
错填为：13 And; But; Then …
12. was
13. It’s
It is/was… that/who… 正是…… (强调句型)
盯着镜子中的映像看
幽默感/成就感/方向感/社区感/公平感/安全感……
a sense of
humor/ achievement/ direction/ community/ fairness/ safety…
正是在这个时候，一些特殊的人进入了我们的生命中。
错填为：12 is, be…
Their loving hands hold us in times of trouble and give us confidence (信心) and support. _______ their encouragement, we can face all our fears and can achieve anything! So, it’s time ____ show our fears that we aren’t scared of them anymore!
14. With
15. to
错填为：14. By / In / Under
With one’s encouragement / help / permission…
= With the encouragement /help / permission of…
在某人的……之下
原始句：He buys apples in that store every Sunday.
1.强调主语: It is he that buys apples in that store every Sunday.
2.强调宾语: It is apples that he buys in that store every Sunday.
3.强调地点状语: It is in that store that he buys apples every Sunday.
4.强调时间状语: It is every Sunday that he buys apples in that store.
强调句型(基础版)： It is +被强调部分+ that…
强调句型
注意：1.当被强调的部分是主语时，注意保持主谓一致；
2.无论强调单数/复数名词，强调句型的be都用is或was。
Video clip!
强调句型： It is/was +被强调部分+ that/who…
原始句：They bought these books in that shop last month.
1.正是他们上个月在那家商店买的这些书。
It was they that/who bought these books in that shop last month.
2.他们上个月在那家商店买的正是这些书。
It was these books that they bought in that shop last month.
3.他们上个月正是在那家商店买的这些书。
It was in that shop that they bought these books last month.
4.正是上个月他们在那家商店买的这些书。
It was last month that they bought these books in that shop.
如何判断强调句：去掉强调句型的框架之后，剩余的部分依然是一个完整的句子。
强调句型
注意：1.如果句子是过去时，is要变为was；
2.如果被强调部分是人，that也可变为who。
Public schools in Ridgewood, New Jersey have a homework-free policy (政策) over school breaks. Daniel Fishbein is the superintendent (负责人) for Ridgewood Public Schools. 1._________________________________________
“There are some times when kids need to focus on (专注于) family.” Fishbein says, “If they have too much homework over breaks, they won’t be able to do that.”
E. He says a break from school should also be a break from homework.
A. Many other people agree.
B. But not everyone shares the same opinion.
C. Over spring break last year, I attended a basketball camp.
D. Kids need it over breaks so that they don’t forget what they
learned.
E. He says a break from school should also be a break from
homework.
-free “免/无……”
duty-free store 免税店；
fat-free milk 无脂牛奶
联系上下文，寻找关键词。
2._____________________They say that kids need time to relax over breaks so that they’re refreshed (精神焕发的) when they return to school. They also point out that many families travel during the holidays and that having homework can stop kids from enjoying those trips.
3. _________________________________ Some people say that it’s important for kids to practice what they learned in class so they don’t forget it over breaks. They also worry that if kids are given no homework over breaks, they will waste too much time reviewing lessons when school starts again.
B. But not everyone shares the same opinion.
C. Over spring break last year, I attended a basketball camp.
D. Kids need it over breaks so that they don’t forget what
they learned.
A. Many other people agree.
A. Many other people agree.
B. But not everyone shares the same opinion.
此段论述支持“免作业”一方的立场。
此段论述反对“免作业”一方的立场。
waste 和 spend 用法相同：
spend/waste time/money on sth.
spend/waste time/money (in) doing sth.
Here’s what two students think:
Kids need a break from homework so they can enjoy the holidays. Also, breaks are a good time for kids to develop their interests.
4.________________________________________ I didn’t have homework, so I was able to focus on my skills. Besides, kids who go on trips might not have fun if they have to worry about homework. I recently went to New Orleans, Louisiana. I wasn’t given homework, but I still learned a lot!
-- Will, New York
D. Kids need it over breaks so that they don’t forget what
they learned.
C. Over spring break last year, I attended a basketball camp.
C. Over spring break last year, I attended a basketball camp.
全段讲述“免作业”后Will的生活。
My school doesn’t give homework over breaks, but I don’t think it is a wise policy. Being on breaks doesn’t mean students should stop learning. Homework serves as a good review.
5.__________________________________________
Having homework over breaks also keeps kids busy and leaves less time for bad habits. When I’m on breaks, I often spend too much time watching TV.
-- Iness, Indiana
D. Kids need it over breaks so that they don’t forget what
they learned.
Kids need it over breaks so that they don’t forget what they learned.
break ：
n. 休息：
take a break = take breaks
over breaks 休息期间
be on breaks 在休息时
v.打破，破坏
break broke broken
a broken window 破窗户
breaking news 突发新闻
全段讲述支持假期有作业的Iness的观点,关键词法可以锁定答案。
( Jeff is an exchange student from Canada. Li Hua is talking with him.)
A: Hi, Jeff. What’s your favorite sport
B: Basketball. I’m on the school basketball team.
1. ________________, Li Hua
A: I like running and jumping best. I want to be an
excellent athlete (运动员) when I grow up.
B: I hope your dream will come true.
A: Thank you. By the way,
2.________________________________________________
B: Chocolate.
What/How about you
What are/were you eating (错误。不合语境)
What’s your favorite snack (非优质答案。不合整篇逻辑)
What’s your favorite food / what (kind of) food do you like best
What sports do you like best (尚可)
What’s your favorite sport (重复)
A: You can’t eat too much of that if you want to be healthy.
B: OK. I will try to eat less.
A: All right. Then 3. _______________________________
B: Yes. They are good for my health. I have them every day.
A: Me, too. Do you drink Coke often
B: No, never. I think it’s very bad for my health.
A: I agree. 4. ___________________
B: Boiled water (白开水). I think it’s good to have water every day.
A: 5.______________________________________________.
To keep healthy, we should try to have healthy food and drinks and
get enough exercise.
do you like (eating/having) vegetables
do you eat vegetables every day
Do you like milk/apples (过于具体)
Do you like fruit(s) (少有如此问法)
What kind of drink do you
drink (重复啰嗦)
What do you usually drink
What’s your favorite drink
Yes, you’re right / I think so, too / I agree / You have a point
Thank you (very much). (错误。慎用谢谢)
You do seem have a point. (画蛇添足)
背书打卡: 今天讲的作文范文。
2. 专项37 ：一~四 (作文不写)。