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English Weekly 专项37
Part 1
Appreciation of a composition
佳作赏析
中考写作
安全对于每个人都很重要。请你根据以下信息内容提
示,写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示:1.体育锻炼
2.上下楼梯
3.结朋交友
4.食品卫生
要求:
1.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
2.短文可适当发挥,但要包含以上要点;
3.词数100左右
主题:校园安全
体裁:议论文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
思
路
点
拨
开篇点题:指出校园安全的重
要性。
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
紧扣主题:介绍维护校园安全
的方法。
总结上文:牢记校园安全准则,
保护自身安全。
Para 1 开篇点题:指出校园安全的重要性。
As we all know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
Para 2 紧扣主题:介绍维护校园安全的方法。
1.体育锻炼 2.上下楼梯 3.结朋结友 4.食品卫生
First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, there are too many students at school but our hallways are too narrow, So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don‘t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least, we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
Para 3 总结上文:牢记校园安全准则,保护
自身安全。
In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.
In a word, it’s of great importance to keep these rules in mind.
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, there are too many students at school but our hallways are too narrow, So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don‘t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least, we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it’s of great importance to keep these rules in mind.
例文赏析
亮点点评
1.选用了非常好的连接词或过渡词,使文章的表达更有
逻辑性,更富有条理。如:in a word, besides, last but not least, …
2.使用了定语从句和时间状语从句等,使整篇文章句型
丰富不单一,容易提高作文档次。
We should take care not to get ourselves injured
while we are having sports.
We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep
away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
3.使用较多固定搭配,使文章语言更优美,凸显语言水准。
Part 2
Exercises from English Weekly
专项37
完型填空
Ten years ago, Amy received an invitation to a New Year’s party from somebody that she didn’t know very well. She didn’t really want to go 1. _____ herself, so she asked her friend Diana to go with her.
C. by
receive 收到 accept 接受
I received a watch from Sam, but I didn’t accept it because it was too expensive.
( C ) 1. A. with B. in C. by D. for
by oneself = on one’s own = alone
独自
完型填空
It was a 2. _____, snowy night and when it was time to leave for the party, all (that) Amy wanted to do was
3. ______ home and watch TV. Diana persuaded (说服) her to change her 4. ______. However, after they had driven all the way across town, Amy 5. _________ that she had left the invitation at home. Amy thought she could remember the 6. _________. They found the right street, but Amy wasn’t sure about the number, 7. _____ they drove around until they came to a house where there was a party 8. _________.
A. cold
动身去某地
A. stay
B. mind
persuade sb. to do sth.
C. realized
D. address
( D ) 6. A. sign B. door C. name
B. so
B. going on
D. address
1.记号;符号;迹象 There is no sign of rain right now. / make a sign
2.标志;招牌;标牌 The sign says “Parking Forbidden”. 3.手势;暗号 I talked with him by signs.
判定
完型填空
They decided this was the 9. ______ place. They didn’t recognize (认识) 10. _________ there and Amy wanted to leave right away. However, Diana persuaded her to stay. Feeling very 11. _____________, Amy stood in a corner by herself, watching. Diana had a good time. After about an hour, Amy 12. _______ to go home. As she was leaving, she slipped (滑倒) and fell down some icy steps outside the house. 13. _______ just at the moment, somebody was coming up the steps on his way to the party and he caught her in his arms. And that's how Amy met her 14. ________ Jeff.
Amy and Jeff now have two lovely children, and they are 15. ______ amazed at the way they met.
C. right
D. anybody
A. uncomfortable
B. decided
B. Luckily
C. husband
( A ) 11. B. interested C. hopeless D. proud
A. uncomfortable
be interested in / have (an) interest in
be proud of / take pride in
D. still
语篇填空(一)
Mom was a teacher most of her life. When she wasn’t in the classroom, she was 1. _________ her children or grandchildren: Correcting our grammar; starting us on collections of butterflies, flowers or rocks; or organizing us to learn to play different 2. ______. Mom made learning fun.
It was sad for my three brothers and me to 3. ______ her suffering (受苦) in later years. At eighty-five, she suffered a stroke (中风) and became much 4. ______ than ever before after that.
educating
games
see
weaker
suffer 经受,使遭受(坏事,不愉快的事)loss, pain, punishment, injury等
suffer from + 疾病名词
She suffers from headache.
I'm suffering from a lack of time this week.
Two days before she died, my brothers and I took her for a ride in a wheelchair at the hospital. 5. ______ we waited for the staff to lift her back into bed, Mom fell asleep. Not wanting to wake her, we moved to the far end of the room and spoke softly.
6. ______ several minutes, our conversation was interrupted (打断) by a sound coming from across the room. We stopped talking and looked at Mom. Her eyes were closed, but she was clearly trying to communicate with
7. ___. We went to her side.
“Whirr, "she said weakly.
“Where “ I asked. "Mom, something you want ”
语篇填空(一)
die – dead – death
v. adj. n.
While
After
us
have conversations with …
现在分词作状语表原因
“Whirr,” she 8. _______. My brothers and I looked at each other and shook our heads sadly.
Suddenly we understood that Mom was correcting Brother Jim’s last 9. _______ “ If it was up to me…”
Jim lowered his head and kissed her face. "Thanks Mom, he said 10. _______. We smiled at each other – a good teacher.
语篇填空(一)
sentence
quietly
repeated
shake -- shook -- shaken
把……放低
语篇填空(二)
To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I follow all kinds of rules and finish the tasks on time at school. And I not only respect all my teachers but 11. ______ get on well with my classmates. At home, I am able to balance housework and homework. I usually make a plan in advance 12. ______ make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I have developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In the society, I try my best to improve myself all 13. ______ time.
also
balance work and life (v.)
keep balance (n.)
keep a balanced diet (adj.)
to
the
in advance 提前, 预先
语篇填空(二)
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits 14. _________ make my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined 15. ______ prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
从……受益
which/that
has
One-half of life is luck; the other half is discipline – and that’s the important half, for without discipline you wouldn’t know what to do with luck. -- Carl Zuckmayer, Playwright
人生一半是靠运气,另一半则是靠纪律 —— 那是比较重要的一半,因为缺乏纪律你将不知道怎麼处理你的好运。
Confidence (自信) is very important in daily life. It can help you develop a healthy attitude. 1. _______________
_____________________________________They may have more chances to become successful. But how can we be more confident Here are some suggestions.
短文还原
B. A study shows that
people who are more confident are much happier.
In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
B. A study shows that people who are more confident are much
happier.
C. Fear goes along with failure.
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
紧盯横线前后词
Speak louder
When you are not confident, it’s hard for you to do things well. You speak in such a low voice that people can hardly hear you. 2. ____________________________
_____________________ Your voice can help you become more confident.
短文还原
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
B. A study shows that people who are more confident are much
happier.
C. Fear goes along with failure.
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
关键词
Encourage yourself
Write down a list of things you did during the day to see how many things you did well. Did you finish your task Did you tell a joke that made everybody laugh 3. _______
____________________________________________
短文还原
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
B. A study shows that people who are more confident are much
happier.
C. Fear goes along with failure.
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
联系上下文的逻辑关系
Get rid of fear
4. _________________________ But it's easy to overcome if you understand that failure is a part of life. Don 't hide in your head just because you said something stupid once. Try to start again and believe you can do better.
短文还原
C. Fear goes along with failure.
In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
B. A study shows that people who are more confident are much
happier.
C. Fear goes along with failure.
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
关键词
Pick up a hobby
If you like singing, sing as much as you can. 5. _______ ____________________________________ And it will make you happy and confident.
短文还原
A. In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
In some ways, a hobby can make you outstanding (杰出).
B. A study shows that people who are more confident are much
happier.
C. Fear goes along with failure.
D. Give yourself praise for the good things you’ve done.
E. Try to speak loud enough so that people can hear you clearly.
关键词
补全对话
A: Good morning. Can I help you
B: Yes, please. 1. __________________________.
A: May I know who it is for Maybe I can give you some help.
B: It's for me. You know, I have a two-month holiday. I want
to get a part-time job in a company.
A: I see. 2. _______________________________
B: Um… I prefer dark blue.
A: There are many styles of suits. 3. ________________ ____________________
I want (would like) to buy a suit
What color do you prefer / would you like
What do you think of
/ How do you like this one
I want a suit. / I’m looking for a suit.
What’s your favorite color
What color do you like
Do you like this one
What about this one
How do you feel about this one
补全对话
B: It's nice. I really like it. 4. _____________________
A: Of course. The fitting room is over there.
(after a while)
A: You look beautiful in it.
B: Thanks so much. How much is it
A: 800 yuan.
B: Great! 5. ________________.
I’ll take (buy) it
Can I try it on
Here is the money.
商场购物常用语
Can I help you / What can I do for you
I want /would like to buy a …
I am just looking / browsing.
I will let you know / tell you if I need help.
I will ask you for help if I need.
What color / size do you want / would you like
This sweater looks small. I want a bigger one.
Can I try it / this on
I’d like to try this sweater on.
Where is the fitting room / changing room
It looks good on you.
What’s the price of it / How much is it
I will take (buy) it.
Here is the money.
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