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Writing + English Weekly (专项30)
Part 1 Writing
细心审题,抓住重点。
阅读所有信息。判断体裁。确定时态和人称。确定写作顺序。
2. 圈出要点,列出提纲。
3. 合理安排,组句成文。
文章的内容篇幅主次分明,分布合理。
4. 检查修改,补充润色。
字母大小写,单词拼写,语法,习惯用语,标点符号等。
Writing
Writing
你校英语报即将举办以“My future job”为题的英语征文比赛。
请你根据下面的要点和要求写一篇短文参加比赛。
要点 1. 你将来准备做什么;
2. 你为什么想从事这个职业;
3. 如果你从事了这个职业,你会怎么做。
要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数100字左右,开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
时态:以一般将来时态为主
体裁: 介绍类的说明文
人称: 第一人称
你现在怎么做才能从事这个职业
1. 细心审题
My future job
Para 1: 点明主题,指出未来的工作是什么
What’s your future job
Why do you want to be… 理由
Para 2:
What will you do if you can be a(n)…. 会怎么做
Para 3: Try your best to make your dream come true.
总
分
First, second , next, then, last, finally
all in all, in a word, in short…
并列:as well as, neither… nor…., either…or…
转折:instead, however, while, though, but…
因果:therefore, as a result, because of, thanks to…
递进:what’s more, above all, besides…
时间:when, after that, while, before…
2.列提纲
总
Everyone dreams of having a good job, and so do I. I want to be a teacher in the future.
I think teaching is a great job. Teachers teach students knowledge , they also teach them how to be a good person. After becoming a teacher, I’ll try my best to make my lessons interesting, and then my students won’t get bored in class. I’ll be patient with my students. If my students have some problems in class, I will try my best to help them. I’ll care about my students. I will have a talk with them often and help them deal with the problems.
I believe I can be a good teacher.
3. 组句成文
Everyone dreams of having a good job, and so do I. I want to be a teacher
in the future.
I think teaching is a great job. Teachers teach students knowledge ,
They also teach them how to be a good person. After becoming a teacher, I’ll
try my best to make my lessons interesting then my students won’t get bored
in class. I’ll be patient with my students. If my students have
some problems in class, I will explain everything again and again till they
can understand it. I’ll care about my students. I will have a talk with
them often and help them deal with the problems.
I believe I can be a good teacher.
First,
Second,
Third,
Para1.点明主题,指出梦想是什么
Para2. 理由+成为老师后会怎么做
Teachers not only teach knowledge
but also teach how to be a good person.
If I become a teacher, I’ll
try my best to make my lessons interesting so that my students won’t get bored
them and try to understand their situations so I can deal with any problem
they might have.
Para3. 成为好的老师
4. 修改润色
In short,
Part 2 English weekly
Tom had a dog named Max. Max was 10 years old which was quite _____ in dog years. Tom bought the dog to ________ him and his family from danger. When Max saw something suspicious (可疑的) he barked (吠叫) loudly. There was one time _______ a bad man was trying to get into Tom’s house. __________, Max baked loudly and Tom’s dad was able to _______ the bad man in time. Sometimes though, Max would bark when he saw another dog. Tom would go outside ________ something bad was happening, but it was really just another dog.
A. old
2 B. protect
3 C. when
A. Thankfully
5 D. stop
6 B. thinking
He is wearing sunglasses to protect his eyes from the strong sunlight.
4 A. Thankfully 感谢/激地 B. Unluckily 不幸地,倒霉地
C. Hopefully 有希望/前途地 D. Happily 快乐地,幸福地
伴随状语
2 protect…from…. 保护…不受
There was a fire in the building, but thankfully no one was hurt.
Hopefully, we’ll arrive before dark.
1
4
5. keep 保持
Eating vegetables and fruit can protect against heart disease. 防范
Tom went on a lot of hikes and walks with Max. Tom did not like to exercise, ________ he did not mind if it was ________ Max. Tom would also take Max to the dog beach, where he could play with other dogs. Max was considered part of the _________. He was even in the family holiday postcard picture. Tom knew, however, that Max was going to ________ soon. He tried not to think about it.
D. but
8 B. with
9 C. family
10 A. die
9 D. community 社区,团体
community center / college
Tom 不喜欢锻炼,但如果是和Max一起(锻炼)他就不介意。
7
One day, Tom came back home from school and _________ up Max’s water bowl as usual. Except this time, Max did not run to the ________ as he usually did. Tom looked __________ the house for Max and found him lying on the floor. Tom _________ ran to Max and called his name over and over again. He was gone. Tom and his family buried (埋葬) him in their backyard. Tom ________ for a long time, and remembered all his good memories with Max.
11 C. filled
12 D. bowl
13 A. around
14 B. quickly
15 A. cried
11. fill up 填补,装满
Fill up his glass with beer, please.
be full of/ be filled with
The basket is full of / is filled with apples.
14 D. normally 通常/正常地
I normally get up at six. / The patient began to breathe normally.
bury v. 埋(葬) buried buried
The dog buried the bone in the garden.
burial n. 葬礼
He should be given a proper burial.
The French Open, also known as Roland Garros, is a world – famous tennis tournament (锦标赛). It is _______ between late May and early June every year at the Roland Garros Stadium in Paris, France.
法国人总喜欢把四大满贯赛事之一的法国网球公开赛称为“罗兰·加洛斯”。来自其他国家和地区的记者则一致使用“法国网球公开赛”。罗兰·加洛斯是一位法国空中英雄的名字。在1913年9月23日驾飞机飞越地中海,成为完成此举的第一人。
held
Venus Williams
易错题:1. holding
1.
hold – held - held
Once a friend of mine gave ______ a ticket for the second day of the tournament, so I was able to see Venus Williams in her first match of the tournament. I arrived at the stadium one hour _________ because I wanted to get a good seat. Unluckily, it was raining and I _______ three hours before the match began. I had a good seat near the front. Because of the _____, there were not many people. The match was quite exciting, _________ Williams was much stronger than her opponent (对手). She won 6-4, 6-3. Later, I watched Roger Federer play against Michael Russell. However, it began to rain _______ and they did not finish the match.
2. me
earlier
4. waited
5. rain
although
7. again
同…比赛/对赛
易错题:3 early
3.
6.
arrive… one hour earlier 早到了1个小时
Malala Yousafzai was born in 1997. She fights _______ girls’ right (权利) to education. In 2014, she won the Nobel Peace Prize. Malala was only 17 years old at the time. Since then, she _______ continued her work as a hero for education. She tries to make sure ______ all children are able to get an education.
11. for
has
13. that
fight- fought - fought
易错题: 12 was
fight for…为…而战/奋斗
fight against… 反对,与…作斗争
She fought against cancer and lived to be eighty.
12.
fight… with…
Now Malala is spreading her message to young people. She wrote a picture book called Malala’s Magic Pencil. It introduces readers to Malala’s story and encourages children _____ change the world. It tells her story of growing up in war-torn (受战争严重破坏的) Pakistan. There, even today not all girls _____ allowed to attend school. But, in the book, Malala shows boys and girls as equals (同等的人). She also raises money through the Malala Fund. It helps girls around the world attend school.
14. to
are
易错题:15 be
基金
equal: adj 相等的,平等的
It’s reasonable to demand equal pay for equal work.
(cn.)同等的人 Jane has no equal in physics.
15.
All around North America, kids and adults (成年人) are looking for ladybugs (瓢虫). When they find a ladybug, they take its picture.
__________________________________ Why For the Lost Ladybug Project. …
B. Then they send the picture to scientists.
A. Now they’re almost gone.
B. Then they send the picture to scientists.
C. One kind is called the nine-spotted ladybug.
D. It might be because people brought new kinds of ladybugs to
North America to eat harmful bugs.
E. Through them, scientists are learning about where all kinds of
ladybugs are living.
寻找人称代词,过渡词,逻辑关系
The ladybugs (scientists are looking for) are very hard to find. ___________________________________
It has – you guessed it! – nine spots on its back. … once lived all … But by 1990, they had started disappearing. ______________________ Another type of ladybug, the two-spotted ladybug, has become harder to find too.
定语从句
C. One kind is called the nine-spotted ladybug.
A. Now they’re almost gone.
A. Now they’re almost gone.
C. One kind is called the nine-spotted ladybug.
D. It might be because people brought new kinds of ladybugs to North America to eat harmful bugs.
E. Through them, scientists are learning about where all kinds of ladybugs are living.
寻找同义词
寻找人称代词,同义词
Scientists aren’t sure why these ladybugs are disappearing.___________________________________________________________________________
The new, bigger, hungrier ladybugs might have made it hard for the older kinds to find enough food.
Now scientists want pictures of every ladybug people can find. … Every picture is important. _____________ __________________________________________
_________
D. It might be because people brought new
E. Through them,
scientists are learning about where all kinds of ladybugs
D. It might be because people brought new kinds of ladybugs to
North America to eat harmful bugs.
E. Through them, scientists are learning about where all kinds of
ladybugs are living.
kinds of ladybugs to North America to eat harmful bugs.
are living.
寻找同义词,结合上下文推断
寻找代词,联系上下文
A: Excuse me, sir.
B: Yes 1___________________________________
A: I’m new in town. Can you tell me where the City
Science Museum is
B: Yes. Go down Center Street and turn right on Main
Street. Then you’ll see it on you left. 2. ___________
____________________________________ It’s
across from the park.
A: 3. ________________
B: No, not very far. But you can take a bus.
How can I help you / What can I do for you
You can’t /won’t
Is it far from here
What’s the matter / What’s wrong with you
You can also see a park.
It is next to / beside/ near + 建筑物
miss it/ You’ll find it (easily) /It’s easy to find it.
What’s up
What’s the matter is a question when we suspect trouble,
or see the other person is scared, sad, angry or other bad emotion.
A: Really 4. _________________________
B: The No.5 bus.
A: 5. ______________________________
B: Yes, there is. I’m just going to the bus stop.
A: Oh, that’s great! Thanks so much.
B: You’re welcome.
Which bus can / should I take
Is there a bus stop near / around here
Is there a bus stop
1. 问路句型
Excuse me, where is the bookstore
Excuse me, do you know where the bookstore is
Can/could you tell me the way to the bookstore
Can/could you tell me how to / I can get to the bookstore
Excuse me, where is the nearest bookstore
2. 问距离,时间及交通方式句型
离这儿有多远?
How far is it from here
到那里要花我多长时间?
How long does it take me to get there
我可以坐公共汽车吗?
Can I take a bus
我应该坐哪一路车?
Which bus shall I take
附近有车站吗?
Is there a bus stop near / around here
易错题
1. 我想知道你是否能和我一起去听音乐会。
I wonder that you can go to the concert with me.
2. 我想知道这场音乐会什么时候开始。
I wonder when will the concert start.
3. 让我们去餐厅吃晚餐,好吗?
We can have dinner in a restaurant, shall we
4. 我能试穿它吗?
Can / May I try it
whether/if you can go to the concert with me.
the concert will start.
Let’s
try it on
易错题
5. Tom兴奋地跳了起来,几乎要发疯了。
Tom jumped in _________ and almost _____
crazy.
6. 我们生活在地球上。
We live ___ the earth.
7. 在你完成作业之前,你不能出去闲逛。
You can’t hang out before _______ (finish) your
homework.
8. 她是一个如此负责任的母亲以至于我对她所做的一切表示感谢。
She is such a responsible mother ____ I am thankful
___ her ____ what she has done for me.
excitement
went
on
finishing
that
for
to
背书打卡: 今天讲的作文范文。
2. 专项31 :一~四 (作文不写)。