二轮专题---区7.8年级写作讲座

课件71张PPT。 聚焦教材，关注写作 初中学生英语写作水平偏低现象比较严重，中考写作部分。得分率平均低于其它技能（听力和阅读）。问卷调查发现初中生普遍惧怕英语写作，在完成英语写作任务时不是无话可写（内容空洞）就是写出来的作文语无伦次（思路混乱），不符合英语表达习惯（语言不规范）。 一、写作的现状二、写作的特性一、写作的层次1.句单位的写作
2.语篇单位写作二、写作的障碍因素1.词汇问题
2.语法问题
3.语篇衔接问题
4.写作基本技巧的缺乏写作的特性四、写作教学模式三、写作的模式1.平行写作
2.框架写作
3.轮式写作
3.命题写作
4.自由写作1.重结果的教学模式
2.重过程的教学模式
3.重内容的教学模式写作的特性五、写作技能及其训练方式1.遣词造句：如选词填空，完成句子，改错，造句和翻译等等。
2.段落写作：要求确定人称，构思写作内容，统一时态。
3.布局谋篇：如大部分文章都可以按照三段来安排篇章的结构，引言段，主题段，结尾段。
写作的特性六、写作教学活动设计1.词语释义
2.断句与标点练习
3.句子模仿与改写
4.连词成文，句子重组七年级要求
1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；
2、能使用简单的图表和海报等形式传达信息；
3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候卡和邀请卡；
4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编写简单的故事。八年级要求
1、能五确使用标点符号；
2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；
3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；
4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。
九年级要求
1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；
2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；
3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；
4、能简单描述人物或事件；
5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。三、课标的要求聚焦教材，改编教材，为写作留出时间。
循序渐进的设计教学任务。从正确书写字词句开始，到仿写句子，造句，课文改写，再过渡到教师指导下的写作，最后到高级写作—自由写作
采用过程性写作教学法，为学生的写作能力发展做好长远的打算。
4四、写作教学的几点建议
“三段七步”读写整合教学模式6Where's your pen pal from?Unit 1----Corry Ni（read & write）Sam Sam is from France. He is French. He speaks French. He lives in Paris.GuesscountrylanguagecityBrainstormingMore about SamHe is years old.
His birthday is
In his family, he has
He can play very well.
He likes and he likes playing
His favorite subject is
For lunch, he likes best.14in May.2 brothers and 1 sister. guitaraction moviesbaseball.English.hamburgersAgebirthdayfamilyhobbiesName: ________
Age: ________
Birthday: ____________
From: _______
Language: _________
Family: _______________
Sport: ________
Hobbies Food: _________
Movie: ________
Music: ________
Favorite Subject:________考一考Sam14in MayFranceFrench2 brothers and 1 sister.baseball.hamburgersaction moviesEnglish. play guitar5七上写作题目

U1-U6 write a few sentences .
U1. Write some words.
U2. “Lost and Found”
U3. This is…. He/she is…
U4. It is on/in/under/ …
U5. I have….
U6. I like ….for breakfast/lunch/supper.
U7-10. Write a short passage
U11. Fill the blanks（a few words）
U12. One day schedule (fill a form)七下写作题目

U1-U8 应用文
U1. 自我介绍
U2. 介绍怎么到达目的地
U3. 介绍一种动物
U4. 招聘广告
U5. 介绍家人（比7上多了现在进行时的句型）
U6. 天气报道
U7. 介绍外貌
U8. 食品广告。
U9.-U10事件的描述
U9. 模仿写过去的经历
U10.旅游日记
U11. /
U12. 模仿写家规
八上写作题目

U1.Write about habits.how healthy are you?
U2.write about what to do to about having a cold?
U3.write a dreaming vacation.
U4.Write about how to get to a place.
U5. write an e-mail to say you can’t visit next week.
U6.Write about the same and different things between you and a friend.
八上写作题目

U7.Write a recipe
U8. Write a letter about what you did on your last day off.
U9.Write about a person who you admire.
U10. Write about some resolutions.
U11.Write an e-mail to ask for help.
U12.Write about a talent show.

八下写作题目

U1. 写作题目要重新设计
U2. ask for advise（problems）
U3. 读写内容不相符（看图写话）
U4. 写成绩报告单
U5. 写未来的职业设想（Use “If/will”）
U6. 写作题目要重新设计(可设计为“我的收藏”) U7. 写作题目要重新设计（原为根据情境写句型）
U8. 写作题目要重新设计（写一种动物）
U9. 读写结合写自我介绍
U10.写作题目要重新设计（写感谢信）
九上写作题目

U1. 读写结合练“我的英语学习方法”
U2. 读写结合练“我的改变”
U3. 读写结合练 “谈规矩”，但是题目要重新设计
U4. 无法设计写作题目（谈性格调查）
U5. 故事续写（strange events）
U6. 读写结合写评论(书、电影、音乐)
U7. 写作题目要重新设计（推荐旅游地点）
U8. 没有写作题目
U9. 读写结合写飞盘的发明
U10. 读写结合写愚人节玩笑（题目要重新设计）
U11. 读写结合写导游词（题目要重新设计）
U12. 读写结合写导游词 （题目要重新设计）
U13. 写广告语（不好写）
俗话说：读万卷书不如行万里路，行万里路不如阅人无数，阅人无数不如名师指路。结束语7A
Unit 1
Section B词汇填空7A
Unit 3
Section B句型模仿7A
Unit10
Section B文章参照
性很强7B
Unit 4
Section B学习运用词块进行写作you Vs meyoumeYou are a studentYou study in Xianyan No.1
Middle School It's busy but interesting.You need to have class(上课）
and do homework. You can speak Chinese and a little English.You study in the day and at nightI am a _____I work in _____________I need to __________I work ____________________It's ________I can ____________I work with _______________Xianyan No.2 Middle schoolgive classes and
help studentsspeak Chinese and Englishother teachers and studentsin the day and sometimes at nightbusy but funteacherYou study with other students
and teachersA. catch(抓） thievesF. work in the hospitalD. work with people
and moneyI. work lateB. work hardG. work in the bankE. work in the
police stationC. sing and danceH. sometimes work
weekends and eveningsTalk ahout the jobs从下表中选择词组填到适当的空格，可多选A.catch(抓） thievesF. work in the hospitalD. work with people
and moneyI. work lateB. work hardG. work in the bankE. work in the
police stationC. sing and danceH. sometimes work
weekends and eveningsTalk ahout the jobsI. work lateH. sometimes work
weekends and eveningssometimes work
weekends and eveningsWANTED:Do you like to work late? Do you like to work hard? Do you like to meet people? If your answer is “Yes”, then we have a job for you as a ________________.
Call Yao Ming’s Restaurant at 555-3937.waiter填空：完成招聘广告readingSUMMER JOB:Do you like to talk with people? Do you like to write stories? Do you want to work for a magazine? Then come and work for us as a ________________.
Please call Karen at 555-8823.reporterreadingwaiterreporteractor1标题2 工作说明4 联系方式3 职业名称18A
Unit1
Section B要求学生写出自己的观点8A
Unit 8
Section B开始接近中考的命题作文8B
Unit 6
Section B要重新设计写作题目2Unit 9
When was it invented?Period 4Do it in this waycar travelThe car is used for travelingtalk with peopleBell1876It is used for talking with peopleIt was invented by BellIt was invented in 1876Retell the story of the history of potato chips1853
George
where George worked
by mistakedrinkbeveragedrinkbeverage ancient
emperor
bush
fall into
mixture3a Read the article and write answers to the questions.What is the article about ?
It is about the invention of tea.It was invented over three thousand
years ago.
It was invented by the Chinese emperor
Shen Nong.It was invented by accident.3. Who was it invented by?4. How was it invented?
2. When was it invented?Who invented tea? Did you know that tea, the most popular drink in
the world (after water), was invented by accident?
Although tea wasn’t brought to the Western world
until 1610, this beverage was discovered over
three thousand years before that. According to an
ancient Chinese legend, the emperor Shen Nong
discovered tea when he was boiling drinking water
over an open fire. Some leaves from a nearby bush
fell into the water and remained there for some
time. The emperor noticed that the leaves in the
water produced a pleasant smell. Later he decided
to taste the hot mixture. It was quite delicious. And
in this way, one of the world’s favorite drinks
was invented.What is the article about?Who?When?How?The end1.What does “pleasant” mean here?A. 令人愉快的C. 丑陋的D. 好看的B. 令人恶心的Later he decided to taste the hot mixture. It was quite delicious Did you know that tea, the most popular drink in
the world (after water), was invented by accident?
Although tea wasn’t brought to the Western world
until 1610, this beverage was discovered over
three thousand years before that. According to an
ancient Chinese legend, the emperor Shen Nong
discovered tea when he was boiling drinking water
over an open fire. Some leaves from a nearby bush
fell into the water and remained there for some
time. The emperor noticed that the leaves in the
water produced a pleasant smell. Later he decided
to taste the hot mixture. It was quite delicious. And
in this way, one of the world’s favorite drinks was
invented.Who invented tea?Chinese teaShen NongTeaIn ancient timesOutdoor, under a bushSome leaves fell in waterWorld-known beverage flying diskUnit6How long have you been collecting shells?Reading about Ellen’s hobby of collecting things
WritingA shelf to store themI like collecting tickets
Because they are very meaningful.What would you like to collect ?
I would like to collect the….Why do you like them?
Because they are …I have 18 of them now .
I have been collecting tickets
for 2 years
since 2 years ago18 tickets
2 yearsHow many of them do I have now?How long have I been collecting them?Ellen
ADBCSnow globeScan
Match the snow globes with their descriptions.Dear Jack,
Thanks for sending me the snow globe of the monster. I love it. In fact I think it’s probably my favorite. I’ve been collecting snow globes for seven years, and now I have 226 of them. My mom says I have to stop, because we’ve run out of room to store them. They’re all around our apartment. I even store them in boxes under my bed. The first one
I ever got was a birthday cake snow globe on my seventh birthday. I particularly love globes with animals. I have a big one with bears in it, and another one with penguins. If you know anyone else who collects them, please tell me. I’d like to start a snow globe collectors’ club. By the way, what’s your hobby?
Love,
EllenRead after the tape and underline the sentences in the message.(跟读并划出文章原句。)A monster snow globe
A birthday cake snow globe
A bear snow globe
A penguin snow globenow I have 226 of them.I’ve been collecting snow globes
for seven yearswe’ve run out of room to store them.I’d like to start a snow globe collectors’ club. “My mom says I have to stop, because we’ve run out of room to store them. They’re all around our apartment. I even store them in boxes under my bed.”A. 用完，耗尽 B. 跑出She has ___ __ __room to store them.She has no more room to store them.run out ofWhat do you like collecting? Why do you like them?How many of them do you have?How long have you been collecting them?I like collecting ____, because_____.
Now I have _____ of them.
I have been __________ for _____.填表（请填入你现有的收藏或者想象中的收藏） ，并根据表格内容写作Pre-writing kitesBob22 of themsince five years agothey are beautiful and interesting.I have to stop, because we’ve run out
of room to store them.:a kite with the face of Monkey King
some kites like butterflies. I’d like to make friends with them. my hobbyof collecting thingsWhat can we talk about ourhobbies of collecting things?whathow manyhow longmore informationplanproblemwhyhow…Talk show: Tell us your hobby of collecting things.Writing: write about your own collections or
write for Judy（写你自己的收藏或假设你是Judy写一篇收藏的文章,Judy的收藏信息见下表。）What would you like to collect?
I would like to collect… Why do you like them?
Because they are …How many of them do you have?
I have ….of them now…How long have you been collecting them?
I have been collecting them for/since…Pair-work以下是Jack的收藏信息，请给Ellen写一封回信。8B
Unit 6
Section B要重新设计写作题目2 谢谢！
祝快乐！