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北师大版初中英语九年级Unit 7 写作专练
一、北师大版初中英语九年级Unit 7 写作专练 书面表达
1．假如你是Tom，去年暑假，你和父母去北京度假了。请以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇100词左右的英文短文描述一下这次旅行。
要求：1）开篇点题：去年暑假去北京旅行很开心，并点出旅行的人员、天气等；
2）展开描述：详细描写在旅游地的活动；
3）结尾总述：写出此次旅行的感受。
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Trip to Beijing
【答案】A Trip to Bejjing
Last summer holiday I had a wonderful trip to Bejing with my parents. We went there by plane and stayed at Huabei Hotel. The weather was hot.
On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. Lots of people from different countries like visiting it. We also went to the Palace Museum. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs. The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven, the Beihai Park and the Fragrant Hill. I now know more about the history of China.
Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Bejing. Though we were tired, we all felt happy.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。根据题目要求以“ A Trip to Beijing ”为题写一篇去北京旅行的作文。根据材料的内容提示，写作内容包含旅行的人员、天气，旅游时的活动以及此次旅游的感受等。主要时态为一般过去时，主要人称为第一人称。注意按照提示内容展开写作，适当的内容延伸，使用并列连词使行文通顺流畅，过渡自然；主谓要一致，保证句子的准确和完整。
【点评】这篇作文根据内容要求详细、完整地进行了写作，结构完整，内容充实，名胜古迹的翻译准确。一些固定短语的使用，如 had a wonderful trip, lots of,more about, the history of China等以及内容结构和句型上，如On the first day ...，The following days，Later...，Though ...的使用使文章表达准确、自然，总分总的结构让人一目了然。
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北师大版初中英语九年级Unit 7 写作专练
一、北师大版初中英语九年级Unit 7 写作专练 书面表达
1．假如你是Tom，去年暑假，你和父母去北京度假了。请以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇100词左右的英文短文描述一下这次旅行。
要求：1）开篇点题：去年暑假去北京旅行很开心，并点出旅行的人员、天气等；
2）展开描述：详细描写在旅游地的活动；
3）结尾总述：写出此次旅行的感受。
A
Trip to Beijing
答案解析部分
1．【答案】A Trip to Bejjing
Last summer holiday I had a wonderful trip to Bejing with my parents. We went there by plane and stayed at Huabei Hotel. The weather was hot.
On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. Lots of people from different countries like visiting it. We also went to the Palace Museum. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs. The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven, the Beihai Park and the Fragrant Hill. I now know more about the history of China.
Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Bejing. Though we were tired, we all felt happy.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。根据题目要求以“ A Trip to Beijing ”为题写一篇去北京旅行的作文。根据材料的内容提示，写作内容包含旅行的人员、天气，旅游时的活动以及此次旅游的感受等。主要时态为一般过去时，主要人称为第一人称。注意按照提示内容展开写作，适当的内容延伸，使用并列连词使行文通顺流畅，过渡自然；主谓要一致，保证句子的准确和完整。
【点评】这篇作文根据内容要求详细、完整地进行了写作，结构完整，内容充实，名胜古迹的翻译准确。一些固定短语的使用，如 had a wonderful trip, lots of,more about, the history of China等以及内容结构和句型上，如On the first day ...，The following days，Later...，Though ...的使用使文章表达准确、自然，总分总的结构让人一目了然。
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