2022年外研版中考英语复习书面表达之二——语言、文学和学习学案

书面表达之二——语言、文学和学习学案
学校：_______________ 班别：_____________ 姓名：______________
一、学习目标：
1. 掌握语言学习类话题作文的特点。
2. 掌握语言学习类话题的常用词汇和句型。
3. 掌握书面表达思路搭建的方法和技巧，并熟练写出语言学习类话题作文。
二、话题探究：
（一）话题解读
语言学习类
涉及对象 自己与他人；英语学习与汉语学习
涉及内容 1. 语言学习的“方法策略”---向他人介绍学习方法 2. 语言学习的“情感态度”---说明自己对语言学习的认识 3. 语言学习的“困惑质疑”---倾诉自己语言学习的困惑，希望得到他人的帮助 4. 语言学习的“学习经历”---结合自己学习的经历，分享学习心得体会 …
命题形式 1. 建议信---建议他人如何学好英语或是汉语，如2016西城二模题目1; 2016安徽中考 2. 向他人表达自己英语学习的现状，如2016门头沟二模题目1 3. 介绍自己学习上取得的进步，如2016东城二模题目2；2016吉林中考 4. 对学习发表自己的看法，如How to be a good learner …
（二）话题素材
Ⅰ. 相关单元： Grade 9 Unit 3 English Around the World .
Ⅱ. 重点词汇：
听 listen 预习 preview 培养英语语感 develop sense of English langusge
说 speak 复习 review 与外国人说英语 speak to foreigners in English
读 read 掌握 master 读英文报纸或杂志 read English magazines and newspapers
写 write 背诵 recite 加入英语俱乐部/英语角 join English Club / Corner
翻译 translate 用心记 learn…by heart 有用的 useful/ of great value
练习 practice 提高 improve 分享 share sth with sb.
记住 remember 进步 make progress 向…寻求帮助 ask sb. for help
语法 grammar 鼓励 encourage 在某人的业余时间里 in one’s spare time
单词 word/ vocabulary 努力 work hard / try one’s best 一心扑在…上 put one’s heart into
短语 phrase 建议 advice / suggestion 在(语言学习)方面 奠定一个好的基础 lay a good foundation in language study
句子 sentence 困难的 difficult 耐心 patience/ patient
发音 pronounce 简单的 easy 记日记 keep diaries
拼写 spell 重要的 important 看英文节目或电影 watch English programs on TV/ movies
口语 spoken English 必要的 necessary 阅读技巧 reading skills
自信 confidence/ confident 弱的； 差的 weak 有帮助的 helpful/ of great help
害怕的 afraid 犯错 mistake 善长 be good at/ do well in
紧张的 nervous 谈论 talk about 在…的帮助之下 with the help of sb.
决心 determination 对…感兴趣 be interested in 做某事遇到困难 have problem doing sth
下定决心 make up one’s mind 培养兴趣 develop interest in 考试不及格 fail in
放弃 give up 方法 way 交流 communicate
Ⅲ. 经典语段：
1、学习重要性
1) 随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。 (with the development…)
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers,
it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
2) 随着全球化进程的加快，英语变得越来越重要，尤其对那些需要和外国人交流的人来说。
As the deepening of globalization, English becomes increasingly important, especially for those who
communicate with foreigners.
3) 英语是了解外部世界的重要工具。因为当今世界很多信息特别是先进的技术都是通过英语来传播的。
English is an essential tool to know the outside world. Nowadays, most information is broadcastedin English, especially the advanced information.
2、学习困惑
1) 我觉得很难掌握它。(find+it + adj+to do) I find it difficult to master it.
2) 因为老师说得太快，我跟不上。(follow) I couldn’t follow the teacher because he spoke too quickly.
3) 我很害羞，以至于我在同学面前说不好英语。(so…that…)
I am so shy that I can’t speak English well in front of my classmates.
4) 我太紧张了以至于我上课不能用英语回答老师的问题。(so…that…)
I’m so nervous that I can’t answer my English teacher’s question in class.
5) 我最头痛记单词了。我也会花些时间用心记单词但是我发现我忘得特别快。有没有比较好的记单词方
法？ Memorizing English words is a big headache to me. I want to learn to use English and I also spend some
time learning words by heart. But I find I have forgotten them more quickly than I remember them. Are
there any good ways to memorize English words
6) 我在写作方面比较薄弱，你能给我一些关于如何写好作文的好方法吗？（be weak in）
I am weak in writing. Can you give me some good ideas on how to write a composition
3、学习方法
1) 这是学好它的一些重要方法。首先…第二…第三…最后…
Here are some important ways to learn it. First… Second… Third… At last…
2) 听英文歌曲和电台对于提高你的英语发音有很大的帮助。(it is+adj. + to do; in order to; improve)
It is great help for you to listen to English songs and radio in order to improve your English pronunciation.
3) 你可以通过加入英语角，和外国人用英语交谈来提高你的英语口语。(to improve; talk with)
To improve your spoken English, you can join the English Corner and talk with foreigners.
4) 和你的同学多用英语交流，这样你的口语和听力都会提高的很快。(communicate; in this way)
Try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you can improve your
listening and spoken English quickly.
5) 不要害怕在公开场合讲英语。因为这不仅是锻炼口语的好办法也是增强自信心的途径。
Don’t be afraid of speaking in public. It’s not only a good way to practice oral English, but also a good
method to grow the confidence.
6) 你应该坚持每天读英语，并尽可能多地说英语。(as much as possible)
You should keep on reading English every day and speaking English as much as possible.
7) 读英文报纸和书籍是一个不错的扩大词汇量的办法。(… is a good idea; be enlarged)
Reading some English newspapers and books will be a good idea. In this way your English vocabulary
will be enlarged effectively.
8) 熟能生巧。你写的文章越多，取得的进步就越大。
Practice makes perfect ! The more articles you write, the more progress you will make.
9) 当你与中国人交流时，你最好说得慢点以便你能更容易地被理解。
When you talk with Chinese, you’d better speak slowly so that you can be understood easily.
10) 如果你永不放弃，我相信你不久就能取得巨大进步。
If you never give up, I am sure you will make great progress soon.
4、学习经历
1）起初我的语文不好，我感到很沮丧。我的语文老师鼓励我，并给了我一些建议。(be weak in; advise sb
to do) At first, I was weak in Chinese, and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher encouraged me and gave me
some advice.
2）我语文老师建议我多读些书。从那时起阅读在我的生活中能扮演了很重要的角色。(advise sb to do)
My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From the non, reading has played an important role in my life.
3）我课上认真听讲、记笔记，课下及时复习，并且每天花些时间阅读文章、背诵句子和完成作业。在业余
时间，我经常读英文书籍报刊。
I always listen to teachers and take notes carefully in class. After class I often review it in time. I always
spend some time reading texts, reciting sentences and finishing my homework every day. In my spare
time, I often read English stories and newspapers.
4）此外，尽可能多的练习写作也是很有必要的。(it is necessary to do sth…)
Also/ Besides/ In addition, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as possible.
5） 现在我的英语/语文得到很大的提高并且英语/语文已经成为我最喜欢的科目。我非常感谢我的老师和同学
们。 (be thankful/grateful to sb.) Now, I have made great progress in English/Chinese and I’m more interested
in it. I felt very grateful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates.
五、常用谚语
1. Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半
2. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
3. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马
4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成
5. No pain, no gain 一分耕耘一分收获
6. There is no end to learning 学无止境
7. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻
8. Action speak louder than words. 行动胜于言辞
9. A man comes learned by asking questions 不耻下问才能有学问
10. Never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老
三、真题训练：
（2016年北京东城二模）
你校的《英语园地》正在以“My Progress in Middle School”为题征文，请你写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在初中阶段哪一方面有进步，你是怎么取得这一进步的，以及你的感受等。
提示词语：improve, weak, encourage, work hard, carefully, pleased
提示问题：What progress have you made in middle school
How did you achieve the progress
How do you feel
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一审
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二列
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三连
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四美
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五查
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六抄
)（一）思路搭建
（二）思路点拨
一审： 仔细审查所给的内容提示，明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。
1. 文体 本文是一篇提示类命题作文，以“我在初中阶段取得的进步”为话题，贴近学生生活，属于__________；
2. 人称 由题干中“你在初中阶段哪一方面有进步，你是怎么取得这一进步的，以及你 的感受”可知要用第 ______人称；
3. 时态 由题干和提示问题 “What progress have you made in middle school 你在初中阶段哪一方面有进步”可知这部分要用 ____________ 时；由“How did you achieve the progress 你是怎么取得这一进步的”可知这部分要用___________时； 由“How do you feel ”可知这部分要用____________时。
（答案：1. 记叙文； 2. 一； 3. 现在完成；一般过去；一般现在）
二列： 根据题干和提示问题，提炼要点，列出提纲，并且写出句子。
列要点 写句子
1. _____________________ ①自从我进入初中以来，我取得了许多进步。我的中文水平大大提高了。
2. _____________________ ②初中开始之初，我的中文很弱，我在课堂上太紧张,害怕回答问题 ③每当我犯错，老师和同学们都没有嘲笑我。 ④老师鼓励我，并给了我一些关于如何学好中文的建议，我开始努力学习 中文。 ⑤我上课认真听讲，课后及时复习，在课余时间阅读大量的书。我经常写文字并且跟老师同学们分享。 ⑥在他们的帮助下，我的中文取得了很大的进步。
3. _______________________ ⑦我很高兴我的进步，我对我的语文老师和我的同学充满感激。
(答案：1. 我在初中阶段哪方面取得进步; 2. 我是怎么取得进步的 ; 3. 我的感受)
三连：句子写出后，根据短文的内容要求，分成三段。并且为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，需要适当加入一些连接词或过渡句。
常用连接词
1.表文章结构顺序 first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2.表并列补充关系 what’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; not only… but also…; as well as
3.表转折对比关系 but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4.表因果关系 because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5.表换一种方式表达 in other words
6.表进行举例说明 for example; for instance; such as
7.表强调 in fact; especially, actually
8.表达自己观点 as far as I know; in my opinion; as we all know; as is known to all
9.表总结 in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
10. 其他 luckily; fortunately; thanks to; 其他常见状语从句、定语从句的引导词
任务：请大家用恰当的连词或过渡句将下文补充完整。
I’ve made a lot of progress since I entered middle school. 1. , my Chinese has greatly improved.
When I started middle school, my Chinese was bad. I was 2. nervous 3. I was afraid to answer questions in class. 4. when I made a mistake, my teacher and classmates didn’t laugh at me. 5. , my Chinese teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice on how to learn Chinese well. 6. I began to work hard on it. I 7. listened more carefully in class 8. reviewed it in time after class. 9. I read a lot of books when I was free. 10. I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates. With their help ，I made much more progress in Chinese.
11. （过渡句）
I am happy because of my progress and thankful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates.
（答案：1. For example； 2. so; 3. that; 4. However, 5. Istead； 6. Then 7. not only; 8. but also
9. WHat’s more 10. Besides; 11. Now I become more interested in Chinese and I get higher grades. )
四美： 巧用高级词汇或谚语，亮点润色，美化文章。
1. When I started middle school, my Chinese was bad.
句子升级：___________________________________________________________（使用高级词汇）
2. What’s more I read a lot of books when I was free.
句子升级：___________________________________________________________（使用高级词汇）
3. Besides, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates. With their help , I made much
more progress in Chinese.
句子升级：Besides, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates.______________
__________________（使用谚语）With their help , I made much more progress in Chinese.
4. I am happy because of my progress and thankful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates.
句子升级：___________________________________________________________（使用高级词汇）
（答案: 1. When I started middle school, I was weak in Chinese.
2. What’s more, I read a lot of books in my spare time.
3. Besides, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates. Where there is
a will, there is a way, with their help, I made much more progress in Chinese.
4. I am pleased with my progress and thankful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates. )
五查： 通览全文，按照下面六大方面仔细检查，修改订正。
Spelling(拼写) Tense(时态) Grammar (语法) Handwriting(书写) Punctuation marks(标点符号) Expression（表达是否符合英语习惯）
六抄： 将修改后的作文规范抄写在答题卡上。
对比一下：
同学们，如果你让老师“眼疼”，老师会让你“心疼”的哦！中考作文一定要打草稿，检查修改后再进行誊写，这样所用时间不会很长，但实际效果会大不一样！请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。用你漂亮的书写来征服阅卷老师吧！
四、范文赏析
My Progress in Middle School
I’ve made a lot of progress since I entered middle school. For example, my Chinese has greatly improved.
When I started middle school, I was weak in Chinese. I was so nervous that I’m afraid to answer questions in class. However, when I made a mistake my teacher and classmates didn’t laugh at me. Instead. Instead，my Chinese teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice on how to learn Chinese well. Then I began to work hard on it. I not only listened more carefully in class but also reviewed it in time after class. What’s more, I read a lot of books in my spare time. Besides, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates. Where there is a will, there is a way, with their help, I made much more progress in Chinese.
Now I become more interested in Chinese and I get higher grades. I am pleased with my progress and thankful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates.
*亮点点评 *：
这是一篇优秀的范文，作者按照题目要求，跟我们分享了他在初中阶段在中文方面所取得的进步。本篇文章中的连接词“for example”“however”“instead”“then”“what’s more””besides”等用法恰当，句与句之间过渡自然；整篇文章内容完整，层次清晰，时态灵活；在短文中作者还使用了丰富的句型和短语，如： … since …, be weak in, so … that…, be afraid to , not … but also…, in my spare time, share … with…, be interested in , be pleased with 等，为文章增添了不少色彩；另外作者还恰当地引用了谚语: where there is a will, there is a way来引出努力后得到的回报，一下子提升了文章的档次。
五、实战演练
（吉林中考）随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以“My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1. 为什么要学好汉语？
2. 谈谈自己学习汉语的经历？
3. 介绍1~2条学习汉语的方法。
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
My Chinese Learning
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. ___________________________
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思路点拨：
（一）审：
1. 文体 本文是一篇提示类命题作文，以“学习汉语”为话题，写学习汉语的重要性、介绍学 习经历和学习建议， 贴近学生生活，属于_________________；
2. 人称 由提示问题“谈谈自己学习汉语的经历”可知要用第______人称；
3. 时态 由提示问题 “谈谈自己学习汉语的经历？” 可知,写经历这部分要用 __________时， 其他的部分要用___________时。
（二）列：
列要点 写句子
1. 开头 ___________
2. 正文 ___________
3. 结尾 ___________
（三）连：请用恰当的连词和过渡句，将句子连起来，注意开头和结尾。
（四）美：使用高级词汇和句型或谚语，给你的文章亮点润色吧。
（五）查：通览全文，从下面六大方面检查修改
Spelling(拼写)
Tense(时态)
Grammar (语法)
Handwriting(书写)
Punctuation marks(标点符号)
Expression（表达是否符合英语习惯）
（六）抄：将你修改好的文章规范抄写在答题卡上，注意按结构分段
My Chinese Learning
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. ___________________________
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