Unit 10 I've had this bike for three years.单元话题写作指导课件（16张PPT）

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Unit 10
Writing-
Living environment
本单元话题为"居住环境（Living environment）。主要写家乡或其他某个地方的变化。本单元的主题是庭院售卖活动及家乡的变化。让学生通过售卖的物品想起其所带的回忆，运用现在完成时来谈论物品，亲身感受不同的生活经历。。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
1.The world has such rapid developments that we shouldn't stay the same.世界发展如此之快，我们不应该一成不变。
2.My hometown has left many sweet memories.故乡留下了许多美好的回忆。
3.Childhood always brings back soft and sweet memories to people.童年总是勾起人们温柔甜蜜的回忆。
4.Our house seems to get smaller as children get older.随着孩子们渐渐长大，我们的房子好像变得更小了。
5.My hometown has changed a lot in the past few years.在过去的几年里，我的家乡变化很大。
6.I want to keep it because they bring back sweet memories.我想要保留它，因为他们给我带来甜蜜的回忆。
7.Amy has had her favorite book for three years.艾米拥有她最喜欢的书3年了。
8. He has owned it since his fourth birthday. 自他四岁生日起， 他拥有这个东西了。
9. Some people still live in their hometown. However, others may only see it once or twice a year.有些人依然住在家乡，然而，另一些人可能一年只能回家乡一两次。
10.I'm sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.我相信未来它会变得更富有、更美丽。我爱我的家乡。
11 Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to our city.每年，成千上万的人从世界各地来到我们的城市。
12.it's important to keep the environment clean.保持环境清洁很重要。
题目：假设你叫李华，在网络上读到来自英国的Simon的一封电子邮件，介绍了他家乡的变化和他的个人爱好，你也打算写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你家乡兴化的变化和你的个人爱好——阅读的情况。
要点如下∶
1）家乡变化（Environment， Transport and Living conditions）
2）阅读情况（Type种类，Time and Benefits益处）
3）个人看法（多读书，爱家乡）
第一步：仔细审题
1、格式--
2、时态--
3、人称--
4、体裁--
命题作文
一般现在时
第一人称
题目：假设你叫李华，在网络上读到来自英国的Simon的一封电子邮件，介绍了他家乡的变化和他的个人爱好，你也打算写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你家乡兴化的变化和你的个人爱好——阅读的情况。
记述文
第二步：谋篇布局
第一段—
Dear Simon,
I'm very glad to read your e-mail. In your letter, you told me about the changes to your hometown and your hobby. Now I'd like to tell you about mine.
引出话题
题目：假设你叫李华，在网络上读到来自英国的Simon的一封电子邮件，介绍了他家乡的变化和他的个人爱好，你也打算写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你家乡兴化的变化和你的个人爱好——阅读的情况。
第二步：谋篇布局
第二段—
There have been great changes in my hometown Xinghua. In the past, there were dirty and narrow roads. People travelled around the town on foot or by bike.Local people lived in old and small houses. People in my hometown live a hard life.Now things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide, with green trees on both sides.And people go travelling by bus, taxi or train. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now.
介绍自己的家乡
第二步：谋篇布局
第三段—
I have many hobbies. I like reading best. I like reading books on novels because I am interested in novels. I usually read books before going to bed every day.Reading can improve my knowledge.Reading can help me relax after a busy day./Reading can open up a whole new world to me.
介绍自己的兴趣爱好。
第二步：谋篇布局
第四段—
In my opinion,I should read more and study hard to make my hometown more beautiful.I love my hometown.
Yours,
liHua
表达自己的看法。
Sample Writing
Dear Simon,
I'm very glad to read your e-mail. In your letter, you told me about the changes to your hometown and your hobby. Now I'd like to tell you about mine.
There have been great changes in my hometown Xinghua. In the past, there were dirty and narrow roads. People travelled around the town on foot or by bike.Local people lived in old and small houses. People in my hometown live a hard life.Now things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide, with green trees on both sides.And people go travelling by bus, taxi or train. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now.
I have many hobbies. I like reading best. I like reading books on novels because I am interested in novels. I usually read books before going to bed every day.Reading can improve my knowledge.Reading can help me relax after a busy day./Reading can open up a whole new world to me.
In my opinion,I should read more and study hard to make my hometown more beautiful.I love my hometown.
Yours,
liHua
现场写作1
假设你住在城市花园社区，并且是你也是一名社区服务中心志愿者。写一篇文章介绍一下你的家及社区。告诉居民你们组织的活动和具体事宜。依据以下信息，完成短文，做适当补充。
社区名称 城市花园（City Garden）
位置 20多栋楼，有树有花，人们友善且乐于助人。
你家情况 住在9楼，有一个客厅、一个厨房、一间浴室和3间卧室。最爱卧室，因为...至少两句）
服务范围 健康中心∶当人们身体不舒服时，医生护士使病人感觉更好。
修理俱乐部∶ 冰箱或洗衣机坏了，工程师们帮忙检查或修理。
学习俱乐部∶大学生帮助辅导孩子学习。
其它（至少两句）
Sample Writing
Hello, everyone.I am Simon. Let me tell you something about my home and my community.
I live in a community called City Garden.It is in the center of the city and it has more than 20 buildings. There are trees and flowers,and people are kind and helpful.I live on the ninth floor. There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and thee bedrooms. I love the bedroom, because it is clean and tidy, I can be here alone. There is a health center here.We have good doctors and nurses here and they will make you feel better when they are sick. If your refrigerator or washing machine breaks down, the engineers can help to check or fix it. When your children have problems with their homework, the college students will help them.If you don't know how to design your room, the artists here will give you some good
ideas. There is also a shopping center with a variety of everyday items.
写作指导：本文是对家和社区的介绍，所以时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并可适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们所熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯;注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文要联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达要具有条理性。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
现场写作2
长沙正在争创全国文明城市。作为一名中学生，你将为此做点什么呢。请你就做何助力把星城变得更加干净、更加绿色，谈谈你的计划吧。
要求∶（1）80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
（3）不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Sample Writing
Changsha is applying to be a National Civilized City.As a student, we should also do something to help. Here are some suggestions.
First of all, we should be polite and civilized students. We need to be friendly to people around us. Besides, it's important to keep the environment clean. Stop throwing rubbish everywhere. What's more,we should obey the traffic rules. Don't cross the road until the traffic light turns green. We can also try to help people in need by doing some voluntary work in our spare time, Last but not least.remember to wait in line when we wait for the bus or underground.
If everyone tries their best, I'm sure we will make Changsha a civilized city.