九年级英语写作专题课a special friend（28张）

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中考英语写作专题课
a special friend
What are the true friends
Friends are those people who can
make us feel at home.
make us laugh.
……
I think…
I believe…
In my opinion…
As far as I know…
I am sure that…
As for me, …
A Forever Friend
"A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out."
Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just by being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you can’t stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship.
When you’re down, and the world seems dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times.
If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, your forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be ok.
And if you find such a friend, you will feel happy and complete, because you need not worry, you have a forever friend for life, and forever has no end.
What is a forever friend
What’s the result of having such a friend
change your life just by being part of it
make you believe that there really is…
get through the hard/sad/ confused(迷惑的)times
lift you up and make that dark and empty world…
A forever friend:
convince(说服) you that there really is …
What can
he do
follow you, guide you and cheer you on
make you laugh until you can’t stop
hold your hand and tell you…
is someone who walks in when
the rest of the world walks out
A result of having such a friend :
feel happy and complete, needn’t worry
A Forever Friend
"A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out."
Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just by being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you can’t stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship.
When you’re down, and the world seems dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times.
If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, your forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be okay.
And if you find such a friend, you will feel happy and complete, because you need not worry, you have a forever friend for life, and forever has no end.
What do you know about a forever friend
What can you learn from this article
A Forever Friend
"A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out."
Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you can’t stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship.
When you’re down, and the world seems dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times.
If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, your forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be ok.
And if you find such a friend, you feel happy and complete, because you need not worry, you have a forever friend for life, and forever has no end.
开头
主
干
结尾
Topic paragraph（定义/观点等）
Supporting Paragraph 1（支撑论据1）
Supporting Paragraph 2 （支撑论据2）
Supporting Paragraph 3 （支撑论据3）
Concluding paragraph（总结升华）
Rewrite the article orally.(口头改编文章60字左右)
A forever friend
Sometimes in life, you find
a special friend, someone
who changes your life just
by being part of it.
A friend can change your
life just by being part of it.
A friend can make you
believe that there really
is good in the world.
Rewrite this article using your own words!(口头改写)
Someone who makes
you believe that there
really is good in the world.
A
B
Which article do you think is better Why
As far as I know, a forever friend is the one who walks in when the rest of the world walks
out.
First of all, he can change your
life just by being
part of it; secondly, he can make you laugh until you can’t
stop; moreover, he can make you believe that there really
is good in the world; lastly, he can convince you that there
really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it.
All in all, this is forever friendship.
A forever friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
He can change your life just by being part of it; he can make you laugh until you can’t stop; he can make you believe that there really is good in the world; he can convince you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it.
This is forever friendship.
What makes a good argumentative writing
Topic
beginning
(introduction)
body
end
Topic(提出观点)
Supporting 4: finally
Supporting 2: secondly
Supporting 3: moreover
Supporting 1: firstly
Conclusion 总结升华
1-2句
6-7句
1-2句
Good framework(框架图) and content(内容)
方法 1:
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more
not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short
关联词(Linking words)
方法 2:
A forever friend walks in when the rest of the world
walks out.
_____________ , he can change your life just by being
part of it; _____________, he can make you laugh until you can’t
stop; ____________, he can make you believe that there really
is good in the world; _________, he can convince you that there
really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it.
________ ,this is forever friendship.
First of all
secondly
moreover
lastly
All in all
moreover, lastly, first of all, secondly, all in all
Let’s try!
善用词汇、短语(good words and phrases) 甚至善用高级词汇
方法 3:
你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。
A You forever friend helps you overcome difficulties .
B You forever friend gets you through difficulties .
C You forever friend helps you out with difficulties.
妙用引文和例子
（Good examples - 多用于“the body”）
方法 4:
A forever friend can help you a lot, like guiding you,
cheering you on…
活用多种句型(good sentences)
方法 5:
Eg. What a kind boy my friend is!
How important a friend is !
感叹句
强调句
Eg. It was the friendship that
helped the hopeless boy.
I do hope I can have many friends if possible.
Eg. 1. Only in this way can you make true friends.
2. Not only do I learn how to get on well
with others, but also I no longer feel lonely .
倒装句
用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。
2. 我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还
不再感到孤独。
各种从句
1.你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。
2. 据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。
1. Whether you can make good friends or not
depends on your character.
2. It is reported that people with friends live longer.
主
语
从
句
He can make you believe that there really
is good in the world.
宾语从句
The most important rule to make friends is that
you should be honest.
表语从句
In my opinion, friends are those who can make me laugh.
定语从句
各种状语从句
Someone who makes you laugh until you can’t stop.
If you turn and walk away, your forever follows.
As long as we have such a friend, we will feel happy and complete.
Content
（内容）
Framework
（结构）
language
（语言）
handwriting（书写）
A good article
要点全，思想正
语法、拼写正确
详略得当
行文流畅
工整、整洁
上一级词汇、短语，
优美句式结构
连接词的合理使用
评价标准
A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真交。
A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。
A true friend is known in the day of adversity（逆境）.
疾风知劲草，患难见真情。
Practicing Writing!
每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以“How to make good friends”为题，写出一篇90个词左右的英语短文。
Three-step Analyzing(三审)三审person（人称）key points（要点）tense（时态）第一人称一般现在时topicSupportingconclusionHow to make good friends
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Content
（内容）
Framework
（结构）
language
（语言）
handwriting（书写）
A good article
要点全，思想正
语法、拼写正确
详略得当
行文流畅
工整、整洁
上一级词汇、短语，
优美句式结构
连接词的合理使用
How to write
三审
十句
三段
写作模式
person
（人称）
tense
（时态）
key points
（要点）
1-2句
6-7句
1-2句
body
end
beginning
(introduction)
Modify your writing and copy it out in your exercise books.
Homework
Thank you!