话题写作05课件 (共33张PPT) 人际交往 【2022中考英语临考必备：满分作文五步法】

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英语满分作文五步法
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人教版2022中考英语三轮复习
英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（五）人际交往
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
七年级上册 Unit 1 My name’s Gina.
七年级上册 Unit 8 When is your birthday
八年级上册 Unit 9 Can you come to my party
八年级下册 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华,你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难,所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容用英语给他发一封电子邮件,帮助他克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。内容包括:
1.每个人都会有感到苦恼、焦虑的时候;
2.一定要告诉他人你的烦恼;
3.遇到困难时,多与同学交流或和老师、家长及时沟通;
4.可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
　　　 　 　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
电子邮件
第一人称或第二人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
提建议
要点:
1.　　　 　　　 　　
2.　　　　　　　　　
3.　　　　　　　　　
4.　　　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、 地名等内容。
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes.

Yours,
Li Hua
审—审清题意
情绪认同
说出烦恼
找人交流
满分作文五步法
Step1
其他缓解方式……
1.开篇点题:
Everyone may feel
　 .
2.主体内容:
You can tell others______________
　 .
连—连词成句
worried or sad sometimes
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
your trouble when you are anxious
It’s good
　　　　　　　　　　　　 your classmates, teachers or parents.
You can get relaxed
　
___________________________________ .
Smile at yourself and never
　　　　 　about your problems.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
to communicate with
by listening to music or taking part in activities
keep silent
3.总结收尾:
We have 　　　　　　　　　　　, but I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
many difficulties
①it作形式主语:
　　　　 all right___________　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　when you are anxious.
修—修饰美化
满分作文五步法
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. ① When you are anxious, you can tell others yourtrouble.
It’s
to tell others your trouble
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
I think communicating with your classmates, teachers or parents is a good choice. Then, you’ll find that you can solve the problems from study or life easily.
②改为动名词作主语:

　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　is another way to help you get relaxed.
修—修饰美化
Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
②You can get relaxed by listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.
③扩句:
What’s more, we
　　　 　 　　have a heart-to-heart communication with our parents or friends around us 　　　　　　get their understanding and support.
修—修饰美化
are supposed to
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③Please do remember: you’re not alone.
so as to
④改为让步状语从句:
　　　　 how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
修—修饰美化
No matter
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
④We may have many difficulties, but I believe
all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours,
Li Hua
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others your trouble when you are anxious.
I think communicating with your classmates, teachers or parents is a good choice. Then, you’ll
find that you can solve the problems from study or life easily. Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems. What’s more, we are supposed to have a heart-to-heart communication
with our parents or friends around us so as to get their understanding and support.
No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours,
Li Hua
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.友谊类
forever, be friendly to, tell the truth, believe in, help each other, communicate with, between…and…, make sb. happy, help sb. with sth., give sb. a hand, care about, deepen your friendship…
2.关系类
family rules, build a happy family, share happiness and sadness, face difficulties, smile at others, be strict with, pay too much attention to my exam results, do your homework, respect sb., show love and concern…
3.交往类
talk with, argue with, share with, the feeling of, with the help of, look forward to, get on well with, cheer up, help with, understand each other, a harmonious relationship, be kind and friendly…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
2.I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other.
3.It’s said that people who have friends are happier than those who don’t.
4.Being kind and friendly can make us live happily and get along well with other people.
5.The more we get together, the better we understand each other.
6.I want to say thank you to my dear mother.
7.Looking back at the past three years, I’d like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
[发展句]
1.If everyone shows his/her love to others, our life will become better and better.
2.It’s a pleasure to offer help to those who are in trouble.
3.I’m going to take part in some social activities so that I can know more about society.
4.Family members should share happiness and worries.
5.Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.
6.With my mother’s help, I didn’t lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.
[结尾句]
1.If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
2.As far as I’m concerned, true friends should be honest and understanding. I hope you can be good friends again.
3.I believe you can get along well with everyone.
4.All in all, I hope you can repair your friendship and understand the true meaning of friendship.
5.No man is an island. As the saying goes, “A man without friends is an angel without wings.” I am sure I can fly higher and farther with the wings of friendship.
6.No matter what happens in the future, I will love her forever.
7.Let’s forget about the past and become good friends again.
佳/篇/创/作
英语课上,你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place ”为主题的讨论,同学们把自己的想法写在了卡片上。请结合卡片信息,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊English Learning投稿。
[注意]
1.词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文必须包括卡片所给的信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、 地名等内容。
正稿：



In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas.
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.
We
shared different ideas.

Some say it’s better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when we have problems, we should try to cheer each other up.Others believe it’s important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays.


I think, showing love for family is necessary. If we help them with the housework, they may feel warmer.Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.Though we’re young, we can do much to make a happier home.
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