话题写作07 课件(共33张PPT) 学习提升 【2022中考英语临考必备：满分作文五步法】

(共33张PPT)
英语满分作文五步法
中考专区
人教版2022中考英语三轮复习
英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（七）学习提升
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
七年级上册 Unit 9 My favorite subject is science.
八年级上册 Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
九年级全一册 Unit 1 How can we become good learners
典/例/分/析
假定你是刘芳,你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发的帖子,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教对方英语。请根据以下提示,用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
要点:
1.表达向她提供帮助的意愿;
2.说明你能胜任的理由;
3.给出学好普通话的建议;
4.提出想学习英语的要求。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
　 　　　　　　　
电子邮件
第一、第二人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
请求与提供帮助
要点:
1.　　　 　　　 　　
2.　　　　　　　　　
3.　　　　　　　　　
4.　　　　　　　　　
5.　　　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Sharon,
How is it going

Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,　
Liu Fang
审—审清题意
关注到需求
希望提供帮助
胜任的理由
满分作文五步法
Step1
学好普通话的建议
提出想学英语的要求
1.开篇点题:
Your post said that you__________
　　　　　　 　　Mandarin.
I’m quite interested in it. I think it.
连—连词成句
want to improve your
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
I’m fit for
2.主体内容:
(1)I have 　　 　　　　Mandarin
　　　　many years.
I can_______________________________
　 .
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
been learning
for
help you learn Mandarin well
(2)You should______________________
every day.
You can read more books
　　　 　, see some Chinese films 　　　 　　some Chinese songs.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
practice Mandarin
in Chinese
and listen to
(3)We can 　　 　 　　and
　　　　 　each other.
3.总结收尾:
Looking forward to your reply.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
chat online
learn from
满分作文五步法
Step4
组—组句成篇
Dear Sharon,
How is it going ①Your post said that you want to improve your Mandarin. I’m quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it.
修—修饰美化
Step5
①合并句子:
I’m quite
　　　　 　　your post
　　　　　　you want to improve your Mandarin.
interested in
that
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
②I have been learning Mandarin for many years, and Mandarin is a must in my daily life. So I can help you learn Mandarin well.
②加状语:
　　　　　　 China, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.
As born in
③变换句型:
You’d better_____________
　　　　　　　Mandarin every day.
修—修饰美化
spare some time to practice
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③You should practice Mandarin every day.Besides, you can read more books in Chinese, see Chinese films, listen to some Chinese songs and so on. You know, speaking and listening are very important for language learning.
Step4
组—组句成篇
In your post, you said you can teach English as a reward. It’s just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. If you agree, we can chat online to learn from each other.
④扩句:
I believe 　　　　　　can improve our oral speaking
　　　　　　　　　　　　.
修—修饰美好
both of us
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
④We can both learn well soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Fang
as soon as possible
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
Dear Sharon,
How is it going
I’m a girl from China. I’m quite interested in your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I think I’m fit for it.
As born in China, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin well. Learning Mandarin takes time. You’d better spare some time to practice Mandarin every day.
Besides, you can read more books in Chinese, see some Chinese films, listen to some Chinese songs and so on. You know, speaking and listening are very important for language learning.
In your post, you said you can teach English as a reward. It’s just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English.
If you agree, we can chat online for an hour every night, half in Chinese and the rest in English. I believe both of us can improve our oral speaking as soon as possible.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Fang
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.学习类
learn from each other, improve, communicate with sb., more practice, study in China, open and free, interesting and lively, use the computer, take notes, read English aloud, prepare for, be good at…
2.建议类
spend much time, practice makes perfect, read more books, see some Chinese films, listen to some Chinese songs, chat online, by listening to music/watching films, discuss in groups, work together, study tips, offer some great advice…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.Here are my learning ways that I want to share with you.
2.I’m quite confident that I can help you.
3.I’m quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it.
4.I am glad to receive your e-mail and I’d like to tell you something about how we study in class.
5.I’d like to share my study tips with you.
[发展句]
1.As born in China, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.
2.I’m Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.
3.As an old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”
4.So you are sure to make great progress.
5.First, you’d better communicate with your teachers regularly.
6.In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.
7.Listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review them later.
8.Our teachers give us enough time to study and think for ourselves.
9.…which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
[结尾句]
1.I’m looking forward to hearing from you all.
2.Hope for your early reply.
3.We can help each other to improve our speaking ability.
4.We’d better chat online for half an hour in English.
5.I believe both of us can improve our oral speaking as soon as possible.
6.I really hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.
7.I hope that you can share your school life with me.
8.If you have any suggestions, feel free to tell me. I do believe we’ll have a great time.
佳/篇/创/作
4月23日是世界读书日,你校正在开展以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动。请根据提示内容写一篇短文,介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
I Like Reading 1.The importance ofreading open one’s mind, get more knowledge…
2.My reading habit when to read, where to read, what to read…
3.My favorite book(s) …
4.My reading plan …
[注意]
1.词数 90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
正稿：



Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read. Reading can open our mind and help us get more knowledge.
As for me, I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading. That really makes


me feel relaxed. On weekends, I enjoy reading some novels. Journey to the West is my favorite book. And the Monkey King is my superhero. The summer holiday is coming. I am going to read Harry Potter.
Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.
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