话题写作08课件(共34张PPT) 观点态度 【2022中考英语临考必备：满分作文五步法】

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英语满分作文五步法
中考专区
人教版2022中考英语三轮复习
英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（八）观点态度
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
八年级上册 Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater
—Who’s Got Talent P29
八年级下册 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room
—Should young children do chores P22
八年级下册 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents
九年级全一册Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
典/例/分/析
上周,你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会,同学们各抒己见。你针对同学们的不同意见,做了以下记录。请根据表格内容,以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
议论文
第三人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
表达观点态度
利 弊
1.提供交流的平台 1.过度沉溺、影响学习
2.认识更多的朋友 2.交友不慎、上当受骗
3.学习更多的东西 3.长期使用、影响视力
…… ……
要点:
1.利：　　　 　　　 　
　　　　　　　　 　
　　　　　　　 　　
2.弊：　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
注意:
1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇:platform 平台, trick 欺骗, eyesight 视力
The Opinions of Using WeChat

审—审清题意
(1)提供交流平台
(2)认识更多朋友
(3)学习更多东西……
满分作文五步法
Step1
(1)影响学习
(2)上当受骗
(3)损害视力……
1.开篇点题:
　 middle school students use WeChat nowadays.
Different students
　 about it.
连—连词成句
More and more
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
have different opinions
2.主体内容:
Advantages:
Some students think WeChat is 　 .
It can provide a platform to
　　　 　　 　　　others.
It can help them___________________
___________________conveniently.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
a very useful tool
communicate with
get more knowledge
Disadvantages:
Some students think WeChat
　 .
They may 　　　　　　　by strange net friends.
It’s 　　　　 　　　by using it too long.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
affects their study
be tricked
bad for their eyes
3.总结收尾:
In my opinion, we should use WeChat 　 .
We shouldn’t add strangers or meet net friends
　 .
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
properly
without parents’ permission
满分作文五步法
Step4
组—组句成篇
The Opinions of Using WeChat
①More and more middle school students use
WeChat.
修—修饰美化
Step5
①改为被动句:WeChat
　　　　　　　　　among middle school students with the development of science and technology.
is widely used
Step4
组—组句成篇
Last week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Different students have different opinions about it.
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with others. Besides, they can make more friends and get more knowledge by WeChat. ②
②加总结句:
　　　　　　, WeChat has made our life more colorful.
In a word
③加条件状语从句:
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study________________
　　　　　　　　　on it.
修—修饰美化
if they spend too much time
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③However, some students think WeChat affects their study. And they may be tricked by strange net friends.
④加衔接词:
　　　　　　　　　　, it will also_________________________
if using WeChat for a long time.
修—修饰美化
Last but not least
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
④It will also be bad for their eyes ifusing WeChat for a long time.
In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly. In addition, we shouldn’t add strangers or meet net friends casually.
result in poor eyesight
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
The Opinions of Using WeChat
WeChat is widely used among middle school students with the development of science and technology.
Last week,we had a discussion about using WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. Besides, they can make more friends and get more knowledge by WeChat. In a word,WeChat has made our life more colorful. However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time on it. And
they may be easily tricked by strange net friends.Last but not least, it will also result in poor eyesight if using WeChat for a long time.
In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it for more than two hours a day, andmake sure that we don’t use it when we are studying. In addition, we shouldn’t add strangers or meet net friends casually.
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.表达观点:
be good for/at, different opinions, in my opinion, in a word, agree with, become better and better, change our lifestyle, make our life more convenient, be kind and helpful, in this way, I hope, help out, feel much better, feel bad, because of, think of, no need to care about, you’d better, be helpful to, share my views on…
2.提出建议:
study well, work hard, do some housework/share parents’ work, try our best, pay attention to, obey the rules, get on well with, be polite to, be always ready to, do different kinds of sports, keep healthy, have an online course, be confident, have courage to face, overcome your trouble, eat healthily/have a balanced diet, keep away from, get up early,
do some sports regularly, keep practicing, get well prepared for, make progress, ask…for help, listen carefully to, talk to, help each other, make friends, make you independent
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.WeChat is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of…/Nowadays, WeChat is very popular. It’s playing an important role in our life.
2.WeChat is widely used among middle school students with the development of science and technology.
3.Thanks for inviting me to help design an app for English writing. I’d like to share my ideas here.
4.I have received your letter and I can understand you.
5.I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game.
6.I’m happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves.
[发展句]
1.Some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time on it.
2.It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends.
3.It’s a good way to chat without meeting. It saves time. I like this sort of life.
4.Besides, doing some housework can make you healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise.
5.In my opinion, a good student should be hard-working and study well.
6.First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we will write.
7.It doesn’t matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them.
8.Firstly, there is no need to care what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident.
9.A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.
10.You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be.
[结尾句]
1.In conclusion, we should make proper use of WeChat.
2.In my opinion,we shouldn’t spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly.
3.In my opinion, to do some housework can make you independent.
4.In a word, mobile phones have made our life more colorful.
5.I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while. It will make me relaxed.
6.Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.
7.So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attention to our looks.
8.Keep learning, and you’ll know more about our language and culture.
9.I hope my advice is worth taking./I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
10.I’m sure you will pay more attention to your study and your score will be better and better.
佳/篇/创/作
　[2021·十堰]禾下乘凉是我国“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士的梦想。他孜孜不倦地探究和实践, 解决了人民的温饱问题。在物质充沛的今天, 我们更应该珍惜粮食, 节约资源, 杜绝浪费。作为中学生, 我们应该怎么做 近日, 你班就此话题展开了热烈的讨论。请根据下面的提示, 写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。
[参考词汇] resource 资源　be particular about food
挑食　tap 水龙头
[要点]
1.就餐时, 按需点餐, 不挑食, 光盘行动。
2.节水、节电。如:随手关灯, 关水龙头等。
3.节约纸张。如:双面用纸等。
4.……
[要求]
1.必须包含所给的全部要点及内容, 可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3.词数80—100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
正稿：



First of all, we should never order more food than we can eat. Eat up everything in your plate and don’t be particular about food. Besides, we are expected to save water and electricity. For example,
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on how to save resources in our daily life. Here are some of my views.


turn off the light or water tap after using it. What’s more, we are suggested to save every piece of paper and make full use of both sides of it. Last but not least, low-carbon life is also a good choice such as taking a bus or walking to school if possible.
In a word, everyone can do something to save resources and make a difference.
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