话题写作09 课件(共34张PPT) 情感情绪 【2022中考英语临考必备：满分作文五步法】

(共34张PPT)
英语满分作文五步法
中考专区
人教版2022中考英语三轮复习
英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（九）情感情绪
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
八年级上册 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
—How to deal with worries/problems P77
八年级下册 Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
九年级全一册Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
九年级全一册 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
典/例/分/析
临近中考,为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备一篇发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享。内容包括:
1.同学们普遍存在的压力是什么;
2.我的压力是什么;
3.我是如何成功缓解压力的。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
　　 　　　　
演讲稿
第一、三人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
分享缓解压力的办法
要点:
1.　　　 　　　 　　
2.　　　　　　　　　
3.　　　　　　　　　
4.　　　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Hello, boys and girls!

That’s all. Thank you!
审—审清题意
点明问题
具体表现
本人的压力
满分作文五步法
Step1
缓解办法
1.开篇点题:
Pressure is 　 in today’s world.
2.主体内容:
Students in our class are
　 .
连—连词成句
a serious problem
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
under too much pressure
Some students can’t
　 their classmates;
others may 　　　　　　their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me　　　　the top student in class. So they
　　　　　　　all kinds of after-school classes at weekends.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
get on well with
worry about
to be
send me to
Last Monday, I
　　　　　　　　　my mother and my mother understood me at last.
3.总结收尾:
I hope all of us have a better life and less pressure.
That’s all. Thank you.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
had a talk with
满分作文五步法
Step4
组—组句成篇
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem among students. ①Most of the students in our class are under too much pressure.
修—修饰美化
Step5
①加原因状语:…because the school courses are scheduled
　　　　　　　　and the competition is
　　　　　 　day by day.
one after another
getting hotter
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too. ②My parents want me to be the top student in class. They send me to all kinds of after school classes at weekends. I really feel tired.
②巧用介词短语:
　　　　　　　　　getting me to be the top student in class, my parents send me to all kinds of after-school classes.
In the hope of
Step4
组—组句成篇
Last Monday, I had a talk with my mother. I told her my feelings and that I needed time to relax. My mother understood me at last.
③改为从句:
So 　　　　a conversation with our parents is necessary 　　　　　　the problems.
修—修饰美化
I think
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③So we should talk to our parents to solve the problems. There are some other ways to deal with the problems such as talking with friends, listening to music, playing sports etc.
I hope all of us have a better life and less pressure.
That’s all. Thank you!
to solve
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
Hello, boys and girls!
　　Pressure is a serious problem among students. Most of the students in our class are under too much pressure, because the school courses are scheduled one after another and the competition is getting hotter day by day.
Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. In the hope of getting me to be the top student in class, my parents send me to all kinds of after-school classes.
Last Monday, I had a talk with my mother. I told her my feelings and that I needed time to relax. My mother understood me at last. So I think a conversation with our parents is necessary to solve the problems. There are some other ways to deal with the problems such as talking with friends, listening to music, playing sports etc.
All in all, I hope all of us have a better life and less pressure.
That’s all. Thank you!
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.情感情绪:
in blue, stay up late, can’t sleep well, be stressed out, lose heart, complain to, shout back, too much pressure, have problem with, argue with, face to face, have difficulties, be worried about, feel stressed, be strict with/in, have no time for…
2.方法建议:
read books, watch TV, play sports, go on holiday, go to visit, have a good rest and relax, go sightseeing, chat with sb., have a patient talk with sb., talk to each other, get on/along with, deal with, take part in, apologize to, with one’s help, share your sadness and happiness with sb., solve the problem…
3.鼓励:
be honest to, look forward to, I hope, have a better life and less pressure, work hard together, turn our dream into reality, I believe, put your heart into, be proud of…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.
2.Students in our class are under too much pressure.
3.My parents gave me a lot of pressure about school.
4.As we all know,the school course is scheduled one after another and competition is getting hotter day by day.
5.Looking back at the past three years, I’d like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
6.I want to say thanks to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out.
7.We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. Here are two main reasons.
8.To celebrate the 70th birthday of our school, our school held all kinds of colorful activities last weekend.
[发展句]
1.I can’t sleep well before the entrance exam.
2.I have to compete with my classmates at school.
3.However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.
4.One is the problems in their schoolwork,and the other is the problems in getting on with other people.
5.In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening.
6.With my mother’s help, I didn’t lose my best friend and learned how to deal with the problems with friends.
7.Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.
8.Why don’t you talk about this feeling with your family
9.You could do more jobs around the house so that they have more time for proper communication.
10.Doctors say too much pressure is not good for children’s development.
[结尾句]
1.I hope things will be better for you soon.
2.Although it’s normal to want successful children, it’s even more important to have happy children.
3.You won’t get good grades if you are stressed out all the time.
4.I hope that everyone can reduce the stress in their work and study and live a relaxed and happy life.
5.Making time for fun such as listening to music may be good medicine. Sometimes even crying is an efficient way to reduce stress.
6.All in all, we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy in the body and mind.
7.I hope you will be happy and healthy forever./I hope everything will go well with you soon./I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
8.She does all that she can do for me. No matter what happens in the future, I will love her forever.
9.I will never forget the smile on my mother’s face when we were having dinner together.
佳/篇/创/作
假定你是梁丽,你的美国朋友Tony因考试发挥失常,成绩不理想而情绪低落。请用英语给他写一封信表示安慰。要点如下:
1.表示难过和理解;
2.让他找出失败的原因并及时改正;
3.鼓励他重拾自信,实现梦想;
……
[注意]
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
正稿：



I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and that you are worried about your study. I quite understand how you feel now.
There is no doubt that we should keep a good state of mind. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. We should spare no effort to analyze the
Dear Tony,


cause of failure, which could help us find out the mistakes we made so we can try to make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas. Only in this way can we make progress in our study.
I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you’ll have felt much better. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.


Yours,　
Liang Li
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