话题写作10课件(共29张PPT) 环境保护 【2022中考英语临考必备：满分作文五步法】

(共29张PPT)
英语满分作文五步法
中考专区
人教版2022中考英语三轮复习
英语满分作文五步法
话题写作（十） 环境保护
教材话题链接
满分作文五步法
小小加油站
佳篇创作
教材话题链接
七年级下册 Unit 5 Why do you like pandas
—Protect the elephant P29
八年级下册 Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world —Try to help save pandas P54
九年级全一册 Unit 13 We’re trying to save the earth!
典/例/分/析
动物是我们的好朋友,但是越来越多的动物濒临灭绝,我们应该如何保护它们呢 请以“How to protect animals”为题写一篇英语短文,呼吁人们热爱动物,保护动物。内容包括:
1.停止杀戮;
2.保护动物的家园;
3.加强宣传。
审—审清题意
文体:　　　　　　
人称:　　　　　　
时态:　
功能:　　　　　　
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
满分作文五步法
Step1
呼吁保护动物
要点:
1.　　　 　　　 　　
2.　　　　　 　　　 　
3.保护措施
(1)　　　　　　　
(2)　　　　　　　
(3)　　　　　　　
适当发挥……
注意:
1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。


审—审清题意
动物是我们的朋友
越来越多的动物濒临灭绝
停止杀戮
满分作文五步法
Step1
保护动物的家园
加强宣传
1.开篇点题:
Animals are 　　　　　　　　　. But now more and more animals 　　　　　　　　　.
连—连词成句
our good friends
满分作文五步法
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
are in danger
2.主体内容:
We should learn to
　 .
We must 　　　　　　wild animals.
We shouldn’t 　　　　　　　so many trees.
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
live with animals in peace
stop killing
cut down
We can put up notices to make more people realize
___________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .
3.总结收尾:
I think if we love animals and we are kind to them, our world will 　　 　　 　　 .
连—连词成句
Step2
Step3
搭—列提纲，搭好框架
the importance of protecting animals in danger
be better and better
满分作文五步法
Step4
组—组句成篇
How to protect animals
①Animals are our good friends. But now more and more animals are in danger.
As friends of animals, what should we do to protect them First, I think we should learn to live with animals in peace.
①添加开头语:
　　　　　　　　　, animals are our good friends.
修—修饰美化
Step5
As we all know
修—修饰美化
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
So we must stop killing wild animals. Second, we shouldn’t cut down so many trees.②Instead, we should plant more trees. Third, the government should set up more nature parks for them.
②加不定式:Instead, we should plant more trees
___________________________
___________________________
　　　　　　　　　　　　.
to provide the animals with a better living environment
③加目的状语:And for most of us, we can do what we can 　　　　　　　　　　. For example, we can take some measures______________________
　　　　　　　　　　the importance of protecting animals in danger.
修—修饰美化
to help the animals
Step4
Step5
组—组句成篇
③And for most of us, we should help theanimals.
I think that if we love animals and we are kind to them, our world will be better and better.
to make more people realize
美文诵读（画出你认为优美的句子）
How to protect animals
As we all know, animals are our good friends. But now more and more animals are in danger.
As friends of animals, what should we do to protect them First, I think we should learn to live with animals in peace.
So we must stop killing wild animals. Second, we shouldn’t cut down so many trees. Instead, we should plant more trees to provide the animals with a better living environment. Third, the government should set up more nature parks for them. And for most of us, we can do what we can to help the
animals. For example, we can take some measures to make more people realize the importance of protecting animals in danger.
I think that if we love animals and we are kind to them, our world will be better and better.
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.现象类:
animals/plants in danger, air/water/light/soil pollution, no clean water to drink, plastic bags, throw the rubbish everywhere, make noise, get warmer, flood, takeaway food…
2.原因类:
cut down trees, build more factories, kill animals, pour dirty water, litter everywhere…
3.措施类:
take action/take measures/take steps, try our best, plant more trees, take a bus, ride a bike, take bags to go shopping, recycle, use new energy, turn off the lights, take shorter showers…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.As we all know, animals are our good friends. But now more and more animals are in danger.
2.It’s our duty to save the environment.
3.Environmental pollution is worse and worse/more and more serious today.
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
2.I will take part in many kinds of activities.
3.I am going to admire the moon and talk about Chinese folk stories.
4.My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
5.The earth is in trouble! We need to take steps to protect the environment.
[发展句]
1.To keep our school clean, we should ask others not to litter everywhere.
2.I hope I can do something to help reuse something we don’t need.
3.We can take some measures to make more people realize the importance of protecting animals in danger.
4.Remember to turn off the lights when you leave a room.
5.I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth, and taking shorter showers.
[结尾句]
1.Use things for as long as possible, which helps to save money and reduce pollution.
2.We can plant more trees and call for protecting animals’ habitats.
3.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
4.Let’s act now from everything to save the animals.
佳/篇/创/作
“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
1.节约用水用电;
2.绿色出行;
3.爱护环境,不乱扔垃圾等;
4.其他……
[注意]
1.词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
[参考词汇] environment; pollution; reduce; sort the rubbish(垃圾分类)
正稿：



But environmental pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures.


First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution.


Last but not least, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbin every day.
How important for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
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