中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
Section B 3a-selfcheck导学案
【学习目标】
1.通过复习词汇和句型,为写作做好基础知识储备。
2.通过阅读例文,梳理篇章结构,并尝试运用一些含有现在完成时的句子和一些简单句如 I like…. because …,等描述自己喜欢的歌手或作家。
3.通过写作范例展示,由简入难,使学生逐步掌握写作技巧(审题、内容大纲、重点句式、梳理成文)。
4.通过本单元系统学习,写作应用,进一步帮助学生从文学和音乐中学到人生道理,陶治情操。
【学习重难点】
1．熟练使用本单元的重点单词、短语和句型完成写作任务。
2．运用本单元所学知识写一篇介绍歌手或作家的短文。
【课前积累】
短语：
①be interested in
②overcome difficulties
③have fun doing
④never give up
⑤the book/recorded/song was written by
⑥work...as
⑦enjoy success(in)
⑧remind sb of…
二、句子：
1.我希望有一天能看到他现场演唱。
I hope to ____ _____ ____ _____one day.
2.莫言是中国历史上最成功的作家之ー。
Mo Yan is ____ ____ ___ _____________ _____ Chinese history.
3.我选择了金银岛,但是还没有读完。
I chose Treasure Island, but I _____ ________ _______ if ______.
4.自那时起,她已经成为一个美国多村音乐迷。
____ _____ ______she has been a fan of American country music.
5.他的音乐高亢且充满力量。
His music is loud and ______ ______ ________.
三、自行完成Self Check。
【合作探究】
本单元的话题是“文学与音乐”，和该话题有关的书面表达通常是我们较为熟悉的内容，比如介绍或谈论一个歌手或一个作家。写作时，我们要用一般现在时、现在完成时，可先介绍想写的人，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢他/她的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或感想等。文章要层次分明，感情真挚。
Task1:Finish 3a Read the questions about a singer or writer. Make a list about the singer or writer. Think of the following:
1. Who is the singer/writer
2. When did the singer/writer first become famous
3. How and why did he/she first become famous
4. What famous songs/books has he/she recorded/written When
5. How many CDs/books has he/she sold
6. How did you find out about him/her
7. Is he/she still popular today
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
9. How do you feel about his/her music/books
10. Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
Task2:Finish 3b Write an article about the singer or writer.
Use the information in 3a.
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题： 人称________________ 时态________________
第二步：列提纲
（一）开篇点题：引出你喜爱的作家-莫言
（二）展开表述：写出①其成就，②成功原因，③介绍一部他的作品和你对它的喜爱[
1.作者的成功：在2012年，获得诺贝尔文学奖，并因此被广为人知。
可用的短语Nobel Prize in Literature， be well-known
___________________________________________________________________________
2.原因：他的成功来自他的勤奋和多年的努力。
His success ______________his diligent and hard work for so many years.
3.作品介绍：我刚刚看完《红高粱》(Red Sorghum)这本书，这本书是关于我祖父和祖母的爱。这本书真的很好看，因此我难以放下。
（三）结尾综述：对其作品的评价感受，向他人推荐
1.他的著作如此__________以至于我很喜欢。这让我更热爱生活。
___________________________________________________________________________
2.我十分喜欢他的书，相信你也会喜欢。
___________________________________________________________________________
第三步：将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。
My Favorite Writer
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文:
My favorite singer is Jay Chou (Zhou Jielun).
It took him a few years to become famous. While Jay wrote songs for other pop singers, he also learned recording and sound mixing.
His first album was released in 2000, and since then, he has released about one album per year. His albums have enjoyed great success in many countries, and his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.
I like his music very much. It is pop music, but it has a mix of other kinds of music, such as R&B, rap, and rock. Many of his songs are about the world we live in. One of my favorite songs is “Dao Xiang”, which encourages people not to give up even when life is difficult.
I feel happy and full of energy when I listen to his songs. I have introduced my best friend to Jay’s songs, and he enjoys the songs, too!
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Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Warming-up
What do you know about Garth Brooks
Revision
A country music singer-Garth Brooks
One of the most successful musicians in American history.
Born: February 7, 1962
Country singer and songwriter
has sold more than120 million records
was inducted into the country Music Hall of Fame on October 21st 2012.
· My favorite singer is Garth Brooks from America.
He was born onFebruary7, 1962.
· He is a singer of country music as well as a song writer.
He is one of the most successful musicians in American history.
· He's sold more than 120 million records.
· Brooks was inducted into the Country Music Hall of Fame on October 21. 2012.
· And I like listening to his songs full of feelings.
· So I hope to see him sing live one day.
· Also I hope he can have a concert in China.
Can you introduce Garth Brooks to your friends
Lead-in
What's your favorite singer/musician/band
Why do you like him/her/them
Can you introduce your favorite singer/musician/band
When was he/she born Where is he/she from
When did he/she first become famous
How and why did he/she first become famous
What famous songs has he/ she recorded/written When
......
Think of a singer or writer you know well. Make a list of facts about him/her. Think of the following:
3a
1. Who is the singer/writer
2. When did the singer/writer first become famous
3. How and why did he/she first become famous
4. What famous songs/ books has he/ she recorded/written When
5. How many CDs/books has he/she sold
6. How did you find out about him/her
7. Is he/she still popular today
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
9. How do you feel about his/her music/books
10. Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
1、第一张专辑《Jay》于2000发行。自那以后，已经发行了13张专辑。
2、他专辑在很多国家都获得成功，各年龄段的人都很喜欢。
3、他已经卖出了大约20,000,000 张光碟
4、他已经录制很多知名度最高的歌曲，如《双节棍》、《菊花台》、《稻香》、《告白气球》是他最有名的歌曲。
5、他已经15次获得金曲奖，已被称为亚洲流行天王。
参考词汇：
album专辑
release发行
CD光碟
Golden Melody Awards
金曲奖
Asian pop king
亚洲流行天王
enjoyed great success in
be popular with
ever since then
the most famous songs
Achievements
My favorite singer--Jay Chou
1. Who is the singer/writer
Jay Chou.
2. When did the singer/writer first become famous
In 2000.
3. How and why did he/she first become famous
In 2000, he released his first album, titled Jay and his music has gained recognition throughout Asia.
4. What famous songs/ books has he/ she recorded/written When
Some of them are “Mojito(2020)” and “Dao Xiang(2008)”.
5. How many CDs/books has he/she sold
Tens of millions.
Example
6. How did you find out about him/her
I first heard his songs on the radio.
7. Is he/she still popular today
Yes, he is.
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
Yes, I have.
9. How do you feel about his/her music/books
I feel happy and full of energy.
10. Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
Yes, I have.
Language points
introduce v. 介绍；引见
Point
Have you introduced this singer/writer to others (教材P63 3a)
Please let me introduce myself.
Can you introduce him to us
They plan to introduce this kind of plant into China.
introduce
introduce oneself 作自我介绍
introduce A to B 把A介绍给B
introduce into 引进
【拓展延伸】introduce 的名词形式为 introduction，意为“介绍”。
Can you get me an introduction to your friend
完成句子。
(1) Please allow me _______ __________ _______(做自我介绍).
(2) Before the meeting began I ___________ _______ __________ ______________(做了必要的介绍).
(3) May I __________ _______ _______ _______ _______(把我的朋友介绍给你)
(4) _______ ____________ _______ ___________________(电话的引进) has made our life more convenient.
to introduce myself
made / did the
introduce my friend to you
The introduction of telephones / phones
necessary introductions
the first line in the song / book
the book / song was written/ recorded by
enjoyed success in
successful song/ CD/ book
I listen to this song/read this book when …
The song/book makes me feel …
Write an article about the singer or writer. Here are some words and phrases you can use.
3b
n. 行；排
本单元的话题是“文学与音乐”，和该话题有关的书面表达通常是我们较为熟悉的内容，比如介绍或谈论一个歌手或一个作家。写作时，我们要用一般现在时、现在完成时，可先介绍想写的人，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢他/她的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或感想等。文章要层次分明，感情真挚。
Writing Instructions
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时和现在完成时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
提纲 句子
最喜欢的歌手/作家 My favorite singer / writer is _________.
介绍成长经历 enjoyed success in _________;
successful song / book
说明喜欢的原因 I like _______ because _________.
They remind me of ___________.
__________ makes me feel _______.
短语：
become famous 成名
since then 从那时起
encourage sb. (not) to do sth. 鼓励某人（不要）做某事
give up 放弃
full of energy 充满能量
introduce sb. to sth. 向某人介绍某事
素材准备
句子：
My favorite … is … 我最喜欢的……是……
It took sb. some time to do sth. 做某事花了某人一些时间
While …, … 当……时，……
……, and since then, … ……，从那之后，……
His songs are popular with… 他的歌受到……的欢迎
One of … is … ……其中之一是……
素材准备
My favorite singer is Jay Chou (Zhou Jielun).
It took him a few years to become famous. While Jay wrote songs for other pop singers, he also learned recording and sound mixing.
His first album was released in 2000, and since then, he has released about one album per year. His albums have enjoyed great success in many countries, and his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.
Sample writing:
I like his music very much. It is pop music, but it has a mix of other kinds of music, such as R&B, rap, and rock. Many of his songs are about the world we live in. One of my favorite songs is “Dao Xiang”, which encourages people not to give up even when life is difficult.
I feel happy and full of energy when I listen to his songs. I have introduced my best friend to Jay’s songs, and he enjoys the songs, too!
实战演练
根据下列提示,以“ My favorite writer”为题,写一篇介绍伟大作家莫言的英语短文。要求:语言流畅,语意通顺,词数80左右。
提示：
1、莫言于1955年2月17日在山东出生。
2、作品包括( including):《红高梁家族》 Red Sorghum Family,《蛙》Frog等等。
3、2012年获诺贝尔文学奖( Nobel Prize for literature), 是第一位获此奖项( prize)的中国作家。中国人为他而自豪(be proud of）。
Mind-map:
My favorite writer
Character
some details
about the person
feeling or hoping
Born:
Literature works
(文学作品)
Achievement
Mo Yan …
a famous writer …
On February 17, 1955 …
Red Sorghum Family, Frog …
Won the Nobel Prize for Literature…
表达心情：happy\pleased, excited, peaceful…
句型表达：1. I read this book when…
2. This book…makes me feel …
I like Mo Yan very much. He is a famous writer. He is so successful that I really admire him.
He was born on February 17, 1955 in Shandong. When he was young, he loved writing very much. He has written some popular books, including Red Sorghum Family, Frog and so on. Mo Yan has won many prizes and he won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012. He is the first Chinese writer to win the prize. His novels
Sample writing:
are popular around the country and have enjoyed great success in many countries, They bring the Chinese culture to the world. All of the Chinese people are very proud of him.
I have read his book Frog already. There are many books I haven’t read yet. I can't wait to read them. His books brought me back to the past. They remind us of our hometown, family and friends. I hope I will be a writer like him one day.
作文讲评
第一步：让学生先在小组内分享各自的作文，小组成员相互纠错，润色，修改。
第二步：请部分同学朗读自己的作文。
第三步：组内选出一些优秀的作品张贴于墙报上。
1. Fill in the blanks with the correct words in the box.
down
of
about
back
up
1. What do you think _________ this dress Do you think it looks good on me
2. The little boy was so hungry that he didn’t put his spoon __________ at all. He just kept on eating.
3. She grew _________ in a small town, although she lives in a big city now.
4. For homework, our teacher told us to write __________ our summer vacation.
5. At the end of the day, the bus brought us _______to our school.
of
down
up
about
back
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
1. I ________ (join) the book club last month and I ________ (read) five books already.
2. I only _______ (start) taking French classes last week and I _______________ (learn) 50 French words already.
3. Tony _______ (buy) a pop music CD yesterday but he ____________________ (listen) to it yet.
4. They ___________ (listen) to many songs by The Beatles, but they cannot _______ (sing) any of them.
5. She ________ (see) the newspaper on the table this morning, but she _______________ (have) any time to read it yet.
joined
have read
started
have learned
bought
has not/hasn’t listened
have listened
sing
saw
has not/hasn’t had
3. Make a list of the things you have done and the ones you haven't done yet this week. Then ask two other students.
Make a conversation.
A: What have you done /What haven’t you done
B: I have …./I haven't ….
A: You've done e on. /Ah, you should burry up.
You (student’s name) (student’s name)
Things I have done
Things I haven’t done
You （Tom） student’s name (Mary) student’s name
(Peter)
Things I have done science homework
Things I haven’t done math homework
I have done my science homework but I haven’t done my homework .Mary has done her science homework , but she hasn’t done her math homework…
Chicken soup
To be a famous person is not easy. We have to work and study very hard.
Success is ninety nine percent of
perspiration and one percent of
wisdom .
______Ediso
If you work hard enough, you will succeed tomorrow.
So work hard now, your future will be better.
书面表达
请以“My favorite book”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。要点如下：
What’s your favorite book
What do you think of it
Why do you like it best
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Homework
范文：
Do you know Harry Potter？It's my favorite spare time reading and it's written by J.K.Rowling.
Harry Potter is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no parents, and now he is 16 years old. He is very brave and known by everyone because it is said that he is the only person that will not be killed by the evil.
When I read the book for the first time, I thought it was very exciting and interesting. So I read it again and again. Each time
I have different feelings. Books about Harry Potter have been sold millions of copies all over the world. Do you like Harry Potter？If you haven't read the book yet, read it now and you'll find a wonderful world.
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