(共19张PPT)
Module 5 Shopping
Unit 2 Writing
In the clothing shop
Mother’s Day is coming, Lingling wants to buy a T-shirt for her mother. Where can she buy it
On the Internet
Lead- in
Lingling is very busy. She doesn't have much time to go shopping. Then she talks with her friends about where to buy the T-shirt. Finally, Lingling decides to buy it on the Internet.
Do you like shopping online Why
Warmming-up
Review
Online shopping
Advantages
Disadvantages
1.__________________
2.__________________
3.__________________
4.__________________
5.__________________
be easy
shop at any time
save time
compare the prices
have more choices
can't see the products
can't try the clothes on
be not always safe
1.______________________
2.______________________
3.______________________
Task 1
After buying a T-shirt, Lingling also wants to make a cake for her mother on Mother's Day. Work in pairs, discuss where Lingling can buy the materials of making the cake.
Pre-writing
Task 2
Do you like supermarket shopping Why
Discussion
Supermarket shopping
Advantages
Disadvantages
1.__________________
2.__________________
3.__________________
4.__________________
shop with family or friends
see the products
try the clothes on
be always safe
take a lot time
be not always open
be more expensive
1._________________
2._________________
3._________________
Brainstorming
Task 3
Supermarket Shopping
While-writing
假如你是玲玲,你下周英语课上将开展关于“实体购物的利与弊”的班级讨论。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1.简单介绍实体购物。
2.实体购物的利与弊(各写两点)。
3.你喜欢或不喜欢实体店购物的原因。
Tip 1: Thinking about the person & tense(人称&时态)before writing is important .
Tip 2: Writing an outline (提纲) before writing is helpful.
Tip 3: Consider (考虑) some good words and sentences when you write an outline.
Tip 4: Try to use some linking words (连接词) to make your outline more fluent (流畅).
Tips for writing
Steps for writing
Task 4
定基调 人称:____________; 时态____________
Step 1:
You & I
一般现在时
Step 2:列提纲
Para. 1 Introduction
Para. 2 Advantages
Para. 3 Disadvantages
1.__________________
2.__________________
3.__________________
4.__________________
shop with family or friends
see the products
try the clothes on
be always safe
take a lot time
be not always open
be more expensive
1._________________
2._________________
3._________________
Para.4 the writer's opinion
总分总
But/However
结构:_______(IADO)____
连接词
—————
____________
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On one hand
On the other hand
————————
In my opinion
Step 4: 巧衔接
1.______________________________
2.—————————————————
3. ______________________________
Supermarket shopping has …
Every coin has two sides.
I like … because …
Step 3: 添佳句
______;__________;______________;_____________________
but
however
on one hand
on the other hand
in my opinion
because
____________;_________
Task 5
Step 5: 成篇章
Try to write a passage according to the outline.
学生根据作文提纲写作文。
Task 6
1.Check the passages with their partner. (他评)
2. One student choose a passage and check it before the class. (学生评讲习作)
他评评分标准:(15分)
(1)人称、时态是否用对;
(2) 是否使用总分总结构;
(3) 要点是否齐全;
(4)是否使用连接词。
Post-writing
3. Share the sample together.
范例分享
Post-writing
There are many new ways of shopping, and supermarket shopping is one of them. It's not difficult. First, you choose the things on your shopping list. Then pay for them. At last you take them home.
Supermarket shopping has several advantages. First, you can see the product and try the clothes on. Second, paying at a supermarket is always safe.But shopping at a supermarket also has several disadvantages. For example, it may take a lot of time, and the shops aren't always open at any time. So many people don't like going out and shopping at the supermarket.
In my opinion, shopping at a supermarket is fun. Because I can go shopping with my friends or family, and then I can have a really good time with them together.
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beginning
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key sentences
linking words
the person
the present
simple tense
Post-writing
Summary
Q1: What things have you learnt
Tell me at least one.
(本节课你学到了什么? 至少说出一点。)
Q2: What things are you interested in Tell me at least one.
(本节课你对什么感兴趣?至少说出一点。)
Q3: What questions do you still have Ask me one.
(本节课你还有什么问题?至少说出一点。
Must do:
1、复习作文提纲,根据作文提纲和例文优化作文。
2、背诵例文。
Can do:
完成课后研学读写综合习题。
Thank you!