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牛津上海版（深圳用）小学英语六年级上册期末复习专练：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．以“My Last Weekend”为题写—篇至少60词的短文。要求: 时态正确, 书写规范, 表达准确。
My Last Weekend
【答案】My Last Weekend
I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning，I went to the park with my grandparents. We went fishing there. In the afternoon，I played ping-pong with my friends. It was fun ! on Sunday morning. I read books and did my homework at home. In the afternoon，I went shopping with my mother. In the evening. I played chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的标题，My Last Weekend我的上周末.短文用一般过去式，详细地描述了上个周末我在周六周日两天所做的事情，使用了许多 went to the park、went fishing、played ping-pong等表示活动的固定搭配，并且熟练运用动词过去式，情节饱满，逻辑通顺，最后点明主题，与第一句话相呼应，是一篇佳作。
【点评】考查写作题，注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意段落之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅.
2．假如你是Bill, 请根据下面提供的信息写一篇介绍自己的短文。要求：条理清晰, 语句连贯, 标点正确, 书写清晰、规范。40-50个单词。(8分)
【答案】I'm Bill. I'm l3 years old. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I have many hobbies, I like drawing very much. I like running and playing basketball, too. I want to be a doctor in the future.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，自我介绍，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，描述现在的自己，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系.
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色，例如：like drawing very much非常好喜欢画画，like running and playing basketball喜欢跑步和打篮球.
3．印度女孩Linda要来厦门旅游，请你写一写她一周的计划安排
Linda's Plans
Days Activities
Monday visit
Xiamen University
Tuesday go
to Xiaodeng Village
Wednesday play
on the beach
Thursday go
shopping on Zhongshan Road
Friday visit
Gulangyu Islet
Saturday eat
snacks and seafood
Sunday ride
a bicycle around the city
Linda will visit Xiamen University on
Monday. She will……
【答案】 Linda will visit Xiamen University on Monday. She will go to Xiaodeng Village on Tuesday. She will play on the beach on Wednesday. She will go shopping on Zhongshan Road on Thursday. She will visit Gulangyu Islet on Friday. She will eat snacks and seafood on Saturday. She will ride a bicycle around the city on Sunday.
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据表格提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第三人称单数，一般将来时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从周一到周日具体将要干的事情，用一般将来时will+动词原形结构表达：
下周一将去参观厦门大学。visit Xiamen University。周二去小灯村go to Xiaodeng Village，周三在海滩玩play on the beach ，周四去购物 go shopping，周五去参观鼓浪屿 visit Gulangyu Islet，周六吃零食和海鲜，周日环城骑自行车 ride a bicycle around the city。
【点评】本题考查写作，根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，语法正确，句子结构合理。
4．以My neighbours为题写—篇英语小短文，介绍一下你的邻居，60个单词左右。注意书写规范。
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是命题作文，要求 以My neighbours为题写—篇英语小短文，介绍一下你的邻居，需要一般现在时，首先用第一人称介绍我有一个邻居。然后用第三人称单数介绍她的名字，年龄，外貌特征，她所在学校，她的爱好及会干的事情等，最后表达对这个邻居的赞美评价。
【点评】考查命题作文。首先要根据提示，确定所需要写的内容和细节，其次分好主次，确定要写的内容的详略度，注意时态及主谓一致性。
5．以“My Family”为题写一篇至少60词的短文。要求: 书写规范、表达准确。
My Family
【答案】This is my family. There are four people in my family. I'm a student. My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat. He works in a factory. My mother works in a school .She has long black hair. She likes sports and travelling, so I often play sports with her. On the weekend my family often go to the park. We are very happy.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】题目要求以我的家人为题, 短文用一般现在时，依次介绍了自己家人的职业, 外貌, 和爱好或活动等, 逻辑清晰，描写清楚，语句通顺，是一篇不错的文章。
【点评】这是写作的题目, 测试知识的综合利用, 注意时态和句型的正确运用.
6．树是人类的朋友，我们试着写一篇作文吧！
Trees are our friends
【答案】Trees are our friends. Trees are important to our life.Trees help us in many ways.We getfruit from trees．Trees cankeep the air clean and make our city more beautiful. We get wood from trees．We use wood to make many things．We use wood to makedesks.We use wood to makepencils and paper.Trees are useful in many ways,and they are very important to us.They are our friends.Let's plant more trees!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文。主要介绍一下树对我们生活的重要性和树木的用途，因此我们要多种树。
1.介绍一下树对我们生活的重要性。
1.介绍树木在我们生活中起的作用。
3.树是我们的朋友 。我们要多种树。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
7．假设你是Tom,上周六是你的生日，请以"My Birthday"为题，写一篇英语小短文来描述一下你的生日吧。
要求：1）短文开头已给出，请先将句子补全
2）你可以按照信息介绍家庭成员，也可以添加其他成员
3）短文字数要求50词左右
4）要求表达准确，语句通顺，行文连贯。
参考词汇 have breakfast ride a bike/horse... At 9 o'clock/10 a.m./... fly kites go fishing/swimming ... In the afternoon read a book go to the park/cinema... In the evening...
take pictures play football/badminton...
My Birthday
Hello, everyone! I'm Tom. Last weekend was my birthday. I was so happy.
In the morning, I got up early.Then I
What a happy day!
【答案】My Birthday
Hello, everyone! I'm Tom. Last weekend was my birthday. I was so happy.
In the morning, I got up early.Then I had breakfast and I went to the park with my family. We flew kites and took pictures. In the afternoon I went swimming and played football with my brother.In the evening,we ate cakes and watched TV.What a happy day!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般过去时时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）先介绍生日的时间。Last weekend。
（2）这一天干的事情。 flew kites，took pictures，went swimming, played football---。
（3）表达心情。a happy day!。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
8．请试着用英语描述一下地球是个怎样的地方，现在环境如何，我们该如何保护地球。(要求： 语句通顺，条理清楚，字迹工整，不少于5句话)
The Earth
【答案】The Earth
The Earth is a beautiful place. There are plants, animals and people. In the past the Earth was clean, but now some parts are dirty. People throw rubbish into rivers and oceans. People cut down too many trees. Smoke from cars and factories makes the air dirty.
We should keep the Earth clean and healthy. We shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere. We should plant more trees every year. We should also recycle glass and paper.
【知识点】命题作文；其他作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲与命题作文，要求是：用英语描述一下地球是个怎样的地方，现在环境如何，我们该如何保护地球。以The Eartht为题进行写作 。范文首先点出地球是个美丽的地方，地球上有植物，动物和人类。其次点明地球过去干净（一般过去时），现在一些地方很脏了。然后点出地球脏的原因，人们所做的事情。最后表达我们应该怎么保持地球干净美丽及不应该和应该做的事情。全文首尾呼应，详略得当，语言流畅，是一篇不错的短文。
【点评】本题考查写作，首先读题，确定要写的中心和内容，其次根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意点明中心，描写必须有详略之分，不要重复使用同样的句子或短语进行表达。
9．以“My summer holiday”为题，介绍自己的暑假都去哪儿了，怎么去的，和谁一起去的，都做了些什么，心情如何。要求语句通顺，书写规范，不少于50个单词。
【答案】My summer holiday
I went to Beijing with my parents on my summer holiday. We went there by train. We went to the Great Wall , the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. We went to the zoo to see animals.We took a lot of pictures.We bought many clothes，too. We were very happy.
【解析】【分析】中文翻译；暑假我和父母亲去了北京。我们坐火车去的。我们去了长城、故宫和天安门广场。我们去了动物园看动物。我们照了许多照片。我们也买了许多衣服。我们非常开心。
【点评】本题考查的是学生综合运用英语的能力，通过课内学习，能够运用所学单词和句子来简单描述自己的学校。需要学生有一定的语言积累。
10．你一定有很多有趣的照片吧？请选取一张来描述一下和它有关的经历，和同学们分享一下吧。(至少五句话)
【答案】范文：
This is a photo of me. I was in Qinhuangdao. I swam in the sea. It was sunny. The sky was blue. I watched many ships on the sea. I liked to swim. I had fun.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般现在时和一般过去时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）介绍“我”的一张照片。a photo of me
（2）再写出描述与照片有关的经历。 in Qinhuangdao，swam in the sea， sunny， watched many ships
（3）表达心情。had fun
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
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牛津上海版（深圳用）小学英语六年级上册期末复习专练：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．以“My Last Weekend”为题写—篇至少60词的短文。要求: 时态正确, 书写规范, 表达准确。
My Last Weekend
2．假如你是Bill, 请根据下面提供的信息写一篇介绍自己的短文。要求：条理清晰, 语句连贯, 标点正确, 书写清晰、规范。40-50个单词。(8分)
3．印度女孩Linda要来厦门旅游，请你写一写她一周的计划安排
Linda's Plans
Days Activities
Monday visit
Xiamen University
Tuesday go
to Xiaodeng Village
Wednesday play
on the beach
Thursday go
shopping on Zhongshan Road
Friday visit
Gulangyu Islet
Saturday eat
snacks and seafood
Sunday ride
a bicycle around the city
Linda will visit Xiamen University on
Monday. She will……
4．以My neighbours为题写—篇英语小短文，介绍一下你的邻居，60个单词左右。注意书写规范。
5．以“My Family”为题写一篇至少60词的短文。要求: 书写规范、表达准确。
My Family
6．树是人类的朋友，我们试着写一篇作文吧！
Trees are our friends
7．假设你是Tom,上周六是你的生日，请以"My Birthday"为题，写一篇英语小短文来描述一下你的生日吧。
要求：1）短文开头已给出，请先将句子补全
2）你可以按照信息介绍家庭成员，也可以添加其他成员
3）短文字数要求50词左右
4）要求表达准确，语句通顺，行文连贯。
参考词汇 have breakfast ride a bike/horse... At 9 o'clock/10 a.m./... fly kites go fishing/swimming ... In the afternoon read a book go to the park/cinema... In the evening...
take pictures play football/badminton...
My Birthday
Hello, everyone! I'm Tom. Last weekend was my birthday. I was so happy.
In the morning, I got up early.Then I
What a happy day!
8．请试着用英语描述一下地球是个怎样的地方，现在环境如何，我们该如何保护地球。(要求： 语句通顺，条理清楚，字迹工整，不少于5句话)
The Earth
9．以“My summer holiday”为题，介绍自己的暑假都去哪儿了，怎么去的，和谁一起去的，都做了些什么，心情如何。要求语句通顺，书写规范，不少于50个单词。
10．你一定有很多有趣的照片吧？请选取一张来描述一下和它有关的经历，和同学们分享一下吧。(至少五句话)
答案解析部分
1．【答案】My Last Weekend
I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning，I went to the park with my grandparents. We went fishing there. In the afternoon，I played ping-pong with my friends. It was fun ! on Sunday morning. I read books and did my homework at home. In the afternoon，I went shopping with my mother. In the evening. I played chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的标题，My Last Weekend我的上周末.短文用一般过去式，详细地描述了上个周末我在周六周日两天所做的事情，使用了许多 went to the park、went fishing、played ping-pong等表示活动的固定搭配，并且熟练运用动词过去式，情节饱满，逻辑通顺，最后点明主题，与第一句话相呼应，是一篇佳作。
【点评】考查写作题，注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意段落之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅.
2．【答案】I'm Bill. I'm l3 years old. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I have many hobbies, I like drawing very much. I like running and playing basketball, too. I want to be a doctor in the future.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】根据所给的内容，自我介绍，根据材料，应该主要用一般现在时，结合所给的材料可知，描述现在的自己，写作中尽量用简短的句子，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系.
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色，例如：like drawing very much非常好喜欢画画，like running and playing basketball喜欢跑步和打篮球.
3．【答案】 Linda will visit Xiamen University on Monday. She will go to Xiaodeng Village on Tuesday. She will play on the beach on Wednesday. She will go shopping on Zhongshan Road on Thursday. She will visit Gulangyu Islet on Friday. She will eat snacks and seafood on Saturday. She will ride a bicycle around the city on Sunday.
【知识点】应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据表格提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第三人称单数，一般将来时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从周一到周日具体将要干的事情，用一般将来时will+动词原形结构表达：
下周一将去参观厦门大学。visit Xiamen University。周二去小灯村go to Xiaodeng Village，周三在海滩玩play on the beach ，周四去购物 go shopping，周五去参观鼓浪屿 visit Gulangyu Islet，周六吃零食和海鲜，周日环城骑自行车 ride a bicycle around the city。
【点评】本题考查写作，根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，语法正确，句子结构合理。
4．【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是命题作文，要求 以My neighbours为题写—篇英语小短文，介绍一下你的邻居，需要一般现在时，首先用第一人称介绍我有一个邻居。然后用第三人称单数介绍她的名字，年龄，外貌特征，她所在学校，她的爱好及会干的事情等，最后表达对这个邻居的赞美评价。
【点评】考查命题作文。首先要根据提示，确定所需要写的内容和细节，其次分好主次，确定要写的内容的详略度，注意时态及主谓一致性。
5．【答案】This is my family. There are four people in my family. I'm a student. My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat. He works in a factory. My mother works in a school .She has long black hair. She likes sports and travelling, so I often play sports with her. On the weekend my family often go to the park. We are very happy.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】题目要求以我的家人为题, 短文用一般现在时，依次介绍了自己家人的职业, 外貌, 和爱好或活动等, 逻辑清晰，描写清楚，语句通顺，是一篇不错的文章。
【点评】这是写作的题目, 测试知识的综合利用, 注意时态和句型的正确运用.
6．【答案】Trees are our friends. Trees are important to our life.Trees help us in many ways.We getfruit from trees．Trees cankeep the air clean and make our city more beautiful. We get wood from trees．We use wood to make many things．We use wood to makedesks.We use wood to makepencils and paper.Trees are useful in many ways,and they are very important to us.They are our friends.Let's plant more trees!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文。主要介绍一下树对我们生活的重要性和树木的用途，因此我们要多种树。
1.介绍一下树对我们生活的重要性。
1.介绍树木在我们生活中起的作用。
3.树是我们的朋友 。我们要多种树。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
7．【答案】My Birthday
Hello, everyone! I'm Tom. Last weekend was my birthday. I was so happy.
In the morning, I got up early.Then I had breakfast and I went to the park with my family. We flew kites and took pictures. In the afternoon I went swimming and played football with my brother.In the evening,we ate cakes and watched TV.What a happy day!
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般过去时时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）先介绍生日的时间。Last weekend。
（2）这一天干的事情。 flew kites，took pictures，went swimming, played football---。
（3）表达心情。a happy day!。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
8．【答案】The Earth
The Earth is a beautiful place. There are plants, animals and people. In the past the Earth was clean, but now some parts are dirty. People throw rubbish into rivers and oceans. People cut down too many trees. Smoke from cars and factories makes the air dirty.
We should keep the Earth clean and healthy. We shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere. We should plant more trees every year. We should also recycle glass and paper.
【知识点】命题作文；其他作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲与命题作文，要求是：用英语描述一下地球是个怎样的地方，现在环境如何，我们该如何保护地球。以The Eartht为题进行写作 。范文首先点出地球是个美丽的地方，地球上有植物，动物和人类。其次点明地球过去干净（一般过去时），现在一些地方很脏了。然后点出地球脏的原因，人们所做的事情。最后表达我们应该怎么保持地球干净美丽及不应该和应该做的事情。全文首尾呼应，详略得当，语言流畅，是一篇不错的短文。
【点评】本题考查写作，首先读题，确定要写的中心和内容，其次根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意点明中心，描写必须有详略之分，不要重复使用同样的句子或短语进行表达。
9．【答案】My summer holiday
I went to Beijing with my parents on my summer holiday. We went there by train. We went to the Great Wall , the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. We went to the zoo to see animals.We took a lot of pictures.We bought many clothes，too. We were very happy.
【解析】【分析】中文翻译；暑假我和父母亲去了北京。我们坐火车去的。我们去了长城、故宫和天安门广场。我们去了动物园看动物。我们照了许多照片。我们也买了许多衣服。我们非常开心。
【点评】本题考查的是学生综合运用英语的能力，通过课内学习，能够运用所学单词和句子来简单描述自己的学校。需要学生有一定的语言积累。
10．【答案】范文：
This is a photo of me. I was in Qinhuangdao. I swam in the sea. It was sunny. The sky was blue. I watched many ships on the sea. I liked to swim. I had fun.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般现在时和一般过去时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）介绍“我”的一张照片。a photo of me
（2）再写出描述与照片有关的经历。 in Qinhuangdao，swam in the sea， sunny， watched many ships
（3）表达心情。had fun
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。
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