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（浙江）外研版初中英语九年级下册期中复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．（2019九下·金华期中）中考临近，Clara 的妈妈对他的学习抓得更紧了，周末也不让他出去玩。Clara
很压抑， 于是和他的朋友 Jordon 倾诉，希望能得到帮助。假如你是 Jordon，请根据信的内容，给 Clara
一些建议。下面短语仅供参考：
1）talk to
your mother
2）ask your father for
help
3）tell your mom that you
will spare no effort to study hard
Dear
Jordon,
I'm afraid of my mom. She is very strict with me. I worry about every exam because I know my mom will scold（责骂） me if I don't get good grades. What's
worse, she doesn't allow me
to go out
to play at the weekend. What should I do
Dear
Clara,
Your
friend,
Jordon
2．健康越来越受到人们的关注。假如你是学校的健康达人，受校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全体成员做一个主题为“How to keep healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。
要求：1）报告应包含所给提示，并适当发挥；
2）
3）文中不得提及自己真实的姓名和校名。
提示: sleep, diet, exercise...
Dear
friends,
It's a great honor to speak here. My topic
is "How to keep healthy".
Thanks for listening!
3．假如你是Li Min9，你和同学们在学校最近举行的“感恩母校”的讨论会上，各自畅谈了自己将来学业有成后打算为母校做一件有意义的事。请根据下表的内容提示，以“Do Something for Our School”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。
主要内容：
Students Plan Reasons
Zhang Hai 返校当一名英语教师 感恩老师，全力支持母校的教育
Liu Nana 捐款建造一座现代化的图书馆 让学生们爱上阅读，有一个更好的学习环境
Yang Di 成立一个物美价廉的学习用品公司 为母校的学生减轻经济负担
参考词汇：graduate(毕业)，support(支持)，education(教育)，donate(捐赠)，company(公司)，stationer(文具)
提示：1）文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名；
2）文中应包括以上主要信息，“我”的计划请发挥想象，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）作文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
Do Something for Our School
My classmates and I will
graduate soon. We are talking about what to do for our school in the future.
Here are different ideas.
4．在我们周围经常存在安全隐患，所以安全问题应该引起我们足够的重视。请以“The Safety Around Us”为题，写一篇英语短文，说说我们身边的安全问题。内容包括：
At home be careful with, turn off, power supply( 电源),gas holder(煤气罐) …
On the road obey(遵守) the traffic
rules, not ride side by side, not listen to music…
At school not push the others on the stairs, if...accident, call 120, do
some basic medical training…
要求：1）文中包括以上信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范；
2）文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等；
3）词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
The Safety Around Us
Safety is very important for us students.
5．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题 的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1、内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥; 2、表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范; 3、词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call ...for, go bad
6．写作
目前我们的生存环境越来越糟，我国许多城市出现雾霾天气，PM2.5污染是空气污染的主要问题。假设你是校学生会主席，为了解决城市空气污染问题，请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校师生发出倡议。
提示：1. 尽量乘公交车和骑自行车，少开车，使用清燃料
2. 不随地乱扔垃圾
3. 关闭和搬迁一些工厂
4. 多种树木和草坪让空气清新、、、、、、
要求：1.内容包括以上所有提示Dear teachersand students
2. 80-100词
7．写作
每年的6月6日是“全国爱眼日”.为此，某英文报社正在组织一次征文活动。请根据以下提示，并结合生活实际，写一篇题为“How toProtect Our Eyes”的英文短文，向该报社投稿。
提示：1. 眼睛的重要性
2. 保护眼睛的措施：
1）不要长时看书报
2 ) 不要在太强或太弱的光下看书
3）坚持做眼保健操
要求：1. 不要逐句翻译以上提示，可以适当发挥
2. 90词左右
How to protect our eyes
8．写作
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well ” 为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文
内容要点：
1. 诚实守信，礼貌待人、热心助人
2. 维护公共卫生、不乱扔垃圾、不在公共场所喧哗
3. 请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法
要求：1. 不要逐词翻译
2. 词数80左右
Behavingwell is the secret of getting on well with others
9．（2020·奉化模拟）成长过程中，压力无处不在(父母的期待，同伴的竞争，频繁的考试，重大的比赛，全新的挑战……)。对你而言，眼传爭華曾让你很有压力？你是如何应对这个压力的？就此话题，请你结合 自身经历，用英语写一篇发言稿，分享你应对压力的经验和感悟。
要点提示：⒈What made you stressed
⒉How did you deal with the stress
⒊What have you learned from the
experience
注意：(1)词数：80-100；开头己给出，不计入总词数；
（1）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
In my life there was one
thing that made me very stressed.
10．（2020·嘉兴）在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A
Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:
What
you often do at home What
you have learned
◆ water flowers ◆
cook meals ◆ wash the dishes ◆ look after pets ◆take out the rubbish ◆…… ◆life skills ◆ responsibility（责任） ◆……
注意:1）表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
3）词数：80~100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I have always
been a good helper at home.
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Clara,
A "tiger mom" puts too much
pressure on her children to succeed in school. However, this kind of pressure actually
has a negative effect（负面影响） on
your life. Sadly, this situation is common (常见的） in China.
Your mom loves you. But your grades have
become an unrealistic（不现实的） standard
for her own success as a parent. If you do well, she feels she has succeeded.
If you do poorly, she thinks she has failed. But it's not true! Your mom needs
to accept you for who you are. So how can you improve your relationship First,
think carefully about what you want and how you feel. Then talk to your mom
when she is in a good mood .Don't just complain（抱怨）, but try to find a solution.
Show her that you can be good at other things too. Your success doesn't just
depend on excellent exam scores. Tell your mom you will try your best in every
exam, but she should be willing to accept any result. Be honest. Tell her that
scolding doesn't help you get good grades. It only makes you feel nervous and
perform more poorly. Also, talk to your dad. Get him to be on your side. He can
influence your mom to be less strict. What's more, why not have a discussion
with your mother about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on
weekends Of course, you should manage your time effectively. From my point of
view, the most important thing is to make a list of things you must do. At school,
you should spare no effort to study hard.
If do so, it goes without saying that you
can make progress and your mom will be pleased with you.
Your
friend,
Jordon
【考点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】首先认真审题，了解要写的内容，Clare中考临近，学习紧张，他妈妈周末也不让他出去玩，他很压抑，希望得到朋友Jordon的帮助，因此要以Jordon的身份给Clare写一封回信，给Clare提出一些建议，要语句通顺，行文连贯，包括提示要点，层次分明，利用初中所学句式和短语，恰当得表达自己的建议。
【点评】这篇作文语句通顺，行文连贯，完成了题目要求，层次分明，利用很多句式和短语，例如： First, think carefully about what you want and how you feel. Then talk to your mom when she is in a good mood . 使文章增色不少，但是如果篇幅稍微短点儿，会更好。
2．【答案】Dear friends,
It's a great honor to speak here. My topic
is "How to keep healthy".
I'm so glad you care about health like me.
Good health may bring us a long happy life, good work and even better grades.
Keeping healthy is really important.
As for the secrets of keeping healthy, I
think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy
lifestyle is the most important thing. First, it's helpful to have enough sleep
and balanced diet. Breakfast is the top meal of the day, so we can't miss it. At
the same time, to do some exercise is also important. You should find a
physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it. I have kept playing ping-pong
for seven years and I really enjoy doing that. Also, everyone should develop a
sense of humor and always be a happy person.
I hope you look after your health from now
on and live a happy and healthy life forever!
Thanks
for listening!
【考点】命题作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】考查命题作文。首先认真审题，了解要写的主题是How to keep healthy，根据常识和题目要求围绕主题组织语言，确保语句通顺，行文连贯，符合逻辑，利用所学句式和短语以及所给提示词。
【点评】考查书面表达，这篇作文语句通顺，要点齐全，字数适当。整篇文章段落分明，流畅自然，It's 形容词 +to do sth.，动名词和动词不定式做主语等的使用，以及其他好词好句，如 As for ， In my opinion ， It's a great honor to speak here. 等的运用，使文章增色不少。
3．【答案】Do Something for Our School
My classmates and I will graduate soon. We are
talking about what to do for our school in the future. Here are different
ideas.
Zhang Hal is going to return to our school as
an English teacher~ He will try his best to do something meaningful to support
our school's education. Liu Nana plans to donate money to build a modern
library with many kinds of hooks. Students will have a better learning
environment and enjoy reading there. Yang Di has a wonderful dream, too. He'd
like to set up a company which will produce better stationaries at lower prices
so that each student can afford them. As for me, I'd like.
All
the dreams are great. We hope they can come true one day.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己的计划；然后介绍原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：try one's best to do；plan to do；enjoy doing；would like to do；等。will+动词原形、be going to do、定语从句、宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如；Zhang Hal is going to return to our school as an English teacher~ He will try his best to do something meaningful to support our school's education. He'd like to set up a company which will produce better stationaries at lower prices so that each student can afford them.We hope they can come true one day. 等。连词so that的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．【答案】The safety around us
Safety is very important for us students.
Accidents often happen around us. So we must pay much attention to safety. At
home, we should be careful with fire and electricity. Remember to turn off the
power supply and gas holders before leaving home. We must obey the traffic
rules on the road and don't ride side by side or ride too fast. Don't listen to
music while riding or walking. Besides, don't push the others on the stairs when
we are at school. Stay calm mad call 120 as soon as possible if any accident
happens. And we'd better do some medical training.
If we
can do all these well, we'll enjoy our life better.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求以 The Safety Around Us 为题写一篇英文短文。本题给出了具体材料，写作内容已经确定，要包括三方面：在家，在马路上，在学校。在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，所以写作时用一般现在时。写作时应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语和句子会给文章增色，如 Accidents often happen around us. So we must pay much attention to safety. 句中使用了so来表示两个句子的因果关系，使逻辑更加清晰。pay moreattention to，运用的恰到好处，使表达更加精彩。
5．【答案】How to keep safe As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how can we ke ep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first!
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为关于“安全”的演讲，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.作为青少年，我们应该把安全记心中。keep safety in mind； Here are some of my suggestions
2.交朋友的时候要小心，尤其在网上。be careful when we make friends, especially on line
3.如果我们有危险，我们及时报警求助。 in danger；call the police for help
4.我们应该健康安全地吃东西。吃变坏的食物对我们健康有害。 eat healthily and safely； food that goes bad；do harm to our health
5.夏天来了，我们必须牢记在河里游泳很危险。 it's dangerous to swim in the river
6.总之，安全第一。 safety must come first!
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
6．【答案】例文:Dear teachers and students: So far, many cities in China have seen a lot of foggy days. Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health. To make the air in the city fresher, we should keep the following suggestions in mind. First, we should take a bus or ride a bicycle instead of driving a car and try to use clean fuels. Second, we should not throw litter here and there and put it into the dustbin. Third, some factories should be closed or moved out of the city. Finally, we need to plant more trees and grass to make the air fresh. Let's take action and try our best to make the air in the city better and better. Thank you. The Students' Union
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为低碳出行，保护空气环境，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.目前我们的生存环境越来越糟，我国许多城市出现雾霾天气. foggy；take in；do harm to；
2.为了让城市空气更清新，我们记住以下建议。To make the air in the city fresher, we should……； keep ……in mind。
3.尽量乘公交车和骑自行车，少开车，使用清燃料。 take a bus； ride a bicycle； instead of driving a car； use clean fuels
4.不随地乱扔垃圾 throw litter here and there ； put it into the dustbin
5.关闭和搬迁一些工厂 be closed or moved out of the city
6.多种树木和草坪让空气清新 to plant more trees and grass to make the air fresh
7. 让我们采取行动，努力使城市的空气越来越好。 take action； make the air in the city better and better
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7．【答案】例文:How to protect our eyes The eyes arethe windows of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left but darkness. Then how to protect our eyes It's not right to keep our eyes working for a long time. We'd better not read in the too strong or too poor light. Don't read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep our books away from our eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What's more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form good habits, and it's time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为“如何保护眼睛”，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.眼睛是心灵的窗户，我们用眼看周围的一切，没有眼睛，留给我们的只有黑暗。the windows of our mind ；nothing is left but darkness
2.如何保护眼睛呢？how to protect our eyes
3.不要长时看书报 for a long time
4.不要在太强或太弱的光下看书 had better not do sth; in the too strong or too poor light
5.坚持做眼保健操. do eye exercises every day
6.听从这些建议，你就能告别眼镜。follow one's advice; say goodbye to
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
8．【答案】例文: As a student, we should behave well. First I think it's veryimportant to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready t help people in need. Then we'd better not talk loudly in public. Don't throw litter or spitabout. And remember to obey traffic rulers. Finally, learn work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍与人交往时如何举止更加文雅。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should always......；we shouldn't ......；we’d better......及Try to be ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意列出题目要求的要点。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
9．【答案】（1） In my life, there was one thing that made me very stressful. Last month, I was told to make an English speech in front of the class. As a shy girl, I was so worried about it that I couldn't fall asleep during the night.
To deal with my pressure, I watched English talk shows online carefully and spent hours practicing English loudly in front of the mirror. That day came at last. I felt my heart in my mouth, but I kept telling myself I could be the best. When I finished my speech, I saw the smile on my teacher's face.
Since then, I've realized the best way to deal with stress is to think positively and act bravely.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求写一篇发言稿，说明自己是如何应对压力的，根据所给材料，可知时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称，写作时注意单词的拼写及上下文的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章内容充实、表达准确、无语法错误，适当地使用了连词、固定搭配等，使语意通顺、内容连贯，如：there was；was told to；in front of；so worried about it that I couldn't fall asleep ；To deal with；spent hours practicing English；at last；felt my heart in my mouth；kept telling；Since then；the best way to等。
10．【答案】暂未更新
【考点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，要求以"A Helper at Home"为题，根据所给材料，介绍自己经常做的家务和做家务的收获。根据所给材料，可知时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主，人称为第一人称。写作时注意保持语句的通顺和内容的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章写作时要适当地使用副词、连词、从句、固定搭配等，使文章层次分明，有逻辑顺序。可能用到的用法如：help sb with sth；do sb a favor；learn to do；develop the habit of；once a week；be responsible；feel+adj；grow up；without doing；stick to doing等。
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（浙江）外研版初中英语九年级下册期中复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．（2019九下·金华期中）中考临近，Clara 的妈妈对他的学习抓得更紧了，周末也不让他出去玩。Clara
很压抑， 于是和他的朋友 Jordon 倾诉，希望能得到帮助。假如你是 Jordon，请根据信的内容，给 Clara
一些建议。下面短语仅供参考：
1）talk to
your mother
2）ask your father for
help
3）tell your mom that you
will spare no effort to study hard
Dear
Jordon,
I'm afraid of my mom. She is very strict with me. I worry about every exam because I know my mom will scold（责骂） me if I don't get good grades. What's
worse, she doesn't allow me
to go out
to play at the weekend. What should I do
Dear
Clara,
Your
friend,
Jordon
【答案】Dear Clara,
A "tiger mom" puts too much
pressure on her children to succeed in school. However, this kind of pressure actually
has a negative effect（负面影响） on
your life. Sadly, this situation is common (常见的） in China.
Your mom loves you. But your grades have
become an unrealistic（不现实的） standard
for her own success as a parent. If you do well, she feels she has succeeded.
If you do poorly, she thinks she has failed. But it's not true! Your mom needs
to accept you for who you are. So how can you improve your relationship First,
think carefully about what you want and how you feel. Then talk to your mom
when she is in a good mood .Don't just complain（抱怨）, but try to find a solution.
Show her that you can be good at other things too. Your success doesn't just
depend on excellent exam scores. Tell your mom you will try your best in every
exam, but she should be willing to accept any result. Be honest. Tell her that
scolding doesn't help you get good grades. It only makes you feel nervous and
perform more poorly. Also, talk to your dad. Get him to be on your side. He can
influence your mom to be less strict. What's more, why not have a discussion
with your mother about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on
weekends Of course, you should manage your time effectively. From my point of
view, the most important thing is to make a list of things you must do. At school,
you should spare no effort to study hard.
If do so, it goes without saying that you
can make progress and your mom will be pleased with you.
Your
friend,
Jordon
【考点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】首先认真审题，了解要写的内容，Clare中考临近，学习紧张，他妈妈周末也不让他出去玩，他很压抑，希望得到朋友Jordon的帮助，因此要以Jordon的身份给Clare写一封回信，给Clare提出一些建议，要语句通顺，行文连贯，包括提示要点，层次分明，利用初中所学句式和短语，恰当得表达自己的建议。
【点评】这篇作文语句通顺，行文连贯，完成了题目要求，层次分明，利用很多句式和短语，例如： First, think carefully about what you want and how you feel. Then talk to your mom when she is in a good mood . 使文章增色不少，但是如果篇幅稍微短点儿，会更好。
2．健康越来越受到人们的关注。假如你是学校的健康达人，受校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全体成员做一个主题为“How to keep healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。
要求：1）报告应包含所给提示，并适当发挥；
2）
3）文中不得提及自己真实的姓名和校名。
提示: sleep, diet, exercise...
Dear
friends,
It's a great honor to speak here. My topic
is "How to keep healthy".
Thanks for listening!
【答案】Dear friends,
It's a great honor to speak here. My topic
is "How to keep healthy".
I'm so glad you care about health like me.
Good health may bring us a long happy life, good work and even better grades.
Keeping healthy is really important.
As for the secrets of keeping healthy, I
think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy
lifestyle is the most important thing. First, it's helpful to have enough sleep
and balanced diet. Breakfast is the top meal of the day, so we can't miss it. At
the same time, to do some exercise is also important. You should find a
physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it. I have kept playing ping-pong
for seven years and I really enjoy doing that. Also, everyone should develop a
sense of humor and always be a happy person.
I hope you look after your health from now
on and live a happy and healthy life forever!
Thanks
for listening!
【考点】命题作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】考查命题作文。首先认真审题，了解要写的主题是How to keep healthy，根据常识和题目要求围绕主题组织语言，确保语句通顺，行文连贯，符合逻辑，利用所学句式和短语以及所给提示词。
【点评】考查书面表达，这篇作文语句通顺，要点齐全，字数适当。整篇文章段落分明，流畅自然，It's 形容词 +to do sth.，动名词和动词不定式做主语等的使用，以及其他好词好句，如 As for ， In my opinion ， It's a great honor to speak here. 等的运用，使文章增色不少。
3．假如你是Li Min9，你和同学们在学校最近举行的“感恩母校”的讨论会上，各自畅谈了自己将来学业有成后打算为母校做一件有意义的事。请根据下表的内容提示，以“Do Something for Our School”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。
主要内容：
Students Plan Reasons
Zhang Hai 返校当一名英语教师 感恩老师，全力支持母校的教育
Liu Nana 捐款建造一座现代化的图书馆 让学生们爱上阅读，有一个更好的学习环境
Yang Di 成立一个物美价廉的学习用品公司 为母校的学生减轻经济负担
参考词汇：graduate(毕业)，support(支持)，education(教育)，donate(捐赠)，company(公司)，stationer(文具)
提示：1）文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名；
2）文中应包括以上主要信息，“我”的计划请发挥想象，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）作文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
Do Something for Our School
My classmates and I will
graduate soon. We are talking about what to do for our school in the future.
Here are different ideas.
【答案】Do Something for Our School
My classmates and I will graduate soon. We are
talking about what to do for our school in the future. Here are different
ideas.
Zhang Hal is going to return to our school as
an English teacher~ He will try his best to do something meaningful to support
our school's education. Liu Nana plans to donate money to build a modern
library with many kinds of hooks. Students will have a better learning
environment and enjoy reading there. Yang Di has a wonderful dream, too. He'd
like to set up a company which will produce better stationaries at lower prices
so that each student can afford them. As for me, I'd like.
All
the dreams are great. We hope they can come true one day.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己的计划；然后介绍原因。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：try one's best to do；plan to do；enjoy doing；would like to do；等。will+动词原形、be going to do、定语从句、宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如；Zhang Hal is going to return to our school as an English teacher~ He will try his best to do something meaningful to support our school's education. He'd like to set up a company which will produce better stationaries at lower prices so that each student can afford them.We hope they can come true one day. 等。连词so that的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．在我们周围经常存在安全隐患，所以安全问题应该引起我们足够的重视。请以“The Safety Around Us”为题，写一篇英语短文，说说我们身边的安全问题。内容包括：
At home be careful with, turn off, power supply( 电源),gas holder(煤气罐) …
On the road obey(遵守) the traffic
rules, not ride side by side, not listen to music…
At school not push the others on the stairs, if...accident, call 120, do
some basic medical training…
要求：1）文中包括以上信息，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范；
2）文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等；
3）词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
The Safety Around Us
Safety is very important for us students.
【答案】The safety around us
Safety is very important for us students.
Accidents often happen around us. So we must pay much attention to safety. At
home, we should be careful with fire and electricity. Remember to turn off the
power supply and gas holders before leaving home. We must obey the traffic
rules on the road and don't ride side by side or ride too fast. Don't listen to
music while riding or walking. Besides, don't push the others on the stairs when
we are at school. Stay calm mad call 120 as soon as possible if any accident
happens. And we'd better do some medical training.
If we
can do all these well, we'll enjoy our life better.
【考点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求以 The Safety Around Us 为题写一篇英文短文。本题给出了具体材料，写作内容已经确定，要包括三方面：在家，在马路上，在学校。在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，所以写作时用一般现在时。写作时应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语和句子会给文章增色，如 Accidents often happen around us. So we must pay much attention to safety. 句中使用了so来表示两个句子的因果关系，使逻辑更加清晰。pay moreattention to，运用的恰到好处，使表达更加精彩。
5．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题 的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1、内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥; 2、表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范; 3、词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call ...for, go bad
【答案】How to keep safe As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how can we ke ep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first!
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为关于“安全”的演讲，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.作为青少年，我们应该把安全记心中。keep safety in mind； Here are some of my suggestions
2.交朋友的时候要小心，尤其在网上。be careful when we make friends, especially on line
3.如果我们有危险，我们及时报警求助。 in danger；call the police for help
4.我们应该健康安全地吃东西。吃变坏的食物对我们健康有害。 eat healthily and safely； food that goes bad；do harm to our health
5.夏天来了，我们必须牢记在河里游泳很危险。 it's dangerous to swim in the river
6.总之，安全第一。 safety must come first!
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
6．写作
目前我们的生存环境越来越糟，我国许多城市出现雾霾天气，PM2.5污染是空气污染的主要问题。假设你是校学生会主席，为了解决城市空气污染问题，请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校师生发出倡议。
提示：1. 尽量乘公交车和骑自行车，少开车，使用清燃料
2. 不随地乱扔垃圾
3. 关闭和搬迁一些工厂
4. 多种树木和草坪让空气清新、、、、、、
要求：1.内容包括以上所有提示Dear teachersand students
2. 80-100词
【答案】例文:Dear teachers and students: So far, many cities in China have seen a lot of foggy days. Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health. To make the air in the city fresher, we should keep the following suggestions in mind. First, we should take a bus or ride a bicycle instead of driving a car and try to use clean fuels. Second, we should not throw litter here and there and put it into the dustbin. Third, some factories should be closed or moved out of the city. Finally, we need to plant more trees and grass to make the air fresh. Let's take action and try our best to make the air in the city better and better. Thank you. The Students' Union
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为低碳出行，保护空气环境，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.目前我们的生存环境越来越糟，我国许多城市出现雾霾天气. foggy；take in；do harm to；
2.为了让城市空气更清新，我们记住以下建议。To make the air in the city fresher, we should……； keep ……in mind。
3.尽量乘公交车和骑自行车，少开车，使用清燃料。 take a bus； ride a bicycle； instead of driving a car； use clean fuels
4.不随地乱扔垃圾 throw litter here and there ； put it into the dustbin
5.关闭和搬迁一些工厂 be closed or moved out of the city
6.多种树木和草坪让空气清新 to plant more trees and grass to make the air fresh
7. 让我们采取行动，努力使城市的空气越来越好。 take action； make the air in the city better and better
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
7．写作
每年的6月6日是“全国爱眼日”.为此，某英文报社正在组织一次征文活动。请根据以下提示，并结合生活实际，写一篇题为“How toProtect Our Eyes”的英文短文，向该报社投稿。
提示：1. 眼睛的重要性
2. 保护眼睛的措施：
1）不要长时看书报
2 ) 不要在太强或太弱的光下看书
3）坚持做眼保健操
要求：1. 不要逐句翻译以上提示，可以适当发挥
2. 90词左右
How to protect our eyes
【答案】例文:How to protect our eyes The eyes arethe windows of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left but darkness. Then how to protect our eyes It's not right to keep our eyes working for a long time. We'd better not read in the too strong or too poor light. Don't read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep our books away from our eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What's more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form good habits, and it's time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为“如何保护眼睛”，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.眼睛是心灵的窗户，我们用眼看周围的一切，没有眼睛，留给我们的只有黑暗。the windows of our mind ；nothing is left but darkness
2.如何保护眼睛呢？how to protect our eyes
3.不要长时看书报 for a long time
4.不要在太强或太弱的光下看书 had better not do sth; in the too strong or too poor light
5.坚持做眼保健操. do eye exercises every day
6.听从这些建议，你就能告别眼镜。follow one's advice; say goodbye to
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
8．写作
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well ” 为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文
内容要点：
1. 诚实守信，礼貌待人、热心助人
2. 维护公共卫生、不乱扔垃圾、不在公共场所喧哗
3. 请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法
要求：1. 不要逐词翻译
2. 词数80左右
Behavingwell is the secret of getting on well with others
【答案】例文: As a student, we should behave well. First I think it's veryimportant to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready t help people in need. Then we'd better not talk loudly in public. Don't throw litter or spitabout. And remember to obey traffic rulers. Finally, learn work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍与人交往时如何举止更加文雅。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should always......；we shouldn't ......；we’d better......及Try to be ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意列出题目要求的要点。
【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
9．（2020·奉化模拟）成长过程中，压力无处不在(父母的期待，同伴的竞争，频繁的考试，重大的比赛，全新的挑战……)。对你而言，眼传爭華曾让你很有压力？你是如何应对这个压力的？就此话题，请你结合 自身经历，用英语写一篇发言稿，分享你应对压力的经验和感悟。
要点提示：⒈What made you stressed
⒉How did you deal with the stress
⒊What have you learned from the
experience
注意：(1)词数：80-100；开头己给出，不计入总词数；
（1）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
In my life there was one
thing that made me very stressed.
【答案】（1） In my life, there was one thing that made me very stressful. Last month, I was told to make an English speech in front of the class. As a shy girl, I was so worried about it that I couldn't fall asleep during the night.
To deal with my pressure, I watched English talk shows online carefully and spent hours practicing English loudly in front of the mirror. That day came at last. I felt my heart in my mouth, but I kept telling myself I could be the best. When I finished my speech, I saw the smile on my teacher's face.
Since then, I've realized the best way to deal with stress is to think positively and act bravely.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求写一篇发言稿，说明自己是如何应对压力的，根据所给材料，可知时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称，写作时注意单词的拼写及上下文的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章内容充实、表达准确、无语法错误，适当地使用了连词、固定搭配等，使语意通顺、内容连贯，如：there was；was told to；in front of；so worried about it that I couldn't fall asleep ；To deal with；spent hours practicing English；at last；felt my heart in my mouth；kept telling；Since then；the best way to等。
10．（2020·嘉兴）在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A
Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:
What
you often do at home What
you have learned
◆ water flowers ◆
cook meals ◆ wash the dishes ◆ look after pets ◆take out the rubbish ◆…… ◆life skills ◆ responsibility（责任） ◆……
注意:1）表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
3）词数：80~100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I have always
been a good helper at home.
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【考点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，要求以"A Helper at Home"为题，根据所给材料，介绍自己经常做的家务和做家务的收获。根据所给材料，可知时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主，人称为第一人称。写作时注意保持语句的通顺和内容的连贯。
【点评】这篇文章写作时要适当地使用副词、连词、从句、固定搭配等，使文章层次分明，有逻辑顺序。可能用到的用法如：help sb with sth；do sb a favor；learn to do；develop the habit of；once a week；be responsible；feel+adj；grow up；without doing；stick to doing等。
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