冀教版九年级上册Unit 2 Great People writing课件(共24张PPT)

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Unit 2 Great People
Writing
介绍著名的人物
针对该话题, 考试中常考的角度是介绍伟人的生平、取得的成就等，文体以记叙文最为常见, 时态多使用一般过去时, 人称多为第三人称。
单元话题
Albert Einstein was one of the greatest minds of the last century.
During his lifetime, Einstein thought about the universe and solved many problems in physics. Einstein is most famous for his Theory of Relativity.
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In 1905, Einstein began to write articles and became a pioneer in the field of modern physics.
He received the Nobel Prize in 1921.
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The important thing is not to stop questioning.
Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new.
I think and think for months and years. Ninety -nine times, the conclusion is false. The hundredth time I am right.
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A scientist in China had a dream when he was a child.
Yuan grew up and became the “Father of Hybrid Rice”．
Since then, he has spent much of his time researching and developing new varieties.
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In 1973, together with other scientists, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice. The introduction of this new product made China a leader in rice production. For this, he became known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
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In his spare time, Dr. Yuan loves playing the violin and listening to music. Every night, he reads for half an hour before he goes to sleep. He likes swimming, too.
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Helen Keller was a model for people around the world.
She is not only a writer but also an educator.
She is famous for her courage and hard work.
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As Helen grew older, she made a lot of progress and learned to read.
She did her best to help others in the community who were deaf or blind. She tried to live her life without any regret.
She will be greatly missed.
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Norman Bethune was a famous doctor and a nice man.
Norman Bethune is well known for helping the Chinese people in the Anti- Japanese War.
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In China, Norman Bethune is a hero. People remember how hard he worked day after day in the worst possible conditions to help others. He once operated for sixty-nine hours straight without stopping.
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（2018 咸宁） “中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士, 是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午, 全校师生观看完该视频后, 都眼含热泪。
为了学习英雄的先进事迹, 请你根据提示内容, 以 “Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes”为题, 写一篇人物介绍。
链接中考
写作要点：1. 他出生于富裕家庭, 但为了祖国强盛, 放弃成为一名医生的机会, 学习建造核潜艇; 2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下, 他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造; 3. 为了保护国家安全, 他曾隐姓埋名工作, 30 年不为人所知, 现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止; 4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。
Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes
Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.
We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.
审 题
topic
style
person
content
tense
Huang Xuhua — the Father of China's Nukes
第三人称
记叙文
一般过去时
1. 他出生于富裕家庭, 但为了祖国强盛, 放弃成为一名医生的机会, 学习建造核潜艇;
2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下, 他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造;
....
写 作
不要遗漏要点
适当发挥, 适当使用连词
上下文联系紧密, 符合逻辑关系
句式多样, 书写整齐、规范漂亮
检 查
要点是否全面？
大小写、人称、时态是否准确？
有没有拼写、语法错误？
连词是否使用恰当？
Huang Xuhua — the Father of China's Nukes
Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the Father of China's nukes.He is one of the greatest scientists in China.
He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor and did his best to learn how to make the nukes. People remember how hard he worked day after day in the worst possible conditions to study the knowledge of making the nukes.
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To protect the national security, he used to conceal his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown to others. Now he still goes on working hard although he is over 90 years old. His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.
We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.
2020年9月1日, 《开学第一课》上, 钟南山院士以对自己名字的解读入手，亲切地向同学讲述了他生于战乱年代，立志于青年时期，奋发医学事业，抗击SARS、新冠疫情的故事。请以“Heroes in Harm's Way”(最美逆行者)为题, 介绍钟南山院士。
实 战 演 练
写作要点：
1. 1936年10月生，福建厦门人, 从小就有一个梦想--成为医生；1960年毕业于北京医学院，并留校任教;
2. 2003年67岁的钟南山奋斗在抗击非典的前线
3. 2020年1月18日晚，84岁高龄的他，乘高铁去武汉，为抗击新冠肺炎作斗争；
4. 2020年获“共和国勋章”
5. 他的行为向我们诠释了医生的责任和对国家和人们的热爱。
写作要求：
1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息, 必要时可作适当发挥;
3. 词数 80 个以上。
参考词汇：
共和国勋章The Medal of the Republic; 非典SARS; 新冠肺炎 COVID-19
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