第5课时 Writing写作
课堂精讲
写作分析
本单元的主要话题是谈论健康。写这类文章时,主要从以下几个方面入手:
1.明确保持健康的重要性;
2.保持健康的常用方法,如做运动、饭前洗手、保证充足的睡眠、不吸烟、不喝酒等。
3.保持健康的常用句型:We should …/We need …/ We shouldn't …/ We mustn't …
本单元常考的作文话题有:关爱健康,如何保持健康,健康的重要性,给患病朋友/同学写慰问信等。
佳作分享
健康对我们来说非常重要,我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。
1 food a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, meat …
2 exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games ...
3 happiness keep happy, make friends, smile …
标准范文 Good Ways to Keep HealthyToday, I'm talking about how to keep healthy. Do you know the ways to keep us healthy First of all, it is necessary for us to have a balanced diet. We'd better eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating more meat. We shouldn't eat junk food, because it is bad for our health. Secondly, we should do some exercise every day, such as taking a walk and playing ball games. Last but not least, it is important for us to be happy every day. We can make more friends who are friendly and learn to smile at everyone.In my opinion, reducing pressure is also a good way to keep healthy. We can listen to music to relax ourselves. In a word, keeping healthy is very important in our daily lives. 参考译文保持健康的好方法今天,我谈论的是如何保持健康。你知道使我们保持健康的方法吗 首先,对我们来说,有一个均衡的饮食很有必要。我们最好多吃蔬菜和水果,而不是多吃肉。我们不应该吃垃圾食品,因为它对我们的健康有害。第二,我们应每天做些运动,如散步和做球类运动。最后但同样重要的是,对我们来说,每天开心很重要。我们可以交更多友好的朋友,并学会对每个人微笑。 依我看,减压也是保持健康的好方法。我们可以听音乐来放松自己。总之,在日常生活中保持健康是非常重要的。
词句分享
闪亮词汇学与练
1. instead of代替;而不是
学 They go there on foot instead of by bus.他们走路去那儿,而不是乘公共汽车。
练 我们不应该嘲笑他,而是应当向他学习。
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2.be bad for对……有害
学 They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.他们认为带手机对学生们不好。
练 吃太多快餐对健康有害。
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3. relax oneself放松自己
学 Don't worry about exams; try to relax yourself.不要担心考试,尽量放松自己。
练 我知道我应该放松自己,保持快乐。
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高分句型学与练
1. Do you know the ways to keep us healthy 你知道使我们保持健康的方法吗
学 “to keep us healthy”为不定式作定语,修饰名词ways。
练 我有一个上大学的愿望。
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2. We can make more friends who are friendly and learn to smile at everyone.我们可以交更多友好的朋友,并学会对每个人微笑。
学 “who are friendly”为定语从句,修饰先行词friends。
练 我们昨天看到的那个女孩是约翰的姐姐。
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