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Period 9 提纲作文
一、题型解读
提纲作文要求考生根据题目所给出的提纲进行写作。初中英语考试中的书面表达多数以这种形式出现。
提纲作文本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等, 一般考生不会出现审题障碍。
常见的作文提纲有两种: 一种是中文提纲, 另一种是英文提纲。
提纲作文不是将写作要点简单地逐条翻译, 而是根据情景的发展, 组织安排好写作材料, 然后用通顺的语言表达出这些内容要点。
二、万能模板
万能模板1
As is known to all of us, _________ should _________. (观点)But do you know how
引出话题
First of all, we should ________(做法一)Besides, it is also important for us to ________ (做法二) What’s more, we should _________. (做法三) 围绕话题具体阐述
In my opinion, we should _________. (做法) Only in these ways can we _________.
总结观点
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板2
_________ is very important to us. But some people ________. (具体问题) 点明问题
As far as I am concerned, several reasons result in that situation. First of all, _________. (原因一) Besides, _________. (原因二) As a result, _________. (问题带来的结果) 分析问题及其结果
Therefore, we should _________. (具体做法) 提出解决方法和期望
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板3
In my opinion, _________ (具体事物) is better. 点明主题
There are two reasons why _________. For one thing, _________. (优点一) For another, _________. (优点二) 分析原因
I hope that I will _________. 表达期望
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板4
My best/favorite _________ is _________. (人物) He/She is _________, and he/she _________. (性格)He/ She is always _________. (性格)Besides, he/she always _________. (爱好)In addition, he/she likes _________. (爱好) 引出人物 具体介绍人物
_________ (人物)sets a good example for me. I should learn from him/her. 表达感想
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
三、必备词汇与套用句型
1. 必备亮点词汇
disadvantage n. 不利, 劣势 advantage n. 优势, 益处
strong point 优点 weakness n. 弱点, 缺点
favorable adj. 有利的 beneficial adj. 有利的, 有益的
properly adv. 适当地, 恰当地 in my eyes 在我看来
as for me 对于我来说 from my point of view 从我的观点来看
I maintain that 我认为 it seems to me that 我认为
as far as I am concerned 在我看来 from where I stand 站在我的立场上
2. 经典套用句型
·闪亮篇首句
In my opinion, I....... 我认为, 我……
Nowadays, there’s a wide-spread concern about/that......如今, ……引起了广泛的关注。
……play(s) an important role/place among……especially……
……在……尤其是……中占有很重要的地位。
……has become a fashion in our daily life……已成为我们日常生活的一种时尚。
It’s often said that...... 我们常说……
It goes without saying that......不言而喻, ……
As we all know/As is known to all......众所周知, ……
……is a hot topic in society. Enough on it has been said about……
......是当今社会的一个热门话题。有关它的……已经谈得很多了。
About this, views differ among different people. 关于这点不同的人有着不同的看法。
As we all know, everybody can’t live without smartphones.
众所周知, 任何人没有智能手机都是不能生活的。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious problem about……
现如今, 存在着日益严重的关于……的问题。
·出彩篇中句
Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。
First, we should know......首先, 我们要知道……
First of all, we have to admit that……has brought us……首先, 我们不得不承认……给我们带来……It can be easily proved that......很容易证明......
The reason why……is that......之所以……的原因是......
I think it is important to be polite to others. 我认为对他人有礼貌是重要的。
There are two reasons why……为什么……, 有两个原因。
For one thing, it only takes me two hours to fly to City A, which will make me less tired during the journey. 一个原因是, 乘飞机去A城只需要两个小时, 旅途中我不会太累。
There are several reasons as follows. 有如下几条原因。
·精彩篇尾句
Weighing up the pros and cons, I think……is convenient.
权衡利弊, 我认为……很方便。图
Therefore, students should......所以学生们应该……
……sets a good example for me……为我树立了良好的榜样。
On account of this, we can find that...... 据此, 我们可以发现......
As far as I am concerned, ……在我看来, ......
四、模板范文演练
现在, 很多中学生被近视困扰, 请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括: 1. 造成近视的原因; 2. 近视对学习或生活的影响;
3. 你认为应该如何保护视力 (至少两条建议)
要求: 1. 字数: 80~100字。开头已给出, 不计入总字数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
参考词汇: eyesight n. 视力 nearsighted adj. 近视的
have good eyesight 视力好 have bad eyesight 视力差
nearsighted → several reasons→ get addicted to the digital products→ do harm to students eyesight → academic pressure→ get tired and dizzy→ do eye exercise→ spend less time
Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now _______________________________
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万能模板套用分析(本文可采用倒三角形结构。)
首次, 引出话题。 →主题
其次, 分析原因及影响。 →原因
最后, 提出建议。 →建议
满分范文
Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now.
As far as I am concerned, several reasons result in(短语优先原则。) that situation. First of all(一二三原则, 使用了过渡词。), with the development of technology, most students get addicted to the digital products such as mobile phones and computers. These products do harm to students’ eyesight. Besides, academic pressure forces students to study harder regardless of eye protection. As a result, students are easy to get tired and dizzy when they are reading.
Therefore, students should do eye exercise as well as spend less time staring at the screen of digital products.
你也可以这样表达 First of all, as technology develops, most students get addicted to the digital products such as mobile phones and computers, which can do harm to students’ eyesight.
Besides, students have to study harder regardless of eye protection due to academic pressure.
满分译文
现在相当多的学生已经成了近视眼。
我认为, 有几个原因导致了那种情况。首先, 随着技术的发展, 很多学生沉迷于数码产 品, 如手机和电脑。这些产品会损害学生的视力。此外, 学业压力迫使学生更努力学习而忽 视了视力保护。因此, 学生读书时容易疲劳和头晕。
所以学生们应该做眼保健操, 同时还要少花一点时间盯着数码产品的屏幕。
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Period 9 提纲作文
一、题型解读
提纲作文要求考生根据题目所给出的提纲进行写作。初中英语考试中的书面表达多数以这种形式出现。
提纲作文本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等, 一般考生不会出现审题障碍。
常见的作文提纲有两种: 一种是中文提纲, 另一种是英文提纲。
提纲作文不是将写作要点简单地逐条翻译, 而是根据情景的发展, 组织安排好写作材料, 然后用通顺的语言表达出这些内容要点。
二、万能模板
万能模板1
As is known to all of us, _________ should _________. (观点)But do you know how
引出话题
First of all, we should ________(做法一)Besides, it is also important for us to ________ (做法二) What’s more, we should _________. (做法三) 围绕话题具体阐述
In my opinion, we should _________. (做法) Only in these ways can we _________.
总结观点
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板2
_________ is very important to us. But some people ________. (具体问题) 点明问题
As far as I am concerned, several reasons result in that situation. First of all, _________. (原因一) Besides, _________. (原因二) As a result, _________. (问题带来的结果) 分析问题及其结果
Therefore, we should _________. (具体做法) 提出解决方法和期望
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板3
In my opinion, _________ (具体事物) is better. 点明主题
There are two reasons why _________. For one thing, _________. (优点一) For another, _________. (优点二) 分析原因
I hope that I will _________. 表达期望
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
万能模板4
My best/favorite _________ is _________. (人物) He/She is _________, and he/she _________. (性格)He/ She is always _________. (性格)Besides, he/she always _________. (爱好)In addition, he/she likes _________. (爱好) 引出人物 具体介绍人物
_________ (人物)sets a good example for me. I should learn from him/her. 表达感想
※模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
三、必备词汇与套用句型
1. 必备亮点词汇
disadvantage n. 不利, 劣势 advantage n. 优势, 益处
strong point 优点 weakness n. 弱点, 缺点
favorable adj. 有利的 beneficial adj. 有利的, 有益的
properly adv. 适当地, 恰当地 in my eyes 在我看来
as for me 对于我来说 from my point of view 从我的观点来看
I maintain that 我认为 it seems to me that 我认为
as far as I am concerned 在我看来 from where I stand 站在我的立场上
2. 经典套用句型
·闪亮篇首句
In my opinion, I....... 我认为, 我……
Nowadays, there’s a wide-spread concern about/that......如今, ……引起了广泛的关注。
……play(s) an important role/place among……especially……
……在……尤其是……中占有很重要的地位。
……has become a fashion in our daily life……已成为我们日常生活的一种时尚。
It’s often said that...... 我们常说……
It goes without saying that......不言而喻, ……
As we all know/As is known to all......众所周知, ……
……is a hot topic in society. Enough on it has been said about……
......是当今社会的一个热门话题。有关它的……已经谈得很多了。
About this, views differ among different people. 关于这点不同的人有着不同的看法。
As we all know, everybody can’t live without smartphones.
众所周知, 任何人没有智能手机都是不能生活的。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious problem about……
现如今, 存在着日益严重的关于……的问题。
·出彩篇中句
Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。
First, we should know......首先, 我们要知道……
First of all, we have to admit that……has brought us……首先, 我们不得不承认……给我们带来……It can be easily proved that......很容易证明......
The reason why……is that......之所以……的原因是......
I think it is important to be polite to others. 我认为对他人有礼貌是重要的。
There are two reasons why……为什么……, 有两个原因。
For one thing, it only takes me two hours to fly to City A, which will make me less tired during the journey. 一个原因是, 乘飞机去A城只需要两个小时, 旅途中我不会太累。
There are several reasons as follows. 有如下几条原因。
·精彩篇尾句
Weighing up the pros and cons, I think……is convenient.
权衡利弊, 我认为……很方便。图
Therefore, students should......所以学生们应该……
……sets a good example for me……为我树立了良好的榜样。
On account of this, we can find that...... 据此, 我们可以发现......
As far as I am concerned, ……在我看来, ......
四、模板范文演练
现在, 很多中学生被近视困扰, 请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括: 1. 造成近视的原因; 2. 近视对学习或生活的影响;
3. 你认为应该如何保护视力 (至少两条建议)
要求: 1. 字数: 80~100字。开头已给出, 不计入总字数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
参考词汇: eyesight n. 视力 nearsighted adj. 近视的
have good eyesight 视力好 have bad eyesight 视力差
Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now _______________________________
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