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Unit14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. Section B 3a-3b
Learning Objectives
learn to write a passage about the person or event you memorize most
What impresses you most in junior high school
3a
Think of a person or an event from junior
high school that you will never forget. Make
some notes about how this person or event
changed your life in some way.
Who is the person
When and where did you first meet this person
How did you feel when you met this person
How did this person help you
How has this person’s advice changed your life
What is the event
When and where did this event happen
How did you feel when this event happened
What happened later
How has this event changed your life
3b
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
Describe the person / event.
Explain how you feel about this person / event.
Describe how this person / event has changed your life.
写作指导
1. 写中学生活中的难忘的人/事。
2. 事件要有五要素:when, where, who, what, how, why
3. 最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响。
思路点拨
Step 1
总结,引出话题
Who is the person
write bout a person
Step 2
详细描写过程
When and where did you first meet this person
What happened to you
How did the person help you
How has the person's advice changed your life.
Step 3
总结感慨
How do you feel about the person now.
范文示例
The person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Wang, my English teacher in Grade 7.
When I first started Grade 7, I was shy and did not dare to speak English to others. My English was not good and I felt quite unhappy with myself. One day Mrs. Wong spoke to me after class. She told me that
she believed I could speak well if I practiced more. I was touched by what she said and worked harder on my speaking skills. Mrs. Wong continued to encourage me and I became more and more confident. I improved so much that I even won an English speech contest that year!
I will always be grateful to Mrs. Wong for her advice and support.
作文讲评
第一步:让学生先在小组内分享各自的作文,小组成员相互纠错,润色,修改。
第二步:请部分同学朗读自己的作文。
第三步:组内选出一些优秀的作品张贴于墙报上。