2022届高考英语作文备考：概要写作Getting up early教学课件（27张）
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高考新题型之
概要写作
Summary
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、
体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
01
What is a summary
02
What is a good summary
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
第五档
(21-25) 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。
完全使用自己的言语。
﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏
complete
correct
coherent
concise:no copying
4C原则
complete
correct
Narration （记叙文）
Exposition （说明文）
Forms of Literature
Argumentation (议论文）
(who when where what why how)
Summary writing for
expository writing(说明文)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. You will have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
Step 1. Read for the style, topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
Step 4. Polish the passage (改良)
Steps for summary writing
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. You will have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
②
⑤
④
③
①
reasons
topic/phenomenon
suggestions
体裁：_________________
主题：_________________
结构：_________________
Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
Step 4. polish the passage (改良)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
expository writing(说明文)
getting up early
topic(①) reasons(②③④) suggestions(⑤)
①Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit
since ancient times.
②Many years ago, people thought that if we went to
bed early and got up early, we would be energetic
the whole day.
③Nowadays, people still hold the same view.
④So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1
Tip 1: we can find the topic sentence in the beginning
or at the end of a paragraph if there is one.
para.2
①In fact, morning is the best time of a day.
② In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.
③Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
leave out
minor details
Tip 2 Leave out minor details
①Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. ②That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise
para.3
①Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. ②That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise
para.3
Tip 3 Leave out the repitition
①We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. ②For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family.③ Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. ④Everything is in order. ⑤What a harmonious scene! ⑥However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
para.4
For example
Tip 4 Mostly, leave out examples in the paragraph.
①Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. ②If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. ③You will have to make efforts to do so.
④If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expects to be successful. ⑤Besides, you can set your alarm clock or
ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
para.5
If you want to get up early, sleep ealier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
Tip 5 Circle the key words and rewrite the sentence.
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1:
para.2:
In the best time of the day, the air is the freshest
and people are usually in the best conditions.
para.3:
If we get up early and do some morning exercise, Without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier.
para.4:
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day …
para.5:
If you want to get up early, sleep earlier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1:
2. It is ______________________________.
1.Getting up early is of great _________ to us all.
/Getting up early is __________ to us all.
3. Getting up early plays_______________ in our
life.
4. We should attach great importance to getting up
early./Great importance should be attached to
getting up early.
Step 3. integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
significance
significant
important for us to get up early.
an important part
Tips: a). paraphrase with synonyms(同义词)
b). rewrite sentence structure(改句型)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
The air is the freshest and people
are usually in the best conditions.
para.2、3、4:
Step 3. integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
If we get up early and do some morning exercise,
Without doubt we can build our bodies
and become much healthier.
We will also have enough time to make a plan
and get ready for our work or study of the day
In the most precious time of the day, people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make us healthier.
Early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
Write a summary with the steps& tips
para.5:
…If you want to get up early, sleep earlier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
1.Sleeping ealier and setting an alarm clock or asking someone to call us are the __________ for the late risers.
2.Finally, we should try sleep earlier and setting an alarm clock or ask someone to call us.
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (改写)
3.Going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.
suggestions
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to early rising.
_______,in the most precious time of the day, people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make people healthier.
_______,early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
______,going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.
Step 4. polish (改良)
Tip6: Polish with connectives(连接词) to make it coherent(连贯).
Possbile version:
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to early rising.
Because, in the most precious time of the day,people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make people healthier.
Besides, early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
By the way, going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.(70 words)
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early, for morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have a more accurate memory. What’s more, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning, thus, will be increasingly healthy. And the most important thing is that getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day. For instance, enough time will be got for children to catch the school bus. Finally, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are the suggestions for the late risers.
Sample 1:
Getting up early have many beneficial to us.
The best time of a day is morning.
So if we get up early and do some exercise ,
we can become much healthier.
We also have enough time to make a plan for a day.
Strick to do it , we will certainly benefit a lof
from it. (57 words)
Sample 2:
People always say that a day's plan lies in the morning.
The best time of the day is morning. We can
do some exercise to build our bodies. If we get up
early, we can do more things than those who get up
late. Such as enjoy a preparable breakfast and
memorize some works. We can get a variety of benefits
,if we would get up early everyday.
(BY a student of 208)
Sample 2:
Not only in the past, but now, the fantastic habit
of early rising is signifcant to us.
Actually, morning, the most valuable time
of the day, benefits us a lot.
During the morning ,we will be healhier
by exercising, and also can make full preparations for
the day.
To form this favored habit, we should go to bed
earlier and let the alarm clock or someone wake us.
(68 words)
Sample 3:
Homework
Finish the summary given today with the steps and tips
高考新题型之
概要写作
Summary
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、
体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
01
What is a summary
02
What is a good summary
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
第五档
(21-25) 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。
完全使用自己的言语。
﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏
complete
correct
coherent
concise:no copying
4C原则
complete
correct
Narration （记叙文）
Exposition （说明文）
Forms of Literature
Argumentation (议论文）
(who when where what why how)
Summary writing for
expository writing(说明文)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. You will have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
Step 1. Read for the style, topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
Step 4. Polish the passage (改良)
Steps for summary writing
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. You will have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
②
⑤
④
③
①
reasons
topic/phenomenon
suggestions
体裁：_________________
主题：_________________
结构：_________________
Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
Step 4. polish the passage (改良)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）
expository writing(说明文)
getting up early
topic(①) reasons(②③④) suggestions(⑤)
①Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit
since ancient times.
②Many years ago, people thought that if we went to
bed early and got up early, we would be energetic
the whole day.
③Nowadays, people still hold the same view.
④So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1
Tip 1: we can find the topic sentence in the beginning
or at the end of a paragraph if there is one.
para.2
①In fact, morning is the best time of a day.
② In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.
③Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
leave out
minor details
Tip 2 Leave out minor details
①Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. ②That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise
para.3
①Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. ②That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise
para.3
Tip 3 Leave out the repitition
①We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. ②For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family.③ Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. ④Everything is in order. ⑤What a harmonious scene! ⑥However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
para.4
For example
Tip 4 Mostly, leave out examples in the paragraph.
①Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. ②If you are a late riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. ③You will have to make efforts to do so.
④If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expects to be successful. ⑤Besides, you can set your alarm clock or
ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to call you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.
para.5
If you want to get up early, sleep ealier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
Tip 5 Circle the key words and rewrite the sentence.
Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1:
para.2:
In the best time of the day, the air is the freshest
and people are usually in the best conditions.
para.3:
If we get up early and do some morning exercise, Without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier.
para.4:
We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day …
para.5:
If you want to get up early, sleep earlier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
Write a summary with the steps& tips
Getting up early is of great importance to us all.
para.1:
2. It is ______________________________.
1.Getting up early is of great _________ to us all.
/Getting up early is __________ to us all.
3. Getting up early plays_______________ in our
life.
4. We should attach great importance to getting up
early./Great importance should be attached to
getting up early.
Step 3. integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
significance
significant
important for us to get up early.
an important part
Tips: a). paraphrase with synonyms(同义词)
b). rewrite sentence structure(改句型)
Write a summary with the steps& tips
The air is the freshest and people
are usually in the best conditions.
para.2、3、4:
Step 3. integration & paraphrase (整合与改写)
If we get up early and do some morning exercise,
Without doubt we can build our bodies
and become much healthier.
We will also have enough time to make a plan
and get ready for our work or study of the day
In the most precious time of the day, people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make us healthier.
Early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
Write a summary with the steps& tips
para.5:
…If you want to get up early, sleep earlier and
set alarm clock or ask someone to wake you.
1.Sleeping ealier and setting an alarm clock or asking someone to call us are the __________ for the late risers.
2.Finally, we should try sleep earlier and setting an alarm clock or ask someone to call us.
Step 3. Integration & paraphrase (改写)
3.Going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.
suggestions
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to early rising.
_______,in the most precious time of the day, people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make people healthier.
_______,early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
______,going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.
Step 4. polish (改良)
Tip6: Polish with connectives(连接词) to make it coherent(连贯).
Possbile version:
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to early rising.
Because, in the most precious time of the day,people are often in an excellent state.
With freshest air, some morning exercise will definitely make people healthier.
Besides, early rising can enable us to make good preparations for the day.
By the way, going to bed earlier and using an alarm clock or turning to others are suggestions for later risers.(70 words)
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early, for morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have a more accurate memory. What’s more, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning, thus, will be increasingly healthy. And the most important thing is that getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day. For instance, enough time will be got for children to catch the school bus. Finally, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are the suggestions for the late risers.
Sample 1:
Getting up early have many beneficial to us.
The best time of a day is morning.
So if we get up early and do some exercise ,
we can become much healthier.
We also have enough time to make a plan for a day.
Strick to do it , we will certainly benefit a lof
from it. (57 words)
Sample 2:
People always say that a day's plan lies in the morning.
The best time of the day is morning. We can
do some exercise to build our bodies. If we get up
early, we can do more things than those who get up
late. Such as enjoy a preparable breakfast and
memorize some works. We can get a variety of benefits
,if we would get up early everyday.
(BY a student of 208)
Sample 2:
Not only in the past, but now, the fantastic habit
of early rising is signifcant to us.
Actually, morning, the most valuable time
of the day, benefits us a lot.
During the morning ,we will be healhier
by exercising, and also can make full preparations for
the day.
To form this favored habit, we should go to bed
earlier and let the alarm clock or someone wake us.
(68 words)
Sample 3:
Homework
Finish the summary given today with the steps and tips