Unit 5 Sport Lesson5 Writing课件(共30张PPT)

(共30张PPT)
Module 3 Unit 5 Sport
Lesson 5 Writing
学习目标
1.能运用相关的词汇和句型描写体育经历。
2.能根据写作步骤，写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动。
3.了解体育精神并树立热爱运动、强身健体的理念。
Revision
Skiing: an unforgettable experience
1. They saw the thick snow on the trees as the bus climbed through the mountains.
2. When they reached the resort, they quickly jumped out of the bus and played with snow.
3. They checked in at the hotel and saw the ski slope opposite the hotel.
The first day:
She had a skiing lesson with a young
couple and fell over many times.
The second day:
The third day:
Vanessa could do a few rapid runs.
The following day:
Vanessa kept skiing and had a wonderful time.
expectant nervous pleased
My Favourite Sport
What’s your favourite sport
How to talk about your favourite sport
What
When
How often
...
Guessing Game
Try to name the sport events
as many as possible.
basketball
skiing
curling
swimming
skating
badminton
cycling
table tennis
How often do you play/do it
Who do you play/do it with
When do you usually play/do it
What happy/special memory/experience do you have about playing/doing this sport
My favourite sport
What is it
Do you have any favourite sport stars/teams
Step 1 Analyze the topic
Analysis
Title（标题）
Person（人称）
Tense（时态）
the first person
My favourite sport
the simple present tense
the simple past tense
the simple future tense
Step 2 Organize the outline
My favourite sport
Body
Conclusion
Topic sentence
e.g. My favourite sport is …/… is my favourite sport.
Para. 1
Introduction
Step 2 Organize the outline
My favourite sport
Introduction
Body
conclusion
Give details about your favourite sport
(when, how often, who)
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 1
Your favourite teams or stars
My favourite basketball star is Yao Ming and he is regarded as a genius by many people. I hope I can play basketball as well as he does in the future.
I started to play basketball at the age of 11. I am so interested in it that I play it with my classmates after school everyday. Sometimes we play basketball together until it is dark.
Step 2 Organize the outline
My favourite sport
Introduction
Body
conclusion
Para. 2
Your memory or experience of this sport
Para. 1
Para. 4
Para. 3
Para. 4
Para. 4
How can you describe your memory or experience of the sport
Last year, I went skiing with my parents in the Canadian Rockies. I thought it was an _____________________ for me because I had a __________ time.
As the bus climbed through the mountains, we ______________ get out and play with the snow. As soon as we reached the resort, we ___________ ______________the bus. Then we checked in at the hotel. The next day, we ______ our ski suits and gloves, took our skis and went outside onto the snow. It made me __________ wearing skis for the first time. I found myself ______________. Then a young couple had a skiing lesson with us. The instructor showed us some basic skills, but I kept on ___________. Later I learned to _______________ and then I did better and better. I _____________ that I finally learnt to ski.
unforgettable experience
were dying to
feel strange
unable to walk
falling over
was pleased
wonderful
keep my balance
put on
to jump out of
couldn’t wait
Fill in the blanks with verbs and adjectives.
To be honest, I thought it was very 1. d at the very beginning of training because I kept holding the ball all the time and didn’t know what to do next. Then, the coach told me the skills of playing basketball. I listened to him carefully and 2. d not to be left behind. After that, I 3. s my spare time practising. A few days later, I made progress and felt 4. p with myself when I won a match with my classmates. That’s how I fell in 5. l with basketball.
1. difficult
2. decided
3. spent
4. pleased
5. love
To be honest, I thought it was very difficult at the very beginning of training because I kept holding the ball all the time and didn’t know what to do next. Then, the coach told me the skills of playing basketball. I listened to him carefully and decided not to be left behind. After that, I spent my spare time practising. A few days later, I made progress and felt pleased with myself when I won a match with my classmates. That’s how I fell in love with basketball.
Try to write down your experiences/memories
and share it.
You may start like this:
I started to ... when I was ...
At first, ...
A tip: verbs and adjectives
Show Time
Step 2 Organize the outline
My favourite sport
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Para. 5
Summary and wish
I like playing basketball because it helps me become healthy and strong.
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Para.5
My favourite sport is running. (what)
Details of My favourite sport. (when, who, how often)
The benefits of doing sports in my mind and my wishes.
My favourite sport star.
Sample Structure
Para.4
My experience of running.
How often does he run
Who does he run with
When does he usually run
My favourite sport
What is it
Does he have any favourite sport stars/teams
running
everyday
his classmates
after school
Yes, Su Bingtian is his favourite sport star.
Read again and find more details.
My favourite sport
My favourite sport is running.
I started to run from an early age. I am so interested in it that I run with my classmates after school every day.
Su Bingtian is my favourite sport star. I hope I can be a professional athlete like him in the future.
I remember when I was young, I was very fat and was often laughed at by my classmates. Later, under the guidance of the teacher, I started to exercise. At school, I won the championships many times in the running competitions. After that, I regained my confidence and never stopped running. That’s how I fell in love with running.
For me, running has changed me a lot. It can not only strengthen my body, but also help me build up my confidence. I hope everyone can become healthy and strong by doing sports.
Useful expressions
like ... best 最喜欢……
start to ... from an early age 从小就开始……
be interested in ... 对……感兴趣
be a professional athlete 成为一名专业运动员
laugh at ... 嘲笑……
under the guidance of ... 在……的指导下
regain one’s confidence 重获信心
fall in love with … 爱上……
strengthen one’s body 使……身体强壮
build up one’s confidence 建立……的信心
Check List
Content 1. Key points (what, when, how often, who)
2. Rich supporting details （拓展内容丰富充实）
Accuracy 1. Person and tense (the first person; the correct tenses)
2. Words and expressions (accurate, proper and vivid 准确，适切，生动）
3. Sentence patterns（rich, complete and clear 多样，完整，清晰）
Coherence 1. Good organization (introduction, body and conclusion)
2. Linking words
Step 3 Write a draft
Expressions you may use:
Famous sayings:
1. Practice makes perfect.
2. Where there is a will, there is a way.
3. Failure is the mother of success.
...
Step 4 Polish the writing
Step 4 Polish the writing
spelling mistakes
grammar
mistakes
punctuation mistake
running
I was in water
took
became more and more interested in
swimmer
.
taught
grammar
mistakes
At first
other
mistake
Write down all the content
Use proper words and expressions
Avoid these mistakes: grammar
spelling
punctuation
others
Tips:
Step 4 Polish the writing
Now, it’s your turn to have a self-assessment.
Check List
Content 1. Key points (what, when, how often, who)
2. Rich supporting details （拓展内容丰富充实）
Accuracy 1. Person and tense (the first person; the correct tenses)
2. Words and expressions (accurate, proper and vivid 准确，适切，生动）
3. Sentence patterns（rich, complete and clear 多样，完整，清晰）
Coherence 1. Good organization (introduction, body and conclusion)
2. Linking words
Summary & Assessment
1. learnt to use the related words and expressions to describe the experiences/ memories of the sports.
2. been able to write a short passage about the favourite sport based on the writing steps.
3. understood the spirits of sports and raised the awareness of doing sports.
In this lesson, we have …



Homework
Polish your writing My favourite sport .
Thank you!