Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks.Section B 3a-3b写作课课件(共23张PPT)

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Section B 3a-3b
Unit 2 写作课
I’ll help to clean up the city parks.
学习目标
1. 通过表格和角色扮演，能够用词组表达自己 的观点。
2. 通过四格法，能够布局谋篇，运用写作策略构思，起草作文。
3. 通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Let’s brainstorm.
volunteers
volunteer to do
help others for free
be willing to do
accumulate
traditional virtues
team spirit
heart
kindness
enrich one’s experience
dove
Let’s think.
Working in an old people’s home
Helping kids in an after-school program
Being a guide in a museum
Volunteers wanted
Our social community needs volunteers. Do you want to join us
Let’s think.
Which volunteer job do you want to do
I'd like to...
I'm interested in...
I want to volunteer as...
1b
3a
What would you like to do Discuss it with a partner.
Let's think.
You should write a letter or an e-mail to the place you want to volunteer at.
What should I do next
Let’s think.
For application, I think...
Great. Then what aspect do we want to tell
Let’s think and discuss.
purpose
introduction: interests and hobbies
ability
reason
free time
promise/expectation
contacts
Application
申请书
Let’s think and order.
introduction & ability
reason
1
2
3
4
purpose
free time
promise/expectation
contacts
application
Let's think and talk.
Can you introduce yourself What are your interests and hobbies
I'm good at...
I am strong in...
In my free time, I like to... so I think I'd be good at this job.
Let’s think.
I can
What can you do to help the old？
sing and dance
read
tell jokes
talk to…
Let’s think.
introduction & ability
reason
1
2
3
4
purpose
free time
promise/expectation
contacts
application
I'm good at...
I am strong in...
In my free time, I like to... so I think I'd be good at this job. I can
sing and dance
talk to…
read
tell jokes
Let's think and talk.
Why do you want to do the volunteer job
I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home because I know a lot of old people are lonely.
Let’s think and talk.
Talk in pairs.
Why do you want to do the volunteer job
I want to help out as a volunteer in… because…
Let’s think.
introduction & ability
reason
1
2
3
4
purpose
free time
promise / expectation
contacts
application
I'm good at...
I am strong in...
In my free time, I like to... so I think I'd be good at this job. I can
I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people's home because...
help people
make them happy
make me a better man
enrich my experience
sing and dance
talk to…
read
tell jokes
Application
purpose
introduction & ability
free time/promise/
expectation/contacts
reason
Sir and Madam
（称呼）
What
Yours truly…
（落款)
Why
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing to you about volunteering in your old people’s home.
I'm good at...
I am strong in...
In my free time,
I like to...
so I think I'd be good at this job.
I can...
sing and dance
talk to…
read
tell jokes
I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people's home because...
help people
make them happy
make me a better man
enrich my experience
I’m free to help on weekends.Thank you for reviewing my application. I would be very pleased if I could make my contribution to the project. Email me at Lucy@.
Yours truly,
_________
Let’s draft.
Write the topic or key sentences for four squares.
Application
purpose
introduction & ability
free time/promise/
expectation/contacts
reason
Sir and Madam
（称呼）
What
Yours truly,
（落款)
Why
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing to you about volunteering in your old people’s home.
I’m free to help on weekends. Thank you for reviewing my application. I would be very pleased if I could make my contribution to the project. Email me at Lucy@.
Yours truly,
_________
Let’s edit.
I am very kind and friendly. I am good at singing and dancing. In my free time I like to do some reading and listen to soft music and folk songs. So I think I can
listen to them and care for them very well. I can also read newspaper, sing
some songs and do some dancing for them, or just talk
to them.
I want to be a volunteer because I know a lot of old people are lonely. They need to be cared and listened to. Everyone will be old one day. So I often go to the old people’s home when I am free on weekends. I will try my best to continue this part-time job.
Read this application and edit yours.
Let’s proofread.
Self-check and peer-check.
check
polish
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
Use the structures like
conjunctions
to do
because/so
Let’s evaluate.
一、词语运用
1. 大小写不正确或书写潦草导致的字母或单词难以辨认不给分；
2. 如考生写出与参考答案不同，但与题目要求相符的单词或短语，且形式正确，应在阅卷时讨论后，酌情给分。
Let’s evaluate.
二、评分原则
1. 本题总分15分按各档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容语言质量初步确定档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；
2. 评分时应考虑：内容要点是否完整；时态，语态及人称是否正确；词汇和句式的多样性以及语言的准确性；上下文的连贯性；
Let’s evaluate.
二、评分原则
3. 如书写较差，影响表达，应视其影响程度，降低一到两个档次；英美两种拼法及词汇用法都可接受；
4. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，应紧扣主题，可适当发挥。
Let’s self-check.
学习目标 1 2 3 4 5
1.能用表格和角色扮演来表达自己的观点。
2. 能用四格法布局谋篇，起草作文。
3.愿意小组讨论，与同伴分享并修改作文
Homework.
1. Polish your writing according to your peer's and teacher's advice.
2. Draw a mind map to review Unit 2 .
3. Think and write: Do you think children should do some chores at home Why or why not