人教新目标(Go for it)版八年级下Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents? Section B写作课课件(共33张PPT)

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Why don’t you talk to your parents
初中英语人教版 八年级下
Section B 3a-3b
Unit 4 写作课
学习目标
1. 通过头脑风暴，能够表达出与写作话题相关的 词汇和观点。
2. 通过四格法，能够布局谋篇，运用写作策略构 思，起草作文。
3. 通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Let's brainstorm.
How do you feel today
Are you healthy Are you happy
time
shyness
friends
family
health
study
Let's think .
I take after-school classes because I want to get good grades.
So I don't have free time.
Do you have any problems in study
Let's think.
I have to ______too much so I don't get enough_______.
study
sleep
Do you have any problems in study
Let's think.
I am afraid of __________________in class because I am a little____.
Do you have any problems in study
shy
answering questions
Let's think.
I don't have any ________to do things I like because I have too much___________.
free time
homework
Do you have any problems in study
Let's think.
I don't have_________ because I have too many___________________.
free time
after-school classes
Do you have any problems in study
Let's read.
Nowadays, students have too much pressure about schoolwork. Do you know why
Well, because ... .
time
shyness
friends
family
health
study
Let's think.
Because (of) ___________
Why do students have much pressure about schoolwork
my parents
Let's think.
Why do students have much pressure about schoolwork
Parents want their children to be _________ , so they push their children too______.
successful
hard
Let's think.
Why do students have much pressure about schoolwork
Parents want their children to get into a good __________and get a good____ so they force their children to study.
university
job
+
Let's think.
Why do students have much pressure about schoolwork
I want to get good____________, so I have to _________________my classmates.
grades
compete with
Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of having after-school classes. Fill in the table.
Let's debate.
In my opinion, it is important for children to... because...
Although some parents are right about..., I think children should...
3b
Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of having after-school classes. Fill in the table.
Let's debate.
3b
Advantages Disadvantages
develop exam skills too much pressure
Let's read.
Now that we know the reasons, can you give us some advice about how to relax
Well, I think ... .
ways to relax
Let’s brainstorm.
play sports
read books
talk with parents/friends
listen to music
watch movies
ask teachers for help
Let's read.
Well, We've got plenty of ideas about how to relax. Now think about the sentence patterns about how to give advice.
OK! We can use ... .
Let's brainstorm.
Sentence patterns about how to give advice:
You should (do) ….
You could (do) ….
Why don’t you (do) …
Why not (do) …
How/What about (doing) …
You'd better (do) ... .
Let's talk.
Work in a group of four and share your advice.
You should (do) … .
You could (do) … .
Why don’t you (do) …
Why not (do) …
How/What about (doing) …
You'd better (do) ... .
Let's think.
当代的中学生面临着重大的学业压力，请分析一下产生这些压力的原因，并且针对如何放松提出一些建议。
What aspects do we need to write about
Let's think.
1
problem
pressure about schoolwork
2
reason
3
advice
4
expectation
Let's draft.
1
problem
pressure about schoolwork
2
reason
3
advice
4
expectation
Students these days have much pressure about schoolwork.
It is mainly because ... .
In short, I hope you can grow up healthily and study happily.
Here is some advice on how to relax from study stress. First, ... .
Besides / What's more / In addition ... .
2
reason
Let's edit.
It is mainly because their parents want them to get good grades so that they can get into a good university and be successful.
pressure about schoolwork
so that
3
advice
Let's edit.
However, too much pressure isn't good for a child's growth. Here is some advice on how to relax from study stress. First, you could communicate with your teachers and parents to cut out unnecessary lessons. Just keep what you really need. Besides, it's a good way to relax by listening to some soft music or watching relaxing movies when you feel tired after school.
pressure about schoolwork
it's a good way to relax
by
3
advice
Let's edit.
What's more, you'd better not compare or compete with others too much. Why not help one another to improve Last but not least, although it is important for children to get good grades, I think children should have more free time.
pressure about schoolwork
Let’s proofread.
Self-check and peer-check.
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
Use the following expressions like:
conjunctions
... so that ...
It's a good way to relax by ...
Let’s redraft.
You should redraft now.
OK. I'll send the letter after that.
Let’s evaluate.
大小写不正确或书写潦草导致的字母或单词难以辨认不给分；
如考生写出与参考答案不同，但与题目要求相符的单词或短语，且形式正确，应在阅卷时讨论后，酌情给分。
一、词语运用
Let’s evaluate.
本题总分15分按各档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容语言质量初步确定档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；
评分时应考虑：内容要点是否完整；时态，语态及人称是否正确；词汇和句式的多样性以及语言的准确性；上下文的连贯性；
二、评分原则
Let’s evaluate.
3. 如书写较差，影响表达，应视其影响程度，降低一到两个档次；英美两种拼法及词汇用法都可接受；
4. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，应紧扣主题，可适当发挥。
二、评分原则
Let’s self-check.
学习目标 1 2 3 4 5
1.能用头脑风暴来了解话题相关的词汇和观点。
2.能用四格法布局谋篇，起草作文。
3.愿意小组讨论，与同伴分享并修改作文。
Homework.
1. Polish your writing according to peers’ and teacher's advice.
2. Draw a mind map to review Unit 4.