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Unit 10
I've had this bike for three years.
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作优质课
一、教学目标
1.认知并熟练运用本单元重要单词和词组；
2.利用已经掌握的知识，能写出自己喜欢的东西。
3.了解中国的一个特色,进城务工人群的生活,对家乡的感觉。
二、教学重点
1.认知并熟练运用本单元重要单词和词组；
2.利用已经掌握的知识，能写出自己喜欢的东西。
三、教学难点
1.了解中国的一个特色,进城务工人群的生活,对家乡的感觉。
单元写作话题分析
本单元主要围绕 “生活环境”这一话题谈论私人物品(物品的来历、持有时间及喜欢的原因等)；或者谈论家乡近年来的发展和变化。体裁以记叙文为主，多使用第一人称，时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。
Enjoy the song,then discuss what is the song about
Could you tell me something about the change of your hometown
Hometown
家乡
past过去
now现在
future将来
校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”，请你根据下面的提示，
介绍你家乡的变化来投稿。提示：
1.What did your hometown look like in the past years
2.What does your hometown look like now
3.What do you think of these changes
要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
话题作文一
写作前：三审
一审：_________
二审：_________
三审：_________
人称
时态
要点
写作模板
1.描述各方面家乡的过去（建筑物人等）
the change of hometown
家乡的变化
总写：
句型：My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
分写：
It used to be a/an...place. 它过去是个…地方。
2.描述家乡的现在
Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
展望家乡的未来
总写：
I hope my hometown will be …
根据表格所给内容要点，以“The changes in my hometown”
为题写一篇英语短文。要点如下:
过去 1. 空气清新，环境很好；
2. 房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车上班；
3. 是一个宁静的地方。
现在 1. 住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车；
2. 这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴；
3. 树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。
将来 请你展望家乡的未来（1—2句）。
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
In the past, there weren't so many tall buildings in the city, and the buildings were really old. But now, many new and tall buildings have been built everywhere. In many places, the government has built new shools and sent teachers from the city to help. Large hopitals and new roads have appeared. Shopping is also more convenient beacuse of different kinds of shopping centers. I think such developments are good. But these developments also cause some problems, especially the pollution. People are producing more and more rubbish. I think everyone should play an important role in protecting our environment.
And I hope my hometown will be better and better in the future.
赏析
话题作文二
每个人内心深处都有对童年时期一些事情的美好回忆，特别是那些伴你度过童年时光的玩具，至今你可能仍不舍得将它抛弃。它可能是一辆玩具汽车、一个布娃娃、一辆自行车等。请你以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，和大家分享一下你的小秘密吧。
How were your childhood memories
Have you played with a teddy bear
Have you ever learned to ride a bike
What's the matter with you
barbie
Do you still have your favorite thing from childhood
Bumblebee
toy dinosaur
teddy bear
toy car
bike
3b.Write three paragraphs aboutyour favorite thing. Use your
notes in 3a to help you.
I第一段介绍最喜欢的东西
My favorite thing from
childhood is ________
_________. I've had it
for / since _________
_________________.
__________________
gave it to me.
my teddy
bear泰迪熊
I was five years old
My grandmother
3b
第二段谈论为什么特殊
I like ________________
so much because______________________
_______________________.
It's special to me because
_______________________________.
I think _______________________________.
the teddy bear
it's dressed in my favorite color
my grandmother made it for me
I will keep it forever, to remind me of my grandmother
3b
第三段这个物品有什么故事
回忆
___________________has
given me many memories.
I remember when _______
______________________
______________________
______________________
______________________.
The teddy bear
I was young and I was scared at night because I didn't like the dark, I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
写作模板
1.Introduce your favorite thing介绍你的最爱的东西
2.Talk about why it is special
3.Write about a story or memories
My favorite thing from childhood is__________ I’ve had it for/since________. _________ gave it to me.
物品
时间
谁
I like the_______so much because...
It’s special to me because___________
I think___________________
物品
The________has given me a lot of good memories.
I remember when_____________.
My favorite thing from childhood is a toy car. I have had it for 6 years. My father gave it to me when I was five years old.
I like it so much because I played with it every day until I went to school. It’s special to me because it was my fifth birthday gift that my father bought.
The toy car has given me many memories. I remember when I was seven I still played with it. I would never go to bed without it. One day I couldn’t find it after I returned home from school. I asked my parents to help me find it. We looked for it everywhere until my mother found it under my bed.
Sample 1
My favorite sweater
My favorite thing from childhood is a red sweater. I visited my aunt in Canada ten years ago. One day , Jim , my aunt’s neighbor and I played together. It was very cold. Jim bought me a red sweater. I like it so much because it fitted me very well. And red was my favorite color! I thought this kind of color was in fashion in China. I have had it for ten years. Every time I see it, I will think of my Canadian friend, Jim. It has given me many sweet memories.
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Sample 2
I haven't been to a museum __________
_________ .
2. I haven’t written a letter _____________.
3. I haven't ridden a bike _________________
_______.
1 Complete the sentences using for or since.
Self Check
since four
years ago
for five years
for more than half
a year
4. I haven't seen a movie __________________.
5. I haven't played computer games _______
_______.
for several months
since last
term.
A: Hey Eric, _______ you enjoyed your time in
Beijing so far
B: Yes, it ____been great! Everyone is so
friendly.
A: How long _______ you been in China now
B: Oh, I ______ here _____ about two years now.
2 Complete the conversation.
have
has
have
have been
A: Wow, that means you haven’t_________
back to the US for two years
B: No； I _______ been back twice _______
moving to China. _______ you been to the
US before, Li Juan
A: Yes, I went there once when I ____ 10 years
old, but I ______ not been back______ then.
been
have
since
Have
was
been
since
Thank you for listening!
