Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation Section B Writing课件(共19张PPT)

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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation
Section B Writing
重庆
伊犁
It’s my first time to Chongqing.
新 疆
lavender薰衣草
grassland草原
Yili river bridge 伊犁河大桥
Kazanqi Street 喀赞其街
cheese
honey
apples
peaches
apricots
Nalati grassland
那拉提草原
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Nalati grassland（那拉提草原） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk on the endless grassland. The sky was bright blue. There were a lot of horses and sheep. Some were running, others were eating grass. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we visited a local（当地的） family. The host and his family were very friendly, and we had lunch there. We ate pilaf（抓饭） and drank tea with milk（奶茶）. It was really delicious. Next, I tried riding a horse. It was so exciting. The horse was cute and friendly. When it was running on the grassland, I felt like I was a horse, too. In the evening, we had a party . We sang and danced together. What a wonderful day！
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to go to Nalati grassland again.
Fill in the blanks.
sister
Nalati grassland
walk
happy
took many photos.
tired
go to Nalati grassland again
Monday,August5th
a local family
pilaf and drank tea with mik
riding a horse
sang
danced
三步五要素
Step1. 注意日记的整体格式。
How to keep a travel diary
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Nalati grassland（那拉提草原） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk on the endless grassland. The sky was bright blue. There were a lot of horses and sheep. Some were running, others were eating grass. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we visited a local（当地的） family. The host and his family were very friendly, and we had lunch there. We ate pilaf（抓饭） and drank tea with milk（奶茶）. It was really delicious. Next, I tried riding a horse. It was so exciting. The horse was cute and friendly. When it was running on the grassland…
日期的位置：
日期的英文格式：
首行右侧或左侧
1.星期+月+日
2.星期+日+月
Step2. 注意人称和时态。
人称：
一般过去时
第一人称
时态：
注意：在表达自己的思想感情时，如I think…, I like this trip, I love it, 时态为一般现在时。
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Nalati grassland（那拉提草原） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk on the endless grassland. The sky was bright blue. There were a lot of horses and sheep. Some were running, others were eating grass. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we visited a local（当地的） family. The host and his family were very friendly, and we had lunch there. We ate pilaf（抓饭） and drank tea with milk（奶茶）. It was really delicious. Next, I tried riding a horse. It was so exciting. The horse was cute and friendly. When it was running on the grassland, I felt like I was a horse, too. In the evening, we had a party . We sang and danced together. What a wonderful day！
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to go to Nalati grassland again.
Step3. 描述清楚当天所发生的事情，要用到五要素。
人物
地点
时间
活动
感受
Part1
Part2
Part3
beginning
body
ending
sister
Monday,August5th,2019
Nalati grassland
walk
took many photos.
a local family
pilaf and drank tea with mik
riding a horse
sang
danced
tired
happy
go to Nalati grassland again
A travel diary
beginning
body
ending
（总体概述）
（活动描述）
（感受）
who
when
where
what
how
I went to …with my sister/family.
I arrived in…
I reached…
I got to…
First…
Second…
Then…
At last…
In the morning…
In the afternoon…
In the evening…
did
ate
bought
…
Although I felt very tired, I was happy.
I hope to visit … again.
This tour is so…that…
I will go there next time.
What a wonderful day!
the Palace Museum
Tain’anmen Square
a Beijing hutong
Beijing
Wednesday, 20th
Today the weather was . I went to
. It was interesting. We
. I liked this place because I
. For dinner, we _______________. It was . In the evening,I felt really .
August
hot and sunny
Tian'anmen Square
took some photos
learned something important
had Beijing duck
delicious
tired
hot and sunny tired Beijing duck
delicious take some photos beautiful
buy something special interesting
learn something important August
Complete the diary about a trip to one of these places. Use the words
and phrases in the box to help you.
beginning
body
ending
Imagine you had a trip to one of these places. Write a diary about the vacation
Time
weather
place
activities
Feelings
my vacation
Task:Discussion
小组讨论，选定要写的内容。
Tips:
Correct writing format
(正确的书写格式）
The simple past tense
（一般过去时）
Clear structure
(清晰的结构）
Evaluation(评价)
评价标准及分值 得分
Format/日记格式（1分）
Tense/时态（1分）
Content/内容要求：
查看要求描述的信息是否完整。 Who（1分）
When（1分）
Where（1分）
What（2分）
How（feeling）（1分）
Writing/书写（1分）
Good words/phases/sentences好词，短语结构，句式波浪线画出（1分）
Summary
Write a diary
Keep a diary
三步五要素
Express your feelings
Keep a secret
Record what you did
Keep good memories
make our life colorful
Homework:
Write a diary about a vacation you took.
For example
Who
When
Where
What
How
Thanks for listening!