(共37张PPT)
Writing
I can make a mind map about seasons.
I can write a passage about seasons.
Learning aims
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Seasons
Make a mind map
Make a mind map
做思维导图时只需
简要列出关键词。
根据Fun time的内容绘制一份思维导图!
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
Make a mind map
coat
beanie
根据Fun time的内容绘制一份思维导图!
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
In spring, it's... I wear___________________________.
In summer, it's... I wear___________________________________.
In autumn, it's... I wear_____________________.
shirts or blouses
T-shirts, shorts, skirts and dresses
jackets and coats
Brain storm
What do you wear in other seasons
···
Make a mind map
coat
beanie
white
cold
go skating
make
snowmen
like
winter
根据Fun time的内容绘制一份思维导图!
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
Make a mind map
coat
beanie
white
cold
go skating
make
snowmen
like
winter
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
sceneries
(景色)
Brain storm
I can see____.
形容词能让句子内容更生动哦!
nice, beautiful, colourful,lovely,
green, red,cute,funny…
What can you see in winter
I can see some funny snowmen.
I can see some snowmen.
They're funny.
I can see some white trees.
I can see some trees.
They're white.
In spring, I can see______________________________.
In summer, I can see________________________________.
In autumn, I can see_____________________.
flowers and trees
butterflies and cicadas
fallen leaves(落叶)
Brain storm
What can you see in other seasons
···
Make a mind map
coat
beanie
white
cold
go skating
make
snowmen
like
winter
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
sceneries
(景色)
snowmen
trees
food
Brain storm
I can eat____.
What can you eat in winter
I can eat hot pot(火锅).
It's yummy.
可以加上吃东西的感受!
yummy, juicy, sweet, fresh(新鲜的)…
I can eat cherries.
They're juicy(多汁的).
In spring, I can eat________________________________.
In summer, I can eat_____________________________________.
In autumn, I can eat_____________________.
strawberries and pineapples
ice creams, watermelons and grapes
apples and pears
Brain storm
What can you eat in other seasons
···
Make a mind map
coat
beanie
white
cold
go skating
make
snowmen
like
winter
weather
colours
clothes
activities
feelings
Winter
sceneries
(景色)
snowmen
trees
food
hot pot
cherries
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
colours
feelings
Spring
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
Summer
colours
feelings
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
Autumn
colours
feelings
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
colours
feelings
从spring,summer和autumn中选择一个季节绘制一份思维导图!
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
Spring
colours
feelings
warm
green
blouses/shirts
trees
flowers
strawberries
pineapples
like spring
go boating
fly kites
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
Summer
colours
feelings
hot
colourful
T-shirts
shorts
skirts
dresses
cicadas
butterflies
watermelons
grapes
like summer
go swimming
eat ice creams
让我们一起完成春天的导图吧!
Make a mind map
activities
weather
sceneries
food
clothes
Autumn
colours
feelings
cool
orange
jackets
coats
fallen leaves
(落叶)
apples
pears
like autumn
go climbing
have picnics
activities
weather
colours
feelings
food
sceneries
clothes
In..., it is...and... /...is...and...
I wear...(and...)/It's time to wear...
I...(and...)
I can see...
I can eat...
I like...
How...!/What a...season!
Title
Nice/Wonderful...
Beginning
...is a nice season./...is wonderful.
Body
Ending
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少4个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
activities
weather
colours
feelings
food
sceneries
clothes
In..., it is...and... /...is...and...
I wear...(and...)/It's time to wear...
I...(and...)
I can see...
I can eat...
I like...
How...!/What a...season!
Title
Nice/Wonderful...
Beginning
...is a nice season./...is wonderful.
Body
Ending
Write a passage
Nice spring
Spring is a nice season.
In spring, it is green and warm. I wear beautiful blouses. I fly kites with my brother. It's fun. I can see some birds in the sky. They're happy. I can eat juicy(多汁的) strawberries and pineapples.
I like spring. Do you like it
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少4个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
Write a passage
Nice spring
Spring is a nice season.
In spring, it is green and warm. I wear beautiful blouses. I fly kites with my brother. It's fun. I can see some birds in the sky. They're happy. I can eat juicy(多汁的) strawberries and pineapples.
I like spring. Do you like it
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少4个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
Write a passage
Nice spring
Spring is a nice season.
In spring, it is green and warm. I wear beautiful blouses. I fly kites with my brother. It's fun. I can see some birds in the sky. They're happy. I can eat juicy(多汁的) strawberries and pineapples.
I like spring. Do you like it
activities
weather
colours
feelings
food
sceneries
clothes
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少3个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
Write a passage
Nice spring
Spring is a nice season.
In spring, it is green and warm. I wear beautiful blouses. I fly kites with my brother. It's fun. I can see some birds in the sky. They're happy. I can eat juicy(多汁的) strawberries and mangoes.
I like spring. Do you like it
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少4个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
Write a passage
Nice spring
Spring is a nice season.
In spring, it is green and warm. I wear beautiful blouses. I fly kites with my brother. It's fun. I can see some birds in the sky. They're happy. I can eat juicy(多汁的) strawberries and pineapples.
I like spring. Do you like it
Grading standards 评分标准 Stars Check
1. Complete structure. 结构完整:标题、开头、正文、结尾。
2. Good organization. 能根据思维导图写出季节相关的至少4个信息。
3. More Details. 能准确表达,内容充实。
能准确表达,内容充实。并能使用形容词等进行细节描述使语言更生动形象。 4. Correct writing. 单词、标点书写正确。
In total 总计 ______
Write a passage
10
Write a passage
请从拼写、语法、内容、逻辑等方面着手,用红笔进行修改和完善哦!
Following signs can help you.
删除:
调位:
替换:
增补:
好句:
分段:
1. Finish a mind map.
2. Try to write your own passage.
绘制“思维导图”,列提纲,写短语。
选取你喜欢的一个季节,写一篇小短文。
Homework
Thank you!