牛津深圳版九年级英语上册Module 3 Leisure time>Unit 6 Healthy diet Writing课件(共31张PPT)

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Healthy diet
Unit 6 Writing
九年级上册—牛津沪教版—英语—第六单元
1. Learn some relevant words and phrases of restaurant reviews.
学习关于餐厅评论相关的词汇短语。
2. Understand the structure and main points of the restaurant reviews.
了解餐馆点评的结构和要点。
3. Grasp and use the sentence patterns of restaurant reviews.
掌握并运用餐评的通用句式。
4. Learn how to express the dining experience in written language in an objective way.
学习如何用书面语客观地对餐厅用餐经历进行表达。
Learning Aims
学习目标
Leading-in
Brainstorming
Food
Price
Service
Environment
...
What can
attract you to have meals in
the same
restaurant
again
The result is based on Class 2, Grade 9 in the Hills’ School.
What will you do if you don’t like the
food and the service there
Write some reviews for the restaurant
What will you do if you like the food
and the service in the restaurant
A restaurant review is about your experience of eating at a restaurant.You can find this kind of review on the Internet easily.
Pre-writing
How to write a restaurant review
Doris has written a restaurant review. Read the review below.
Title
title
n.标题
Opening
Introduction
Review of the food
Review of the service
service
n.服务
Recommendation
recommend
n.推荐
v.推荐
recommendation
Structure
Title
amazing
...
excellent
delicious
wonderful
fantastic
unforgettable
+
name of the restaurant
adjectives
Title:
Title
+
name of the restaurant
adjectives
Let’s try
在一家广州餐厅的粤式美食
Delicious Cantonese food at a Guangzhou Restaurant
在一家重庆餐馆非常难忘的火锅大餐
An unforgettable hot pot at a Chongqing Restaurant
Other possible titles
..., a must-go restaurant
Lovely food, lovely...
Wonderful meal at ...
A great dining place...
Opening
Opening:
______ + _______ ate/had meal/dinner...+_________.
when
who
where
Introduction:
food
price
_______ serves_____food.
restaurant
type
Who paid/spent _____ to eat/eating there.
price
amount + currency货币单位
200 yuan
Introduction
+
Food reviews
Topic
sentence
The food was _______.
adjective
good
wonderful
delicious
excellent
so so
not so good
bad
terrible ...
Specific
details
____________________.
details of your experience
Service reviews
Review
of the service
The waiters/service/... was _______.
adjective
________________.
be seated
v. 就坐
receive food
v. 收到食物
specific experience
Recommendation
I would certainly recommend _______ ...
restaurant
You should ______________.
give suggestions
arrival time
waiting
time
parking lot
available
other things
need to know
Analyze(分析) the linking words
useful linking words
并列连词：
also
and
in addition
besides
as well
not only, but aslo
...
转折对比连词：
but
however,
...
though/although
时间连词：
(not) ...until / until
when/while
...
因果连词：
because/ so / as a result, / therefore, ...
What tense
the Simple
Past Tense
the Simple
Present Tense
Analyze(分析) the tense 时态
past
experience
present situation /
recommendation
Analyze(分析) the Person 人称
the first person 第一人称
I、me、my
We、us、our
the second person第二人称
You、your、you
What person
what happened
in the past
give
advice
Answer the questions below to help you write your own restaurant reviews. 回答以下问题并结合自己的用餐经历写餐评。
A restaurant
review
3. Tense:
Simple Present Tense
Simple Past Tense
4. Person:
the first person
the second person
假设昨晚你与父母到绿茵阁(The Greenery Cafe)吃晚饭，请根据表格内容为该餐厅写一则评价。
Practice
项目 评价和意见
价格 280元，小贵
食物 牛排(steak)和沙拉很美味，但汤太咸 (salty)
服务 友善，但上菜有点慢
环境 餐厅干净、安静，轻柔的音乐，让人放松
总体建议 推荐就餐
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A restaurant review
Sample writing
Excellent English food at the Greenery Cafe
Last night, my parents and I ate at the Greenery Cafe. The
cafe serves western food. We paid about 280 yuan to eat there.
It was a little expensive.
The food was wonderful. The steak and the salad tasted delicious though the soup was too salty.
The waiters were friendly to us, but a little slow. We ordered our food at 7 p.m., but we didn’t receive our food until 8 p.m.
The environment was nice. It was clean and quiet. In addition, the soft music made us relaxed.
I would certainly recommend it to my friends. I feel great with the Greenery Cafe and I will go there to have meals again.
Finish the evaluation chart. 自评与他评。
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Post-writing
Assessment Standard评分标准
Opening
Title
Introduction
Reviews
When
Who
Where
Content（内容性）
Accuracy（准确性）
Coherence（连贯性）
Tense
Grammatical mistakes
Linking words or phrases
Food
Price
Food
Service
Others...
Present Tense
Past Tense
Recommendation
spelling，capitalize，punctuation ...
Person
Summary: writing for a restaurant review
In this lesson, we have learnt
what a restaurant review is.
some new words and phrases of this topic.
the structure of a restaurant review.
how to organize each part with the help of some useful
patterns and linking words.
how to write a review of our eating experience in a restaurant
in an objective way.
how to evaluate our writing and improve it in a better way.
I hope you can enjoy the class!






Write another review of your favourite restaurant and recommend it to your friends.
Homework
The more you share,
the happier you will feel.
Thank you!