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5B Unit5
Helping our parents
Writing
Learning aims 学习目标
1. 进一步复习和运用Unit5所学的单词、词组和句子。
2. 能用现在进行时态看图写话。
3. 能学会使用一些简单的写作技巧,对自己的文章进行修改加工。
Let’s review
Dad
Who
What
Where
When
It’s Saturday morning.
Mike
Mum
Helen
Tim
Ben
is cleaning the car in the garden.
is helping dad in the garden.
is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
is sweeping the floor in the living room.
is sleeping in the bedroom.
is sleeping in the bedroom,too.
What is … doing
Let’s chant
It’s Saturday morning.
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
Let’s chant
It’s Saturday morning.
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
Let’s learn
Composition(作文)
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Ending(结尾)
It’s Saturday morning.
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
It’s Saturday morning.
Which sentence can be the beginning
(哪一句话可以作为开头呢?)
When
Who
Where
What
文章的开头需要交代清楚时间、地点和人物,已及简单的事情概述。
Who
What
Where
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
It’s Saturday morning.
at home.
are doing …
The Brown family
The Brown family are doing
housework at home.
Who
What
Where
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
Who
What
Where
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Who
What
Where
Make the language more concise!
(使语言更简洁、精炼!)
Which sentences can be the body
(哪些句子可以作为正文呢?)
repeated重复的
Tim is sleeping in the bedroom.
Ben is sleeping in the bedroom too.
Who
What
Where
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden.
Who
What
Where
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Who
What
Where
in the bedroom.
are sleeping
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen.
Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Mike is helping dad in the garden.
in the garden.
同类合并
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room. Tim and Ben are sleeping in the bedroom.
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Dad is cleaning the car. Mike is helping him in the garden.
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
In the garden, dad is cleaning the car. Mike is helping him.
1.调换顺序
2.加关联词
and
Do you know any conjunctions
(你知道哪些关联词呢?)
Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room.
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Tim and Ben are sleeping in
Where is Tim What is he doing now Tim is in his bedroom. He is sleeping. Ben the dog is sleeping too.
In the garden, dad is cleaning the car. Mike is helping him.
1.调换顺序
3.巧设疑问
2.加关联词
the bedroom.
and
But
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
In the garden, dad is cleaning the car and Mike is helping him. Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room. But where is Tim What is he doing now Tim is in his bedroom. He is sleeping. Ben the dog is sleeping too.
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Ending(结尾)
在叙述中,巧设问句能引起读者的注意和好奇
丰富句式
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Dad is cleaning the car in the garden. Mike is helping dad. Mum is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. Helen is sweeping the floor in the living room. Where is Tim What is he doing now Tim is in his bedroom. He is sleeping. Ben the dog is sleeping too.
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Ending(结尾)
They’re happy.
Title (标题)
Helping our parents
Complete
(完整的)
Concise
(精炼的)
Saturday morning
Mum
Who
What
Where
Helen
Mike
is cooking dinner in the kitchen.
is washing dishes in the kitchen.
is cleaning the table in the kitchen.
Tim
is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
Jim
is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
Beginning
It’s Saturday afternoon.The Brown family___________
are at home.
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
It’s Saturday afternoon. The Brown family are at home.
Body(正文)
Mum is cooking dinner in the kitchen.
Helen is washing dishes in the kitchen.
Mike is cleaning the table in the kitchen.
Tim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
Jim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
Concise
(精炼的)
Let’s say
Make a concise body!
(运用技巧,把正文变得精炼!)
2.调换顺序
1.同类合并
Helen is washing dishes in the kitchen. Mike is cleaning the table in the kitchen.
Mum is cooking dinner in the kitchen.
In the kitchen, Mum is cooking dinner.
Tim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room. Jim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
in the kitchen
in the kitchen
in the
kitchen
Helen is washing dishes. Mike is cleaning the table.
Tim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room. Jim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
3.加关联词
4.巧设疑问
Let’s say
Make a concise body!
(运用技巧,把正文变得精炼!)
2.调换顺序
1.同类合并
Helen is washing dishes. Mike is cleaning the table.
In the kitchen, Mum is cooking dinner.
Tim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room. Jim is eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
Tim and Jim are eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
3.加关联词
4.巧设疑问
Let’s say
Make a concise body!
(运用技巧,把正文变得精炼!)
2.调换顺序
1.同类合并
Helen is washing dishes. Mike is cleaning the table.
In the kitchen, Mum is cooking dinner.
Tim and Jim are eating fruit and watching TV in the living room.
3.加关联词
and
But,
4.巧设疑问
What are Tim and Jim doing
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
It’s Saturday afternoon. The Brown family are at home.
Body(正文)
In the kitchen, mum is cooking dinner. Helen is washing dishes and Mike is cleaning the table. But, what are Tim and Jim doing They are eating fruit and watching TV in the living room!
Ending(结尾)
How
Let’s say
They are busy but happy.
Let’s learn
Beginning(开头)
It’s Saturday morning. The Brown family are at home.
Body(正文)
In the afternoon, In the kitchen, mum is cooking dinner. Helen and Mike are helping her. Helen is washing dishes and Mike is cleaning the table. But what are Tim and Jim doing They are eating fruit and watching TV in the living room!
Ending(结尾)
They are busy but happy.
Title (标题)
Helping our parents(2)
Saturday afternoon
It’s Sunday morning.
The children are doing housework in the garden.
water the flowers
feed the dog
catch pests
Helen, Mike and Tim are helping parents in the garden. Helen is _________________ and Mike is _________________. Tim is ____________.
watering the flowers
catching pests
feeding the dog Ben
Mike’s cousin Jim comes.
Hello, Jim.
Hello, Mike.
What are you, Helen and Tim doing
I’m feeding Ben the dog. I like playing with dogs. Helen is watering the flowers. She likes flowers very much. Tim is catching pests.
Does he like pests too
No. Pests are bad for grapes, so he is catching pests.
Who What
Helen is watering flowers.
Mike is feeding Ben the dog.
Tim is catching pests.
Listen and finish
Why
Helen likes flowers very much.
Why
Who What
Helen is watering flowers.
Mike likes playing with dogs.
Pests are bad for grapes.
Mike is feeding Ben the dog.
Tim is catching pests.
Let’s learn
Beginning
It’s Sunday morning. The Brown family are in the garden.
Helen, Mike and Tim are helping parents in the garden. Helen is watering flowers and Mike is feeding Ben the dog. Tim is catching pests.
Body
…
…
…
合理想象,丰富细节
Let’s imagine
…
Why
Who What Where
Mum is …(doing) in the kitchen.
Dad is …(doing) … in the …
…
合理想象,丰富细节
Let’s learn
Beginning
It’s Sunday morning. The Brown family are in the garden.
Helen, Mike and Tim are helping parents in the garden. Helen is watering flowers and Mike is feeding Ben the dog. Tim is catching pests. Mum is … Dad is …
Body
…
…
…
…
Let’s learn
Beginning
It’s Sunday morning. The Brown family are in the garden.
Helen, Mike and Tim are helping parents in the garden. Helen is watering flowers and Mike is feeding Ben the dog. Tim is catching pests. Mum is … Dad is …
Body
…
…
…
…
Ending
How
Title
They are happy.
/They are having fun.
/Helping
parents is busy but happy.
/What a lovely family!
A happy Sunday
happy
fun
/Fun to help
Helping
parents
/Helping…
/…
结尾点题,抒发情感
Body
Beginning
Ending
Title
Try to write.
结尾点题,抒发情感
Tip:记得运用现在进行时正确书写哦!
It’s Sunday morning.
合理想象,丰富细节
创设疑问,丰富句式
When we were little,
our parents helped us to eat.
When we were little,
our parents helped us put on clothes.
When we were little,
our parents helped us to walk.
When we were little,
our parents helped us to read.
When we are ill,
our parents help us to get better.
Our parents help us a lot.
Our parents help us a lot.
What can we do for our parents
Homework
1. Help your parents do some housework.
(帮助父母做力所能及的家务劳动。)
2. Continue to write about the composition.
(课后继续把看图作文写完。)
3. Revise the composition by yourselves.
(自己修改作文。)
2.调换顺序
1.同类合并
3.加关联词
4.巧设疑问
Thank you!