Unit 6 Ancient stories Writing 课件(共41张PPT)

(共41张PPT)
Unit 6 Ancient Stories
Writing
Learning goals
1. 学会利用story mountain梳理故事情节；
2. 学会使用正确的时态、人称、结构写一个故事，并利用细节描写、连词等润色所写故事。
Revision
Who won the war, the Greeks or the Trojans
The Greeks.
How did the Greeks beat the Trojans
They used a trick!
Revision
Put the pictures into correct order.
exposition（起因）
Story mountain
rising action（发展）
climax
（高潮）
falling action（回落）
resolution（结果）
beginning
middle
ending
Put the pictures into correct order.
Revision
Put the pictures into correct order.
exposition（起因）
Story mountain
rising action（发展）
climax
（高潮）
falling action（回落）
Resolution（结果）
beginning
middle
ending
Put the pictures into correct order.
After the Trojan War, one of the soldiers inside the wooden horse told his story to his family.
(Textbook Page92)
What person should be used
one’s own stories
others’ stories
I/we
he/she/they
the first person
the third person
What tense is used in the story
the simple past tense
We tried to capture Troy for ten years, but did not succeed. Then we thought of a trick.
We built a huge wooden horse and_____________________ (leave/outside/main gates). During the night, our army disappeared, but_________________________ (not go/far away). In the morning, the Trojans ___________________(see/horse). I was inside the horse with another five soldiers, but the Trojans did not know.
The Trojans opened the gates and _____________________ (pull/horse/into/city). That night, they celebrated and ______________ (make jokes/us). Then they _________________________________ (lock/gates/go to sleep).
When they were asleep, we __________________________ (climb/horse).
We _____________________ (open/main gates)and____________________ (our army/enter/city).
Then we went to the captain’s room. We ____________ (catch).
left it outside the main gates
they didn’t go far away
Complete the story with the words in brackets and other words if necessary.
leave outside the main gates
not go far away
we leave a huge wooden horse outside the main gates
it
left
they
didn’t go
We tried to capture Troy for ten years, but did not succeed. Then we thought of a trick.
We built a huge wooden horse and_____________________ (leave/outside/main gates). During the night, our army disappeared, but_________________________ (not go/far away). In the morning, the Trojans ___________________(see/horse). I was inside the horse with another five soldiers, but the Trojans did not know.
The Trojans opened the gates and _____________________ (pull/horse/into/city). That night, they celebrated and ______________ (make jokes/us). Then they _________________________________ (lock/gates/go to sleep).
When they were asleep, we __________________________ (climb/horse).
We _____________________ (open/main gates)and____________________ (our army/enter/city).
Then we went to the captain’s room. We ____________ (catch).
left it outside the main gates
they didn’t go far away
saw the horse
pulled the horse into the city
made jokes about us
locked all the gates and went to sleep
climbed out of the horse
opened the main gates
our army entered the city
caught him
Complete the story with the words in brackets and other words if necessary.
Telling stories
person
I/we (one’s own stories)
she/he/they (others' stories)
tense
the simple past tense
We tried to capture Troy for ten years, but did not succeed. Then we thought of a trick.
We built a huge wooden horse and left it outside the main gate. During the night, our army disappeared, but they didn’t go far away. In the morning, the Trojans saw the horse. I was inside the horse with another five soldiers, but the Trojans did not know.
The Trojans opened the gates and pulled the horse into the city. That night, they celebrated and made jokes about us. Then they locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When they were asleep, we climbed out of the horse. We opened the main gates and our army entered the city.
Then we went to the captain’s room. We caught him.
Story of the Trojan Horse.
Years later, the captain told his son what happened that night.
What person should be used
the first person
What tense should be used
the simple past tense
I/We
did
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
pulled ... into ...
was/were full of
locked
climbed out of
celebrated
went to sleep
entered the city
the simple past tense
a big mistake
exposition（起因）
Story mountain
rising action（发展）
climax
（高潮）
falling action（回落）
Resolution（结果）
Match the verbs with the proper pictures.
pulled ... into ...
was/were full of
locked
celebrated
went to sleep
entered the city
climbed out of
a big mistake
Make sentences
was/were full of
The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
pulled ... into ...
a big mistake
The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
Make sentences
celebrated
The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square.
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
Make sentences
locked
climbed out of
went to sleep
The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square.
We locked all the gates and went to sleep. The Greek soldiers climbed out of the horse.
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
Make sentences
The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square.
We locked all the gates and went to sleep. The Greek soldiers climbed out of the horse.
entered the city
The Greek army entered the city.
The Greeks won the war.
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.
Make sentences
The Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates.The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake. That night we celebrated in the main square. We locked all the gates and went to sleep. The Greek soldiers climbed out of the horse. The Greek army entered the city.
The Greeks won the war!
Is the story attractive
Polish the story
The Greek soldier’s version
We tried to capture Troy for ten years, but did not succeed. Then we thought of a trick.
We built a huge wooden horse and left it outside the main gate. During the night, our army disappeared, but they didn’t go far away. In the morning, the Trojans saw the horse. I was inside the horse with another five soldiers, but the Trojans did not know.
The Trojans opened the gates and pulled the horse into the city. That night, they celebrated and made jokes about us. Then they locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When they were asleep, we climbed out of the horse. We opened the main gates and our army entered the city.
Then we went to the captain’s room. We caught him.
Textbook P83
Textbook P92
What makes a story attractive
Polish the story
Story
mountain
Tense
Person
Linking words
by midnight,
then, when ...
Details
descriptions(描述):
a secret door ...
speeches:
“I haven’t laughed like this since my childhood”
feelings:
happy...
actions:
They quietly climbed out of the horse one by one.
We were on a war for ten years. One early morning, the Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates. The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We thought we had won the war. So, we pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square. We sang and danced around the fire. We even made jokes about the Greeks. A soldier said, “It’s the happiest day in my life.” By midnight, We locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When the square was empty, the Greek soldiers quietly climbed out of the horse. Nobody noticed that! The Greek soldiers opened the main gates and let the Greek army enter the city. We were captured when we were awake.
Finally, the Greeks won the war! We lost everything. I will never trust my enemy any more.
Check the story
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
exposition
rising action
climax
falling action
resolution
We were on a war for ten years. One early morning, the Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates. The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We thought we had won the war. So, we pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square. We sang and danced around the fire. We even made jokes about the Greeks. A soldier said, “It’s the happiest day in my life.” By midnight, We locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When the square was empty, the Greek soldiers quietly climbed out of the horse. Nobody noticed that! The Greek soldiers opened the main gates and let the Greek army enter the city. We were captured when we were awake.
Finally, the Greeks won the war! We lost everything. I will never trust my enemy any more.
Check the story
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
the first
person
We were on a war for ten years. One early morning, the Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates. The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We thought we had won the war. So, we pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square. We sang and danced around the fire. We even made jokes about the Greeks. A soldier said, “It’s the happiest day in my life.” By midnight, We locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When the square was empty, the Greek soldiers quietly climbed out of the horse. Nobody noticed that! The Greek soldiers opened the main gates and let the Greek army enter the city. We were captured when we were awake.
Finally, the Greeks won the war! We lost everything. I will never trust my enemy any more.
Check the story
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
the simple past tense
We were on a war for ten years. One early morning, the Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates. The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We thought we had won the war. So, we pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square. We sang and danced around the fire. We even made jokes about the Greeks. A soldier said, “It’s the happiest day in my life.” By midnight, We locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When the square was empty, the Greek soldiers quietly climbed out of the horse. Nobody noticed that! The Greek soldiers opened the main gates and let the Greek army enter the city. We were captured when we were awake.
Finally, the Greeks won the war! We lost everything. I will never trust my enemy any more.
Check the story
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
We were on a war for ten years. One early morning, the Greeks left a huge wooden horse outside our main gates. The horse was full of Greek soldiers!
We thought we had won the war. So, we pulled it into the city. But it was a big mistake.
That night we celebrated in the main square. We sang and danced around the fire. We even made jokes about the Greeks. A soldier said, “It’s the happiest day in my life.” By midnight, We locked all the gates and went to sleep.
When the square was empty, the Greek soldiers quietly climbed out of the horse. Nobody noticed that! The Greek soldiers opened the main gates and let the Greek army enter the city. We were captured when we were awake.
Finally, the Greeks won the war! We lost everything. I will never trust my enemy any more.
Check the story
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
descriptions
feelings
speech
actions
how to write a story
Story
mountain
Tense
Person
Linking words
Details
You can be a good story writer!
Have a try
a brave man
a terrible dragon
A long time ago, a dragon captured a castle and hurt a lot of people there.
the third person
the simple past tense
person
tense
Have a try
Write a story
find a sword
fight against
kill
put on
go back
A long time ago, a dragon captured a castle and hurt a lot of people there.
save
Write a story
find a sword
fight against
kill
put on
go back
A long time ago, a dragon captured a castle and hurt a lot of people there.
save
saved
found a sword
fought against
killed
put on
went back
the simple past tense
Write a story
find a sword
kill
get
A long time ago, a dragon captured a castle and hurt a lot of people there.
save
saved
found a sword
fought against
killed
linking words:
after that,
then, finally,
when ... , ...
descriptions,
actions,
speeches,
feelings...
happy
He shouted, “I beat the dragon!”
powerful,
breathe fire
the sharpest sword
stepped onto the dragon
worried
put on
go back
put on
went back
A long time ago, a dragon captured a castle and hurt a lot of people. A brave young man was worried about the people and decided to save them.
Before he started his journey, he needed a sword. After searching for a long time, he found the sharpest sword in the world from a village. The young man went to the castle alone.
He fought against the dragon. The dragon was powerful and it could even breathe fire. Both of them got hurt. However, the young man successfully killed the dragon and stepped onto it.
From where the dragon lived, the young man got a golden crown and put it on. He shouted, “I beat the dragon!”
Finally, the young man went back to the castle singing happily. He became the king of the castle.
Write a story
Tom’s version:
Checklist:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
Some more versions...
a bad and
greedy(贪婪的) man
a faithful dragon
A long time ago, a dragon guarded a castle and protected the people there.
Useful skills
+ Creativity
= Attractive stories!
Summary
writing a good story:
story mountain
person
tense
linking words
details
1.阅读课本第93页More practice的内容，尝试从不同人的角度来讲述这个故事；
2.利用今天所讲的方法创作一个年轻人和龙之间的故事，并分享给你的家人和朋友。
Homework
Thank you