Module 2　My home town and my country 写作训练（含答案）

模块主题写作二
本模块以“家乡”为话题,主要围绕地理位置、人口、地方名胜、地标建筑等内容展开,通过使用形容词的比较级进行各类比较。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1. 能用英文简单描写家乡的特色以及近几年的变化发展情况;
2. 能恰当运用逻辑词,使文章更具条理性;
3. 能合理运用时态和形容词的比较级形式,为文章增色。
典型示例
请以“My home town”为题,根据以下提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示:1. 家乡的环境等基本情况;
2. 家乡的人们及其主要活动;
3. 对家乡简要评价。
要求:1. 内容应包括以上所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言通顺、意思连贯、表达准确。
技巧指导
常用短语
1. 有……人口 　　　　　　　
2. 在……的东/南/北/西部 　　　　　　　
3. 因……而有名　　　　　　　
4. 在春天/秋天　　　　　　　
5. 数百万的 　　　　　　　
6. 相当好 　　　　　　　
常用句型
1. My home town is in…It is…
2. It has a population of…/The population of it is…
3. There are lots of things to do and to see in my home town.
4. People in my home town are…
5. It has a history of…
美文欣赏
My home town
My home town is a small village not far from the Yangtze River. It lies in the east of Jiangsu Province. A road runs through it. You can see some nice buildings behind the green trees along both sides of the road.
The weather here changes in different seasons. It’s warm in spring and hot in summer. It’s cool in autumn and a little cold in winter. There are some hills and two rivers in my home town.
There are about two thousand people in my village. All of them are very friendly. In busy seasons, most of them do farm work in the fields or work in the nearby factories. My home town is famous for its fruits and fish. When summer comes, many businessmen drive here to buy them.
My home town is becoming more and more beautiful. I love my home town very much. Welcome to my home town.
假设你是胡蕊,家乡在广西南宁,请以“My home town”为题,根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍一下你的家乡,可适当发挥。
提示:
1. 南宁位于中国的南部,是广西壮族自治区的省会和最大的城市;
2. 南宁历史悠久,四季常青,满城皆绿,被称为“绿城”,以花卉闻名于世;
3. 冬天不冷,夏天也不是我国最热的地方;
4. 南宁的人们很友好。
要求:语言流畅、意思连贯、表达准确、逻辑清晰。
My home town



答案
素材积累
[常用短语]
1. have a population of　
2. in the east/south/north/west of　
3. be famous for　
4. in spring/autumn　
5. millions of　
6. pretty good
小试身手
One possible version:
My home town
Hello, my name is Hu Rui and I’m from Nanning. Nanning is in the south of China. It is the capital of Guangxi and it’s bigger than any other city in Guangxi. It is a beautiful city with a long history.
Because there are green trees around the city all the year round, it is called “the Green City”. It is not very cold in winter and it’s not the hottest city in summer in our country. It’s famous for the flowers all over the world. The people in Nanning are very friendly and warm-hearted. Every year lots of people from different countries come to my home town to travel.
My home town is becoming more and more beautiful. I love it a lot. Welcome to my home town!