外研版英语八年级上册：Module 4 Planes, ships and trains .　写作训练（含答案））

模块语法聚焦四
本模块的写作围绕“旅游和交通”这一话题展开,旨在让学生学会用形容词、副词的最高级形式谈论各种出行方式的优缺点;学会根据自己的爱好和实际情况选择合适的交通方式,恰当安排自己的旅行行程;学会谈论交通方式与环境保护的关系,倡导绿色出行。
典型示例
现如今人们的出行方式有很多,交通工具也多种多样,如自行车、小汽车、火车、飞机等。请你写一篇80词左右的短文,分别从花费、速度和环保等方面对各种出行方式进行比较。
技巧指导
常用短语
1.乘飞机/火车/公交车/出租车/轮船
　　　　　　　
2.乘地铁 　　　　　　　
3.旅途愉快 　　　　　　　
4.和……一样 　　　　　　　
5.旅行的最佳方式 　　　　　　　
常用句型
1.There are a lot of ways to travel from…to…
2.The most expensive way to travel is by…, but it’s the fastest.
3.Going by…is a good choice. It’s the most comfortable.
美文欣赏
Nowadays there are many different kinds of ways to travel, such as by bike, by train, by car and by plane.
The fastest way of travelling is by plane. But it’s the most expensive way to travel and the airport is far from the city centre. Travelling by train is slower than by plane, but we can enjoy the beautiful scenery during the travel. Travelling by car is convenient because the drivers can make their own timetables, and they can stop anywhere they want. But the car is expensive and it can cause pollution. There are usually too many cars on the road and it’s not safe sometimes. Riding bikes is tiring and the slowest, but it’s the cheapest way. It can make us healthy and it is good for the environment.
In order to protect our environment, ride bikes as much as possible when you go out.
假设你是魏华,十一假期到来了,你的朋友托尼一家人打算从深圳来你的城市青岛度假。请你根据以下提示要点,给托尼写一封80词左右的电子邮件,谈谈来你家乡的多种交通方式和各自的优缺点,并给出你的建议。
提示:1.乘飞机是最昂贵的交通方式,但也是最快的方式;
2.乘火车是一个很好的选择,它是最舒服的;
3.乘长途客车比乘火车便宜得多,但是会花费更多的时间;
4.提前很长时间买好票,通常会便宜很多。
答案
素材积累
[常用短语]
1.by plane/train/bus/taxi/ship　
2.by underground/take the underground　
3.have a great trip　4.the same as　
5.the best way to travel
小试身手
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
I m glad to hear that your family are going to visit my home town, Qingdao. Welcome! There are lots of ways to travel from Shenzhen to Qingdao. Here is some advice for you.
First, the most expensive way to travel is by plane, and you may have to wait for hours at the airport because of the bad weather. But it s the fastest way. Next, a journey by train is cheaper than by plane. It is more relaxing than by coach, but a lot more expensive. Travelling by coach is much cheaper than by train, but it takes more time during the journey. So I think going by train is a good choice. It s the most comfortable. Then buy your tickets a long time before you travel. It s usually much cheaper. Finally, you can drive your own car. It s the most convenient, but the traffic is heavy.
I m looking forward to seeing you. If you come, I will show you around.
Yours,
Wei Hua