外研版英语八年级上册：Module 6 Animals in danger.写作训练（含答案）

模块主题写作六
本模块以“濒危动物”为话题,写作任务主要是根据所给材料描述某种濒危动物,以及它们濒危的原因,并指出我们应该采取什么措施来保护它们。在写作时注意运用本模块学习的动词不定式作目的状语以及宾语补足语的语法点。
典型示例
请根据下列内容提示,以“Saving tigers”为题,为某中学英文报《习作园地》专栏写一篇80词左右的征文。
内容提示:
1.老虎是濒危动物之一;
2.现在世界上仅存大约4000只野生老虎,且数量日益减少;
3.老虎处境危险的原因;
4.保护老虎的建议。
技巧指导
常用短语
1.世界各地 　　　　　　　
2.自然公园 　　　　　　　
3.……的数量 　　　　　　　
4.夺去;拿走 　　　　　　　
5.砍伐树木 　　　　　　　
6.处于危险中 　　　　　　　
常用句型
1.We should protect…better.
2.People kill too many of them for…, so their number is becoming smaller and smaller.
3.People should stop killing…
4.In order to protect…in danger, we should…
美文欣赏
Saving tigers
The tiger is one of the animals in danger. Now there are only about 4,000 tigers in the world. And the number is becoming smaller and smaller. Why Because villages and farms are growing bigger and bigger and are taking away their land and forests. As a result, they have no place to live. When people cut down trees, tigers have no place to look for food. Some people even kill tigers for their meat and fur. We could not live without animals around us. So protecting them is very important. In order to protect tigers, we must build more nature reserves. And we must stop people from killing tigers and cutting down trees.
猎豹(cheetah)是世界上濒危动物之一,请根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示:
1.猎豹是陆地上跑得最快的动物;全身茸毛(fur)呈棕黄色,主要居住在非洲草原(grassland)上;
2.猎豹以斑马(zebra)、山羊(goat)和其他动物为食;
3.由于食物的减少,居住区的缩小以及人为猎杀,猎豹濒临灭绝;
4.保护措施:建造自然公园、停止售卖猎豹皮毛等。
答案
素材积累
[常用短语]
1.around the world/all over the world　
2.nature parks　
3.the number of
4.take away　
5.cut down trees　
6.in danger
小试身手
One possible version:
Cheetahs run the fastest of all the animals on land. They have brown and yellow fur and mainly live on the African grassland. They feed on zebras, goats and other animals.
These days, the number of cheetahs is getting smaller and smaller because they don’t have enough food to eat or enough room to live in. Besides, people kill them for their fur. Now the cheetah is an animal in danger.
So what can we do to protect them First, it’s a good idea to build more nature parks for them. Second, we should stop cutting down trees and killing other animals so that they can have enough room to live in and enough food to eat. Finally, we should stop selling their fur.