Module 8 Accidents. 同步课时写作训练 （含答案）

模块主题写作八
本模块以“事故”为话题,写作任务主要是写一篇意外事故的新闻报道。写此类短文时,应该首先介绍一下事故发生的时间、地点;其次要对事故的过程进行简单描述;最后根据事故引起的严重后果,提醒人们要注意自身安全、遵守交通规则等。在写作时注意运用本模块学习的过去进行时来生动描述事故的过程。
典型示例
下面是110热线记录的一份交通事故报告表,英语课上老师请同学们根据表格中提供的信息,用第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文,并简单谈论一下自己的看法和认识。80词左右。
事故 A motorbike hit a car. The motorbike was broken.
时间和日期 6:30 pm, October 18th
地点 Cambridge Road
原因 It was rainy.
受害者 Jim(the driver of the car): nothing serious, but felt afraid; Nick(the driver of the motorbike): his right arm was badly hurt
救援行动 The police arrived at 6:35 pm; took the injured driver to the hospital nearby at 6:50 pm.
技巧指导
常用短语
1.正如我们所知 　　　　　　　
2.……的司机 　　　　　　　
3.五分钟之后　　　　　　　
4.带某人去医院 　　　　　　　
5.遵守交通规则 　　　　　　　
6.注意…… 　　　　　　　
常用句型
1.There was an accident on…at…
2.That’s because…
3.We should pay attention to…, especially on…
4.Be careful when…
美文欣赏
There was an accident on Cambridge Road at 6:30 pm on October 18th.
A motorbike hit a car and the motorbike was broken. That’s because it was a rainy day and both of the drivers were driving too fast. Jim was the driver of the car and Nick was the driver of the motorbike. Nick’s right arm was badly hurt but there was nothing serious with Jim. When Jim saw injured Nick, he was afraid. He called the police at once. Five minutes later, the police arrived and took Nick to the hospital nearby at 6:50 pm.
As a student, we should follow the traffic rules. We should pay attention to the traffic around us, especially on a rainy or foggy day. Be careful when we are walking or riding a bike on the road.
上周三下午在马路的拐角处发生了一起交通事故,请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文,描述一下这起事故,并简单谈一下你对这起事故的看法和认识。
提示:
1.经过:三个孩子放学回家,在马路拐角处看见一辆卡车(truck)经过,车速太快,不幸的是卡车撞到了一位骑自行车的中年男士,他流了很多血(blood);
2.结果:孩子们有的打110,有的打120,有的照顾伤者,后来他们向警察讲述了事故的经过,救护车(ambulance)把伤者(wounded)送往了医院。
　　要求:语言流畅、表达准确、逻辑清晰,合理发挥,不得逐字翻译。
答案
素材积累
[常用短语]
1.as we know
2.the driver of…
3.five minutes later　
4.take sb. to the hospital　
5.follow the traffic rules
6.pay attention to…　
小试身手
One possible version:
Last Wednesday afternoon, three students were on their way back home from school. Suddenly they saw a truck coming round the corner of the road at high speed. At the same time, a middle-aged man was riding a bike on the road. Unluckily, the truck hit the man. He fell off his bike and lay on the ground. He lost lots of blood.
One of the students called 110, another called 120, and the third one took care of the wounded man. Soon the policemen came and the students told about what they saw and an ambulance took the wounded man to the hospital soon.
I think safety is very important. We must try our best to keep safe.