Unit 4 Don't eat in class.写作课 课件(共20张PPT)

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Don’t eat in class.
Unit 4 写作课
初中英语人教版 七年级下
学习目标
1. 通过阅读和读后写作，能够掌握关于写“家规或校规”的写作策略。
2. 通过四格法，能够布局谋篇，运用写作策略构思，起草作文。
3. 通过课堂体验和个人经历，懂得“无规矩，不成方圆”的道理，养成遵纪守法的好习惯。
Pre-writing
part 1
Let’s brainstorm.
Let’s review (复习) the rules. If you know, just stand up and say it.
Don’t …
You can’t…
You have to…
You must…
You mustn’t…
Let’s look and say.
What are the rules in your family
Let's read.
Do you have the school and family rules you don’t feel good about
Yes. I want to write a letter to Dr. Know.
Let's think.
OK. First, let's think what aspects we want to tell.
I think ...............
Let’s think.
rules
1
2
3
4
family rules
school rules
Let's brainstorm.
do my homework
.......
family rules
watch TV
hang out
wash dishes
写作策略：使用气泡图构思
I can't...
I must...
I have to...
My mom says, “Don't....”
Work in two and share your ideas.
Let's brainstorm.
arrive late
school rules
run in the hallways
fight
listen to music
I can't...
I must...
I have to...
My teacher says, “Don't....”
Work in two and share your ideas.
Let’s think and order.
rules
1
2
3
4
family rules
school rules
feelings
ask for help
ask for help
While-writing
part 2
Let’s draft.
What’s our topic
Who do we write to
School and family rules.
Dr. Know.
Let’s draft.
rules
1
2
3
4
family rules
school rules
feelings
ask for help
ask for help
Write the topic or key sentences for four squares.
Dear, Dr. Know,
Can you help me There are many rules in my home.
Dr. Know（称呼）
Lily 1(落款)
what 1
what 2
I must ... .
I can’t ... .
I have to ... .
I think it's better to...
I must ... .
I can’t ... .
I have to ... .
I like....
I am so tired and unhappy.
What should I do I hope you can give me some advice.
Lily
Post-writing
part 3
Let’s edit.
Dear Dr. Know,
____ you help me I’m not happy because there are too many rules at home. Every morning, I ______ ______ get up at six o’clock. At school, I ____ wear a school uniform, and I ______ keep my hair short. After school, I ____ play with my friends or watch TV because I _____ do my homework. I ____ relax on weekends either because I _______ learn to play the piano. I never have fun, what ___ I do
Zhao Pei
Can
have to
have to
must
must/
can’t
must
can’t
have to
can
Complete Zhao Pei’s letter to Dr. Know using have to/must, can/can’t.
3a
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Let’s proofread.
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
Use sentences like
I can’t...
I must...
I have to...
Self-check and peer-check.
check
polish
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。
Let’s evaluate.
中考作文评分标准
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。
第五档（0-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
Let’s evaluate.
Homework.
1. Polish your writing according to your peers’ and teacher’s advice.
2. Draw a mind map to review Unit 4.
3. Think and write: how to help Mark about his school and family rules.