牛津版（深圳·广州）初中英语七年级下册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达

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牛津版（深圳·广州）初中英语七年级下册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员 理想职业 原因
Mary 时装设计师（fashion designer） 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画
Kate 园艺工（gardener） 喜爱植物，想让城市更美
Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物
你 …… ……
Recently we did a survey in our class in
order to learn about students' dream jobs.
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in
the future.
2．同学们有没有看《爸爸去哪儿》呢？里面可爱的小朋友都给我们留下了深刻的印象，特别是“微笑天使”陈胤捷成为大家喜爱的小朋友。
请根据下面的表格提示，用英语介绍一下“小甜椒”陈胤捷。
提示：
姓名 陈胤捷 英文名字：Jasper
出生日期 2013年7月1日
外貌 小眼睛，大耳朵，短头发
其他 爱笑，聪明，有趣并且乐于助人，会照顾其他小朋友
要求：1）60词左右；
2）语言表达准确，语义连贯，可适当发挥。
3．下面是草莓酱（strawberry jam）的做法，请根据下列提示写一篇不少于60词的短文。
提示：1）买草莓，最好是自己刚摘的新鲜草莓；2）把草莓洗干净；3）在草莓里放糖；4）加热大约半小时。
4．假设你叫李燕，请根据下面所提供的信息，以"My hobby"为题写一篇关于爱好的短文。
提示：⑴姓名：李燕；
⑵爱好：绘画；
⑶三年前画得不太好，现在比以前好多了；
⑷同学们说如果坚持下去将来会画得更好，想当一名画家。
要求：语法正确，书写工整，60词以上，可以适当发挥。
My hobby
5．请以"怎样节约能源"为主题，谈谈你的看法，并把你的经验介绍给同学。
提示：⒈离开时将所有的电器关闭；
⒉夏天和冬天使用空调分别调高或调低几度；
⒊号召大家一起努力节约能源，保护好环境。
要求：可适当发挥；60词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：electrical appliances，air conditioner，degree, natural environment
How to save energy
Dear friends, we can't imagine what life
will be like without electricity today. But how to save energy is a problem. We
can do like these: …
6．请你根据以下提示，以"Our English teacher"为题，用诗的形式写一篇文章。
提示：⑴王老师是名英语老师；
⑵他很早起床，工作很勤奋；
⑶他的英语课很有趣；
⑷对我们很有耐心，总是面带微笑地回答我们的问题。
参考词汇：get up, hard-working, come
into, take troubles away
Our English teacher
7．请根据下列提示写一篇70词左右的关于安全用电的短文。
提示：1）我们手湿时，不能触碰电器；
2）电器不能工作太长时间，我们应该让它们休息一下；
3）不能让小孩触碰电器，比如微波炉等；
4）当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先切断电源。
8．请根据下面的内容提示, 写一篇关于兴趣爱好的文章, 70词左右, 可以适当发挥。
提示：1. 介绍自己, 自己虽然忙于学习, 但是仍然有自己的兴趣爱好, 如弹钢琴、上网等。2. 自己最大的兴趣就是读书, 读书不仅能消磨时间, 而且能提高阅读能力, 更主要的是能够了解伟人。3. 读书影响了自己。
9．请根据以下内容提示，以"Save water"为题，写一篇关于节约用水的英语短文，可适当发挥。词数70左右。
内容提示
1. 水对人类很重要，生活中我们需要水； 2. 节约用水，从小事做起； 3. 用洗衣服的水清洁地板； 4. 记得关掉水龙头； 5. (请你补充)
Save water
10．假如你是班长, 老师让你设计一份班规。
要点包括：1. 不乱扔垃圾, 不乱涂乱画, 保持教室整洁干净。2. 不在教室内吃喝。3. 不追逐打闹。4. 爱护公物, 损坏赔偿。可适当补充其他规定, 字数在60一80。
参考词汇：
班规：class rule垃圾：rubbish追逐打闹：horseplay 嬉闹：public property公物：pay for赔偿
答案解析部分
1．【答案】 Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' dream jobs.
Mary wants to be a fashion designer. Because she likes beautiful clothes. She is good at drawing as well. Kate hopes to be a gardener. She is keen on plants. She wants to make her city more beautiful. Tom likes cooking healthy and delicious food for others, so he hopes to be a cook in the future. My dream is to be a teacher. I love children very much.
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿来介绍学生的理想职业。通过分析表格内容可知首先介绍做了调查；然后具体介绍学生梦想职业及其原因；最后总结。时态是一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：in order to do；learn about；want to do；be good at；as well；hope to do；be keen on；make...+形容词；like doing；realize one's dream(s)等。状语从句、比较级和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Because she likes beautiful clothes.She wants to make her city more beautiful. Tom likes cooking healthy and delicious food for others, so he hopes to be a cook in the future. I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.等。连词fand、because、so的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2．【答案】 Chen Yinjie is a lovely boy. His English name is Jasper. He was born on July 1st, 2013. He has small eyes and big ears with short hair. He always smiles. And his smiles can make people feel warm. His father is always strict with him, but he is never angry. He is also very smart and funny. He likes to help and take care of other kids. Do you want to make friends with him
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，介绍Chen Yinjie。这篇短文主要介绍她的出生日期、外貌、性格特征及品性等。写作时，时态要以一般现在时为主，介绍生日日期，要用一般过去时，动词用过去式。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，be born on；with short hair；make people feel warm；be strict with sb.；like to do sth.；take care of sb.等，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如and, but ,等，这样文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
3．【答案】 I like eating bread with strawberry jam but the strawberry jam is very expensive in the supermarket, so I often make it by myself at home. Do you want to learn how to make it First, buy fresh strawberries. You'd better pick them on the farm yourself. Second, take the strawberries home and wash them clean. Third, put some sugar in the strawberries. It can make the strawberry jam taste good. Finally, heat the strawberries with sugar for about half an hour. Now you can taste the delicious strawberry jam.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示作文，时态是一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称单数。注意运用形容词，如expensive、fresh、clean、good和delicious；同时恰当运用连词and，but和so等；表达准确，标点正确，词数符合要求。
【点评】作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如短语at home；had better；祈使句 Second, take the strawberries home and wash them clean. ；动名词作宾语和and并列句I like eating bread with strawberry jam but the strawberry jam is very expensive in the supermarket, so I often make it by myself at home. ；形容词做宾语补足语It can make the strawberry jam taste good. 等。连词and，but和so的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密。
4．【答案】My hobby
My name is Li Yah. My
hobby is drawing. I like drawing because it can make me very happy. I began
drawing three years ago. At that time I couldn't draw very well. With the
teacher's help, I can draw much better now. My classmates say that if I keep on
drawing, I will make progress.
I
want to be an artist when I grow up. My teacher and my parents are happy to see
my progress. I think drawing is the happiest thing to do in the world. I will
work hard and never give up.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍自己的爱好。根据所给提示主要介绍4条，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。整篇文章要以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。另外,在写作时句意要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯。
【点评】这是一篇比较不错的作文，从整体来说，把要求中的四个要点都写了出来，句意完整，没有语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯。能正确运用情态动词can来描述自己的爱好。比如With the teacher's help, I can draw much better now. 短文中还运用了很多的经典短语keep on doing sth；grow up；make progress等。复合句的正确运用也是本文的一大亮点，比如I like drawing because it can make me very happy. 再比如My classmates say that if I keep on drawing, I will make progress.
5．【答案】How to save
energy
Dear friends, we can't
imagine what life will be like without electricity today. But how to save
energy is a problem. We can do like these:
Turn off all the electrical appliances when
you leave the house. Turn your air conditioner a few degrees up in summer and a
few degrees down in winter. We can save more energy in this way. Let's work
together and use less electricity as possible as we can to save energy and
protect our natural environment.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这篇短文是叙述怎样进行能源节约。在书写时要根据题目要求，文章中要包含提纲中的全部内容。文章中可使用给出的词汇短语。句子时态用一般现在时。在书写时语句要通顺，语言要流畅，注意不要出现语法和拼写错误。
【点评】这篇短文作者用简单的文笔写出怎样使用空调可节约能源。文章使用了祈使句和主从复合句。例如Turn off all the electrical appliances when you leave the house. Let's do sth.和固定短语turn off; turn up; turn down; in summer, in winter, in this way; as possible as等。文章很通顺，上下文的逻辑关系很合理。
6．【答案】Our
English teacher
Our English teacher Mr Wang
Is a hard-working man.
He gets up early every day.
Our English teacher Mr Wang
Is a good and patient man.
He makes his classes interesting.
He always answers our questions
With a smile on his face.
He comes into our life
And
takes our troubles away.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是以 "Our English teacher"为题，用诗的形式写一篇文章。注意不要遗漏要点，用上所给的参考词汇。时态是一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数。诗先介绍了王老师平时怎么工作，再描述了王老师的性格，平时怎么与学生相处。
【点评】这是以 "Our English teacher"为题写的一首诗，诗中描写人的形容词hard-working， good and patient运用恰当；诗中用了make his classes interesting这一复合宾语和With a smile on his face这一with复合结构给整首诗增色不少。
7．【答案】 When we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them. First, if our hands are wet, we mustn't touch them. Second, the electrical appliances can't work for too long and we should make them stop to have a rest. Third, we mustn't let children touch any of the electrical appliances, like microwaves. Finally, when we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must cut off the electricity first.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，全文要用一般现在时和一般将来时进行描述，重点突出如何安全用电。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】 本文运用说明文写作形式，文中适当运用连词First，second，third等连词，语音连贯，语言灵活，并运用if引导的条件状语从句， if our hands are wet, we mustn't touch them. 语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
8．【答案】I am a l3-year-old student. Though I am busy with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano and surfing the Internet. My favorite hobby is reading. Reading books can not only kill the time, but also help improve my reading ability. When I read books, I can learn a lot about great people. For example, reading Shakespeare's works can make me know what Hamlet looks like. When reading Lu Xun, I seem to come back to the old time of China. Reading really affects my life.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】在所给提示的基础上适当的增加自己的一些看法，可以使文章更通畅，文章运用到的相关短语有：be busy with（忙于……），play the piano（弹钢琴）；surf the Internet（上网）；My favorite hobby is……（最大的兴趣就是……）；not only……，but also……（不仅……，而且……），learn a lot about（了解……很多）；affect my life（影响了生活），写作时，注意句子之间的连贯性，可适当运用连词。
【点评】在平时的学习中，多积累好词好句，同时注意英语句子的结构。
9．【答案】 Save Water
Water is very important for us human beings. We need water in our life. However, the water on the Earth is not never used up. All of us should try our best to save water. For example, we can use the water that is used to wash clothes to clean the floor. Water the flowers and plants after washing vegetables. And never leave the tap running after use. There are many ways to save water. Try your best!
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类的说明文。写作时注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。可适当补充。首先说明水对人类的重要性，生活中可不开水；地球上的水不是用之不竭的；所以要节约用水。最后怎样才能做到生活中节约用水。以第一人称和一般现在时来写作。适当使用过渡词，使文章做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。use up用光，try one's best竭尽全力。 we can use the water that is used to wash clothes to clean the floor. 定语从句的使用。 There are many ways to save water. 不定式作定语；被动语态的使用。还运用了however，and 等使上下文衔接的更好。
10．【答案】Class rules
1 Don't talk in class.
2 Don't fight.
3 Don't be late for class.
4 Don't talk loudly at school.
5 Do not throw rubbish or paint anywhere. Please keep the classroom clean and tidy.
6 Do not drink or eat in the classroom.
7 Please care for the public property or you must pay for it
【知识点】其他类作文
【解析】【分析】班规的内容除了题目所提供的四点，还需要自己补充，比如不在课上说话；不打架；上课不迟到等等，从句子的表述看应该用祈使句，不要……统一用句型：Don't+动原；肯定的用句型：动词原形+其他。
【点评】考查祈使句的应用以及短语的掌握能力。
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牛津版（深圳·广州）初中英语七年级下册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员 理想职业 原因
Mary 时装设计师（fashion designer） 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画
Kate 园艺工（gardener） 喜爱植物，想让城市更美
Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物
你 …… ……
Recently we did a survey in our class in
order to learn about students' dream jobs.
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in
the future.
【答案】 Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students' dream jobs.
Mary wants to be a fashion designer. Because she likes beautiful clothes. She is good at drawing as well. Kate hopes to be a gardener. She is keen on plants. She wants to make her city more beautiful. Tom likes cooking healthy and delicious food for others, so he hopes to be a cook in the future. My dream is to be a teacher. I love children very much.
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿来介绍学生的理想职业。通过分析表格内容可知首先介绍做了调查；然后具体介绍学生梦想职业及其原因；最后总结。时态是一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：in order to do；learn about；want to do；be good at；as well；hope to do；be keen on；make...+形容词；like doing；realize one's dream(s)等。状语从句、比较级和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Because she likes beautiful clothes.She wants to make her city more beautiful. Tom likes cooking healthy and delicious food for others, so he hopes to be a cook in the future. I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.等。连词fand、because、so的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2．同学们有没有看《爸爸去哪儿》呢？里面可爱的小朋友都给我们留下了深刻的印象，特别是“微笑天使”陈胤捷成为大家喜爱的小朋友。
请根据下面的表格提示，用英语介绍一下“小甜椒”陈胤捷。
提示：
姓名 陈胤捷 英文名字：Jasper
出生日期 2013年7月1日
外貌 小眼睛，大耳朵，短头发
其他 爱笑，聪明，有趣并且乐于助人，会照顾其他小朋友
要求：1）60词左右；
2）语言表达准确，语义连贯，可适当发挥。
【答案】 Chen Yinjie is a lovely boy. His English name is Jasper. He was born on July 1st, 2013. He has small eyes and big ears with short hair. He always smiles. And his smiles can make people feel warm. His father is always strict with him, but he is never angry. He is also very smart and funny. He likes to help and take care of other kids. Do you want to make friends with him
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，介绍Chen Yinjie。这篇短文主要介绍她的出生日期、外貌、性格特征及品性等。写作时，时态要以一般现在时为主，介绍生日日期，要用一般过去时，动词用过去式。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，be born on；with short hair；make people feel warm；be strict with sb.；like to do sth.；take care of sb.等，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如and, but ,等，这样文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
3．下面是草莓酱（strawberry jam）的做法，请根据下列提示写一篇不少于60词的短文。
提示：1）买草莓，最好是自己刚摘的新鲜草莓；2）把草莓洗干净；3）在草莓里放糖；4）加热大约半小时。
【答案】 I like eating bread with strawberry jam but the strawberry jam is very expensive in the supermarket, so I often make it by myself at home. Do you want to learn how to make it First, buy fresh strawberries. You'd better pick them on the farm yourself. Second, take the strawberries home and wash them clean. Third, put some sugar in the strawberries. It can make the strawberry jam taste good. Finally, heat the strawberries with sugar for about half an hour. Now you can taste the delicious strawberry jam.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示作文，时态是一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称单数。注意运用形容词，如expensive、fresh、clean、good和delicious；同时恰当运用连词and，but和so等；表达准确，标点正确，词数符合要求。
【点评】作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如短语at home；had better；祈使句 Second, take the strawberries home and wash them clean. ；动名词作宾语和and并列句I like eating bread with strawberry jam but the strawberry jam is very expensive in the supermarket, so I often make it by myself at home. ；形容词做宾语补足语It can make the strawberry jam taste good. 等。连词and，but和so的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密。
4．假设你叫李燕，请根据下面所提供的信息，以"My hobby"为题写一篇关于爱好的短文。
提示：⑴姓名：李燕；
⑵爱好：绘画；
⑶三年前画得不太好，现在比以前好多了；
⑷同学们说如果坚持下去将来会画得更好，想当一名画家。
要求：语法正确，书写工整，60词以上，可以适当发挥。
My hobby
【答案】My hobby
My name is Li Yah. My
hobby is drawing. I like drawing because it can make me very happy. I began
drawing three years ago. At that time I couldn't draw very well. With the
teacher's help, I can draw much better now. My classmates say that if I keep on
drawing, I will make progress.
I
want to be an artist when I grow up. My teacher and my parents are happy to see
my progress. I think drawing is the happiest thing to do in the world. I will
work hard and never give up.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍自己的爱好。根据所给提示主要介绍4条，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。整篇文章要以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。另外,在写作时句意要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯。
【点评】这是一篇比较不错的作文，从整体来说，把要求中的四个要点都写了出来，句意完整，没有语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯。能正确运用情态动词can来描述自己的爱好。比如With the teacher's help, I can draw much better now. 短文中还运用了很多的经典短语keep on doing sth；grow up；make progress等。复合句的正确运用也是本文的一大亮点，比如I like drawing because it can make me very happy. 再比如My classmates say that if I keep on drawing, I will make progress.
5．请以"怎样节约能源"为主题，谈谈你的看法，并把你的经验介绍给同学。
提示：⒈离开时将所有的电器关闭；
⒉夏天和冬天使用空调分别调高或调低几度；
⒊号召大家一起努力节约能源，保护好环境。
要求：可适当发挥；60词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：electrical appliances，air conditioner，degree, natural environment
How to save energy
Dear friends, we can't imagine what life
will be like without electricity today. But how to save energy is a problem. We
can do like these: …
【答案】How to save
energy
Dear friends, we can't
imagine what life will be like without electricity today. But how to save
energy is a problem. We can do like these:
Turn off all the electrical appliances when
you leave the house. Turn your air conditioner a few degrees up in summer and a
few degrees down in winter. We can save more energy in this way. Let's work
together and use less electricity as possible as we can to save energy and
protect our natural environment.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这篇短文是叙述怎样进行能源节约。在书写时要根据题目要求，文章中要包含提纲中的全部内容。文章中可使用给出的词汇短语。句子时态用一般现在时。在书写时语句要通顺，语言要流畅，注意不要出现语法和拼写错误。
【点评】这篇短文作者用简单的文笔写出怎样使用空调可节约能源。文章使用了祈使句和主从复合句。例如Turn off all the electrical appliances when you leave the house. Let's do sth.和固定短语turn off; turn up; turn down; in summer, in winter, in this way; as possible as等。文章很通顺，上下文的逻辑关系很合理。
6．请你根据以下提示，以"Our English teacher"为题，用诗的形式写一篇文章。
提示：⑴王老师是名英语老师；
⑵他很早起床，工作很勤奋；
⑶他的英语课很有趣；
⑷对我们很有耐心，总是面带微笑地回答我们的问题。
参考词汇：get up, hard-working, come
into, take troubles away
Our English teacher
【答案】Our
English teacher
Our English teacher Mr Wang
Is a hard-working man.
He gets up early every day.
Our English teacher Mr Wang
Is a good and patient man.
He makes his classes interesting.
He always answers our questions
With a smile on his face.
He comes into our life
And
takes our troubles away.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是以 "Our English teacher"为题，用诗的形式写一篇文章。注意不要遗漏要点，用上所给的参考词汇。时态是一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数。诗先介绍了王老师平时怎么工作，再描述了王老师的性格，平时怎么与学生相处。
【点评】这是以 "Our English teacher"为题写的一首诗，诗中描写人的形容词hard-working， good and patient运用恰当；诗中用了make his classes interesting这一复合宾语和With a smile on his face这一with复合结构给整首诗增色不少。
7．请根据下列提示写一篇70词左右的关于安全用电的短文。
提示：1）我们手湿时，不能触碰电器；
2）电器不能工作太长时间，我们应该让它们休息一下；
3）不能让小孩触碰电器，比如微波炉等；
4）当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先切断电源。
【答案】 When we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them. First, if our hands are wet, we mustn't touch them. Second, the electrical appliances can't work for too long and we should make them stop to have a rest. Third, we mustn't let children touch any of the electrical appliances, like microwaves. Finally, when we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must cut off the electricity first.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，全文要用一般现在时和一般将来时进行描述，重点突出如何安全用电。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】 本文运用说明文写作形式，文中适当运用连词First，second，third等连词，语音连贯，语言灵活，并运用if引导的条件状语从句， if our hands are wet, we mustn't touch them. 语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
8．请根据下面的内容提示, 写一篇关于兴趣爱好的文章, 70词左右, 可以适当发挥。
提示：1. 介绍自己, 自己虽然忙于学习, 但是仍然有自己的兴趣爱好, 如弹钢琴、上网等。2. 自己最大的兴趣就是读书, 读书不仅能消磨时间, 而且能提高阅读能力, 更主要的是能够了解伟人。3. 读书影响了自己。
【答案】I am a l3-year-old student. Though I am busy with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano and surfing the Internet. My favorite hobby is reading. Reading books can not only kill the time, but also help improve my reading ability. When I read books, I can learn a lot about great people. For example, reading Shakespeare's works can make me know what Hamlet looks like. When reading Lu Xun, I seem to come back to the old time of China. Reading really affects my life.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】在所给提示的基础上适当的增加自己的一些看法，可以使文章更通畅，文章运用到的相关短语有：be busy with（忙于……），play the piano（弹钢琴）；surf the Internet（上网）；My favorite hobby is……（最大的兴趣就是……）；not only……，but also……（不仅……，而且……），learn a lot about（了解……很多）；affect my life（影响了生活），写作时，注意句子之间的连贯性，可适当运用连词。
【点评】在平时的学习中，多积累好词好句，同时注意英语句子的结构。
9．请根据以下内容提示，以"Save water"为题，写一篇关于节约用水的英语短文，可适当发挥。词数70左右。
内容提示
1. 水对人类很重要，生活中我们需要水； 2. 节约用水，从小事做起； 3. 用洗衣服的水清洁地板； 4. 记得关掉水龙头； 5. (请你补充)
Save water
【答案】 Save Water
Water is very important for us human beings. We need water in our life. However, the water on the Earth is not never used up. All of us should try our best to save water. For example, we can use the water that is used to wash clothes to clean the floor. Water the flowers and plants after washing vegetables. And never leave the tap running after use. There are many ways to save water. Try your best!
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类的说明文。写作时注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。可适当补充。首先说明水对人类的重要性，生活中可不开水；地球上的水不是用之不竭的；所以要节约用水。最后怎样才能做到生活中节约用水。以第一人称和一般现在时来写作。适当使用过渡词，使文章做到上下文联系紧密。符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。use up用光，try one's best竭尽全力。 we can use the water that is used to wash clothes to clean the floor. 定语从句的使用。 There are many ways to save water. 不定式作定语；被动语态的使用。还运用了however，and 等使上下文衔接的更好。
10．假如你是班长, 老师让你设计一份班规。
要点包括：1. 不乱扔垃圾, 不乱涂乱画, 保持教室整洁干净。2. 不在教室内吃喝。3. 不追逐打闹。4. 爱护公物, 损坏赔偿。可适当补充其他规定, 字数在60一80。
参考词汇：
班规：class rule垃圾：rubbish追逐打闹：horseplay 嬉闹：public property公物：pay for赔偿
【答案】Class rules
1 Don't talk in class.
2 Don't fight.
3 Don't be late for class.
4 Don't talk loudly at school.
5 Do not throw rubbish or paint anywhere. Please keep the classroom clean and tidy.
6 Do not drink or eat in the classroom.
7 Please care for the public property or you must pay for it
【知识点】其他类作文
【解析】【分析】班规的内容除了题目所提供的四点，还需要自己补充，比如不在课上说话；不打架；上课不迟到等等，从句子的表述看应该用祈使句，不要……统一用句型：Don't+动原；肯定的用句型：动词原形+其他。
【点评】考查祈使句的应用以及短语的掌握能力。
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