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中考书面表达专题之
描述我最喜爱的事物
(2021年北部湾经济区)校园处处都是美,校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
历年真题
最喜欢的地方
(2020年北部湾经济区)春去秋来,四季交替,你最喜欢什么季节?请根据以下提示,以"My favourite season"为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文.
写作要点:
1.你最喜欢的季节是什么?
2.它有哪些自然现象?
3.可以进行哪些体育、休闲活动?
4.你有哪些感受?
历年真题
最喜欢的季节
(2017年中考)在你所学的科目中,你最喜欢的科目是什么?现请你以"My Favourite Subject"为题,根据以下写作要点,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文.
写作要点:
(1)介绍你最喜欢的科目;
(2)你喜欢该科目的原因;
(3)谈谈你今后的学习打算.
历年真题
最喜欢的科目
一、审题
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
二、布局谋篇
Para 1
点明最喜欢的事物是什么?
Para 2
阐述喜欢的理由
Para 3
感受、计划、打算
理由一
理由二
理由…
Para 1
如何点明最喜欢的事物是什么?
基础表达
My favourite _____ is _____.
应用:
(2021年)My favourite place is our school library.
(2020年)My favourite season is spring.
(2017年)My favourite subject is English.
Para 1
如何点明最喜欢的事物是什么?
升级表达
Among all the _____, I like _____ best.
应用:
(2021年)Among all the places in my school, I like the library best.
(2020年)Among all the seasons, I like spring best.
(2017年)Among all the seasons, I like English best.
(2021年)Among all the places in my school, I think the library is the most beautiful place.
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
段落结构一:两点式结构
on the one hand…, on the other hand…
应用:2021年真题
阐述原因句式:The reason why _______ is that________
The reason why I like the library best is that, on the one hand, it has thousands of books in it and I can learn a lot from those books. And on the other hand, it is the quietest place in my school. I can have a relax here during my free time.
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
应用:2020年真题
The reason why I like spring best is that, on the one hand, I can go on a picnic in spring. And on the other hand, there are beautiful flowers and leaves everywhere during spring.
应用:2017年真题
The reason why I like English best is that, on the one hand, I can learn a lot about the outside world by learning English. And on the other hand, my English teacher is kind and friendly. With her help, I fall in love with English .
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
段落结构二:三点式结构
To begin with… ; What’s more…; Last but not least….
阐述原因句式:The reason why _______ is that________
应用:2020年真题
The reason why I like spring best is that, to begin with, I can go on a picnic in spring. What’s more, there are beautiful flowers and leaves everywhere during spring. Last but not least, I can go climbing with my friends.
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
应用:2017年真题
The reason why I like English best is that, to begin with, I can learn a lot about the outside world by learning English. What’s more, my English teacher is kind and friendly. With her help, I fall in love with English . Last but not least, English is useful and is widely used around the world.
Para 3
感受、计划、打算
计划、打算
plan to do ….
deicide to do…
make up one’s mind to do sth.
三、大纲
Para 1
Among all the _____, I like _____ best.
Para 2
The reason why _______ is that________
on the one hand…, on the other hand…
或者 To begin with… ; What’s more…; Last but not least….
Para 3
make up one’s mind to do sth.
plan to do ….
deicide to do…
四、成篇
2020年:My favourite season
Among all the _________, I like _________ best.
seasons
The reason why __________________ is that, to begin with,
___________________________________________________
_________(自然现象). What’s more, ___________________
_________________________________. (体育活动)Last but not least, ___________________________________________
__________________________________________________
_______________(休闲活动)
summer
I like summer best
there are beautiful flowers and leaves everywhere during
summer
I can go swimming
with my friends in hot summer days.
I like summer holiday. It’s best time to travel
with my friends and families and to learn something new
while travelling.
(感受)_________________________________________
Summer is a beautiful season and I love summer.
四、成篇
2017年:My favourite subject
Among all the _________, I like _________ best.
subjects
The reason why __________________ is that, to begin with,
__________________________________________________
(理由一). What’s more, ___________________
__________________________. (理由二)Last but not least, ___________________________________________
________________________(理由三)
English
I like English best
English is useful and it is widely used around the world.
I can learn a lot about the outside
world by learning English.
My English teacher is kind and friendly. With her help,
I fall in love with English.
(打算)_________________________________________
In a word,I love English and I will continue to learn it better. I make up my mind to be an English teacher like my English teacher..
四、成篇
2021年:The most beautiful place in my school
Among all the _________, I think _________________ is the most beautiful place.
places
(地理位置) _____________________________________.
_______________________________________________________
最美的理由(两点) The reason why ___________________
_______________ is that, on the one hand,___________________
_____________________________(理由一),on the other hand,
______________________________________________________
________________________________________________(理由二)
the school library
The library lies in the eastern part of our school.
It is between the teaching building and the playground.
I think it is the most
beautiful place
there are many trees
and beautiful flowers around it.
it is the most quietest place in my school. It houses thousands
of books and I can read here during my free time.
(感受)_________________________________________
The school library is so beautiful and I love it.
2022北京冬奥会进行时,不少运动选手备受欢迎,比如短道速滑的武大靖,任子威,“全民小儿子”李文龙,“天才少女”谷爱凌,“小栓子”苏翊鸣等等,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以 “My favorite Chinese athlete”为题,写短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物的基本信息
2. 你喜欢他/她的理由
3. 对你的影响和启示
实战演练
My favorite Chinese athlete
Among all the _________________________________________, I like ___________ best.
Chinese athletes in 2022 Winter Olympic Games
(人物简介) ____________________________________________.
_______________________________________________________
喜欢的理由(两点) The reason why __________________ is that, on the one hand,__________________________________________
____________________ On the other hand,______________________
__________________________________________________________
(影响和启示)_____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Eileen Gu
Eileen Gu is a 18-year-old talented skier, who won gold medal in the women’s freeski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games
I love her
she is just not only a talented girl, but also she
is a hard-working girl.
she always keeps smiling
when she faces difficulties and challenges.
From her story, I have learned that only through hard work can we achieve our dreams. I firmly believe that she will be better and I’ll try to follow her example.
Thank you !