模块主题写作四
话题分析
本模块以“Home alone”为话题,通过对课文内容的介绍,要求学生学会照顾自己,学会自立,学会感恩,感谢父母和帮助过自己的人,同时学会帮助他人。
常用表达
1.I can look after myself, although it won't be easy for me.
我可以照顾自己,虽然对我来说这并不容易。
2.I became so bored with their orders that I wished they would leave me alone.
我对他们的命令感到如此厌烦,以至于我希望他们别理我。
3.Although they loved me, I felt a bit unhappy with them.
尽管他们爱我,但是我对他们有点儿不满意。
典型例题
你还记得第一次独自在家的经历吗?根据提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍你独自在家的经历。
提示:1.在十二岁时,因父母出差独自在家两天;
2.第一天,早早起床;
3.第一天晚上,因为害怕打开了所有的灯;
4.为了第二天不迟到,设定了三个闹铃;
5.第二天下午,洗了衣服并做了晚饭。
要求:1.必须包含以上全部信息;
2.条理清楚,语意连贯,不要逐字翻译;
3.不少于80词。
技巧指导
1.本文要求讲述过去的经历,主要运用一般过去时。
2.在讲述经历时,应参考要点提示。
3.要点之间要有必要的连词,使文章层次清晰,并描写独自在家的感受。
遣词造句
1.我第一次独自在家的经历是难忘的。
①我的第一次经历________________
②翻译该句: _________________________________________________________
2.我的父母都去出差了。
①出差________________
②翻译该句: __________________________________________________________
美文欣赏
My first experience at home alone is unforgettable. At the age of twelve, my parents both went on business. I stayed at home and lived by myself for two days. On the first day, I got up early. In the evening, I felt a little afraid, so I turned on all the lights. The lights were on all night. I set three alarm clocks to wake me up at 6:00 am, 6:10 am and 6:15 am near my bed so that I wouldn't get up late. On the afternoon of the next day, I washed my clothes and cooked dinner. I really felt proud of myself and thought I had grown up.
假如你是David,你的父母因工作需要到伦敦出差,你不得不自己在家里照顾自己。请你以“Home Alone”为题,写一篇英语短文,讲述自己独自在家的经历吧!80词左右。
提示: 1.独自在家的一周有点孤独,想念父母;
2.独自在家的时间,按时起床、上学、吃饭、做作业;
3.通过网络学会了一些菜的做法。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥。
Home Alone
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答案
实例分析
【遣词造句】
1.①my first experience
②My first experience at home alone is unforgettable.
2.①on business
②My parents both went on business.
自我展示
One possible version:
Home Alone
I have been home alone for a week, and I miss my parents. Although I feel a little lonely these days, I take good care of myself. I can wake up on time, have breakfast and go to school. I do my homework as soon as I come back from school. I'm glad that I can make simple dishes because I have learned how to cook online!
I am OK at home alone so everybody doesn't worry about me. And I also learn a lot by myself.