模块主题写作六
话题分析
本模块以“Problems”为话题,介绍了青少年的生活烦恼,鼓励学生积极参与运用英语的实践活动,善于与别人交流看法,就一些问题发表自己的看法并给出合理的建议。
常用表达
1.I want you to get into the habit of doing your homework as soon as you come home from school.
我想让你养成一放学回家就做家庭作业的习惯。
2.If you do all these other things instead of your homework, you won't have time to study.
如果你做所有这些别的事情,而不是做作业,你将会没有时间学习。
典型例题
假如你是张华,你看到班里许多同学都有自己的手机,所以你也想拥有一部手机。可是你父母认为手机会对你的学习产生不好的影响,不允许你用手机。为此你很苦恼,不知道自己是否应该听父母的话。于是你给某英文报《为你解忧》栏目的编辑Peter写了一封信,希望得到他的帮助。
要求:1.语句通顺,结构合理,层次分明;
2.词数:80词左右。
技巧指导
1.本次的写作任务是给某英文报的《为你解忧》栏目写一封信,希望得到对方的帮助。应具体说明自己遇到的问题,以便让对方帮你想出解决问题的办法。
2.本次的写作内容主要是阐述清楚你所遇到的问题,其次阐述产生问题的原因。
3.写作时,要点和要点之间要用必要的连接词,使文章结构层次清晰。
遣词造句
1.他们经常使用手机查找信息,看最新的新闻并相互交流信息。
①用他们的手机查找信息________________
②最新的新闻________________
③翻译该句: ____________________________________________________________
2.他们认为如果我带手机去学校,我就无心学习。
翻译该句: _____________________________________________________________
美文欣赏
Dear Peter,
I'm writing to you because I have some problems. Almost all my classmates have their cell phones. They often use their cell phones to look for information, read the latest news and exchange messages. I want one like them, too. However, my parents don't agree with me. They think that I won't have a desire to learn if I take a cell phone to school. I am very sad about this and I don't think that having a cell phone would be bad for me.
Could you help me I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
2019·郴州改编在英语课上,老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格中提供的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,说出你的烦恼和愿望。
Worries Wishes
◇too strict, too much homework… ◇little time for outdoor activities… ◇hard to communicate with… … ◇moderate(适中的) homework… ◇more chances… ◇get on well with… …
要求:1.短文须包含表格中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
2.词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes.__________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
答案
实例分析
【遣词造句】
1.①use their cell phones to look for information
②the latest news
③They often use their cell phones to look for information, read the latest news and exchange messages.
2.They think that I won't have a desire to learn if I take a cell phone to school.
自我展示
One possible version:
Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. I am worried about my homework. I have too much homework to do every day. And I feel stressed.I think my parents are too strict with me in my studies. It's hard for me to communicate well with my parents. Besides, I have little time for my hobbies or outdoor activities.
I hope our teachers can give us moderate homework every day. I also hope to get on well with my dear mum and dad. I'm looking forward to getting more chances to take more outdoor activities.
That's all. Thank you.