中考书面表达专题之建议信课件（19张）

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中考书面表达专题之
建议信
(2018年北部湾经济区)假如你是李华，是向阳中学九年级（1）班的一名学生，你的初中生活即将结束， 请你以“My suggestions”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学习、生活、校园活动、同学关系这几个方面给七年级的新生提几点建议，并提出你的希望和祝愿。 写作要求：1、内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
2、语篇完整，语句通顺。语法正确，书写规范。
3、文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分。
4、开头已给出，不计入总词数。
给七年级学生的建议信
(2022年北部湾经济区一模) 三年的初中生活，你一定积累下了自己的英语学习经验。在毕业之际，请你以“How to learn English”为题写一篇英语短文，把它介绍给下一届初一同学。说说、谈谈你是如何学习英语的以及你对他们学习英语的建议
学习英语的重要性 2. 你学习英语的方法
3.你给新同学的英语学习建议
给七年级学生的英语学习建议
一、审题
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
二、布局谋篇
Para 1
点明就哪件事情提出建议
Para 2
给出建议
Para 3
希望
建议一
建议二
建议…
Para 1
点明就哪件事情提出建议
提建议
Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on….
应用：
(2019年） Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on how to live a meaningful and colorful school life in middle school.
(2022年一模） Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on how learn English well.
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
段落结构：三点式结构
To begin with, (建议一），（此建议的作用） ; What’s more, (建议二），（此建议的作用） ; Last but not least, (建议三），（此建议的作用）
It’s a good idea to…
It’s important to…
Why not do sth
How about doing sth.
had better do sth.
Para 2
如何阐述喜欢的原因
应用：2019年真题
To begin with, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class. What’s more, it’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy Moreover, why not take part in school activities and make more friends Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.
Para 3
希望
I hope these suggestions will help you.
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in ...
应用：
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life.
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in English studying.
三、大纲
Para 1
Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on….
Para 2
To begin with, (建议一），（此建议的作用） ; What’s more, (建议二），（此建议的作用） ; Last but not least, (建议三），（此建议的作用）
It’s a good idea to…
It’s important to…
Why not do sth
How about doing sth.
had better do sth.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in ...
Para 3
四、成篇
2019年：My suggestions
_____________________________________________________________________________(开头）Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on________________________________________
________________.
To begin with, (建议一），（此建议的作用） ; What’s more, (建议二），（此建议的作用） ; Last but not least, (建议三），（此建议的作用）
My name is Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang
Middle School
how to live a meaningful and colorful school
life in middle school.
To begin with, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class. What’s more, it’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy Moreover, why not take part in school activities and make more friends Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.
I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in ___________________
middle school life.
四、成篇
How to learn English
_________________________________________________________________________________________________(开头）Here I’d like to share some advice/suggestions on__________________________.
As we all know, English is useful and one of the most important
subjects in school. How to study English
how to study English
To begin with, (建议一），（此建议的作用） ; What’s more, (建议二），（此建议的作用） ; Last but not least, (建议三），（此建议的作用）
To begin with, we should make a study plan about how much time we need to spend on English study everyday. How about doing practice and reading loudly for 1 hour everyday to improve your writing and speaking skills What’s more , it’s a good idea to listen to some English songs and watch some English TV programs. Last but not least, why not take part in an English club We can study in group in the English club.
I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in ___________________
English studying.
(2021年梧州）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny因视力减退感到不安，向你倾诉。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件给她，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法，并提出建议。
要点提示：
近视的原因：阅读坏习惯、使用手机时间过长……
提出建议：户外活动、做眼保健操……
参考词汇：eyesight 视力 mobile phone 手机
实战演练
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to know that your eyesight is getting weaker.________
__________________________________________________.
Here I’d
give some advice on how to protect our eyesight.
（近视的原因）The reason why_____________________________ is that, on the one hand, (原因一）_____________________________
And on the other hand, (原因二）_______________________________
__________ To protect our eyesight, to begin with, (建议一）_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
What’s more, (建议二）_______________________________________
_____________________ Last but not least, (建议三）_____________
we get an eyesight problem
we take up a bad reading habit.
we look at our mobile phone for
a long time.
we should take part in some outdoor activities with our friends
or families, such as playing basketball and going hiking
why not do eye exercise plays when your eyes
feel tired
it is a good idea
________________________________________
I hope these suggestions will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
to have an eye examination every year.
Thank you !