M 8 Unit 3 Language in use 课件(共18张PPT)

(共18张PPT)
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8
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Writing:
An expectation for
my future school life
3
(Revision)
Chou Zhou Middle School
By Sally
Warm-up
Get to know Sally through pictures
buildings
garden
playground
dining hall
campus
(校园)
courses
relations
activities
library,
swimming pool ...
interesting,
colorful …
classmates,
teachers …
surf the Internet,
play chess
What will your high school life be like
1. There will be a large library in my future school.
2. I will listen to music in my spare time.
3. They will get along well with me.
There will be a big library in my future school. I can read my favorite books there. There will also be a large swimming pool. I can go swimming with my classmates. Courses will be interesting and colorful and I can do different things, such as surf the Internet, play chess and so on. By the way, I will get along well with my classmates and teachers. I love my future school life !
A possible version
There will be
There will be
I can
I can
I can
spelling mistakes
similar structures
simple sentences
few
linking words
Good
How to write a better composition
3. (连) Connect the sentences
2. (列) List the outline
4. (润) Polish the article
An expectation for
my future school life
5. (检) Check the mistakes
1. (审) Analyze the information
三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect my future school life ”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
1. (审) Analyze the information
Campus (校园) beautiful，the dining-hall, the library, the playground...
Relations get along well with...
Courses interesting, colorful..
Activities in my spare time, surf the Internet...
Your idea make progress...
I expect my future school life
I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me.
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outline
I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me.
The description of my future school life
Your expectation for the future
2. (列) List the outline
Beginning:
Body:
campus, relations
courses, activities
Ending:
1
2
3
Strategies(策略)
Advanced words and phrases
(高级词汇短语)
Abundant sentence patterns
(丰富的句式)
4. (润) Polish the article
Proper linking words
(恰当的连接词)
Phrases come first(短语优先)
Eg. I think having a large library will be important for us.
be of great importance
in my spare time, after class,
to get useful information,
with the help of, luckily, …
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
合二为一
有头脑
巧用谚语
多一招
会用with
水平高
主动不如
被动巧
陈述不如
倒装妙
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5
1
2
4
1. 陈述不如倒装妙 ！
Eg. Only if we have a large library, will we
enrich our school life.
2. 主动不如被动巧 ！
Eg. A swimming pool is expected to be built
in my senior high school.
3. 会用with水平高！
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
Eg. With many flowers planted, our school will
take a new look.
4. 合二为一 有头脑！
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
Eg. I will get along well with my classmates and
make new friends, who share the same interests
with me.
5. 巧用谚语多一招！
Eg. As a saying goes, “Life lies in movement.”
so I hope there will be a large gym in my future
school.
Let’s write
三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect my future school life ”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Campus (校园) beautiful，the dining-hall, the library, the playground...
Relations get along well with...
Courses interesting, colorful..
Activities in my spare time, surf the Internet...
Your idea make progress...
I expect my future school life
I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me.
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Let’s be a judge(裁判)
Standard(标准) Points(分值)
Abundant Contents
(内容充实，覆盖要点) 7
2. Correct Grammar
(用词适切，语法正确) 7
3. Clear Logic
(结构紧凑，意思连贯) 4
4. Beautiful Handwriting
(书写规范，词数适宜) 2
A better vision :
① I will study in a high school soon. Everything will be new to me.
② In a totally/completely new learning environment, I’ll be very excited and curious(好奇的). I will attach my attention to the beautiful campus with a large and neat dining hall and a grassy playground. What makes me really thrilled(极度激动的) is that there will be a bright library where I can acquire(获得) some knowledge. In the school, I will be on good terms with(与…相处融洽) my classmates and make some new friends who share the same interests with me. Moreover, interesting and colorful courses will also be offered so that I will get a good opportunity(机会) to develop other skills. In my spare time, I can also participate in(参加) some after-school activities, such as surfing the Internet and so on.
③ Fruitful(硕果累累的) junior high school life is coming to an end and much more joyful senior high school life will soon unfold(铺开) in front of me. I believe I will make great progress and embrace a bright future.
What will your future life be like
Thank you !