英语写作讲评课设计
My dream community
Teaching aims:
By the end of the periods, the students will be able to
1. Review about the writing in the examination paper.
2. Talk about their dream community freely
3. write an article about dream community.
Teaching important and difficult points
4. Talk about their dream community freely
5. write an article about dream community
Teaching methods:
1. the student-centered method
2.the communicative method
3.The situational teaching method
Teaching aids
1. a blackboard 2.a tape recorder and chalk 3.a computer
Teaching procedures
Step 1 Greetings
Step 2 Revision about the writing in the examination paper
Examine the topic again, and solve the problems below after discussion.
1. Style:(体裁)___________
2. Tense
3. Person
4. Structure
开头-----主体-------结尾
Step 3 correction 1: correct the mistakes from the students’ writings.
(Ask them to correct the mistakes by themselves and then exchange the answers and the teacher checks and explains them together.)
1.单词拼写错误
1)My dream community is big, but there arn’t many families._______
2)Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the brids sing._______
3)I can smell the flowers and here birds sing here. _______
2.词性误用问题
1)We are luck to live in a community like that.
2)People here always feel happy and funny.
3.短语运用问题
1) There are many boys playing football in the football field.
4.句子结构问题
1)There isn’t many families.__________
2) In summer, there are many people come here to swimming in the swimming pool.
3)Some of my neighbours are volunteers, they are kind and helpful.
4)There is always have a “Helping Hands” meeting.
5)When people have free time, they go there have a good time.
5.汉语式英语
1)It has a beautiful garden, a big swimming pool, a sport square and some shops.
Step 4 correction 2:合作探究
Correct the mistakes in their writings by themselves and then switch their writings with their partners. Try to correct the mistakes in his/her writing to make it better.
Step 5 Writing
1. Organize the students to write a similar writing titled “My dream school” to consolidate their writing.
2. Guide them to make their writings better by checking and polishing.
3. Encourage the students to share their writings in class and give them some advice.
Step 6 Homework
Rewrite the article “My dream school” to make it better.