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中考书面表达专题之
感谢信
(2021年柳州)假设你是李华,某英语网站正在举办“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据 表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A letter to My Parents”的短文,用于投稿0
1.词数70左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数
4.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名
参考词汇:感谢某人 thank sb. for… 养育 raise
生病 be sick 信任 trust 个人感受:personal feelings
处于困难中 be in trouble
给父母的感谢信
你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你
父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你
你的决心 努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
(2022年北部湾经济区模拟)临近毕业,学校要举行毕业典礼。加入你是九年级学生代表李明。将代表毕业生在毕业典礼上发言,请你根据以下提示要点,以“My speech at the school-leavers’ ceremony”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿。
写作要点:1.此刻你的感受
2. 你想感谢谁?为什么?(老师、学生和父母)
3.对同学们和学校的祝福
提示:ceremony 典礼
毕业演讲
一、审题
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
二、布局谋篇
Para 1
点明你要感谢谁
Para 2
为什么要感谢他/她?
他/她做了什么?
Para 3
祝愿或希望
Para 1
如何点明要感谢谁?
句式:
I would like express my thanks to sb. (for sth.)
应用:
(21年柳州)Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
(2022年北部湾模拟) Here I would like to express my thanks to all my teachers in our school.
Para 1
如何点明要感谢谁?
其他句式:
I would like to say thank you to sb.
I am thankful for…
Para 2
为什么要感谢他/他?
他/她做了什么?
With one’s help, I make great progress in…
应用:
With Miss Fu’s help, I make great progress in English.
Without one’s help, I can’t make such a great progress in…
应用:
Without Miss Fu’s help, I can’t make such a great progress in English.
Para 2
为什么要感谢他/他?
他/她做了什么?
be patient with sb.
应用:
Miss Fu is always patient with me.
be kind/ friendly to sb.
应用:
I would like to say thank you to my best friend Li Hua, who is always kind to me and always is with me when I am in trouble.
Para 2
为什么要感谢他/他?
他/她做了什么?
encourage sb. (not) to do sth.
cheer sb. up
应用:
You encourage me not to lose heart and cheer me up. And your words have great influence on me.
have great influence on sb.
Para 3
希望/祝愿
hope sb. can be healthy and happy in the future.
应用:
I hope both of you can be healthy and happy in the future.
hope sb. can be better in the future.
变形:
I hope our school can be better in the future.
三、大纲
Para 1
Para 2
要感谢的方面
I would like express my thanks to sb. (for sth.)
To begin with
What’s more
Last but not least
With one’s help, I make great progress in…
Without one’s help, I can’t make such a great progress in…
be patient with sb.
be kind/ friendly to sb.
encourage sb. (not) to do sth.
cheer sb. up
Para 3
hope sb. can be healthy and happy in the future.
hope sb. can be better in the future.
四、成篇
(2021柳州) A letter to my parents
Dear Mum and Dad:
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
To begin with, (养育之恩)_______________________________________
________________________________________________________________
What’s more, (信任和关心)_______________________________________
_________________________________________________________ Last but not least, (鼓励)_________________________________________________
____________
(决心)______________________________________________(愿望)________________________________________________________________
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
I would like to say thank you for raising me up
and cook for me everyday. When I was ill, you looked after me with patient.
You always trust me and without your trust,
I can’t be so confident. And you care about my personal feelings.
You always encourage me when I am in trouble and cheer
me up.
In a word, I decide to study hard to give my thanks.
I hope both of you can be healthy and happy in the future.
四、成篇
My speech at the school-leavers’ ceremony
Good morning everyone, I am Li Hua. (自我介绍)_______________
__________(点明要感谢哪些人:老师、同学、父母)_______________
____________________________________________
To begin with. (感谢老师)___________________________________
____________________________________________________________
_____________________ What’s more(感谢同学)_______________
_________________________________________ Last but not least, (感谢父母)____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
(祝福)__________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
I am from Class 5,
Grade 9.
Here I would like to
express my thanks to my teachers, my classmates and my parents.
I would like to say thank you to all the
teachers in our school. Without their help, I can’t make such a great
progress in my study.
I am thankful for all
my classmates who is kind and friendly to me.
I want to say thank you to my parents. They are always trust me.
And they encourage me when I am in trouble and cheer me up.
I hope all of you can have a wonderful and colorful school life and all our teachers and parents can be healthy and happy in the future. That’s all, thank you.
Thank you !