Module 7 Summer in Los Angeles Unit 3 Language in use 课件(共13张PPT)

(共13张PPT)
Revision for Module 7
--Writing
A plan for the summer camp
Emma’s hope
★ Take some some useful notes to help with your writing.
★ Be active to take part in group work.
★ Be willing to help and share with each other.
Emma is going to welcome a group of American teenagers at the end of July.
Emma's plan
Dear Emma,
Long time no see! I miss you so much! A group of 12 students from our school will come to Yiwu for summer camp at the end of July. They will stay in your school for two weeks. They want to learn Chinese and experience life in Yiwu. This is their first time to Yiwu so they want to know about the weather and what to take. Please make a summer camp plan for them and give them some advice. Many thanks!
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Joanne
2018年05月17日 19:33 (星期四)
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Emma's email
How many
What for
How long
What to do
Problem
a plan
Who
How long
Where to stay
What to do
What to take
…
What other tips
A plan should include(包含)：
When
to learn Chinese
to experience life
homestay
to experience life
live with a host family
take part in their daily life
try some traditional food
make dumplings
take trips
…
Tip1:Use the linking words to make the sentences into a passage.
First of all, you will live with a homestay family because it's the best way to experience life in China.You can take part in their daily life as well as do some acticities with them. For example, it's a good idea to try some tradtional food and watch Beijing opera.What's more, you can take some trips at the weekend.It's interesting to go around Futian Market which has all kinds of things, and Hengdian Film & Television Ctiy is also a good choice.
and, because, as well as, such as, first of all, what's more, besides, by the way, …
Where to stay and how to experience life
What to do
summer camp
to learn Chinese
to experience life
Tip2: Use transitional sentences to link two parts and make the passage more natural. (学会使用过渡句承上启下)
as well as …
not only … but also …
…
Chinese
lessons
other
activities
What time
Who
How
How long
…
Chinese kungfu
…
a football match
You'd better/ It's a good idea to take some
… because…
Level 1
Summer here is very hot, so to keep cool, you'd better …
Summer here is so hot that you'd better keep cool with …
Level 2
Level 3
What to take
Tip3: Polish(润色) your sentence to make it more advenced(高级).
Beginning
Main part
Ending
We're so glad that you're coming for the summer camp. You'll love coming to China to learn about Chinese culture and improve your Chinese at the same time. Here's the plan.
You are certain to get the best possible experience of Chinese learning and life in China.We're so exciting that we can't wait to meet you!
A plan for the summer camp
advice/tips
what to do
to learn Chinese
to experience life
things to take
other tips
承上启下过渡
承上启下过渡
Tip4: It's necessary to write an outline before writing a composition. (写作前要先写提纲)
Writing--reply the email
Assessment
Assessment Standard (评价标准) Self- assessment （自我评价） Group- assessment （小组评价） Final
marks
(最终得分)
Does your composition include all the key points ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5 ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5 满分20分
你的得分是____________
Do you use any linking words or transitional sentences (连接词或者过渡句) ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5 ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5
Do you use different sentence patterns or any good sentences ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5 ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5
Do you have any mistakes ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5 ○1 ○2 ○3 ○4 ○5
Underline the good sentences and correct some mistakes.
Tip1: Use the linking words to make the sentences into a passage.
Tip2: Use transitional sentences to link two parts and make the passage more natural.(使用过渡句)
Tip4: It's necessary to write an outline before writing a composition. (写作前要先写提纲)
What do we learn today
Strategy
Tip3: Polish(润色) your sentence to make it more advenced(高级).
Pack your bag
Get things ready
Just go out
If you don’t go out of your circle, you will think
that this is the whole world.
If you don’t go out of your own country, you won’t
know how wonderful the others are .
Let’s share
Homework:
Individual work:
A. Correct the mistakes in your writing and then rewrite it.
Group work:
Judge others' writings and help
them improve their writings or
learn something wonderful from
others’ writings.
Assignment
“There is no great writing. Only great rewriting.”
“Two heads are better than one.”
B. Write a plan for your summer holiday.