(共21张PPT)
Welcome to
our class !
The more we get together, together, together,
the more we get together, the happier we'll be.
'cause your ______ are my ______,
and my ______ are your _______.
The more we get together, the happier we'll be.
friends
friends
friends
friends
Enjoy a song and answer:
Which words are missing
2. How to get on well with our friends
1. Why do we need to have friends
Friends
1. Why do we need to have friends
A: Do you have any friends
B: Yes, I do. What about you
A: Me, too. Why do we need to have friends
B: Because we can ________ (when we____).
Pre-writing
Pairwork: 两人一组
1. Why do we need to have friends
We can ___,____and ____ together with them.
talk
play
laugh
Pre-writing
Without friends, we may ________ sometimes.
feel lonely
1. Why do we need to have friends
so it is _________to have friends.
important
good
nice
wonderful
warm
good friends may sometimes
be angry with each other.
However,
How to get on well with our friends
be in trouble; help
understand each other
...
If they __________, we should help them.
We should _____________ to our friends.
When we have different opinions, we should ________ each other.
be friendly
are in trouble
understand
Pairwork:
两人一组
Make lists of points about friends.
Friends
Why we need friends
How to get on well with friends
do things together
not feel lonely
nice to have friends
help ...in trouble
understand each other
...
be friendly to
Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness.
But how can we make friends First, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. Think more of others than of yourself and never value a person by his appearance and clothes. Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don’t agree with someone, please discuss with him. Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Friends should be faithful(忠实的) to each other. So long as you can put your friend’s interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.
Information card
1.The things a friend can share with us
2.The thing we should do when we disagree with a friend
3.The number of ways to make friends
4.The proverb (谚语) about friends in Paragraph 2
difficulties and happiness
to discuss with him
3
a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Read the passage about friends.
Finish the information card.
患难朋友才是真朋友。
Writing task:
(10 minutes)
“友谊的小船说翻就翻”是最近主流社交网络上流行的网络语言。相信同学们都有自己
的朋友,如何不使“友谊的小船说翻就翻”?请你根据下面的写作要求,写一篇短文谈
谈你的看法。内容包括:
1.我们为什么需要朋友?
2.我们该如何与朋友相处?(两点建议)
3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦相处。
Almost everyone in the world has friends. Why do we need to have friends 1.我们为什么需要朋友?(2分)
2.我们该如何与朋友相处?(两点建议)(2分+2分)
3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦相处。(1分)
Ending
结尾部分
Body
主体部分
人称:we
时态:一般现在时
Beginning
开头部分
①In my opinion, it’s … to have friends because …
②When we …, we can … with friends.
③……
While-writing
First, we should ...
Second, when friends …, we should...
...
①Friendship is a kind of treasure.
②A life without a friend is a life without a sun!
③
自评(check by yourself)
Read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.
1.要点齐了吗?
2.文章结构完整吗?
3.句子连贯吗?
4.单词都写对了吗?
5.有没错误的语法?
6.书写整洁吗?
大声朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求。
Post-writing
Beginning
开头部分
Ending
结尾
1.我们为什么需要朋友(2分)
2.我们该如何与朋友相处?
(两点建议)(2分+2分)
Body
正文
3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦相处。(1分)
语言分(8分)
8分 所有要点;个别语言错误
6-7分 大多数要点;少数语言错误
4-5分 大部分要点; 一些语言错误
1-3分 部分要点; 较多语言错误
0分 空白或完全无关内容
内容分(7分)
作文自评:按照各要点分值,给自己作文评分。(满分15分)
小组讨论互评,作文满分15分
满分15分
show time
展示(show your passage)
Beginning
开头部分
Ending
结尾
1.我们为什么需要朋友(2分)
2.我们该如何与朋友相处?
(两点建议)(2分+2分)
Body
正文
3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦相处。(1分)
语言分(8分)
8分 所有要点;个别语言错误
6-7分 大多数要点;少数语言错误
4-5分 大部分要点; 一些语言错误
1-3分 部分要点; 较多语言错误
0分 空白或完全无关内容
内容分(7分)
二稿写作:
满分15分
高分技巧:加入连词
because, besides, what's more, ...
First, Second, Finally...
In a word, In short, If…we can…
学习欣赏:
Almost everyone in the world has friends. Why do we need to have friends In my opinion, it’s nice to have friends because we can talk, laugh and do things together. It’s said that people who have friends are happier than those who don’t.
How can we get on well with our friends Here are my suggestions. First, we should be kind to our friends and try our best to help them when they are in trouble. Second, we should understand each other and think of others more than ourselves.
Friendship is a kind of treasure. I hope everyone can get on well with their friends.
据说有朋友的人比没朋友的人更快乐。
Summary:
opinions
Why we need friends
How to get on well with friends
do things together
not feel lonely
nice to have friends
help ...in trouble
understand each other
...
be friendly to
sentences
Friends
Homework:
1.修改、工整誊抄、上交。
2.增加连接词/句:and, but, because...
Here is...
First, Second,...
In a word, I hope...
3.背诵好句2-3个。
Friends are sunshine in life.
朋友是生活中的阳光。——易卜生
Life without friends is death.
没有朋友的生活便等于死亡。
A friend is a present which you give yourself.
朋友是自己送给自己的礼物。—史蒂文森
Proverbs (谚语) about Friends
Thank you
for listening !