2023届新高考英语一轮复习 读后续写 练习题（Word版含答案，共10篇）
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2023届新高考英语二轮复习读后续写强化100题（1）
一、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My efforts to learn, read, write and speak English have been a significant challenge in my life. When I first came to the United States from Hong Kong about 12 years ago, I could barely communicate in English. Today, although I still have much to learn, I realize I have made a good amount of progress in my years abroad.
I grew up in a small village in China, where no one I knew spoke English. I wasn’t exposed to English or any other language through books, magazines or TV. Only when I later went to study in Hong Kong, was I exposed to American and Western culture through movies, music and other media. Although English is common in Hong Kong due to its history, I still couldn’t speak, read or write much after graduating from high school.
In my early 20s, I decided to move to New York City and I was determined to make a new life for myself there. However, I didn’t want to end up speaking my native language because I knew that learning English was very important if I wanted to be successful in this new country. New York seemed like another world and without speaking much English it was even more difficult to make friends.
I didn’t have a teacher at first, so I tried every way I could to learn the language. One way that was very useful was listening to the radio and watching TV, mostly news. I tried to speak like the people I heard on TV. They spoke more clearly and it was easier to understand than the English I heard people speaking in my neighborhood. I picked up one word at a time, and looked them up in the dictionary. I would also try to write down the words and remember them. I made a goal of learning at least 20 new words every day.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a while I made friends. ____________________________________________________________
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Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say. __________
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二、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I could tell by her face that she was Very anxious. “Mrs. Lim, is there something wrong ” I asked as I glanced at the wall lock. It was almost I am. Mrs. Lim was one of my neighbors who lived down the street with her old, sick husband. I immediately thought that Mrs. Lim needed help.
“It's my husband. I think he's having a heart attack. Can you help me ” she blurted out(脱口而出). Her eyes filled with tears. With lightning speed, I changed my clothes. Then, I followed Mrs. Lim to her house. The whole house was a little musty. As this was my first visit to the Lims' residence, I had a quick glance around the living room. There were wall panels covered with watercolor landscapes, carvings, and cross-stitch(十字绣)pieces. Along the hallway leading to the kitchen was Mr. Lim, sitting in an armchair. He appeared to be out of breath. With Mrs. Lim's help, I managed to carry him to the porch where their car was parked. When we finally managed to get him inside the car, I drove to the hospital.
We rushed him to the emergency and casualty ward(临时病室).The doctor on duty informed us that Mr. Lim had suffered a mild stroke. Mr. Lim was admitted to the intensive care unit(ICU）. Mrs. Lim and I looked after him all night long. It was then that Mrs. Lim asked me to contact her son and convey the news. I never knew that Mr. and Mrs. Lim had children. I could not recall a time when they ever mentioned a son. I tried to contact the son at the given address, but I was told that he had moved to another town with his wife and children. I could see the pain in Mrs. Lim's face as I told her the news.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents_________________________
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Mr. Lim was discharged (准许离开) from the hospital after ten days___________________________
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三、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Christmas Eve, seventy-three-year-old George selected his food carefully. Skim milk was ﹩2.99,white bread,89 cents with a 10-cent discount. Leaving the cashier, he calculated that he had saved 80 cents today.
At the exit, the wind reminded him of his gloves. "Where are they " Not in the coat pockets. Not in the grocery bag either. He was sure he was wearing them when he entered the store. He clearly remembered putting them into the pocket of his coat. George made a second thorough search of all his pockets, again including the grocery bag. Now he was sure they must have been dropped somewhere inside the store.
Old George bought the black leather gloves at a 25% discount, for just ﹩35.00,two years ago. They were soft and warm. He took care not to let a drop of water touch his expensive gloves, so they looked like new. Losing this favorite possession was almost like losing a child to him.
George, calm on the outside but nervous inside, re-entered the store. He followed the same route he had walked before, starting at the bread counter, to the milk section, the corner where salt and sugar were placed, then the rest of the store. Several minutes of anxious searching turned out to be in vain. He asked the customers whether they saw a pair of black leather gloves, but they said no. Then he went over to the cashier to ask if she had received any lost gloves, but only received the same answer. His heart grew heavier.
"Society has changed, people have changed," he murmured to himself. "Years ago, if somebody picked up something lost, they would give it back. Now a good action is lost."
Yet he did not give up hope. He started to stare at anybody wearing black gloves to see if they looked like his. The first two persons he saw did wear gloves, but one was women's and the other not black.
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, ____________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair._____________________
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四、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ben was awakened by a gunshot(枪声). He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Ben saw that it was a long gun. A minute later a man wearing hunting clothes came out of the woods.
Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly put the gun to his shoulder and shot. Ben watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall bushes. Safe, Ben thought. The hunter didn't move for a moment. Then he began to follow the bird. "No hunting!" Ben shouted, "No hunting on my property!" The man called back, "where can I hunt "
Ben had just finished putting on his clothes when he heard another gunshot. He walked toward the lake. Fight was the last thing he wanted, but the man must go. Suddenly he heard a bird's wings beating the dry grass. Ben moved quickly towards the sound. He saw a colored head...the head of a beautiful bird. The bird flapped its wings, one of which was broken completely.
Ben lifted the bird and held it close against his body. It fought to escape, but soon lay quietly in Ben's arms. Ben decided to take the bird home and fix its broken wing so that it could fly again. He was almost through the woods when he heard the hunter behind him. "You just find that bird " the hunter asked, stepping closer and said, "Give me that bird!"
"You get off my hand," Ben told him. The man's face got red, "Mister," he said, "I have been hunting here all my life. I grew up here." Ben looked into the hunter's gray eyes, his voice raised, "I do not know who you are and I do not care. I own this place and I am telling you to leave!" "Now look, mister," the hunter insisted, "be reasonable." He raised his gun. A cold wind blew across Ben's face. He felt a chill(寒冷) go down his spine(脊背).He could still give the bird to the hunter and return home safe.
注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Para.1
The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange noise. ____________________________________
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Para.2
Ben watched until he was gone and went to the house. _______________________________________
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五、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 词左右
One day when I was 5 years old, my dad headed for work while my mum drove me to the town for shopping. Soon we got to a supermarket. While my mum was picking up vegetables, I spotted some attractive apples, which looked big and red and smelt pleasant. All of a sudden I had the desire to eat apples. I begged my mum to buy some and she agreed.
After getting all the groceries, we went for a walk in a park in the town and didn’t return until it was close to noon. Upon arriving home, my mum left the bag of apples in the sitting room and went to prepare the lunch in the kitchen. Right there and then I could hardly wait to taste the apples, so I took one and had a big bite even without washing it. However, to my disappointment, it wasn’t as sweet as expected. Luckily, when I tried another, it was satisfying this time. When I was enjoying it, my mum called me to give some apples to our neighbour, Julie, an old lady living close to our home.
Julie lived by herself. She was a kind lady and treated me very well. When my parents had no time to look after me, I would go to hers and she would help take care of me. And she liked chatting and even playing with me. So when my mum asked me to deliver some apples to her, I was very glad to do that.
I found a plastic bag in which to put some apples. But I hesitated just before picking them up. “Some apples are not that delicious. I should send some good ones to Grandma Julie.” I thought. But how could I tell the sweet ones from the rest I wondered because I had no idea how to find it out just by their appearance.
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Then all at once, a clever idea hit me. ____________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
Returning home from Julie’s home, I told my mum what I had done with the apples. _______________
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六、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Thank You, Ma'am
Just an act of kindness changed a boy's life forever.
She was a large woman with a large purse that had everything in it but a hammer and nails. It had a long strap(带子),and she carried it across her shoulder. It was about eleven o'clock at night, dark, and she was walking alone, when a boy ran up behind her and tried to seize her purse.
But the boy's weight and the weight of the purse combined caused him to lose his balance. He fell on his back on the sidewalk and his legs flew up. The large woman simply turned around, reached down, picked the boy up by his shirt front, and shook him until his teeth rattled（发出咯咯声）.
After that the woman said, “Pick up my pocketbook, boy, and give it here.” She still held him tightly. But she bent down enough to permit him to pick up her purse. Then she said, "Now ain't you ashamed of yourself "
By that time two or three people passed, stopped, turned to look, and some stood watching.
She did not release him. "Lady, I'm sorry," whispered the boy.
"Um-hum! Your face is dirty. Ain't you got anybody home to tell you to wash your face "
"No'm," said the boy.
"Then it will get washed this evening," said the large woman, starting up the street, dragging the frightened boy behind her.
He looked as if he were fourteen or fifteen in tennis shoes and blue jeans.
The woman said, "You ought to be my son. I would teach you right from wrong. Least I can do right now is to wash your face. Are you hungry "
"No'm," said the being dragged boy." I just want you to turn me loose."
But the woman continued to drag him up the street. When she got to her door, she dragged the boy inside.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Go to that sink and wash your face,” said the woman.______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When they had finished eating, she got up and took out ten dollars from the purse.________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
七、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife. Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and fear as I walked home, through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing home, I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved away with the force of the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it was dark all around me. I told him that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors well, and they all shared a sense of neighborliness, willing to give a hand.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help.___
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The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened.
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八、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was born into a big family. As the fifth of seven children, I went to the same public school as my three older sisters and brother. Every year, my mother went to the same scene and had parent/child interviews with the same teachers. The only thing different was the child. And every child participated in an old school tradition-the annual plant sale held in early May, just in time for Mother's Day.
Third grade was the first time that I was allowed to take part in the plant sale. I wanted to surprise my mother, but I didn't have any money. I went to my oldest sister and shared the secret, and she gave me some money. When I arrived at the plant sale, I carefully made my selection and spent a long time inspecting each plant to ensure that I had indeed found the best geranium（天竺葵） Once I had taken it secretly home, with the help of my sister, I hid it in the attic (阁楼)I was very nervous for fear that my mother would find it before Mother's Day, but my sister assured me that she wouldn't, and indeed she did not.
When Mother's Day arrived, I got up very early, went into the attic on tiptoe and carried the carefully-selected geranium to the kitchen, where my mother was preparing breakfast. "It's for you!" I gave the flower to mum and hugged her tightly.
The year I was fifteen, my younger sister reached third grade. In early May she came to me full of wonder and secrecy and told me that there was going to be a plant sale at school, and she wanted to surprise our mother. As my older sister did for me, I gave her some money and off she went.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She arrived home full of nervous excitement._____________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My mother noticed me watching, and she gave me a soft, secret smile._________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
九、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell phone rang. A child's voice on the other end spoke to me softly, "Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number once again. I don’t have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of calls nowadays, so I replied rudely, "You've dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.
During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung up right away rudely. I couldn’t help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over and over again ” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone rang up again. It was from the same girl- It seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.
She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my number from time to time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take care of me. She is tired out from looking after me. Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK ” The innocent request was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you.... Dad, I am so... happy, so …happy
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. _______________
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I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. ______________________________________
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十、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arthur was messy. He didn't try to make messes, but he didn't try to clean up much, either. There were always small pieces of food on the table when he was done eating. His socks never made it into the hamper(洗衣筐). And he only picked up his toys when Mom threatened to throw them away. Most days, Mom followed Arthur around the house and cleaned up after him. She brushed the crumbs(食品屑). into her hand and threw them away after meals. She picked up his socks and made sure they got washed, dried and folded neatly before going back in the drawer. She often picked up his toys when he left them to do something else.
One day, Mom asked Arthur to pick up his toy trains. "Not right now," Arthur said. He was reading a comic book. The trains had been on the living room floor since the morning.
"You know what, Arthur I'm not going to ask you again. I'm done cleaning today." And with that, Mom put her feet up on the sofa and picked up a book to read.
At dinner time, Arthur noticed that there was a big pile of crumbs at his place at the table. Mom's spot was nice and clean. Arthur didn't like the crumbs very much. After dinner, Arthur's feet felt cold. He went to his room and opened his drawer, but the drawer was empty. "Mom, where are my socks " Arthur called.
"There weren't any socks in your hamper, so I didn't wash them," Mom said. Arthur felt unhappy. Now his feet would be cold, unless he wanted to wear dirty socks from the floor. He decided to stay barefoot.
When it was time for bed, Arthur said good night to Mom and turned to go upstairs. Arthur stepped right on his toy train in his bare feet "Ouch!" cried Arthur. "That really hurt!".
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
However, Mom was still reading and said nothing. __________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
"Mom " said Arthur. "Tomorrow can you show me how to do the laundry so I can wash my socks ".
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答案以及解析
一、答案：
After a while I made friends. They were another way I learned English. I would pick up a lot of cool expressions just from spending time with them and listening to them speak. My friends were patient with me and helped me a lot, but I often became discouraged. Seeing I gave up speaking English, they tried to encourage me to speak out. They often invited me to their parties where I was surrounded by English atmosphere and I was forced to communicate with them in English.
Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say. It is clear that I am a visual learner-I learn by seeing and looking. I had the most success when reading and using written materials. I enjoyed reading books, newspapers and magazines. Of course, it is also very important to be able to speak and listen. So, I spent lots of time trying to develop these skills, like getting involved in social activities with friends. So, if I could become more and more fluent, so can you!
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者大约12年前,当作者第一次从香港来到美国时,几乎不能用英语交流。但是在经过作者的努力学习后,作者意识到在国外的这些年已经取得了很大的进步。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“过了一段时间,我交到了朋友可知,第一段可描写朋友对作者英语学习的帮助和鼓励。
②由第二段首句内容“回顾多年来我学习英语的方法,我有话要说"可知,第二段可描写作者回顾自己的学习英语的方法,以及作者对大家的英语学习的鼓励。
2.续写线索:交外国朋友—学习英语遇到困难—朋友鼓励坚持不放弃—坚持学习一有所进步经验总结
3.词汇激活行为类
①.学习:pick up /learn/master
②.鼓励:encourage/back for
③.放弃:give up/quit
情绪类
①.泄气:discourage/lose heart
②.有耐心的:patient/stick-to-itive
【高分句型】.They often invited me to their parties where I was surrounded by English atmosphere(由连接词where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is clear that I am a visual learner(运用了it作形式主语that引导的从句为真正的主语的主语从句)
二、答案：
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents. I had not contacted them for almost a month and my conscience bit me. I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn’t spare enough time to visit them. They had devoted most of their time to looking after me for a good part of their lives. I was sobbing terribly all the way home, ashamed of my neglect. Maybe they were suffering from the same scene as my neighbors.
Mr. Lim was discharged(准许离开)from the hospital after ten days. He made a speedy recovery. Apart from his unclear speech, he appeared healthy and happy a month after the incident. I didn’t know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot. The incident has helped me to know what is important to me. It has also made me realize that when we give a helping hand to those who need our assistance, the world will be a better place to live in.
解析：本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在帮助中风的老邻居时,知道他们的孩子不能及时联系上,不能来照顾生病的父母时,邻居非常痛苦,从而想到自己也已经很久没有与父母联系了,因而受到启发,让自己懂得了生活中什么更重要的,以及助人为乐让世界更美好的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当我开车回家时,我告诉自己我会给自己的父母打电话。”可知,第一段可描写作者想起自己许久没有联系的父母以及心理的感悟。
②由第二段首句内容林先生在10天后出院可知,第二段可描写林先生康复以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:想起父母—心理变化—出院—人生感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①联系:contact/get in touch with
②拜访:visit/pay a visit to
③帮助:give a helping hand/assist sb.
情绪类
①伤心:sob/cry/weep
②羞愧:ashamed/feel shame
【高分句型l】I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn't spare enough time to visit them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I didn't know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot.(运用了whether引导宾语从句,what引导主语从句)
三、答案：
Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, wearing black leather gloves. Abrupt as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer.【高分句型一】On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the store. He had no other alternative but to ask the cashier to keep them in case the lost gloves were found. Then he dragged his legs towards the exit.(他去向律师询问是否是他的手套,但是答案一定是否定的,最后灰心丧气地离开了超市)
During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair. After all, in deep winter, he could not do without gloves. Finally poor George decided to buy another pair of leather gloves. With the last ray of hope, he stepped into the store again. No sooner had he opened the door than the cashier told him there was indeed one such pair as he lost. After examining them carefully, he was wild with joy, expressing sincere gratitude and saying to himself that a good action was never lost.【高分句型二】(他到超市去准备买新手套时,欣喜地发现他以前的手套找到了,并对收银员发出了感谢)
四、答案：
Para.1
The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange noise. The sound made Ben's heart ache. It seemed as if he could sense the bird's fear and helplessness. Holding the bird tightly in his arms, Ben knew that he just couldn't give up on this tiny life. 【高分句型一】He raised his eyes and looked directly into the hunter's. The firm and steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. There was a suffocating silence between the two men. Eventually, the hunter's rough voice broke the silence. "You are a fool." And then to Ben's great relief, he slowly walked away.(Ben出于对这只鸟的怜爱之情想救助它,与猎人抗争,终于使得猎人放弃)
Para.2
Ben watched until he was gone and went to the house. He carefully laid the bird on the soft pillow, applied some medicine to the wound and bandaged its broken wing. Smoothing its beautiful feathers, he murmured in a soft voice to the bird, "You're going to Okay and soon you will be able to fly in the sky." Under his careful nursing, the bird recovered sooner than expected and in the meantime, a special bond seemed to be formed between the man and the bird. With the bird finally made its full recovery, Ben knew it was time to set it free. Though reluctant, watching the bird flapping its wings and soaring high into the sky, Ben smiled. 【高分句型二】The frozen lake, the quiet woods and the flying bird made the place a paradise.(Ben是如何救助这只鸟的,治疗伤口,安慰情绪,直到痊愈将其放生)
五、答案：
Para. 1:
Then all at once, a clever idea hit me. I could take a bite of each apple to make sure the apples for Julie were all sweet! Once I had the idea, I got down to doing that. I tasted six apples in all, finding one not delicious. So I put the rest into the plastic bag and went to Julie’s home. As usual, she welcomed me warmly, “Hey, little Mary, come in. Any gifts for me ” I told her that we had some apples for her, proudly put the bag of apples on her table and went back home.
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Returning home from Julie’s home, I told my mum what I had done with the apples. It was at the very moment that I noticed my mum’s eyes widened. Without a word, she picked up the bag of the remaining apples that I hadn’t tasted, took my hand and rushed out. When we stepped into Julie’s home, she was just looking confused about the apples I had brought to her. After hearing my mum explain the whole thing, Julie couldn’t help but burst into laughter and give me a hug. Instead of losing temper at my behaviour, she just felt happy about the reason behind the bitten apples.
六、答案：
"Go to that sink and wash your face," said the woman. The water dripping from his face, the boy looked at her. There was a long pause. After he had dried his face, the boy turned around, wondering what next. Without saying anything, the woman left and walked to the kitchen. She heated some beans and ham, and set the table. The woman did not ask the boy anything about where he lived, or anything else that would embarrass him. Instead, as they ate, she told him a lot about her job.
When they had finished eating, she got up and took out ten dollars the purse. "Now here, take this. From now on, I hope you will behave yourself." She led him to the door and opened it. She looked out into the street as he went down the steps. The boy wanted to say something other than, "Thank you, ma'am,", but before the boy moved his lips, the large woman shut the door. With tearful eyes, the boy bowed to the door and skipped away.
七、答案：
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help. I charged away to knock on the door on end. After a while, an athletic man of medium height opened the door. Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible. While calming me by patting my shoulder, the man reached over to grab the torch on the shoe cabinet near the door. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out completely. Shortly afterwards, we sent the child to the nearest police station and waited for his parents.
The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. They were more than grateful and thanked us. With an outpouring of relief, I was also proud of myself, as I had never imagined I would be part of a rescue party and the act of neighborliness could really make such a difference. While the mother and the father were holding the child tightly, I spotted the man beaming at the child with softness gleaming in his eyes. I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father. All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality. I walked to the man and tugged his sleeve, whispering, “Thank you.” I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在回家路上发现有小孩掉进了路上的洞里。作者告诉离他最近的房子房主,他很友好,愿意伸出援助之手。最后他们合力把孩子安全地从水坑里救出,孩子的父母很感谢他们。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“我不太确定能做些什么,也不知道要去哪里,但决定去最近的房子寻求帮助。”可知,第一段可描述作者是如何与好心的房主救出孩子并将其送到警察局的。②由第二段首句内容“刚刚下班到家的孩子父母听到发生的事情很震惊。”可知,第二段可描写孩子们的父母感谢作者和好心房主的善举,以及作者得到的感悟。2.续写线索:找到好心的房主帮忙——安全救出孩子——孩子的父母表示感谢——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①冲向:charge away/rush to②努力做:attempt to do/try to do③慢慢移动:inch/crawl④抓住:seize/get hold of⑤紧紧抱住:hold tightly/embrace/firmly情绪类①震惊的:shocked/astonished②感激的:grateful/thankful【点睛】【高分句型1】Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible.(as引导的让步状语从句)【高分句型2】No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.(No sooner……than……固定句型)【高分句型3】I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father.(现在分词作状语)【高分句型4】All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
八、答案：
She arrived home full of nervous excitement. The geranium was hidden in a paper bag under her sweater. She tiptoed into the room and whispered to me，"I looked at every plant and I know I got the best one！"With a sweet sense of familiar feeling, I helped my little sister hide that geranium in the attic. Then came Mother's Day. I was right there when she gave my mother the geranium, and I watched them both bursting with pride and delight. It was like being in a dream I had already dreamed.
My mother noticed me watching, and she gave me a soft, secret smile. With a sudden strong emotional feeling at my heart, I smiled back. Actually, I had been wondering how my mother could pretend to be surprised at this gift from her sixth child. But as I saw her eyes light up with delight when she was presented the most precious gift, I knew she was not pretending. She was really proud of her every child, and what mum received was not a bunch of flowers but a symbol of growth and love from her children.
九、答案：
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. When I called the number back, a woman answered, “Sorry, sir. I am really sorry to bother you. I did want to call to apologize.” From the woman, I learnt that the girl had bone cancer when she was born, and unfortunately her father died in an accident weeks ago. The little girl suffered from unbearable treatment every day. Feeling painful, she would cry for her dad who had always encouraged her, so her mother gave her a random number.
I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. The woman thought for a while, saying sadly, “She has gone. You must have kissed her on the phone, and she went with a smile as she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...” On hearing this, I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.
解析：
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后,女孩依旧不时地拨打作者的号码,即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后,作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女孩对爸爸的想念,作者应其请求,在电话中给了她一个吻,女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:在这之后不久,我对电话的另一端是谁产生了兴趣……,所以接下来应该写作者回拨电话以及女孩妈妈对作者的回复内容。特别要详细描述女孩之所以不停打电话找爸爸的具体原因。第二段开头是:我迫不及待地想问那个女人她女儿怎么样了……。本段应该写女孩现在的情况以及作者得知实情后的表现。
续写时需要注意:(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(3)上下文的连贯性;(4)所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:suffered from, apologize, encourage, think for a while, stream down, pray for等高级词汇;限制性定语从句“she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...”,“I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.”中非谓语的灵活使用以及“I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks.”中独立主格的熟练运用。
十、答案：
However, Mom was still reading and said nothing. Arthur wasn't sure if she had heard him or not so he called for help again, but still Mom didn't come. Then Arthur realized maybe it was he that could solve his problem at that very moment. He quietly picked up the toy train and put it in the box. It only took a minute for him to put the toy away, and now he wouldn't have to worry about hurting his feet again.
"Mom " said Arthur. "Tomorrow can you show me how to do the laundry so I can wash my socks " "Of course," said Mom. "It's nice to see you begin to learn to take care of yourself. I am always here to do whatever I can to help you become a more independent boy." Arthur felt better. He didn't want to wait until the next laundry day to have clean socks again. Maybe being neat wasn't so hard after all.
一、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My efforts to learn, read, write and speak English have been a significant challenge in my life. When I first came to the United States from Hong Kong about 12 years ago, I could barely communicate in English. Today, although I still have much to learn, I realize I have made a good amount of progress in my years abroad.
I grew up in a small village in China, where no one I knew spoke English. I wasn’t exposed to English or any other language through books, magazines or TV. Only when I later went to study in Hong Kong, was I exposed to American and Western culture through movies, music and other media. Although English is common in Hong Kong due to its history, I still couldn’t speak, read or write much after graduating from high school.
In my early 20s, I decided to move to New York City and I was determined to make a new life for myself there. However, I didn’t want to end up speaking my native language because I knew that learning English was very important if I wanted to be successful in this new country. New York seemed like another world and without speaking much English it was even more difficult to make friends.
I didn’t have a teacher at first, so I tried every way I could to learn the language. One way that was very useful was listening to the radio and watching TV, mostly news. I tried to speak like the people I heard on TV. They spoke more clearly and it was easier to understand than the English I heard people speaking in my neighborhood. I picked up one word at a time, and looked them up in the dictionary. I would also try to write down the words and remember them. I made a goal of learning at least 20 new words every day.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a while I made friends. ____________________________________________________________
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Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say. __________
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二、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I could tell by her face that she was Very anxious. “Mrs. Lim, is there something wrong ” I asked as I glanced at the wall lock. It was almost I am. Mrs. Lim was one of my neighbors who lived down the street with her old, sick husband. I immediately thought that Mrs. Lim needed help.
“It's my husband. I think he's having a heart attack. Can you help me ” she blurted out(脱口而出). Her eyes filled with tears. With lightning speed, I changed my clothes. Then, I followed Mrs. Lim to her house. The whole house was a little musty. As this was my first visit to the Lims' residence, I had a quick glance around the living room. There were wall panels covered with watercolor landscapes, carvings, and cross-stitch(十字绣)pieces. Along the hallway leading to the kitchen was Mr. Lim, sitting in an armchair. He appeared to be out of breath. With Mrs. Lim's help, I managed to carry him to the porch where their car was parked. When we finally managed to get him inside the car, I drove to the hospital.
We rushed him to the emergency and casualty ward(临时病室).The doctor on duty informed us that Mr. Lim had suffered a mild stroke. Mr. Lim was admitted to the intensive care unit(ICU）. Mrs. Lim and I looked after him all night long. It was then that Mrs. Lim asked me to contact her son and convey the news. I never knew that Mr. and Mrs. Lim had children. I could not recall a time when they ever mentioned a son. I tried to contact the son at the given address, but I was told that he had moved to another town with his wife and children. I could see the pain in Mrs. Lim's face as I told her the news.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents_________________________
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Mr. Lim was discharged (准许离开) from the hospital after ten days___________________________
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三、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Christmas Eve, seventy-three-year-old George selected his food carefully. Skim milk was ﹩2.99,white bread,89 cents with a 10-cent discount. Leaving the cashier, he calculated that he had saved 80 cents today.
At the exit, the wind reminded him of his gloves. "Where are they " Not in the coat pockets. Not in the grocery bag either. He was sure he was wearing them when he entered the store. He clearly remembered putting them into the pocket of his coat. George made a second thorough search of all his pockets, again including the grocery bag. Now he was sure they must have been dropped somewhere inside the store.
Old George bought the black leather gloves at a 25% discount, for just ﹩35.00,two years ago. They were soft and warm. He took care not to let a drop of water touch his expensive gloves, so they looked like new. Losing this favorite possession was almost like losing a child to him.
George, calm on the outside but nervous inside, re-entered the store. He followed the same route he had walked before, starting at the bread counter, to the milk section, the corner where salt and sugar were placed, then the rest of the store. Several minutes of anxious searching turned out to be in vain. He asked the customers whether they saw a pair of black leather gloves, but they said no. Then he went over to the cashier to ask if she had received any lost gloves, but only received the same answer. His heart grew heavier.
"Society has changed, people have changed," he murmured to himself. "Years ago, if somebody picked up something lost, they would give it back. Now a good action is lost."
Yet he did not give up hope. He started to stare at anybody wearing black gloves to see if they looked like his. The first two persons he saw did wear gloves, but one was women's and the other not black.
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Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, ____________________________________________
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During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair._____________________
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四、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ben was awakened by a gunshot(枪声). He looked out toward the frozen lake. Near the trees he saw a shining piece of metal. When it moved, Ben saw that it was a long gun. A minute later a man wearing hunting clothes came out of the woods.
Suddenly a bird flew upward. The man quickly put the gun to his shoulder and shot. Ben watched the bird, praying it had not been hurt. It flew near the ground and went into some tall bushes. Safe, Ben thought. The hunter didn't move for a moment. Then he began to follow the bird. "No hunting!" Ben shouted, "No hunting on my property!" The man called back, "where can I hunt "
Ben had just finished putting on his clothes when he heard another gunshot. He walked toward the lake. Fight was the last thing he wanted, but the man must go. Suddenly he heard a bird's wings beating the dry grass. Ben moved quickly towards the sound. He saw a colored head...the head of a beautiful bird. The bird flapped its wings, one of which was broken completely.
Ben lifted the bird and held it close against his body. It fought to escape, but soon lay quietly in Ben's arms. Ben decided to take the bird home and fix its broken wing so that it could fly again. He was almost through the woods when he heard the hunter behind him. "You just find that bird " the hunter asked, stepping closer and said, "Give me that bird!"
"You get off my hand," Ben told him. The man's face got red, "Mister," he said, "I have been hunting here all my life. I grew up here." Ben looked into the hunter's gray eyes, his voice raised, "I do not know who you are and I do not care. I own this place and I am telling you to leave!" "Now look, mister," the hunter insisted, "be reasonable." He raised his gun. A cold wind blew across Ben's face. He felt a chill(寒冷) go down his spine(脊背).He could still give the bird to the hunter and return home safe.
注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Para.1
The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange noise. ____________________________________
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Para.2
Ben watched until he was gone and went to the house. _______________________________________
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五、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 词左右
One day when I was 5 years old, my dad headed for work while my mum drove me to the town for shopping. Soon we got to a supermarket. While my mum was picking up vegetables, I spotted some attractive apples, which looked big and red and smelt pleasant. All of a sudden I had the desire to eat apples. I begged my mum to buy some and she agreed.
After getting all the groceries, we went for a walk in a park in the town and didn’t return until it was close to noon. Upon arriving home, my mum left the bag of apples in the sitting room and went to prepare the lunch in the kitchen. Right there and then I could hardly wait to taste the apples, so I took one and had a big bite even without washing it. However, to my disappointment, it wasn’t as sweet as expected. Luckily, when I tried another, it was satisfying this time. When I was enjoying it, my mum called me to give some apples to our neighbour, Julie, an old lady living close to our home.
Julie lived by herself. She was a kind lady and treated me very well. When my parents had no time to look after me, I would go to hers and she would help take care of me. And she liked chatting and even playing with me. So when my mum asked me to deliver some apples to her, I was very glad to do that.
I found a plastic bag in which to put some apples. But I hesitated just before picking them up. “Some apples are not that delicious. I should send some good ones to Grandma Julie.” I thought. But how could I tell the sweet ones from the rest I wondered because I had no idea how to find it out just by their appearance.
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Then all at once, a clever idea hit me. ____________________________________________________
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Returning home from Julie’s home, I told my mum what I had done with the apples. _______________
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六、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Thank You, Ma'am
Just an act of kindness changed a boy's life forever.
She was a large woman with a large purse that had everything in it but a hammer and nails. It had a long strap(带子),and she carried it across her shoulder. It was about eleven o'clock at night, dark, and she was walking alone, when a boy ran up behind her and tried to seize her purse.
But the boy's weight and the weight of the purse combined caused him to lose his balance. He fell on his back on the sidewalk and his legs flew up. The large woman simply turned around, reached down, picked the boy up by his shirt front, and shook him until his teeth rattled（发出咯咯声）.
After that the woman said, “Pick up my pocketbook, boy, and give it here.” She still held him tightly. But she bent down enough to permit him to pick up her purse. Then she said, "Now ain't you ashamed of yourself "
By that time two or three people passed, stopped, turned to look, and some stood watching.
She did not release him. "Lady, I'm sorry," whispered the boy.
"Um-hum! Your face is dirty. Ain't you got anybody home to tell you to wash your face "
"No'm," said the boy.
"Then it will get washed this evening," said the large woman, starting up the street, dragging the frightened boy behind her.
He looked as if he were fourteen or fifteen in tennis shoes and blue jeans.
The woman said, "You ought to be my son. I would teach you right from wrong. Least I can do right now is to wash your face. Are you hungry "
"No'm," said the being dragged boy." I just want you to turn me loose."
But the woman continued to drag him up the street. When she got to her door, she dragged the boy inside.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"Go to that sink and wash your face,” said the woman.______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When they had finished eating, she got up and took out ten dollars from the purse.________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
七、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife. Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and fear as I walked home, through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing home, I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved away with the force of the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it was dark all around me. I told him that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors well, and they all shared a sense of neighborliness, willing to give a hand.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help.___
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The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened.
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八、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was born into a big family. As the fifth of seven children, I went to the same public school as my three older sisters and brother. Every year, my mother went to the same scene and had parent/child interviews with the same teachers. The only thing different was the child. And every child participated in an old school tradition-the annual plant sale held in early May, just in time for Mother's Day.
Third grade was the first time that I was allowed to take part in the plant sale. I wanted to surprise my mother, but I didn't have any money. I went to my oldest sister and shared the secret, and she gave me some money. When I arrived at the plant sale, I carefully made my selection and spent a long time inspecting each plant to ensure that I had indeed found the best geranium（天竺葵） Once I had taken it secretly home, with the help of my sister, I hid it in the attic (阁楼)I was very nervous for fear that my mother would find it before Mother's Day, but my sister assured me that she wouldn't, and indeed she did not.
When Mother's Day arrived, I got up very early, went into the attic on tiptoe and carried the carefully-selected geranium to the kitchen, where my mother was preparing breakfast. "It's for you!" I gave the flower to mum and hugged her tightly.
The year I was fifteen, my younger sister reached third grade. In early May she came to me full of wonder and secrecy and told me that there was going to be a plant sale at school, and she wanted to surprise our mother. As my older sister did for me, I gave her some money and off she went.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She arrived home full of nervous excitement._____________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My mother noticed me watching, and she gave me a soft, secret smile._________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
九、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell phone rang. A child's voice on the other end spoke to me softly, "Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number once again. I don’t have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of calls nowadays, so I replied rudely, "You've dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.
During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung up right away rudely. I couldn’t help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over and over again ” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone rang up again. It was from the same girl- It seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.
She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my number from time to time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take care of me. She is tired out from looking after me. Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK ” The innocent request was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you.... Dad, I am so... happy, so …happy
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. _______________
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I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. ______________________________________
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十、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arthur was messy. He didn't try to make messes, but he didn't try to clean up much, either. There were always small pieces of food on the table when he was done eating. His socks never made it into the hamper(洗衣筐). And he only picked up his toys when Mom threatened to throw them away. Most days, Mom followed Arthur around the house and cleaned up after him. She brushed the crumbs(食品屑). into her hand and threw them away after meals. She picked up his socks and made sure they got washed, dried and folded neatly before going back in the drawer. She often picked up his toys when he left them to do something else.
One day, Mom asked Arthur to pick up his toy trains. "Not right now," Arthur said. He was reading a comic book. The trains had been on the living room floor since the morning.
"You know what, Arthur I'm not going to ask you again. I'm done cleaning today." And with that, Mom put her feet up on the sofa and picked up a book to read.
At dinner time, Arthur noticed that there was a big pile of crumbs at his place at the table. Mom's spot was nice and clean. Arthur didn't like the crumbs very much. After dinner, Arthur's feet felt cold. He went to his room and opened his drawer, but the drawer was empty. "Mom, where are my socks " Arthur called.
"There weren't any socks in your hamper, so I didn't wash them," Mom said. Arthur felt unhappy. Now his feet would be cold, unless he wanted to wear dirty socks from the floor. He decided to stay barefoot.
When it was time for bed, Arthur said good night to Mom and turned to go upstairs. Arthur stepped right on his toy train in his bare feet "Ouch!" cried Arthur. "That really hurt!".
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
However, Mom was still reading and said nothing. __________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
"Mom " said Arthur. "Tomorrow can you show me how to do the laundry so I can wash my socks ".
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答案以及解析
一、答案：
After a while I made friends. They were another way I learned English. I would pick up a lot of cool expressions just from spending time with them and listening to them speak. My friends were patient with me and helped me a lot, but I often became discouraged. Seeing I gave up speaking English, they tried to encourage me to speak out. They often invited me to their parties where I was surrounded by English atmosphere and I was forced to communicate with them in English.
Thinking back on the ways I have learned English over the years, I have something to say. It is clear that I am a visual learner-I learn by seeing and looking. I had the most success when reading and using written materials. I enjoyed reading books, newspapers and magazines. Of course, it is also very important to be able to speak and listen. So, I spent lots of time trying to develop these skills, like getting involved in social activities with friends. So, if I could become more and more fluent, so can you!
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者大约12年前,当作者第一次从香港来到美国时,几乎不能用英语交流。但是在经过作者的努力学习后,作者意识到在国外的这些年已经取得了很大的进步。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“过了一段时间,我交到了朋友可知,第一段可描写朋友对作者英语学习的帮助和鼓励。
②由第二段首句内容“回顾多年来我学习英语的方法,我有话要说"可知,第二段可描写作者回顾自己的学习英语的方法,以及作者对大家的英语学习的鼓励。
2.续写线索:交外国朋友—学习英语遇到困难—朋友鼓励坚持不放弃—坚持学习一有所进步经验总结
3.词汇激活行为类
①.学习:pick up /learn/master
②.鼓励:encourage/back for
③.放弃:give up/quit
情绪类
①.泄气:discourage/lose heart
②.有耐心的:patient/stick-to-itive
【高分句型】.They often invited me to their parties where I was surrounded by English atmosphere(由连接词where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is clear that I am a visual learner(运用了it作形式主语that引导的从句为真正的主语的主语从句)
二、答案：
As I was driving home, I told myself that I would call my own parents. I had not contacted them for almost a month and my conscience bit me. I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn’t spare enough time to visit them. They had devoted most of their time to looking after me for a good part of their lives. I was sobbing terribly all the way home, ashamed of my neglect. Maybe they were suffering from the same scene as my neighbors.
Mr. Lim was discharged(准许离开)from the hospital after ten days. He made a speedy recovery. Apart from his unclear speech, he appeared healthy and happy a month after the incident. I didn’t know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot. The incident has helped me to know what is important to me. It has also made me realize that when we give a helping hand to those who need our assistance, the world will be a better place to live in.
解析：本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在帮助中风的老邻居时,知道他们的孩子不能及时联系上,不能来照顾生病的父母时,邻居非常痛苦,从而想到自己也已经很久没有与父母联系了,因而受到启发,让自己懂得了生活中什么更重要的,以及助人为乐让世界更美好的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当我开车回家时,我告诉自己我会给自己的父母打电话。”可知,第一段可描写作者想起自己许久没有联系的父母以及心理的感悟。
②由第二段首句内容林先生在10天后出院可知,第二段可描写林先生康复以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:想起父母—心理变化—出院—人生感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①联系:contact/get in touch with
②拜访:visit/pay a visit to
③帮助:give a helping hand/assist sb.
情绪类
①伤心:sob/cry/weep
②羞愧:ashamed/feel shame
【高分句型l】I had always thought that I had so much work to do and couldn't spare enough time to visit them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I didn't know whether they had contacted with their son, but what I took from the incident helped me a lot.(运用了whether引导宾语从句,what引导主语从句)
三、答案：
Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, wearing black leather gloves. Abrupt as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer.【高分句型一】On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the store. He had no other alternative but to ask the cashier to keep them in case the lost gloves were found. Then he dragged his legs towards the exit.(他去向律师询问是否是他的手套,但是答案一定是否定的,最后灰心丧气地离开了超市)
During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair. After all, in deep winter, he could not do without gloves. Finally poor George decided to buy another pair of leather gloves. With the last ray of hope, he stepped into the store again. No sooner had he opened the door than the cashier told him there was indeed one such pair as he lost. After examining them carefully, he was wild with joy, expressing sincere gratitude and saying to himself that a good action was never lost.【高分句型二】(他到超市去准备买新手套时,欣喜地发现他以前的手套找到了,并对收银员发出了感谢)
四、答案：
Para.1
The bird struggled weakly and made a wild, strange noise. The sound made Ben's heart ache. It seemed as if he could sense the bird's fear and helplessness. Holding the bird tightly in his arms, Ben knew that he just couldn't give up on this tiny life. 【高分句型一】He raised his eyes and looked directly into the hunter's. The firm and steady gaze sent a strong message to the hunter that by no means would he give in. There was a suffocating silence between the two men. Eventually, the hunter's rough voice broke the silence. "You are a fool." And then to Ben's great relief, he slowly walked away.(Ben出于对这只鸟的怜爱之情想救助它,与猎人抗争,终于使得猎人放弃)
Para.2
Ben watched until he was gone and went to the house. He carefully laid the bird on the soft pillow, applied some medicine to the wound and bandaged its broken wing. Smoothing its beautiful feathers, he murmured in a soft voice to the bird, "You're going to Okay and soon you will be able to fly in the sky." Under his careful nursing, the bird recovered sooner than expected and in the meantime, a special bond seemed to be formed between the man and the bird. With the bird finally made its full recovery, Ben knew it was time to set it free. Though reluctant, watching the bird flapping its wings and soaring high into the sky, Ben smiled. 【高分句型二】The frozen lake, the quiet woods and the flying bird made the place a paradise.(Ben是如何救助这只鸟的,治疗伤口,安慰情绪,直到痊愈将其放生)
五、答案：
Para. 1:
Then all at once, a clever idea hit me. I could take a bite of each apple to make sure the apples for Julie were all sweet! Once I had the idea, I got down to doing that. I tasted six apples in all, finding one not delicious. So I put the rest into the plastic bag and went to Julie’s home. As usual, she welcomed me warmly, “Hey, little Mary, come in. Any gifts for me ” I told her that we had some apples for her, proudly put the bag of apples on her table and went back home.
Para. 2:
Returning home from Julie’s home, I told my mum what I had done with the apples. It was at the very moment that I noticed my mum’s eyes widened. Without a word, she picked up the bag of the remaining apples that I hadn’t tasted, took my hand and rushed out. When we stepped into Julie’s home, she was just looking confused about the apples I had brought to her. After hearing my mum explain the whole thing, Julie couldn’t help but burst into laughter and give me a hug. Instead of losing temper at my behaviour, she just felt happy about the reason behind the bitten apples.
六、答案：
"Go to that sink and wash your face," said the woman. The water dripping from his face, the boy looked at her. There was a long pause. After he had dried his face, the boy turned around, wondering what next. Without saying anything, the woman left and walked to the kitchen. She heated some beans and ham, and set the table. The woman did not ask the boy anything about where he lived, or anything else that would embarrass him. Instead, as they ate, she told him a lot about her job.
When they had finished eating, she got up and took out ten dollars the purse. "Now here, take this. From now on, I hope you will behave yourself." She led him to the door and opened it. She looked out into the street as he went down the steps. The boy wanted to say something other than, "Thank you, ma'am,", but before the boy moved his lips, the large woman shut the door. With tearful eyes, the boy bowed to the door and skipped away.
七、答案：
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help. I charged away to knock on the door on end. After a while, an athletic man of medium height opened the door. Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible. While calming me by patting my shoulder, the man reached over to grab the torch on the shoe cabinet near the door. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out completely. Shortly afterwards, we sent the child to the nearest police station and waited for his parents.
The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. They were more than grateful and thanked us. With an outpouring of relief, I was also proud of myself, as I had never imagined I would be part of a rescue party and the act of neighborliness could really make such a difference. While the mother and the father were holding the child tightly, I spotted the man beaming at the child with softness gleaming in his eyes. I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father. All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality. I walked to the man and tugged his sleeve, whispering, “Thank you.” I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在回家路上发现有小孩掉进了路上的洞里。作者告诉离他最近的房子房主,他很友好,愿意伸出援助之手。最后他们合力把孩子安全地从水坑里救出,孩子的父母很感谢他们。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“我不太确定能做些什么,也不知道要去哪里,但决定去最近的房子寻求帮助。”可知,第一段可描述作者是如何与好心的房主救出孩子并将其送到警察局的。②由第二段首句内容“刚刚下班到家的孩子父母听到发生的事情很震惊。”可知,第二段可描写孩子们的父母感谢作者和好心房主的善举,以及作者得到的感悟。2.续写线索:找到好心的房主帮忙——安全救出孩子——孩子的父母表示感谢——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①冲向:charge away/rush to②努力做:attempt to do/try to do③慢慢移动:inch/crawl④抓住:seize/get hold of⑤紧紧抱住:hold tightly/embrace/firmly情绪类①震惊的:shocked/astonished②感激的:grateful/thankful【点睛】【高分句型1】Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible.(as引导的让步状语从句)【高分句型2】No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.(No sooner……than……固定句型)【高分句型3】I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father.(现在分词作状语)【高分句型4】All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
八、答案：
She arrived home full of nervous excitement. The geranium was hidden in a paper bag under her sweater. She tiptoed into the room and whispered to me，"I looked at every plant and I know I got the best one！"With a sweet sense of familiar feeling, I helped my little sister hide that geranium in the attic. Then came Mother's Day. I was right there when she gave my mother the geranium, and I watched them both bursting with pride and delight. It was like being in a dream I had already dreamed.
My mother noticed me watching, and she gave me a soft, secret smile. With a sudden strong emotional feeling at my heart, I smiled back. Actually, I had been wondering how my mother could pretend to be surprised at this gift from her sixth child. But as I saw her eyes light up with delight when she was presented the most precious gift, I knew she was not pretending. She was really proud of her every child, and what mum received was not a bunch of flowers but a symbol of growth and love from her children.
九、答案：
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. When I called the number back, a woman answered, “Sorry, sir. I am really sorry to bother you. I did want to call to apologize.” From the woman, I learnt that the girl had bone cancer when she was born, and unfortunately her father died in an accident weeks ago. The little girl suffered from unbearable treatment every day. Feeling painful, she would cry for her dad who had always encouraged her, so her mother gave her a random number.
I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. The woman thought for a while, saying sadly, “She has gone. You must have kissed her on the phone, and she went with a smile as she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...” On hearing this, I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.
解析：
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后,女孩依旧不时地拨打作者的号码,即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后,作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女孩对爸爸的想念,作者应其请求,在电话中给了她一个吻,女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:在这之后不久,我对电话的另一端是谁产生了兴趣……,所以接下来应该写作者回拨电话以及女孩妈妈对作者的回复内容。特别要详细描述女孩之所以不停打电话找爸爸的具体原因。第二段开头是:我迫不及待地想问那个女人她女儿怎么样了……。本段应该写女孩现在的情况以及作者得知实情后的表现。
续写时需要注意:(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(3)上下文的连贯性;(4)所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:suffered from, apologize, encourage, think for a while, stream down, pray for等高级词汇;限制性定语从句“she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...”,“I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.”中非谓语的灵活使用以及“I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks.”中独立主格的熟练运用。
十、答案：
However, Mom was still reading and said nothing. Arthur wasn't sure if she had heard him or not so he called for help again, but still Mom didn't come. Then Arthur realized maybe it was he that could solve his problem at that very moment. He quietly picked up the toy train and put it in the box. It only took a minute for him to put the toy away, and now he wouldn't have to worry about hurting his feet again.
"Mom " said Arthur. "Tomorrow can you show me how to do the laundry so I can wash my socks " "Of course," said Mom. "It's nice to see you begin to learn to take care of yourself. I am always here to do whatever I can to help you become a more independent boy." Arthur felt better. He didn't want to wait until the next laundry day to have clean socks again. Maybe being neat wasn't so hard after all.