2023届新高考英语二轮复习读后续写强化100题(4)
一、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife called, "Will you come here and make your darling daughter eat her food "
I threw the newspaper away and rushed to the scene. My only daughter looked frightened. Tears were welling up in her eyes. In front of her was a bowl filled with curd rice which she particularly hated. But my mother and my wife believed firmly that curd rice is beneficial to health. I cleared my throat, and picked up the bowl. "Dina, why don't you take a few mouthfuls Just for Dad's sake, dear." Dina softened a bit, and wiped her tears with the back of her hands. "OK, Dad. I will eat not just a few mouthfuls, but the whole lot. But, you should…" She hesitated. "Dad, if I eat this entire curd rice, will you give me whatever I ask for " "Oh sure, darling,"! I replied. "Promise."
My girl stared at her mom and continued, "Ask Mom also to give a promise." My wife put her hand on Dina's and said, "Promise.”
"Dear, you still want a new computer Dad doesn't have that kind of money right now. OK " I became a bit anxious.
“No, Dad. I don't want anything expensive." Slowly and painfully, she finished eating the rice. Dina came to me with her eyes wide with expectation. All our attention was on her. She demanded, "Dad, I want to have my head shaved off this Sunday!" My wife shouted, "A girl having her head shaved off Impossible!"
"Dina, can you ask for something else Seeing you with a clean-shaven head, we'll be sad," I said. But Dina said, "No, Dad. I don't want anything else. You promised to reward me with whatever I ask for. Now, you are going back on your words. Was it not you who told me the story of King Harishchandra, and its moral that we should honor our promises no matter what " Dina was in tears.
It was time for me to call the shots for our promise must be kept.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I insisted that we must keep our words. ____________________________________________________
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A lady walked to me and told me that the boy walking along with my daughter was her son. _________
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二、读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow perched(栖息)on their window.
The father asked his son, “What is this ” The son replied, “It is a crow.” After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this ” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that it’s a crow!”
After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this ”
At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝). “It’s a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this ”
This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’ Are you not able to understand this ”
A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary, which he had maintained since his son was born.
On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.
When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:
Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好.
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After reading the diary, ___________________________________________________________
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Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. _________________________
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三、读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a certain store where they sell puddings, a number of these delicious things are laid out in a row during the Christmas season. Here you may select the one which is most to your taste, and you are even allowed to sample them before coming to a decision.
I have often wondered whether some people, who had no intention of making a purchase, would take advantage of this privilege. One day I asked this question to the shop girl, and I learned it was indeed the case.
“Now there’s one old gentleman, for instance,” she told me, “he comes here almost every week and samples each one of the puddings, though he never buys anything, and I suspect he never will. I remember him from last year before that, too. Well, let him come if he wants it, and welcome to it. ”
She was still speaking when an elderly gentleman limped(跛行) up to the counter and began looking closely at the row of puddings with great interest.
“Why, that’s the very gentleman I’ve been telling you about,” whispered the shop girl. “Just watch him now.” And then turning to him: “Would you like to sample them, sir Here’s spoon for you to use.”
The elderly gentleman, who was poorly but neatly dressed, accepted the spoon and began eagerly to sample one after another of the puddings, only braking off occasionally to wipe his red eyes with a large torn handkerchief.
“This is quite good.”
“This is not bad either, but a little too heavy.”
All the time it was quite evident that he sincerely believed that he might eventually buy one of these puddings, and I am positive that he did not for a moment feel that he was in any way cheating the store. Poor old chap! Probably he had come down in the world and this sampling was all that was left him from the time when he could afford to come and select his favorite pudding.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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In a burst of benevolence (善举), I went up to him and said: “Pardon me, sir, would you mind me purchasing you one of these puddings ” _____________________________________________________
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The girl started to make a parcel of it, while he pulled out a worn little black wallet. ________________
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四、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Some of my earliest memories involve sitting with my dad in his study every night when he came home from the office. I’d watch as he put his personal items away: his watch, wallet, comb and car keys would always occupy the same spot on the table every time. It was as if he could see invisible lines drawn specifically for these things, not a centimetre more or less.
Dad’s comb was jade green. I heard he bought it when he married Mum, which made the comb two years older than I was. Every night, he would smile, hand me the comb and say: “Be a good girl and help Daddy clean it, OK ”
I was more than happy to do it. At age five this ordinary task brought me such joy. I would excitedly tum the tap on, then brush the comb with a used toothbrush as hard as I could. Satisfied that I’d done a good job, I would proudly return die comb to Dad. He would smile at me, and place the comb on top of his wallet.
About two years later, Dad left his sales job and started his own wholesale business. I started primary school. That was when things started to change. Dad’s business wasn’t doing so well, and our stable life started getting shaky. He didn’t come home as much as he used to - just a couple of times a week. And when he did come home, it was always late and I'd already be in bed. I started to get mad. Why didn’t he listen to Mum and just stick to his old job Why take the risk and place the whole family in trouble Over the years, I stopped waiting for him to come home, and stopped going downstairs to check on him.
Today, I'm no longer a kid. Now 28, I’ve graduated from college and got a job. Dad’s business has also started to get back on track. Things are better now. Yet the uncomfortable silence between Dad and me continued.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. _________________________________
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When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. ________________
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五、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jane, a lovely girl, had a very sweet family. Although the second oldest, Jane had the least self-control, and had hard times trying to control her bad temper, which was continually getting her into trouble. Poor Jane tried desperately to be better, but her inner enemy was always ready to flame up and defeat her, and her mother was always the first to come to her rescue.
Jane had just finished the draft of her first book, which was regarded as a pride of the whole family, expecting it was good enough to print. To celebrate this big event, Jane and the other two sisters planned to go to the theatre to see The Seven Castles. They didn't want to take Amy, the youngest, with them. Seeing that they were leaving, Amy begged them not to leave her alone and even offered to buy her own ticket herself, but in vain. “You can't sit with us, for our seats are reserved, and you mustn't sit alone, and that will spoil our pleasure, ”scolded Jane, crosser than ever. Sitting on the floor, Amy began to cry.
The girls hurried down, leaving their sister crying. Amy forgot her grown-up ways, and acted like a spoilt child. She called over the banisters(扶手), in a threatening tone, “You'll be sorry for this, Jane March; see if you aren't. ”“ You dare!”said Jane, slamming the door.
They had a happy time, for The Seven Castles was as brilliant and wonderful as heart could wish. But, in spite of the gorgeous princes and princesses, Jane's pleasure had a drop of bitterness in it. The fairy queen's yellow hair reminded her of Amy with wondering what her sister would do to make her“ Sorry for it. ”
When they got home, Jane found Amy reading in the sitting room. Jane assumed an injured air as they came in but everything was in its place. Jane decided that Amy had forgiven and forgotten her wrongs.
Jane was mistaken, for the next day she found her book missing. _______________________________
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At the moment, their mother came to rescue, with the book in her hand. __________________________
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六、阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dad and Madison were walking through the party store, gathering decorations for Madison's upcoming birthday party.
"But I don't want to invite Lucy Gilbert! I don't like her!"
"Madison, you are being unreasonable. If every girl in your class is invited to a party but you, you'll feel left out. It would be a big mistake to not invite Lucy to the party. "
"She never even talks to me!"
Dad sighed and moved down the aisle. "Lucy is a new girl in class. She just moved here a little over a month ago, Think about how that must feel. She doesn't know one single person in the school. She left all of her old friends behind and now she has to try to make new friends. Your party will be a great chance for her to get to know everyone. "
"No, it won't. She will probably sit in the corner and not talk to anyone. Every day at lunch she sits all by herself. She wants to eat alone!" Madison shrugged and rolled her eyes.
"Madison, I'm done discussing this. You will invite every girl in your class, including Lucy Gilbert!"
On Saturday morning, the family blew up balloons and decorated the house cheerfully. Madison was dressed beautifully for the day, wearing her new blue dress. It was not typical of her to dress herself like this. She usually wore sports clothes because she loved to be outside riding her horse Star with a lead rope(级组).
Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep, picturing various presents her friends would bring her. In the meanwhile, she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came. Anyhow, all the girls she invited came finally, including Lucy.
The girls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone. Later, all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents. Opening them one by one, Madison thanked her friends, with a bright smile on her face.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Lucy's present was the very last to be opened. ______________________________________________
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Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. __________________
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七、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The quilt took a lot of time. But the messages on it were meaningful.
When I started my current project, I woke up every day with new ideas and fresh enthusiasm. I really believed in the importance of what I wanted to create, and I had my husband, Claudio, to cheer me on. But then, things had gotten hard. I injured my shoulder and my recovery was slow. In the middle of it, I lost Claudio to cancer. I was discouraged, lonely, and without Claudio’s comfort. Facing down the half-finished quilt in my sewing room one morning soon after his death, I could hardly gather the energy to sew it.
The quilt was meant to be a way to keep my old nursing class together. We’d graduated from Mercy College over 40 years before and quickly worked all over the country. After our last anniversary party, I tried to find ways for everyone to stay in touch, but nothing ever seemed to work out. I knew I needed to find a connection to share at a distance. I thought about a quilt.
I got in touch with as many of my old classmates as I could. Everyone who wanted to join the project was sent a piece of fabric. They could sign it or write a personal message. Once I got the pieces back, I’d sew them into the finished piece.
I rubbed my painful shoulder and ran my hand over the unfinished quilt. Even after several operations, movement in my left arm was limited.
There was still so much to do. Our class’s forty-fifth anniversary party was coming up but my heart wasn’t in this project anymore. With Claudio’s encouragement I’d kept at it despite my painful shoulder. But Claudio was gone now. Working on the quilt was impossible with my aches and pains. Why was I even trying I covered up my sewing machine and left the quilt as it was.
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Weeks passed but I didn’t sew a thing. ___________________________________________________
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I arrived at our forty-fifth anniversary party. _______________________________________________
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八、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Music has always been an essential part of my family. As a little girl, I often watched my mom singing with others in the church. As I grew older, she and I would sing while we did the dishes or hung clothes. My brother Dean was also a musical soul. In good time or in bad, there was always music in our house. It shapes us, comforted us, and gave us a way to express feelings that might otherwise have gone unspoken.
After Dean became a father, we learned that his oldest son was on the autism spectrum(自闭症). My nephew Dj did not handle social situation well, and sometimes even for him to speak aloud outside the family was a struggle. He worked very hard to overcome his fears, so much so that the year he was eight, he decided he wanted to be part of the Christmas music program with the other children in his Sunday school class. The part he had been offered was one that required him to sing a verse all on his own - a solo.
My brother carefully explained to him that this would mean singing in front of the audience; there would be no one singing with him. Dj considered this very carefully. After a couple of days, he decided that he would accept the part. He explained to us that he believed he could do it because it was a very special occasion, and lie would practice until he was as perfect as he could be. He said he knew his daddy would help him to be the best singer possible.
For over a month, he and his father practiced together. Every evening would find them locked away in the music room, my brother on guitar, and my nephew's small voice coming from somewhere deep down inside his little body. He gained confidence, and when the day of the concert arrived, he was certain all would go well. My brother waited backstage, giving Dj double thumbs-up, and he came out lo sit with the rest of the family to watch and take photos.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When it was finally time for Dj to sing, the music played on, and he froze. _______________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone turned to see who was singing, while I knew it was my brother. ________________________
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九、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短 文。
Bird Song
“Let it go!” Caroline yelled. Two boys were bending over a bird, as a third one held the poor creature roughly by its wings, "You'll hurt it." Caroline looked fearful for the bird.
"That's the point." The boys laughed. The tallest stood up and glared at Caroline. "Here, catch this!” He said as he sailed the now broken-winged bird at Caroline. The poor creature cried in pain, as its wings had been badly damaged. The boys ran off laughing at their handy work.
Caroline bent down to carefully pick up the bird. The poor feathered soul was wriggling (扭动)about, with a fearful look in its eyes. "Don't worry,“ Caroline whispered softly. She took a handkerchief from her pocket and gently placed the bird on it.
Caroline walked as quickly as she could back to her house, careful not to shake the bird around too much. She found a shoe box, filled it with soft cotton balls and then laid the bird down in its new resting place.
“Let me get you some water and food. That’s the least I can do." She took a tiny saucer from the kitchen, filled it with water, and placed it in a comer of the box. She managed to find some sunflower seeds, as that was the only bird-friendly food she could think of. Caroline was worried. She didn't want the bird to die. The poor bird was now fast asleep, no doubt tired out from its earlier suffering. “Please don't die." Caroline whispered tearfully.
If there was anyone whom she could turn to, it would be Mr. Roberts. Mr. Roberts was working at the nature museum. He had bird feeders throughout his yard, and sometimes would drop in her science class at school. Caroline never knew there was so much information about birds, until hearing him speak. She figured he would know what to do.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Caroline called Mr. Roberts and hurriedly told him her tale. ___________________________________
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In the morning, the Blackwell Bird Rescue Society called, informing a car would come to pick up the bird at 10 am. __________________________________________________________________________
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十、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back! ”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can! ”Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up, which made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!”Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack’s mind. “Why not make a cane(拐杖)out of a young tree!”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea. ________________________________________________________
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Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. _______________________________________________
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答案以及解析
一、答案:
I insisted that we must keep our words. I told my mother and wife that if we broke our promises, Dina would never learn to keep her own. So I told Dina her wish would be fulfilled. I accompanied her to the barber's. With her head clean-shaven, Dina had a round-face, and her eyes looked big and beautiful. The next day, I dropped her at her school. I was about to leave when I heard someone shouting, "Dina, please wait for me!" It was a boy with a hairless head, too.
A lady walked to me and told me that the boy walking along with my daughter was her son. She told me Dina helped her son a lot. From her words, I knew her son was suffering from a terrible disease and lost all his hair due to the side effects of the treatment. He refused to come back to school, fearing the teasing of the schoolmates. Dina visited him last week and promised him that she would help him out. But the mother never imagined Dina would sacrifice her lovely hair for the sake of her son. I stood with tears welling up in my eyes. My little girl was a true angel!
解析:
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者去劝女儿吃掉她不爱吃的食物,女儿在父母承诺满足自己的要求之后吃光了食物。女儿提出要求,她想要剃光头,起初作者和妻子想要拒绝,但是最后作者决定遵守承诺。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容我坚持我们必须遵守诺言。“可知,第一段可描写作者和家人遵守诺言,带女儿剃了光头,第二天去上学时,遇见了一个光头的男孩。
②由第二段首句内容“一位女士走过来告诉我,和我女儿一起走的那个男孩是她的儿子。"可知,第二段可描写作者在与女士交谈后,了解到女儿制光头的原因,为女儿的行为感动。
2.续写线索:遵守诺言—女儿剃光头—遇见光头男孩与女士交谈一了解原因—感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①违背诺言:break one's promises/break one's words/go back on one's promises
②实现:fulfill/achieve/come true
③陪伴她:accompany her/keep her company
情绪类
①害怕:fear/be afraid/be scared
②泪流满面:with tears welling up/in tears
【高分句型 1】I told my mother and wife that if we broke our promises, Dina would never learn to keep her own.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句作told的宾语,由连接词if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型 2】I was about to leave when I heard someone shouting, “Dina, please wait for me!”(由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)
二、答案:
After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me Will he think of me as a burden Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding
Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior. He said this aloud, “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad. It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me. You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university. I will serve you in the best day.”
解析:
1. 本文需要根据所给情节进行续写。 1. 在题干中要求包含相关内容,故在续写时要十分注意,保证内容上的完整。 2. 续写内容的结构要清晰,用到相关连词或表达,使文章更有逻辑性。 3. 在续写时,要注意使用复杂句型,符合该年段英语学习内容;亦可多尝试使用高级词汇,来增加文章亮点。 4. 1) 儿子的眼睛里充满了泪水,开始回忆起他过去常常和父亲坐在一起的日子(be filled with 被……充满;when he used to sit together with his father: when 引导定语从句) 2) 是你从“我”还是个小孩子的时候就开始关心“我”,把你无私的爱洒在“我”身上。(It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless love on me. 强调句型) 3) 你努力工作赚钱,这样“我”才能上得起大学。(so that I could afford to go to university: so that 引导目的状语从句)
三、答案:
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In a burst of benevolence, I went up to him and said: “Pardon me, sir, would you mind me purchasing you one of these puddings ” He was surprised, saying, “Excuse me, I don't believe I have the pleasure of knowing you. Undoubtedly you have mistaken me for someone else.” And with a quick decision he turned to the shop girl and said in a loud voice, “Kindly pack me up this one here. I will take it with me.” He pointed at one of the largest and most expensive of the puddings.
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The girl started to make a parcel of it, while he pulled out a worn little black wallet. He began counting out shillings and pennies on to the counter. To save his “honor”, he had been forced into a purchase which he could not possibly afford to buy. How I regretted having said that! It was too late though, and I felt that the kindest thing I could do now would be walk away. “You pay at the desk,” the shop girl was telling him, but he did not seem to understand and kept trying to put the coins into her hand. And that was the last time I saw or heard of the old gentleman. Now he can never go there to sample puddings and more.
解析:
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一家布丁店可以免费品尝,-位老人几乎每周都来品尝每一个布丁,但是从来不买,于是这天作者主动提出给老人买一个布丁,结果伤害了老人的自尊心,老人被迫买下了自己买不起的东西。后来,老人再也没有出现在店里。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我忽然动了恻然心,走到他跟前说:‘对不起, 先生,您介意我买一-只,布丁给您吗 ’”可知,第一段可描写老人听到作者的提议后,立即拒绝了,当时提出要买最大、最贵的一只布丁。
②由第二段首句内容“姑娘开始把它包成一个小包,这时他掏出了一个破旧的黑色小钱包。”可知,第二段可描写老人是如何买布丁的,为了保住他的“名誉”,他被迫购买了他根本买不起的东西。最后,老人再也没有出现在店里。
2.续写线索:提议买布丁一一老人拒绝一一老人要买最贵的布丁一一老人付钱买下一一老人再也没去品尝布丁
3.词汇激活
行类
付钱: count out /force into a purchase/ afford to buy/ put the coins into her hand/ pay
打包: pack up/ make a parcel of
举动:turn to/ point at/keep trying to/tell/walk away
情感类surprised/ the largest and most expensive of/ possibly/ kindest
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|高分句型1].To save his "honor”, he had been forced into a purchase which he could not possibly afford to buy.非谓语动词的运用和运用了which 引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2].It was too late though, and I felt that the kindest thing I could do now would be walk away.运用了that引导的宾语从句。
四、答案:
Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. As usual, I helped him carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb It's been a while since I last cleaned.” It hit me then why, as a child, helping my dad clean his comb was such a joy. That routine meant that my dad was home early to spend the evening with Mum and I. It meant he would watch TV with us or play a few video games with me. It meant a happy and loving family.
When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. They are more noticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as before. The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places his comb on top of his wallet. After so many years, he still organizes his personal items in the same care fill way. I guess some things never change. And for that. I'm glad.
解析: 本文以时间为线索,讲述了作者小时候很喜欢等父亲下班,帮父亲清理他的梳子。但是后来父亲自己创业,初期艰难,便再也没有经常很早回家,和作者之间的亲子互动也少了很多。作者对此心怀怨念。在作者28岁时,父亲和作者之间解开了心结。
【高分句型一】When I turned to leave, he said: "Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb It's been a while since I last cleaned."
译文:当我转身离开时,他说:“嘿,你愿意帮我清理梳子吗 我上次打扫已经有一段时间了。”
分析:when引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family.
译文:一个只想让家人过上好日子的父亲的微笑。
分析:who引导的定语从句。
五、答案:
Paragraph 1:
Jane was mistaken, for the next day she found her book missing. Jane went directly towards Amy, saying “You've got my book. ” Amy said nothing, but her color rose. Jane cried, taking Amy by her shoulders and looking fiercely enough to frighten anyone away. Amy shouted, “I have burnt it up. ” Jane turned very pale, while her eyes kindled. Her hot temper mastered her. She shook Amy till her teeth chattered in her head, crying in a passion of grief and anger.
Paragraph 2:
At the moment, their mother came to rescue, with the book in her hand. “Stop, both of you!” mother tried to calm them down. Then, she turned to Amy, “You know, it was a dreadful disaster if you should have burnt the book. ” Amy felt that no one would love her till she had asked pardon. She admitted that she was just hiding it away to annoy Jane. On seeing the book, Jane was really sorry for what she had done. Jane knew that she should remember this day and resolve with all her soul that she would never know another like it. The family storm cleared up.
六、答案:
Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened. Madison picked up the present and ripped open the giftwrap paper. Inside was a hand-made lead rope. Shocked, she looked up at Lucy. “It’s a lead rope for your horse Star. I made it myself!” Madison pulled it out of the box and placed it on her lap, amazed at its beauty. Lucy added, “ I heard you talking about your horse at school. That’s when I got the idea to make you a lead rope.”
Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. It was, by far, her very favorite birthday present of the day. She suddenly felt so bad because she had been so mean to Lucy. With mixed feelings of regret and gratitude, she blinked hard to fight the tears building in her eyes. “Thanks so much for this lead rope. I love it! Would you like to join us and be our friends ” Lucy nodded cheerfully. Madison put her arm around Lucy’s shoulders, both smiling. With applause and laughter echoing through the house, Lucy joined the other girls to enjoy the party.
七、答案:
Para 1:
Weeks passed but I didn’t sew a thing. I saw it one afternoon when I went into my sewing room. Quilting pieces covered the table. They were filled with colorful messages from my old classmates at Mercy College. I picked one up: “Mercy sisters—friends forever” The handwriting was messy, but the statement was true. I could almost imagine my old friends right beside me, whispering words of hope and love. Maybe I’m not as alone as I thought. Suddenly my project no longer seemed so frightening. No time to waste. I uncovered my sewing machine and got to work.
Para 2:
I arrived at our forty-fifth anniversary party. I was equipped with pictures of the finished quilt. The ladies cheered as the photos went from hand to hand, one dear friend to another. I couldn’t wait for them to hold the real thing, for them to be wrapped in the comfort of old friends, just like I had been when I needed it most.
八、答案:
When it was finally time for Dj to sing, the music played on, and he froze. His little face grew pale, and we could see the panic in his eyes as the silence grew. The pianist started the music again but still nothing came out. The entire audience seemed to lean forward in expectation. The silence seemed enormous. The whole family of us were all staring at our little boy, hoping he would cheer up and act out his part. The he pianist started over again, and a low voice filled the air, singing the song.
Everyone turned to see who was singing, white I knew it was my brother. My mother and I were fixed on the little angel on stage. The color came back to his face, and his eyes began to sparkle. He opened his mouth and began to sing along, his little voice growing stronger with each word. The show ended with thunderous applause, with the kids bowing dramatically, accepting their praise for a job well done. I turned to my brother with tears in my eyes. I knew at that time no words needed to be spoken; the understanding between us was louder than the applause that night.
解析:这篇文章又是融合不同的要素在里面,比如音乐,亲情,鼓励,善意,注意首尾呼应,即大家在第二段的结尾要和 It shaped us, comforted us and gave us a way to express feelings that might otherwise have gone unspoken.
九、答案:
Caroline called Mr. Roberts and hurriedly told him her tale. She told him about the boys, the bird, and the makeshift shoe box home. Mr. Roberts was moved by Caroline’s efforts. “That bird is fortunate that you came to its rescue. Don’t worry. I will make a call to the bird rescue. They can make a pick-up for your feathered friend in the morning.” Mr. Roberts assured Caroline confidently. Breathing a sigh of relief, Caroline looked at the bird, which was still peacefully sleeping in the box as if nothing had happened. She went to bed, hoping that it would survive the night.
In the morning, the Blackwell Bird Rescue Society called, informing a car would come to pick up the bird at 10 am. Hanging up the phone, Caroline smiled with relief. “I guess this is goodbye,” Caroline said to the bird in the shoe box. Curiously, it replied with a short chirp as if it understood what she was saying. As scheduled, a car from the Bird Rescue Society pulled up to her house at 10 am. After examining it carefully, the driver packed the bird gently into the car, promising Caroline that they would get the little one back up and flying again. Standing at the door, Caroline watched the driver get back into the car, which slowly drove away and disappeared from sight.
解析:
文章以“一只鸟"为线索,讲述了三个男孩在虐待一只鸟时,卡罗琳及时赶到并制止了他们的行为。几个男孩随后把已经断翼的鸟抛向了卡罗琳。她小心翼翼捧着这只受伤的鸟并带它回家。回家后,卡罗琳找到一个鞋盒子,往里面填入棉球,把它放入这个“装潢"过的休息室。之后她给这只鸟拿了小茶碟,里面盛了水喂它。再喂它了一些瓜子后,小鸟睡着了。她担心小鸟可能会死去,便向罗伯特先生求救。
1。段落续写
①由第一段首句“卡罗琳打电话给罗伯茨先生,急忙告诉他她的故事。"可知,第一段可以描写罗伯特先生听完她的故事后,被她帮助小鸟的行为所感动,并决定向鸟类救援队求助。
②由第二段首句“早上,布莱克威尔鸟类救援协会打电话来,通知一辆车会在上午10点来接鸟。”可知,第二段可以描写救援队抵达卡罗琳家里后,仔细检查后,答应救援这只鸟并带走了它。
2.续写线索打电话给罗伯特先生—罗伯特先生感动—求救鸟类救援队—救援队答应救援—救援队如期而至—救援队带走小鸟
3.词汇激活
行动类
①匆忙地,迫不及待地:in a hurry/can't wait to do/eagerly/anxiously
②感动:touch/affect/bring sb. to tears
③保证,承诺:promise/permit/ensure/guarantee
④检查:check up/inspect
情绪类
④f欣慰地:to one's relief/to the relief of sb.
②轻轻地:soft/noble/mild
【高分句型1】Breathing a sigh of relief, Caroline looked at the bird, which was still peacefully sleeping in the box as if nothing had happened.(运用了现在分词作状语, which引导的非限制性定语从句及as if的虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】Standing at the door, Caroline watched the driver get back into the car, which slowly drove away and disappeared from sight.(运用了现在分词作状语,which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十、答案:
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, "You brothers are really great creators!" Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around, he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.