2023届新高考英语一轮复习 读后续写 练习题（Word版含答案，共10篇）
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2023届新高考英语二轮复习读后续写强化100题（9）
一、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shrieking Toad and Dancing Ant
Kids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine was Shrieking Toad(尖叫的癞蛤蟆). I guessed it was my fault that I couldn't get a cool one.
A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lunch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped onto my shirt from the branches above. I shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didn't even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, he'd shout, "Shrieking Toad, show us how you can hop!" I corrected him and said that it had been an eastern gray tree frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.
Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read Jay and Stan" as a team, it got on my nerves. Stan shouted "Great! Shrieking Toad!" Then he called to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. "Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!" Kids roared with laughter.
After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone. Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadn't thought of it earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. "Yeah, I'd better do what I'm toad (told)." Stan laughed and set off.
Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago. I ran toward the sound. I would never have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like "Dance! Dance!" Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting his clothes made me realize what he was really saying, "Ants! Ants!"
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. ________________________________________________
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That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight. _______
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二、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland's Keflavik Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler's two essentials: a dream and a GPS unit. What could go wrong
The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. "I want to see this through my own eyes," he thought as he watched the news on his couch.
On a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address.
But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering(引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine.
The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn't set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded(打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff, he knew that the device had failed him.
He was lost. He didn't know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. _____________________________________
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. __________________________________
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三、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a summer morning. The sun was out in full splendor against a nearly cloudless light blue sky. "Mamma," said Susie Dean, a 11-year-old girl, may I go to the woods and pick berries " Mrs. Dean replied, "Yes, but you must take Rover with you.
Susie swiftly got everything ready, and her mother packed a nice lunch for her. She tied the cover and fastened a tin cup to it. The little girl called Rover - a great Newfoundland dog, and gave him a tin pail (锡桶)to carry. “If I bring it home full, Mamma,” she said, “won't you make some berry cakes for tea ”
Away she tripped, singing as she went down the lane and across the pasture. When she got to the woods, she put her lunch basket down beside a tree and began to pick berries. Rover ran about, chasing a squirrel or a rabbit now and then, but never straying far from Susie.
The tin pail was not a very small one. By the time it was two thirds full, Susie began to feel hungry and thought she would eat her lunch. Rover came and took his place at her side the moment she began to eat. Did Susie give him some of the lunch No. She was in a selfish mood and did no such thing.
"There, Rover, run away!" she said, but Rover stayed near her, watching her steadily with his clear brown eyes. The meat he wanted so much was soon eaten up, and all he got of the nice lunch was a small crust of gingerbread that Susie threw away.
After lunch, Susie played for a while by the stream. She repeatedly threw sticks into the water, and Rover swam in and brought them back. Then she began to pick berries again. She did not enjoy the afternoon as she did the morning. The sunshine was as bright, the berries were as sweet and plentiful, and she was neither tired nor hungry. But good, faithful Rover was hungry, and she had not given him even one piece of meat. She tried to forget how selfish she had been, but she could not do so, and quite early she started for home.
When she was nearly out of the woods, a rustling in the underbrush attracted her attention. "I wonder if that is a bird or a squirrel," she said to herself. "If I can catch it, how glad I will be!" She tried to make her way quietly through the underbrush.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:
However, she saw a large snake coiled up before her, prepared for an attack! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
"O Rover, my dear good dog!" Susie cried," How brave you are!" ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
December 5,2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.
When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012.For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.
In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭). Still, Bethany struggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center,where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions.She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.
When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. _________________________________________
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Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. _________________________________________
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五、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make both ends meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a carved name.
On impulse (冲动), I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, and I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes," she said in surprise, with extreme excitement, "it is my umbrella which was stolen a year ago."
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I could only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christinas for me, I knew, no gifts and no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile to greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen and overwhelmed by misery.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. _____
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my attention. _______________________________
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六、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Norwood, a junior at St. Petersburg^ Lakewood High School, participated in the school’s Athletic Lifestyle Management Academy. The program prepares students for various careers in health science with two components. The first one is a hands-on skills component where the students have to demonstrate that they are expert in the skills of adult, child and infant CPR (心 肺复苏术),how to help somebody who's choking, as well as how to use an AED (自动体外除 颤仪).And the other is a written test component, showing that they master that knowledge. Norwood took a great interest in the programme, which was in line with her initial career pursuit in the future.
On the first day of the programme, her instructor Miller did vital signs and students learned how to take blood pressure, check pulse, and apply CPR. Norwood watched closely and performed the hand-on skills well.
Norwood and Simmons shared a long friendship. They had been friends since the seventh grade and since then they had built an unbreakable bond. The following day after school, the 16- year-old girl Norwood was driving three friends home in St. Petersburg, Florida, when another driver slammed into her from her left and sent her car rushing forward in an uncontrollable way.
“We crashed in someone's yard and I hit the tree," Norwood said. The impact jammed shut the driver's side door, so Norwood climbed out of the front window. Two of her friends managed to get out of the car unharmed, but the collision caused her 16-year-old friend Simmons to hit her head on the backseat window.
When Norwood turned around, she didn't see Simmons running with them so she had to run back to the car as fast as she could. Simmons was just sitting there unresponsive. Apparently, she passed out owing to the huge impact force. The unexpected crash left the girls in panic. A lot of people started to gather around to see what was happening. The crowd watched in astonishment, open-mouthed. Someone advised to make an emergency call immediately.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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And that was when the training Norwood had just learned kicked in. ____________________________
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When Miller and her students learned about the news, they were at a loss of words and so proud. ______
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七、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写短文的次数应为150左右。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn’t earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us because we couldn’t afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don’t care who her father is; her grades can’t match Martha’s at all. I won’t lie or falsify(伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone’s voice sounded calm. “Joann’s father is not only on the Board(董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only a word here and there filtered through. “…Martha is Mexican…resign … won’t do it …”
To this day I don’t remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldn’t hear me.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There’s been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won’t cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said, I’ll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day, I cried sadly on the walk home.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. __
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. ___________________
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八、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shoveling(铲) snow had always been the best part about winter. Not that I thought it was fun, but my dad's reaction to a clean driveway kept me going. He hated shoveling snow more than anything. So, I took it upon myself at eight years old to do it for him. Every time I saw snow fall from the sky, I knew the universe was ready to put me to work.
I would run and put on my jacket, snow boots to prepare myself for the work ahead. But every single time, before I went outside, I would stop by my older sister's room to see if she wanted to help me. I knew she would say no, but I always asked anyway.
One day there was a lot of snow, and there was no way I would be able to clean it all by myself. It was getting dark, and I hated the thought of my dad having to shovel the snow after a long day's work. So I did the routine and knocked on my sister's door. As I expected, she gave me the same old "no". Annoyed, I asked again. Without saying anything further, she got up, pushed me out of the room and slammed(砰地关上) the door in my face.
I stood there silently for a second. Then, I turned around, went out of the house, and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy that lay in my driveway. But I couldn't calm down. I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone. All I wanted was some help. The more remembered every "no" she had ever said to me, the angrier I became.
I fought tirelessly, my short arms swinging from side to side while the wind cut against my cheeks. After one long hour, I was not even halfway done. Looking at the victorious snow, I thought of Dad's disappointment.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. _________________________________________
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My sister and I went outside. ____________________________________________________________
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九、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jim slumped on the couch. Mother's Day was coming up, and he didn't have a present. "How can I buy a present without any money " he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. "Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (购物狂欢) for her," said the ad.
"This is perfect!" thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
"My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom."
Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品). "Mom will love having a shopping spree," he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother's Day. Jim still hadn't heard anything about the contest.
"What am I going to do now " he wondered. He didn't have a present, and he didn't have a shopping spree. And he still didn't have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears hurt.
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Suddenly, he had an idea._______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom._________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
十、阅读下面材料;根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I first got the bird, it must have only just been hatched(孵化). Its mother had disappeared, leaving it alone and shivering in the face of the north wind. I decided to take it straight back and build it a new home.
I hung an empty flowerpot(花盆) and it was in this pot that the bird was to have its new home. When Dad got home, he immediately discovered the new addition to our family. Without saying a word, he turned around and left the house. After some time, he returned and I saw that he had a handful of grass and pine needles. Obviously, Dad thought the nest I had made was far too rough and so he had decided to decorate it himself.
"A bird born at this time of year won't survive the winter. "In spite of this prediction on the bird's future, Dad very carefully fashioned the nest himself. Soon I found "Nuo Nuo"(Dad had named him) had started to grow feathers.
Dad probably realized that he had been a little cruel in his prediction. You see, he had already started training Nuo Nuo to walk. As you know, Nuo Nuo lived in a flowerpot, not a cage or anything. It was obvious that Nuo Nuo didn't realize he was a bird. He perhaps thinks he was one of the family. But it is not enough for a bird to walk, it must fly as well. Dad soon began attempting to make him learn this new ability, but it was not an easy task. After all, nobody in our family had mastered the art of flying. We didn't even have wings. How could we ask Nuo Nuo to do something that we had no means of doing ourselves
注意∶
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The flying lessons went on regardless. ___________________________________________ _________
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Gradually, this stupid action of Dad's did actually have an effect. _______________________________
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答案以及解析
一、答案：
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. He was hitting his clothes violently. I did what must be done. I pulled him into a mud pool. He was shocked at first, and then he must have realized why I did it. The ants went away. Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. "I guess you're going to have a pretty good story for everyone," Stan said awkwardly. "Yeah, I guess so. You'll probably be known as Dancing Ant from now on."
That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight. Then I said to him, "I know how it feels to be teased, and it isn't fun." I could see Stan's worry turn into surprise. The next day when I was picked for a basketball team, someone called, "Unfair! Shrieking Toad is a natural jumper!" Stan shouted, "Knock it off, guys. His name is Jay." I wouldn't have minded being given a cool nickname. But being known as plain "Jay", and Stan's friend, turned out to be cool too.
二、答案：
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The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered(结巴巴地说) about his hotel and handed her his reservation(预订). "No, this isn't the hotel you have booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south," she told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out(弄明白) what happened. The address was wrong with an extra "r" in it.
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel with a free meal and a bed so that he could get a good night's sleep(so that引导的目的状语从句). The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In the light of(鉴于) his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it(with复合结构) in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the woman, Noel finally reached his destination. "Without her help, I wouldn't have made it." He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him(who引导的非限制性定语从句).
三、答案：
However, she saw a large snake coiled up before her, prepared for an attack! There stood the 11-year-old girl, stiffening with horror. In a flash, she saw Rover springing forward, seized the snake by the neck. He knocked it against the ground fiercely and repeatedly. Ultimately, the large snake twitched once and lay motionless, a pool of its blood soaking through the earth beneath. Scared witless, Susie was simply frozen like a statue staring stupidly at the lifeless snake with wide-open eyes. Suddenly she heard a whimpering and realized it was hers. Her lips were salty with tears trickling down her face.
"O Rover, my dear good dog!" Susie cried, "How brave you are!" The faithful dog came and rubbed his head against her hand. Guilt written all over her face, Susie put her arms around his neck, and burst into tears. "My dearest dog! How sorry I am that I was so selfish!" She was deeply moved by his guileless devotion, determined to learn to be on her guard against a self-centered spirit and become a more lovable little girl. Though not completely following her words, Rover understood the tone of her voice and capered about in great glee, barking and wagging his tail all the way home.
四、答案：
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scared they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethany's anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home.(77 words)
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany now lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethany's 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny young lady who would talk your ear off.(77 words)
解析：
这是一篇记叙文. Josephine 和Scott Lansing 几年来相继收养了Cloe , Josie , Annabelle 三位女孩, 并给她们提供了健康幸福的成长
环境. 因为家庭原因, Bethany 不得不接受寄养家庭, 但是她的童年经历使得她不信任任何人, 在Helping Hand Home 工作人员
的帮助下, 她的性格有了些许好转, 但是在与Lansing 一家会面时, 还是有些抵触.
1 . 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 "但Lansing 一家并不打算放弃. " 可知 , 第一段可描写Lansing 一家合力劝导Bethany .
②由第二段首句内容 "后来, Bethany 经历了许多激动人心的事情. " 可知, 第二段可描写Bethany 的经历和变化.
2 . 续写线索: 女孩们分享经历——Bethany 不再抗拒外出游玩——Bethany 的变化
3 . 词汇激活
行为类
①想做某事 want to do / would like to do
②看看 see / have a look at
③返回 return to / go back to
情绪类
①害怕的 scared / frightened
②幸福的 happy / blissful
[ 高分句型 1 ] They were patient with Beth any and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. ( 运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
[ 高分句型 2 ] When Beth any returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self - confidence . (运用了when 引导的状语从句)
五、答案：One possible version:
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man talking heartily to her and went to the door. He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of parcels. "This is a mistake," I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had left, I didn't know what to do. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other. What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender.
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my attention. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for returning the umbrella. Merry Christmas! "It was sent by the lady. I held the note tightly, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
六、答案：
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And that was when the training Norwood had just learned kicked in. She started yelling, " Back up! Back up! She needs space! " She pulled Simmons out of the back seat, avoiding broken glass from the window. Then she checked her pulse on the neck and put her head against Simmons' chest, before she started doing CPR on her immediately. After the 30 compressions and two rescue breaths, Simmons regained consciousness. The ambulance quickly arrived and Simmons was rushed to the hospital without delay, where she received stitches for a cut in her forehead.
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When Miller and her students learned about the news, they were at a loss of words and so proud. "I was just absolutely astounded, Miller said. "It is so astonishing that Norwood should rescue her friend with the knowledge and skills she learned in such a short me. This is what every teacher dreams of. Simmons was overwhelmingly touched by her friend and conveyed her sincere gratitude to Norwood, tears streaming down her cheeks. But for Norwood s quick thinking, she couldn’t have been rescued and recovered so well. Brimming with pride and confidence, Norwood strengthened her determination to pursue a career in the medical field.
解析：第一步:品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
第二步:仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
第三步:回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
第四步:拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
高级句式:
1.where引导的定语从句,如The ambulance quickly arrived and Simmons was rushed to the hospital without delay, where she received stitches for a cut in her forehead.等;
2.独立主格的使用,如Simmons was overwhelmingly touched by her friend and conveyed her sincere gratitude to Norwood, tears streaming down her cheeks.等;
高级词汇:
1.yell 喊叫;
2.regain consciousness 恢复意识;
3.without delay 毫不耽搁;
4.absolutely 完全地;
5.sincere gratitude 真诚的感激。
七、答案：
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. His back bent into an arch and his face was drowned in sweats. I called him, in a choked voice. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, after which Grandpa fell silent, eyes rounding in disbelief. A surge of regret gnawing at my heart, I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. I knew I might never get that jacket which represented my years of hard work and expectation. However, I tried to fight back the tears, with my head still lifted with dignity. “My grandpa…won’t pay the dollars. He said if I had to pay for it, then it wouldn’t be a scholarship jacket.” There was a deafening silence. The principal looked at me, biting his lip, as if thinking. Finally, after what seemed like a century, he decided that he would make an exception for me. I could hardly believe it. Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
解析： 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统：一件漂亮的金绿色夹克（学校的颜色）被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。作者从一年级起就一直是个优等生，非常期待能拥有那件夹克。况且按照作者的家庭条件是买不起的。作者无意中听到数学老师和历史老师的关于是否把夹克奖励给父亲是校董事会的乔安，作者很失望，第二天校长说今年关于奖励金夹克的政策有了变化。今年董事会决定收取15美元的费用，作者决定回去与祖父商量一下。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆田里找到了爷爷”可知，第一段可简单地描写爷爷，作者将事情告诉了爷爷，爷爷对作者说买来的奖不能称为奖品以及作者的心情。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，作者走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望可知，第二段可描写作者将爷爷的话转述给了校长，校长沉思了一会，对作者说要为作者破例一次。作者在那时才相信Schmidt先生和爷爷是对的：奖励永远不能伪造或购买。
2续写线索：与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话—作者的感受—来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话—校长决定为作者破例一次—作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话：ask/murmur/ hate/round/be called/nod
来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话：represent/pay the dollars/
校长决定为作者破例一次：looked at me/bite his lip/decide/make an exception/believe
情绪类
失望：reluctant /bitter/red/swollen
作者的感悟：right/accurate/correct
八、答案：
Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. My inner anger drove me to the edge of madness. I rushed to my sister's room, expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from my snow shoveling experiences(非谓语动词短语作状语). Then, I stopped my accusation, still weeping. "Please don't cry. Every teardrop of yours is a reminder of how selfish I was. I'm sorry. Would you give me another chance to go shoveling with you " said my sister with gentleness and sincerity in her voice.
My sister and I went outside. I wasn't alone in this battle any more. By the time we finished(时间状语从句), my back was aching, muscles sore and body exhausted(独立主格结构). However, I was extremely happy. That was the beauty of companionship. And from the bright smile blooming on my sister's face(非谓语动词短语作定语), I could tell that she felt the same way(宾语从句). Arm in arm, we walked inside as darkness fell, waiting for our father to come home(非谓语动词短语作状语).
九、答案：
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Suddenly, he had an idea. Jim found his original contest entry. He copied it with a bright red crayon on his biggest piece of yellow construction paper. Then he decorated the paper with purple glitter and glued a picture of his mom to the bottom with care. He would like to use this as a Mother's Day gift for his dear mother if he couldn't win a shopping spree for her.
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. "Happy Mother's Day!" he yelled. Mom read Jim's poster "My mom is the best mother in the world...". By the time she finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. "Thank you," she said, wiping her eyes. "This is the best present I have ever had." Jim smiled. "I have something else for you, too," he said. He checked to make sure no one was looking, and then he gave his mom a big hug.
十、答案：
The flying lessons went on regardless. Dad jumped off a chair, waving his arms as if his life depended on it, in an attempt to encourage Nuo Nuo to shake his wings like him. Funny and clumsy as my dad looked, be tried hard in the hope that Nuo Nu would understand his intention Nuo Nuo looked at him in surprise, seemingly wondering what happened
Gradually, this stupid action of Dad's did actually have an effect. Nuo Nuo began to shake his wings and started to rise. Everything is hard at the beginning. But seeing as what we had already started, the fact that Nuo Nuo couldn't fly was no reason not to continue trying. At first it kept falling. Slowly it began to fly. After a few days of practice, Nuo Nuo managed to fly and he survived the winter as well.
一、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shrieking Toad and Dancing Ant
Kids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine was Shrieking Toad(尖叫的癞蛤蟆). I guessed it was my fault that I couldn't get a cool one.
A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lunch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped onto my shirt from the branches above. I shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didn't even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, he'd shout, "Shrieking Toad, show us how you can hop!" I corrected him and said that it had been an eastern gray tree frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.
Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read Jay and Stan" as a team, it got on my nerves. Stan shouted "Great! Shrieking Toad!" Then he called to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. "Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!" Kids roared with laughter.
After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone. Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadn't thought of it earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. "Yeah, I'd better do what I'm toad (told)." Stan laughed and set off.
Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago. I ran toward the sound. I would never have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like "Dance! Dance!" Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting his clothes made me realize what he was really saying, "Ants! Ants!"
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. ________________________________________________
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That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight. _______
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二、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Iceland's Keflavik Airport to the capital city Reykjavik with the modern traveler's two essentials: a dream and a GPS unit. What could go wrong
The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United States and his native Mexico. "I want to see this through my own eyes," he thought as he watched the news on his couch.
On a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an address.
But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling that the voice might be steering(引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was wrong, he made a choice to trust the machine.
The farther he drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadn't set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded(打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff, he knew that the device had failed him.
He was lost. He didn't know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. _____________________________________
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. __________________________________
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三、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a summer morning. The sun was out in full splendor against a nearly cloudless light blue sky. "Mamma," said Susie Dean, a 11-year-old girl, may I go to the woods and pick berries " Mrs. Dean replied, "Yes, but you must take Rover with you.
Susie swiftly got everything ready, and her mother packed a nice lunch for her. She tied the cover and fastened a tin cup to it. The little girl called Rover - a great Newfoundland dog, and gave him a tin pail (锡桶)to carry. “If I bring it home full, Mamma,” she said, “won't you make some berry cakes for tea ”
Away she tripped, singing as she went down the lane and across the pasture. When she got to the woods, she put her lunch basket down beside a tree and began to pick berries. Rover ran about, chasing a squirrel or a rabbit now and then, but never straying far from Susie.
The tin pail was not a very small one. By the time it was two thirds full, Susie began to feel hungry and thought she would eat her lunch. Rover came and took his place at her side the moment she began to eat. Did Susie give him some of the lunch No. She was in a selfish mood and did no such thing.
"There, Rover, run away!" she said, but Rover stayed near her, watching her steadily with his clear brown eyes. The meat he wanted so much was soon eaten up, and all he got of the nice lunch was a small crust of gingerbread that Susie threw away.
After lunch, Susie played for a while by the stream. She repeatedly threw sticks into the water, and Rover swam in and brought them back. Then she began to pick berries again. She did not enjoy the afternoon as she did the morning. The sunshine was as bright, the berries were as sweet and plentiful, and she was neither tired nor hungry. But good, faithful Rover was hungry, and she had not given him even one piece of meat. She tried to forget how selfish she had been, but she could not do so, and quite early she started for home.
When she was nearly out of the woods, a rustling in the underbrush attracted her attention. "I wonder if that is a bird or a squirrel," she said to herself. "If I can catch it, how glad I will be!" She tried to make her way quietly through the underbrush.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:
However, she saw a large snake coiled up before her, prepared for an attack! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
"O Rover, my dear good dog!" Susie cried," How brave you are!" ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
December 5,2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.
When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012.For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.
In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭). Still, Bethany struggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center,where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions.She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.
When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. _________________________________________
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Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. _________________________________________
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五、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make both ends meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a carved name.
On impulse (冲动), I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, and I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes," she said in surprise, with extreme excitement, "it is my umbrella which was stolen a year ago."
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead. Her happiness at retrieving (找回)this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. I could only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christinas for me, I knew, no gifts and no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile to greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen and overwhelmed by misery.
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. _____
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my attention. _______________________________
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六、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Norwood, a junior at St. Petersburg^ Lakewood High School, participated in the school’s Athletic Lifestyle Management Academy. The program prepares students for various careers in health science with two components. The first one is a hands-on skills component where the students have to demonstrate that they are expert in the skills of adult, child and infant CPR (心 肺复苏术),how to help somebody who's choking, as well as how to use an AED (自动体外除 颤仪).And the other is a written test component, showing that they master that knowledge. Norwood took a great interest in the programme, which was in line with her initial career pursuit in the future.
On the first day of the programme, her instructor Miller did vital signs and students learned how to take blood pressure, check pulse, and apply CPR. Norwood watched closely and performed the hand-on skills well.
Norwood and Simmons shared a long friendship. They had been friends since the seventh grade and since then they had built an unbreakable bond. The following day after school, the 16- year-old girl Norwood was driving three friends home in St. Petersburg, Florida, when another driver slammed into her from her left and sent her car rushing forward in an uncontrollable way.
“We crashed in someone's yard and I hit the tree," Norwood said. The impact jammed shut the driver's side door, so Norwood climbed out of the front window. Two of her friends managed to get out of the car unharmed, but the collision caused her 16-year-old friend Simmons to hit her head on the backseat window.
When Norwood turned around, she didn't see Simmons running with them so she had to run back to the car as fast as she could. Simmons was just sitting there unresponsive. Apparently, she passed out owing to the huge impact force. The unexpected crash left the girls in panic. A lot of people started to gather around to see what was happening. The crowd watched in astonishment, open-mouthed. Someone advised to make an emergency call immediately.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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And that was when the training Norwood had just learned kicked in. ____________________________
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When Miller and her students learned about the news, they were at a loss of words and so proud. ______
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七、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写短文的次数应为150左右。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn’t earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us because we couldn’t afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don’t care who her father is; her grades can’t match Martha’s at all. I won’t lie or falsify(伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone’s voice sounded calm. “Joann’s father is not only on the Board(董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only a word here and there filtered through. “…Martha is Mexican…resign … won’t do it …”
To this day I don’t remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldn’t hear me.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There’s been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won’t cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said, I’ll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day, I cried sadly on the walk home.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. __
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. ___________________
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八、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shoveling(铲) snow had always been the best part about winter. Not that I thought it was fun, but my dad's reaction to a clean driveway kept me going. He hated shoveling snow more than anything. So, I took it upon myself at eight years old to do it for him. Every time I saw snow fall from the sky, I knew the universe was ready to put me to work.
I would run and put on my jacket, snow boots to prepare myself for the work ahead. But every single time, before I went outside, I would stop by my older sister's room to see if she wanted to help me. I knew she would say no, but I always asked anyway.
One day there was a lot of snow, and there was no way I would be able to clean it all by myself. It was getting dark, and I hated the thought of my dad having to shovel the snow after a long day's work. So I did the routine and knocked on my sister's door. As I expected, she gave me the same old "no". Annoyed, I asked again. Without saying anything further, she got up, pushed me out of the room and slammed(砰地关上) the door in my face.
I stood there silently for a second. Then, I turned around, went out of the house, and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy that lay in my driveway. But I couldn't calm down. I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone. All I wanted was some help. The more remembered every "no" she had ever said to me, the angrier I became.
I fought tirelessly, my short arms swinging from side to side while the wind cut against my cheeks. After one long hour, I was not even halfway done. Looking at the victorious snow, I thought of Dad's disappointment.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. _________________________________________
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My sister and I went outside. ____________________________________________________________
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九、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jim slumped on the couch. Mother's Day was coming up, and he didn't have a present. "How can I buy a present without any money " he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. "Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (购物狂欢) for her," said the ad.
"This is perfect!" thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
"My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom."
Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品). "Mom will love having a shopping spree," he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother's Day. Jim still hadn't heard anything about the contest.
"What am I going to do now " he wondered. He didn't have a present, and he didn't have a shopping spree. And he still didn't have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears hurt.
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Suddenly, he had an idea._______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom._________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
十、阅读下面材料;根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I first got the bird, it must have only just been hatched(孵化). Its mother had disappeared, leaving it alone and shivering in the face of the north wind. I decided to take it straight back and build it a new home.
I hung an empty flowerpot(花盆) and it was in this pot that the bird was to have its new home. When Dad got home, he immediately discovered the new addition to our family. Without saying a word, he turned around and left the house. After some time, he returned and I saw that he had a handful of grass and pine needles. Obviously, Dad thought the nest I had made was far too rough and so he had decided to decorate it himself.
"A bird born at this time of year won't survive the winter. "In spite of this prediction on the bird's future, Dad very carefully fashioned the nest himself. Soon I found "Nuo Nuo"(Dad had named him) had started to grow feathers.
Dad probably realized that he had been a little cruel in his prediction. You see, he had already started training Nuo Nuo to walk. As you know, Nuo Nuo lived in a flowerpot, not a cage or anything. It was obvious that Nuo Nuo didn't realize he was a bird. He perhaps thinks he was one of the family. But it is not enough for a bird to walk, it must fly as well. Dad soon began attempting to make him learn this new ability, but it was not an easy task. After all, nobody in our family had mastered the art of flying. We didn't even have wings. How could we ask Nuo Nuo to do something that we had no means of doing ourselves
注意∶
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The flying lessons went on regardless. ___________________________________________ _________
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Gradually, this stupid action of Dad's did actually have an effect. _______________________________
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答案以及解析
一、答案：
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. He was hitting his clothes violently. I did what must be done. I pulled him into a mud pool. He was shocked at first, and then he must have realized why I did it. The ants went away. Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. "I guess you're going to have a pretty good story for everyone," Stan said awkwardly. "Yeah, I guess so. You'll probably be known as Dancing Ant from now on."
That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight. Then I said to him, "I know how it feels to be teased, and it isn't fun." I could see Stan's worry turn into surprise. The next day when I was picked for a basketball team, someone called, "Unfair! Shrieking Toad is a natural jumper!" Stan shouted, "Knock it off, guys. His name is Jay." I wouldn't have minded being given a cool nickname. But being known as plain "Jay", and Stan's friend, turned out to be cool too.
二、答案：
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The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered(结巴巴地说) about his hotel and handed her his reservation(预订). "No, this isn't the hotel you have booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south," she told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out(弄明白) what happened. The address was wrong with an extra "r" in it.
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Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel with a free meal and a bed so that he could get a good night's sleep(so that引导的目的状语从句). The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In the light of(鉴于) his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it(with复合结构) in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the woman, Noel finally reached his destination. "Without her help, I wouldn't have made it." He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him(who引导的非限制性定语从句).
三、答案：
However, she saw a large snake coiled up before her, prepared for an attack! There stood the 11-year-old girl, stiffening with horror. In a flash, she saw Rover springing forward, seized the snake by the neck. He knocked it against the ground fiercely and repeatedly. Ultimately, the large snake twitched once and lay motionless, a pool of its blood soaking through the earth beneath. Scared witless, Susie was simply frozen like a statue staring stupidly at the lifeless snake with wide-open eyes. Suddenly she heard a whimpering and realized it was hers. Her lips were salty with tears trickling down her face.
"O Rover, my dear good dog!" Susie cried, "How brave you are!" The faithful dog came and rubbed his head against her hand. Guilt written all over her face, Susie put her arms around his neck, and burst into tears. "My dearest dog! How sorry I am that I was so selfish!" She was deeply moved by his guileless devotion, determined to learn to be on her guard against a self-centered spirit and become a more lovable little girl. Though not completely following her words, Rover understood the tone of her voice and capered about in great glee, barking and wagging his tail all the way home.
四、答案：
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scared they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethany's anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home.(77 words)
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany now lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethany's 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny young lady who would talk your ear off.(77 words)
解析：
这是一篇记叙文. Josephine 和Scott Lansing 几年来相继收养了Cloe , Josie , Annabelle 三位女孩, 并给她们提供了健康幸福的成长
环境. 因为家庭原因, Bethany 不得不接受寄养家庭, 但是她的童年经历使得她不信任任何人, 在Helping Hand Home 工作人员
的帮助下, 她的性格有了些许好转, 但是在与Lansing 一家会面时, 还是有些抵触.
1 . 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 "但Lansing 一家并不打算放弃. " 可知 , 第一段可描写Lansing 一家合力劝导Bethany .
②由第二段首句内容 "后来, Bethany 经历了许多激动人心的事情. " 可知, 第二段可描写Bethany 的经历和变化.
2 . 续写线索: 女孩们分享经历——Bethany 不再抗拒外出游玩——Bethany 的变化
3 . 词汇激活
行为类
①想做某事 want to do / would like to do
②看看 see / have a look at
③返回 return to / go back to
情绪类
①害怕的 scared / frightened
②幸福的 happy / blissful
[ 高分句型 1 ] They were patient with Beth any and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. ( 运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
[ 高分句型 2 ] When Beth any returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self - confidence . (运用了when 引导的状语从句)
五、答案：One possible version:
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Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man talking heartily to her and went to the door. He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of parcels. "This is a mistake," I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had left, I didn't know what to do. Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor looking at each other. What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender.
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Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my attention. I picked up the note, which read "Thanks for returning the umbrella. Merry Christmas! "It was sent by the lady. I held the note tightly, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On that cold Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just sat in our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness. A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
六、答案：
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And that was when the training Norwood had just learned kicked in. She started yelling, " Back up! Back up! She needs space! " She pulled Simmons out of the back seat, avoiding broken glass from the window. Then she checked her pulse on the neck and put her head against Simmons' chest, before she started doing CPR on her immediately. After the 30 compressions and two rescue breaths, Simmons regained consciousness. The ambulance quickly arrived and Simmons was rushed to the hospital without delay, where she received stitches for a cut in her forehead.
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When Miller and her students learned about the news, they were at a loss of words and so proud. "I was just absolutely astounded, Miller said. "It is so astonishing that Norwood should rescue her friend with the knowledge and skills she learned in such a short me. This is what every teacher dreams of. Simmons was overwhelmingly touched by her friend and conveyed her sincere gratitude to Norwood, tears streaming down her cheeks. But for Norwood s quick thinking, she couldn’t have been rescued and recovered so well. Brimming with pride and confidence, Norwood strengthened her determination to pursue a career in the medical field.
解析：第一步:品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
第二步:仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
第三步:回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
第四步:拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
高级句式:
1.where引导的定语从句,如The ambulance quickly arrived and Simmons was rushed to the hospital without delay, where she received stitches for a cut in her forehead.等;
2.独立主格的使用,如Simmons was overwhelmingly touched by her friend and conveyed her sincere gratitude to Norwood, tears streaming down her cheeks.等;
高级词汇:
1.yell 喊叫;
2.regain consciousness 恢复意识;
3.without delay 毫不耽搁;
4.absolutely 完全地;
5.sincere gratitude 真诚的感激。
七、答案：
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. His back bent into an arch and his face was drowned in sweats. I called him, in a choked voice. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, after which Grandpa fell silent, eyes rounding in disbelief. A surge of regret gnawing at my heart, I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. I knew I might never get that jacket which represented my years of hard work and expectation. However, I tried to fight back the tears, with my head still lifted with dignity. “My grandpa…won’t pay the dollars. He said if I had to pay for it, then it wouldn’t be a scholarship jacket.” There was a deafening silence. The principal looked at me, biting his lip, as if thinking. Finally, after what seemed like a century, he decided that he would make an exception for me. I could hardly believe it. Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.
解析： 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统：一件漂亮的金绿色夹克（学校的颜色）被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。作者从一年级起就一直是个优等生，非常期待能拥有那件夹克。况且按照作者的家庭条件是买不起的。作者无意中听到数学老师和历史老师的关于是否把夹克奖励给父亲是校董事会的乔安，作者很失望，第二天校长说今年关于奖励金夹克的政策有了变化。今年董事会决定收取15美元的费用，作者决定回去与祖父商量一下。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆田里找到了爷爷”可知，第一段可简单地描写爷爷，作者将事情告诉了爷爷，爷爷对作者说买来的奖不能称为奖品以及作者的心情。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，作者走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望可知，第二段可描写作者将爷爷的话转述给了校长，校长沉思了一会，对作者说要为作者破例一次。作者在那时才相信Schmidt先生和爷爷是对的：奖励永远不能伪造或购买。
2续写线索：与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话—作者的感受—来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话—校长决定为作者破例一次—作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话：ask/murmur/ hate/round/be called/nod
来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话：represent/pay the dollars/
校长决定为作者破例一次：looked at me/bite his lip/decide/make an exception/believe
情绪类
失望：reluctant /bitter/red/swollen
作者的感悟：right/accurate/correct
八、答案：
Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. My inner anger drove me to the edge of madness. I rushed to my sister's room, expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from my snow shoveling experiences(非谓语动词短语作状语). Then, I stopped my accusation, still weeping. "Please don't cry. Every teardrop of yours is a reminder of how selfish I was. I'm sorry. Would you give me another chance to go shoveling with you " said my sister with gentleness and sincerity in her voice.
My sister and I went outside. I wasn't alone in this battle any more. By the time we finished(时间状语从句), my back was aching, muscles sore and body exhausted(独立主格结构). However, I was extremely happy. That was the beauty of companionship. And from the bright smile blooming on my sister's face(非谓语动词短语作定语), I could tell that she felt the same way(宾语从句). Arm in arm, we walked inside as darkness fell, waiting for our father to come home(非谓语动词短语作状语).
九、答案：
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Suddenly, he had an idea. Jim found his original contest entry. He copied it with a bright red crayon on his biggest piece of yellow construction paper. Then he decorated the paper with purple glitter and glued a picture of his mom to the bottom with care. He would like to use this as a Mother's Day gift for his dear mother if he couldn't win a shopping spree for her.
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. "Happy Mother's Day!" he yelled. Mom read Jim's poster "My mom is the best mother in the world...". By the time she finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. "Thank you," she said, wiping her eyes. "This is the best present I have ever had." Jim smiled. "I have something else for you, too," he said. He checked to make sure no one was looking, and then he gave his mom a big hug.
十、答案：
The flying lessons went on regardless. Dad jumped off a chair, waving his arms as if his life depended on it, in an attempt to encourage Nuo Nuo to shake his wings like him. Funny and clumsy as my dad looked, be tried hard in the hope that Nuo Nu would understand his intention Nuo Nuo looked at him in surprise, seemingly wondering what happened
Gradually, this stupid action of Dad's did actually have an effect. Nuo Nuo began to shake his wings and started to rise. Everything is hard at the beginning. But seeing as what we had already started, the fact that Nuo Nuo couldn't fly was no reason not to continue trying. At first it kept falling. Slowly it began to fly. After a few days of practice, Nuo Nuo managed to fly and he survived the winter as well.